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Extended intro text length so it can be read easier.
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Fixed audio issues.
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Cut KANAN: “The Empire’s making our travels around the outer rim tougher ever time.” the intro text covers this and this meeting drags a bit.
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Cut SABINE: “I may have the perfect shortcut” cut for pacing.
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Cut EZRA: “Why not? They’ve grabbed up just about every other place” for pacing.
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Cut SATO: "The question is, who are they loyal to
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Cut SABINE: “They like to make up their own rules.” for pacing
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Cut SATO: "So we go in with strength. Scout the system for defences to see what we’re up against.
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Cut HERA: “The next step could be recruitment”
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Cut HERA: “We could have our route and a powerful ally as well.”
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Cut the conversation between Hera and Fen Rau, to make Rau less predictable and more aggressive. Now he doesn’t explain he’s with the empire and doesn’t give an indication he’ll attack.
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Recolored Concord Dawn to be compatible with EU lore.
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Cut SABINE: “My people don’t need a reason to pick a fight.”
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Cut Sabine arguing with Hera about leaving and shortened Rau’s attack approach.
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Changed the medical droids voice and dialogue. Now it says
For now, her vital signs are stable.
We don’t know if she’ll make it.
She needs rest and monitoring.
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Cut Chopper not going with Kanan. It doesn’t make sense and it distracts from Sabine.
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Recolored the space shots of Concord Dawn to make it’s look compatible with EU lore.
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Recolored the ground shots of the Concord Dawn moon base (it didn’t look right with all the purples, I’m fairly sure they land on the BLUE moon but it really hard to tell… I figured some color changing here would add some clarity. I honestly didn’t realise they landed on a moon… I thought they landed on the actual planet but this isn’t the case.)
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Rescored Rau’s tent with some Mando’a music curtosy of Shoya
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Cut some shots after Sabine arms her explosive. I’d previously cut her hitting her head but the Mandalorian’s react to something here, now it reads like they react to Sabine arming the explosive.
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Cut the weird exchange between Protector’s and Fen Rau when warning them of Sabine. Now both Kanan and Rau leave when they’re told there’s an infiltrator.
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Sped up Sabine catching her helmet.
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Change dialogue voices and added Mando’a to a few sections (Thanks Shoya!)
Before Kanan and Sabine split up
PROTECTOR 1: T’ad ma’verde kyrayc. Majyce eyayti. (Two rebels killed. The rest fled.)
When Sabine arms the explosives
PROTECTOR 2: Me’ven? (What was that?)
Sabine gets caught
SABINE: How’s it going boys?
PROTECTOR 1: Back up!
PROTECTOR 2: Where did you steal that armor from, bounty hunter?
SABINE: Bounty Hunter? Not lately. I forged this armor with my family.
PROTECTOR 1:: Tion gar aliit? (What’s your clan?)
SABINE: Ni Sabine b’aliit Wren (I’m Sabine of Clan Wren.)
PROTECTOR 1: Wren? Ibac Vizsla! (Wren? That’s Vizsla!)
PROTECTOR 2: Kyr’tsad. (Death Watch.)
SABINE: Kyr’tsad dar. Ni olaro sur’eyir ijaatyc akaan par skira. (The Death Watch are gone. I came here to seek honorable combat to settle a score.)
PROTECTOR 2: Naasad sur’eyi ijaatyc akaan teh Tsad Droten koti. (No one’s saught honorable combat since the empire took over.)
SABINE: Tion gar Tsad Droten ra Mando? (Well, are you Imperial or Mandalorian?)
After Rau is captured
PROTECTOR: [SPEAKING MANDO’A]:
Sir, are you alright?
Should we send a distress
signal to the other Clans?
RAU: Stand down. There’s no need.
PROTECTOR: [SPEAKING MANDO’A]: But sir,
if the Empire finds out about your capture…
RAU: You’re not gonna let that happen.
PROTECTOR: [SPEAKING MANDO’A]:
And the rebels?
RAU: Until I give the word, there
is to be no mention of the rebels.
PROTECTOR: [SPEAKING MANDO’A]:
As you wish.
