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dgraham414

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#1359879
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Dinner Time
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The Phantom Menace: A power greens smoothie, the nourishment is in there somewhere.
Attack of the Clones: A power greens smoothie… again
Revenge of the Sith: A power greens smoothie, now with fruit.
Solo: Lettuce
Rogue One: A homemade veggie burger
A New Hope: An actually good burger
The Empire Strikes Back: A power greens smoothie, it won’t go away.
Return of the Jedi: A steak burger with a great bun.
The Force Awakens: The same burger as before but somethings off.
The Last Jedi: The rest of the ground beef with whatever can be found in the kitchen.
The Rise of Skywalker: A power greens smoothie.

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#1358539
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant
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Honestly with Mustafar the Battlefront II footage would work without the Star Destroyer in the sky. If there was a way to paint that out it would work great, but with it, continuity gets broken with the other shots around it, since no destroyer is in the sky anywhere and no shadow is seen that would be there. Also the ground is a different color in the battlefront footage.

I don know… maybe its just me that can’t unsee it, but I also play Battlefront II like always.

funny thing (and please understand I say this in jest) remember when we laughed at other editors using Battlefront II footage? Granted they didn’t edit it at all and it looks terrible, and what has been done here looks way better and close to seamless.

Oh where this movie has brought us.

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#1357651
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant
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krausfadr said:

dgraham414 said:

I can try to upload the Finn lines that I used if anybody wants them?

Not sure if I’m gonna mess with that scene any more. But your lines are all good. One of them I think was used shortly after though when downloading the message?

I neglected to watch forward in the seen when I was working on this… All the lines I pulled from Battlefront 2 where Boyega recorded about 6 minutes worth of dialogue. So, if he did say one of the lines later it would be from a different session (I think).

EDIT: Just checked and didn’t see any instances in that scene at least where Finn said any of the same dialogue.

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#1357562
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant
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I posted an idea earlier about changing Finn’s first line in the movie since him saying R2’s name felt a bit awkward but nobody jumped on it so I pulled out the only program I had (iMovie) and did my best to make a mock-up of what it could look/sound like.

I was able to cobble together 3 options.

https://vimeo.com/432035872
Password: fanedit

The audio is very janky and it almost seems for the unaltered audio that there are two channels on top of each other, but in iMovie I don’t really know how to deal with that.

Let me know what you think!

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#1356625
Topic
For TRoS Edits: Dialogue for the Knights of Ren! Come help!
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https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1s4e59L1-uGotdfSV3THlErgdTvoFbWJY?usp=sharing

Here is a link to all of my files. I was getting better towards the end of my recording session and I neglected to put a wind guard on my mic so some of them are unusable.

I would love any feedback on what worked and what didn’t, and I would be more than happy to record anything to get it right.

Thanks for your consideration!

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#1355904
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant
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idir_hh said:

If any thing I think the original arrangement is what brakes the logic, kylo find the fleet and palpatine, next shot in remote space the spy had already Intercepted the information. The scene rearrangement actually spaces out the events making the spy’s acquisition of the information more logical.

From the workprint it seemed like the scenes were in the same order, just some were shorter and a few lines were changed. These were good changes on a micro sense, but as a whole, there wasn’t a substantial change of the beginning.

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#1355899
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant
Time

I honestly feel like a lot more needs to be done with the first 20 minutes. It felt rushed in the theater and the cuts made make it feel even more rushed.

The main problem I have had with this film is how long it takes for me to get my footing when I watch it. What is there right now makes that feeling worse. It is just soooo quick, with no room to breathe.

I need to think more about how that can be improved, but rearranging the scenes breaks the logic of the film. Since there can’t be a spy in the FO to tell them anything until Kylo knows… trying to move the Rey training scene up works with logically, but thematically it is a weird scene to start on…

I guess I’m just in despair with the beginning…