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Using the Hello There animation sounds interesting, I’d love to watch!

Do you remove the nudity?

I was wondering if this film was salvageable if removed from Snyder’s hand

I would not be the Star Wars fan I am without the Disney purchase. I remember being in college and depressed and being shown the Clone Wars show, and the promise of new movies, and it was all amazing and I’ve loved most everything they’ve put out. I also have discovered the EU because of it, and have a near complete EU collection of novels.

The worst part about the Disney purchase honestly is the toxic Fandom Menace that appeared in 2017. Star Wars has died every month for the past 7 years and it just makes me so tired. I do my best to just block them on all social medias just to keep a bit of my sanity.

You’re one of the only reasons I come back to this site frequently 😃

The character work this season continues to blow me away. Celebrimbor’s slow realization of Annatar’s deception is a gut punch to me every time the show focuses on his story. This show is amazing.

I wonder if there’s a way to interweve the past fight on Brendok with the finale fight between Darth Smiles and Master Sol

Five episodes in. I have a lot to say, but I love it so far.

There’s some pacing issues, I think due to the writers strike. Though the manipulation of Saruan/Annatar is incredibly done. Celebrimbor slowly falling into madness, ugh I just feel so bad for the guy. He’s being expertly played.

Elrond’s distrust of the rings… that poor guy can’t catch a break 😂

The downfall of Numenor is being set up nicely, especially in this most recent episode.

Also the way the rings are portrayed with the dwarves fits well with the interpretation from The Hobbit.

I always imagined something akin to Batman Begins or Man of Steels use of flashback would fit well with this story as a film

I loved this show

I feel like you should cut Vader giving Kylo instructions, since Vader has just been defeated, as if Kylo is purging the influence of Vader over him, it doesn’t make sense for him to then obey Vaders command.

Jar Jar Bricks said:

And here is the more “sympathetic” version of Kylo and Luke:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HgkYsih0y1d1D6N3Hfqxvf8jkaN6YCCF/view?usp=sharing

This version hints more at his eventual turn to the light, mostly due to the fact both of his comebacks to Luke are delivered more like delusions he doesn’t even want to believe himself at this point.

This delivery is much better! Should Luke have a bit of reverb? Like Ben Kenobi on Hoth? Having a bit of reverb might help key in subconsciously that he is actually speaking as a ghost?

Jar Jar Bricks said:

I’m now satisfied with the lines for the Kylo and Luke scene. It just needs the sounds originally from the scene, minus the original music.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QqcnX1e1Hb2lhCuCPh4Cho3bejxjY6XM/view?usp=sharing

Everything is great and nearly made cry except for the last line
“I chose power” seemed a bit off…

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I would love a chance to see this. I’m always a fan of radical edits

I think in the context of the surrounding scenes, the way finder makes more sense. Especially since she then goes and tells Leia about it.

Because DoomCock says so

NeverarGreat said:

Just spitballing here, but the biggest issue with Luke’s death is that it feels a bit random. Like, he could just as easily have lived, so it’s unclear what purpose his death serves.

So what if Luke saw his own death when he confronted Ben, a death he knew would take place on this island? This is hinted at when he says to Rey ‘I came to this island to die’. However, in that context it sounds like he has just given up and figures that this would be as good a place as any to spend the rest of his days, instead of accepting the truth of a vision that is put in motion when he fails to kill Ben.

Perhaps he says something in the Jedi Tree:

“I will never train another generation of Jedi. I came to this island to die…that is my destiny. It is time for the Jedi…to end.”

Just a bit to emphasize that he has seen his own future and believes it to be unchangeable. Therefore when he dies it is in fulfillment of his own vision, but interpreted in a hopeful way that he couldn’t have foreseen.

Dude!! That’s so good!

Any words on part 2?

Really enjoying the conciseness of the story in your edit of part 1

Can V1.1 be found in the usual drive?

Looking forward to this! Your Kenobi edit was near perfect

I would love a pm!

I’d love a chance to watch 😃

Does it follow the FOTJ storyline!! Does Luke seek out Abeloth? How does it fit into the Legacy Comics? Who did they cast as Jaina Solo??

I’d love a chnace to veiw this! I never thought about bringing Leia’s death forward, but that sounds like such a great improvment