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- #291542
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- Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/291542/action/topic#291542
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Originally posted by: Hal 9000
(paraphrased)Lucas botched what otherwise could have been good plot points by changing the script late in the game.
Please, forgive the abbreviation
, and thanks for the breakdown of the Episode 3 that could have been. The Clone Wars montage could have been so cool and such a better continuation of where Episode 2 left off!
The other parts you mentioned that were changed or created to fill the gaps go a reee-aaally long way to explaining the weakness that exists in those parts as they now stand. Bummer.
Heck, I'd be willing to send you a copy of my edit, for what it's worth.
If you wanted to see it.
(paraphrased)Lucas botched what otherwise could have been good plot points by changing the script late in the game.
Please, forgive the abbreviation

The other parts you mentioned that were changed or created to fill the gaps go a reee-aaally long way to explaining the weakness that exists in those parts as they now stand. Bummer.
Heck, I'd be willing to send you a copy of my edit, for what it's worth.
If you wanted to see it.
Heck, yeah! Seems like you have a critical eye for a more mature story. I'll PM you.