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#1649688
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A half arsed, probably useless but possibly useful for some, edits of Hal9000's PT
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Update: 24/11/25

Only the smaller encodes are available now through a Google Drive.
I am currently re-working all these including the OT and ST, once I am at a point where I am able to provide more of an update and future plans I will post a thread new thread with info and a link to that thread here for anyone who has found this and is interested in my projects.

Thank you for taking the time to read this and for all support given.

Old Post*
A lot of you guys here have been so generous, not just sharing your ideas and thoughts but also sharing your hard work and fantastic edits.
Since joining OT I’ve seen a lot of fan edits, not just Star Wars edits but other movies and franchises and all honesty I have not watched an edit I have not enjoyed and for myself what started off a simple cut and paste with an intro Crawl took me down another path of being able to do a bit more (Not a lot more, but enough to achieve a vision I like) and Hal9000’s PT brought back my love for Star Wars.

These edits are probably v4 or 5 now and I don’t intend to revisit these but they started out as a simple crawl change that was V1, V2 I can’t remember lol but now I feel they are somewhere where I’m happy with what I have achieved. Reluctantly had no plans to release these but my partner said to me “What if the people who shared their edits with you and everyone else, what if they didn’t share what they had done” so here we go.

Before the info, I want to give a massive thank you to Hal9000, not just for your permission to release these but for sharing your amazing work with everyone here, honestly can’t thank you enough.

Prequel Trilogy.

Main Source Used Hal9000
Episode I
https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-I-Cloak-Of-Deception-Released/id/15663

Episode II
https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-II-The-Approaching-Storm-Released/id/15720/page/1

Episode III
https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-III-Labyrinth-Of-Evil-Released/id/16454/page/1
Other source used 2011 bluray

The Phantom Menace.

Additions/Changes.
Hal9000 - Altered contrast, brightness slightly and added a bit more grain to the image.
2011 Bluray - Adjusted contrast, brightness and added grain to match Hal9000.

Cuts/Edits.
Used 20th Century fox Fanfare from Hal9000 (Cod).
Used original opening crawl from 2011 Bluray (TPM).
Used Jedi Arrival at trade federation from Hal9000 (Cod).
Used escape to Naboo from 2011 Bluray (TPM) - removed Jars Jars line of “User follow me now, okie day” as the Jedi enter the water to goto the Gungan City.
Trimmed Jar Jar getting arrested by the guards so we don’t hear jar jars whimper and see him get zapped with the cattle prod.
Added an iris transition into the meeting with the bosses and cut jar jars line about being setup.
Cut Jar Jar’s “What’s are mesa saying” and added a transition wipe to the leaving Gungan City.
Cut out Jar Jars explanation of why he was banished from the Gungan City, after Obi-Wan asked him he just replies with “Becuase mesa clumsy” after this they are attack by the gooba fish and escape.
Added a transition wipe to battle droids invading Naboo and the capture of Queen Amidala.
Cut out battle droids “Roger, Roger” line when ordered to take the queen to the hangar, scene cuts to Hal9000 (CoD), Jedi and Jar Jar sneaking above on balcony.
Rest of film is Hal9000 (Cod) with following changes.
Cut Jabba the Hut out of podracr scenes.
When Quigon is talking to Anakin before the race, faded out the Force Theme music and cut to pod race engines starting.
Cut to pod race starting when creature next to Watto points and say “Go” giving a very light and subtle hint that Watto and his friends are cheating.
When droid helper gets sucked into pod racer scene is cut after we hear racer saying “Ohh No” to Padame saying “Look here he Comes”.
Cut scene showing Sebulba surving the crash and saying “foodoo” so his fate is unknown.
Added a clock wipe transition from Watto and friends being upset to Anakin being praised by Jar Jar, Padame and his mother.
Cut scene of Anakins line “How about spinning, that’s a neat trick” to R2 during space battle.

Attack of the Clones.

Additions/Changes.
Hal9000 - Altered contrast, brightness slightly and added a bit more grain to the image.

Cuts/Edits.
Used 20th century fox Fanfare from Hal9000 (TAS).
Used opening crawl from Hal9000 (AotC - Canon friendly edit).
Rest of edit is Hal9000 (TAS).
Reordered and cut the space Battle between Obi-Wan and Jango to match something similar to JoyOfEditing had shown in his YouTube series (Not exactly the same but very similar).
Cuts from revealing Obi-Wan’s fighter on an asteroid (leaving the viewer wonder if he survived the missile attack from Jango).
Cuts from anakin killing the Sand people to Obi-Wan on the asteroid and pursuing Jango as JoyOfEditing’s YouTube video shows (added an Irisi transition)
Rest of movie plays out same as Hal9000 (TAS).

Revenge of the Sith.

Additions/Changes.
Hal9000 - Altered contrast, brightness slightly and added a bit more grain to the image.
2011 Bluray - Adjusted contrast, brightness and added grain to match Hal9000.

Cuts/Edits.
Used 20th Century fox Fanfare from Hal9000 (LoE).
Used original opening crawl from 2011 Bluray (RotS).
Only change made is re adding the Yoda V Palpatine scene (re added this just to show how powerful Palpatine is as not just a manipulator but is also strong in the force and ways of the Sith), also is the full start of the duel between Anakin and Obi-Wan.
After Yoda’s escape fight cuts back to Obi-Wan and Anakins Duel from Hal9000 (LoE).

Special Thanks.
Would like to give a special thank you to Hal9000, Spence Edit, Octorox and Dazman.
Thank you for being gratious and generous and sharing your amazing work not just with myself but also with the community.
Would also like to say a special thank you to Phase3 for convincing me to revisit my edit and some advice and tips given to me.

Also thank you to everyone who has not just shared their edits but also given input and ideas which have helped shape the amazing work we see in the OT community.

All credit for the work on this edit goes to Hal9000.

P.S

Please no spamming for requests, a simple polite pm goes a long way.

Update 21/11/25
Release info
Small .mp4 file (2GB) are available via GDrive
H265 - 1920x1080p - 256kbps 5.1 ac3

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#1649589
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Star Wars novels and comics review thread
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I’m very new to the Star Wars EU but listened to my first audio book last week. Did a Google search of where to start with the Legends books and gave Dawn of the Jedi: Into the Void by Tim Lebbon, took awhile to get into but really enjoyed and highly recommend to anyone who hasn’t read/listened to it or like myself just starting out with the EU.

Here is a link to the wookiepedia site that gave a list of where to start, if anyone is interested.

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Timeline_of_Legends_books#js

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#1648236
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Star Wars Episode I: Cloak Of Deception (Released)
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After revisiting quite a few times recently lol just want to say I love the new additions like 3po’s back story. I had an idea not sure if it’s possible but thought it may be worth mentioning, one would be Anakins line to padame when they first meet, would it be possible or doable to change his line from "Are you an Angel? " to "Are you a Princess? " thought it may help show how strong anakin is with the force as she is the queen also another idea would be Shmi’s line of “you have given hope to those to have none” to “you have given hope to those who had none”.

Sorry if these have already been thought of and I know they don’t really bring or add anything but I don’t know lol just spit balling.

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#1647544
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Star Wars Episode I: Cloak Of Deception (Released)
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potty meister said:

If fact, if the color grades weren’t all so different I could probably make my own perfect edit sourcing from about three others but alas…

I’m pretty sure Octorox’s Happy Sanding edit color matches with Hal’s, you could use his, Hal’s purist and his approaching storm edits along with JoyOfEditing’s tips/techniques for your perfect edit.

Just a suggestion, plenty of free editing software capable of doing such things, I’ve been using Kdenlive which is really good admittedly a bit of a learning to do bit very powerful software.

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#1645487
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Star Wars Episode I: Cloak Of Deception (Released)
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Octorox said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Here are a few ones so far. My personal preference is #2 but I haven’t actually tested any of them:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1CDGPUx7qz-QOwmsfZFM7hfj7fT0wdnNm?usp=sharing

And of course, if none of these are quite there yet, I can try adding in more voice samples to hone it in. This was just 37 seconds of her lines from the movie.

#2 sounds pretty good. Here’s the one I used in my edit:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RMVssc6jAGk1U7AVKd-0OwraBNyOUHN4/view?usp=drive_link

Wow that’s very good work Octo, the line works perfectly.

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#1642624
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STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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Braltika said:

.Mac. said:

…Alright steering this back on topic 😄

oh_riginal said:

adywan said:

Something i promised to show a while ago but ended up completely forgetting about, was the shot of Luke’s shuttle escaping the Death Star. So here it is:

Original version:

Revisited Version:

That shot took a hell of a lot of work. I had to slow down the gantry and other elements, yet keep the camera movement and the shuttle at the original speed, then track and add the new background. Couldn’t use the original stars to track because they suddenly stop their movement before the end in the original.

Should we not be able to see Endor in the reflection also…?

I think this is actually a great question, oh_riginal, so I hope this doesn’t get overlooked. I didn’t have a problem with it at first as I feel the forest moon is sooo far off in the distance that we wouldn’t see its reflection? But, I rethink that when I see a picture such as the following of a mountain where, even though it is far away, we still can see its reflection on the lake (granted, the distance between the forest moon/DSII is greater than the mtn/lake):

So really I’m not sure, lol, but I am leaning more towards “yes we should”. Maybe someone who definitely knows the science behind reflections can reflect on this and let us know? 😄 Or are you confident that it would, oh_riginal?

I know, this is a fantasy/sci-fi film, but getting even small details like this right is a very nice touch and does help with the immersion that this is all happening and “real”, imho 😃

I don’t think it should be visible because the hangar floor is “above” the planet. In the image you used as reference, the mountains rise higher than the lake. So I think the (the lack of planet) reflections are valid, the floor should reflect things that are “above” it, not below, from our point of view.

Or as Obi-Wan once said “From a certain point of View” 😂😂.

Sorry couldn’t help myself with that one.

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#1642505
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This Thread is Jail
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That guy with no name said:

Atom-88 said:

RicOlie_2 said:

I think your prison sentence expired. As did this thread, apparently.

Well I came close to expiring myself lol

I’m sorry are you talking about suicide or am I missing something?

The reason for my Hiatus was My Mother had a series of mini strokes which left her with very limited mobility, 4 months after that my Father got diagnosed with stage four lung cancer.
Both are doing ok now but this time last year I lost my best friend and after that my health took a bad turn last year, during a works medical I got diagnosed with very high blood pressure to the point that I was borderline for a stroke, Got stopped from driving as I had also developed sleep apnoea and type 2 diabetes.

Long story short it has taken me 9 months to get everything back to normal and be able to return to work, which you have no idea of how grateful and happy I am for as at one point I did not think I would be able to and didn’t see a light at the end of the tunnel for awhile.

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#1573769
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The ‘Custom Special Edition’ That Almost Wasn’t, But Then Was (Released)
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Thanks for the insight Hal.
I love reads like this, finding out how people got into Star Wars and what helps with their deciding factors when making edits and cuts.

Found this really interesting as for me your custom editions are my go to as they have the right blend of what I think for me personally should be included in a SE without it becoming a CGI fest.

Thanks Hal.