I applaud the use of models over CGI. Though that crawl could use some work. I had trouble deciphering the last paragraph. I'm curious why the official crawl wasn't used:
Ultimate victory lies within the grasp of
the dreaded Galactic Emperor Palpatine as
the tattered remnants of the Rebel fleet
desperately seek sanctuary and time
to muster new allies.
A grim Luke Skywalker, reeling from Darth
Vader's revelation on the cloud city of Bespin,
ponders his own destiny and that of the Rebel
Alliance. Meanwhile, the search ensues for
Han Solo, captive of the notorious
bounty hunter, Boba Fett.
To deal a final blow to the Rebellion, Palpatine
has hatched a new plan of which even Lord
Vader is unaware. To aid him, the Emperor
has enlisted the services of the vast criminal
underworld that lurks within the
Shadows of the Empire...