xhonzi said:
1. I too would like to get R2 and 3PO in the story as it's one of my oldest memories of what the prequels would be. "The droids will be the only characters in all 9 films" or some such. However, it's a rather sticky wicket since Obi-Wan shouldn't be the owner of the droids, and it seems really bad to have Darth Vader be their previous owner. So... who does that leave? I guess they can belong to Bail? Not sure, but I wouldn't go with Anakin.
I see what you mean. 3PO does belong to Bail in this version, and is on board the Tantive IV. Anakin and Obi-Wan have no use for a protocol droid, but for a prince they'd be indispensable.
In this version, I wanted to introduce Anakin doing the one thing we know from Obi-Wan that he does well - being a star pilot. It seemed like a perfect opportunity to introduce R2 as well. If you think of Anakin simply as Darth-Vader-in-waiting, then it's definitely wrong for R2 to belong to him. But at this point, I'm thinking of Anakin as being an almost completely different character. By the time he's transformed into Darth Vader, he's forgotten about most his former friends - certainly about R2, just one of many droids he happened to own at one point.
I'll think seriously about this, though. Like many, I thought it was pointless and wrong for Anakin to have created 3PO as in the prequels. I wouldn't want to repeat that mistake.
2. It's nice to validate the Owen stuff, but I think it does more harm than good to "pop by Tatooine" just to keep up continuity. I think the PT should have no Tatooine in them, and generally as little revisiting here-to-fore seen planets as possible. I think the Owen stuff is ultimately unnecessary, and is forcing your story places it shouldn't go.
I can definitely see this. When I started out writing this, I wanted it to be as loyal to what we know of things from the original trilogy as possible while still remaining something that works on its own.
This is the one area where I've had a lot of difficulty (as I've said a few posts up). It's that line "He felt he should have stayed here (Tatooine) and not gotten involved" that's causing all this trouble. I would honestly prefer not to have them return to Tatooine, but it feels like my arms are tied by this.
I am still trying to find a better way to work this out - such as having Anakin's damaged craft be picked up by a merchant freighter piloted by Owen, who will mention that they once lived together on Tatooine and that he plans on one day settling down on a farm there. He would then invite Anakin to return to Tatooine with him, and Obi-Wan's statement would therefore not be entirely false.
Suggestions would be appreciated here.
3. I really like the "Star Defender" name. How did you come up with it?
I thought the idea of the Galactic Republic using ships known as "Star Destroyers" was a bit too aggressive. The Galactic Republic is, for now, the good guys, so destruction isn't really their line of business.
"Star Defender" suggests benevolence. I'd also like to see this reflected in the design of the ships - similar to Star Destroyers, but more elegant. Something similar to the Venator-class ships which appear for a few seconds toward the end of Revenge of the Sith might work: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20081116110404/starwars/images/8/87/Imperial_Venator.jpg
4. Similar to #2, I think you want to avoid Coruscant/Had Abaddon. The galaxy is a big place. Seeing "the centre" too much makes it feel much smaller. There is already way too much "galactic shrinkage" in Star Wars. My advice- never show the centre.
Point taken.
I was already thinking it was rather pointless to have them return to "the centre" when the military HQ environment has already been established. Considering that all they need to do at this point is rally the troops, to have them do it on Coruscant/Had Abaddon is overkill.
I'd still like to have Obi-Wan and Anakin meet with what remains of the old Jedi order, though. This could be done, however, on a new planet - I think a more naturalistic, secluded setting would suit the Jedi Order better than the gigantic inhuman city of the prequels.
5. Generally- don't worry so much about explaining stuff. Yeah, Anakin should get a little pep talk about the force at some point in time. It should be introudced to the audience as if they don't know what it is. But you can certainly take it too far. Remember the failure of midichlorians.
Another good point.
The reason I bring up the history of the Jedi and Sith is that I wanted to re-confirm the spiritual side of the two orders. It may not come across like this in the outline I have so far, but such details would be explained in action. We wouldn't be taking time out for long lectures.
VideInfra78 said:
How do the Clone Wars play out in your version?
In my version (and this may be controversial) the clones don't form an army at all. The Clone referred to in the name "The Clone Wars" is just one person - the leader of the antagonistic army. It is discovered in Episode II that he is a genetic reproduction of an extinct race of warriors.
I've decided to do this for a number of reasons. Firstly, the idea of the Galactic Republic - i.e, the good guys - using an army of mindless soldiers bred only to fight and die seemed a little morally warped to me. The Kaminoans even mention them being bred for perfect obedience.
This just doesn't stike me as something that the moral old Obi-Wan or the spiritual Yoda would have anything to do with. Yoda and Obi-Wan seem to me to be the type to emphasise the importance of the liberty of all sentient beings, and a clone army runs entirely contrary to such concepts.
So, what would later be dubbed "The Clone Wars" are already in full swing by the time Episode I opens - it's just not yet being called "The Clone Wars". Rather like the Galactic Civil War of the original trilogy, the Clone Wars would be the war of this Star Wars trilogy.