The Cutter said:
but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?
what do u think about this ?
rpvee said:
Is it me, or on "I can' t watch anymore", Obi-Wan's voice sounds a bit higher than usual? Cutter, are you using a 25 fps version?
Yes but it's temporary, waiting for blu-ray (23.976 fps)
Yes but you have to find a least one sithster
I will try to make Yoda say : " Destroy the sisters we must... "
Musical vision part 7 : 'Destroy the Sith we must..."
a hard one :
Mithrandir said:
Sorry to bother you haha, I just forgot. There are a lot of options for this shot, though it's a very very hard puzzle to get everything working right and believable
You don't bother...all suggestions here help achieved a better cut but it's really a puzzle...you can't change what you want
rpvee said:
And as stated earlier, at the beginning, Windu appears out of nowhere.
Impossible to change this without someone who can clean the previous shot so we can see only Mace coming
until the blu-ray release, I will certainly find a skilled soul to help me in my holy task...
if not...sacrifice must be made ! this is this.., or the three fu..ers ;)
Mithrandir said:
The dialogue still isn't buying me. Might it be better
P: You're sooner than I expected!
W: I know who you are, I know what you are... (turn on sabre) The senate will decide your fate.
P: I am the Senate
W: Not yet (or maybe here, turn on sabre)
P: It's treason then.
Please Gandalf ! I already explained it once : impossible to put " I know who you are...." in another place
rpvee said:
I suggest you have only the sound of the saber igniting,
Yes, I just noticed there is still a little noise
greenpenguino said:
There needs to be a little bit of a gap between the 'I know what you are' and 'It's treason, then'
it's true :
Mithrandir said:
There's a thing at the very beg¡nning, windu just apears in a shot from nowhere. Check 0:12 - 0:14
to solve this I need someone to clean the previous shot (when Mace arrives with the three fu..ers)
But you must take in consideration one important thing : I need a free place to put : " I know who you are...." and the only place is when Palpatine gets up - This limits the possibilities
and yes it's from Jumper : )
"I know...."
rpvee said:
That's good, just needs to sound a bit smoother. And you completely ignored my other points.
it is difficult for me to answer everything, but I take note of everything I read and make change if possible and if I like it ; )
I am still working on this introduction dialogue, it was just a first take -
Concerning the fact that it's not "starwars like", this introduction itselft is not "star wars like" (the shot with SD and drums) , so I think a little bit of originality is acceptable.
the problem in the fact to put the dialogue a step further is that it will "hide" the music...and in this sequence the music "speaks" about the greatness of Obi-wan and Anakin's relationship...something that, unfortunatly, does not exist in 7 hours of movie ! this short sequence give the feeling that they are brother in arms, it's epic, and I am afraid to destroy this...
but I can try !
rpvee said:
I think there should be no dialogue at least until Vader crosses his arms, in which he can say "Obi-Wan will die".
I like it, I will see how it works, but I would keep the : "leave us captain"
here is a new one : " I am glad you chose to serve"
Loconut said:
There is something about Yoda's agreeable grunt "hmmm" though. It sounds kinda annoyed?
True - I took the first clean "hmmm" I found...I will look for another
New perception of Dagobah V2 :
fishmanlee said:
so it doesnt sound so mish mashy?
the "mish mash effect" comes from one thing : the orchestration and programmation are not achieved (that's why I noticed : it's rough ; ) )
I don't know yet what I'll do with this sequence
Mithrandir said:
Palpatine's laughter doesn't fit. The emperor
you're right it's too much, I will cut this
Bingowings said:
You could replace it with Palpatine saying "Commander, leave us".
Vader wll say : "leave us Captain"
according to this : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grand_Moff_Tarkin
it's not nonsense to make him a Captain
gobalicious said:
Tarkin got so owned by Vader for a change. I think Vader's lines are a bit too loud compared to the Emperor. Maybe you could insert the obligatory "master" after "Obi Wan will die." Great work as always.
Yes it is expected, I have to find a "new" clean : Yes master - And if I can I will replace "Obi-wan will die" by "Obi-wan must die".
Concerning Tarkin, we can easily imagine that he is not yet high ranked...
Rpvee, the sequence works well without dialogues but I don't want to miss an opportunity to make them talk a little... only 2 minutes of Vader in the PT, wtf...
Bingowings said:
It would make better sense if you could get some help making new footage of the Tantive landed on Dagobah and Yoda outside sensing Qui-Gon telling him this.
Yes, the idea is really good, but it need someone with high skills (visual effects) or it will looks fake, and it's hard to find....
rpvee said:
Cut the fade to black and throw in another scenic shot of Dagobah, maybe from Empire.
I had the same idea but I didn't find a clean shot of Dagobah (without xwing)
I love the " I'm glad u choose to serve" idea... I will see now what I can do.
Here is a new video : New perception of Dagobah
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xqRjHQYYlc
and at the end, an "angry Vader" that has not digested his defeat...
what about this ? (it's rough)
thanks dude !