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Siliconmaster482

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#1435227
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Journey of a Skywalker (up on youtube)
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It’s a fun idea, though I would suggest trying to center the dialogue. It’s really distracting to have talking on only one side, especially when using headphones. I hadn’t seen some of those shots before though, so that was cool to have them against some of the lines from the films.

On a broader design level, I’d also suggest sticking with a single font. Every one of your titles seems to be different, which can be a little jarring.

For something like this it might also be better to have it as a single, more edited piece. That would help you feel out the pacing to make sure nothing drags, while making it more cohesive as well. Having multiple pieces feels very fragmented.

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#1430845
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Revenge of the Sith: Rebalanced - <em>Version 1.4 Released! IFDB Approved!</em>
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Link sent to your inbox! It’s worth noting that due to both Hal9000’s and my own use of the earlier deleted scene with Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Windu instead of the larger Jedi meeting later in the movie, the reference to that scene in Clone Wars no longer makes perfect sense haha. I like to think it’s just another, similar looking conversation we glimpse.