I like the idea of the captain Hux, but it sounds tacked on for me with headphones at least. Maybe the captain part is too loud? Or some of the background noise could be amped up some potentially.
The current workprint has sith eyes and sith whispers, it works really well IMO.
One thing I do like about this scene though, is that it shows C-3PO with his new Gold plating. Which otherwise is never shown in other media.
I feel like it just asks another question of how Leia got it.
Maybe its just in my head, but I feel like Faraday’s sounds slightly clearer/cleaner.
Its very much worth it to keep the new line IMO.
I agree with DZ.
I personally prefer the stare to the very very strong antagonism any day of the week personally, but to each their own.
I just finished the newest episode, it’s a solid improvement over both the original and V1.0.
There are however as many have stated, some odd audio issues with this episode. Mainly how much more quiet the voices seem to be/how loud the music is in comparison.
Also, is there any “head cannon” explanation on how R4 survived after episode 0?
Big fan of Nev’s work on Rey sith eyes in Starlight, hope it makes it in here too
I just finished the newest Dark force rising 2.0, I must say that its far superior to the previous iteration. I don’t have a ton of feedback, but I very much enjoyed it. It flows really well overall, and the relationship with the craacters seems much closer to current cannon/TCW.
Great work!
In cannon there isn’t yet an explanation as to how Anakin turned into a force ghost, atleast I think.
I believe before EU became legends, here was some novelization that said Obi-Wan told Vader how to do it right before Vader had died. In his head similar to how Obi-Wan contacted Luke.
Its lore breaking because Qui gon cannot become a force ghost, he was only able to become a voice, never able to fully become visible as stated in the clone wars.
Mace was never taught the ability either. And Ahsoka has never been shown to have died yet, the reason you can hear her voice is because the novelization shows rey was sort of looking into the world between worlds if that makes sense, so it would likely not age well.
I sure hope we don’t have mace and ahsoka etc… it breaks the lore.
Changing it to I am a jedi may be one of the best changes for far in this project IMO.
What am I looking at here?
For S1E00 I think like some have suggested before. Making it seem like Anakin and obiwan actually don’t hate eachother would be far better and help minimize the tonal whiplash that you get when watching it compared to the rest of the clone wars. I saw some really good clips in this thread that IMo fixed that alot.
Could I get a link please? This is exactly what I’ve wanted in a ROTJ edit for awhile.
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Definitely agree, I think the clone line would be benefit the film a ton.
Would also love a link please
A couple small things I noticed while watching the latest workprint.
During the scene at 17:30 onwards, when Poe screams it kind of cuts in at a weird time that feels very edited if that makes sense. I would prefer not cutting any of his screaming at all while keeping the other additions you added.
Very small nitpick here also, at 41:40-41:42 you can hear han say faintly “…out of there” which was cut from I think… Hal’s edit…? + This edit. However like I mentioned before, you can still faintly hear the line and its slightly distracting when you know where to look for it.
Other than that, I absolutely love it. Great movie now, and I look forward to the full release.
Did the latest update add in the Palpatine hints from Ha’s Restructured edit?
Personally, I’d be a vote of simply removing Kylo wanting to take the throne and he simply tells Rey that “Together we can stop Palpatine.” (Or however it can go) That would be more on par with his motivation in this edit because Kylo doesn’t care about Sith (and the old things) and not outright saying kill Palps because of the reveal at the beginning. Not saying that isn’t what he is trying to figure out how to dispose of him, but it keeps the “logical problem” that both he and the audience knows that “Killing him isn’t simple due to that transfer thingy.”
Plus … wouldn’t it be an easier thing to convince Rey of “Lets stop the big bad guy” and not “Let straight up murder his face.” What would a Jedi-in-training be more convinced to with? (Not saying it outright wouldn’t work to “trick” the Jedi, but come on, what would be more successful?)
I also prefer just removing the throne line.
Just an idea but what if you just slowed the tempo down slightly and gave it a bit more bass to indicate her using the dark side. Don’t know if it would be easier than changing the music or not tho.
P.S
Wow thank you Nev for the credit mention, Don’t feel like I deserve it tho only said your work looks amazing but happy to be mentioned either way😁.
Thats a good idea, I could see that pote tally being really good.