NeverarGreat

Indeed. 😃

I’m planning on removing Han’s lines about tracking in any case, simply because it makes no sense to want a ‘clean ship’ and then turn around and take the trackable ship to the Resistance Base.

But the flashing light idea is a good one (is there no problem that can’t be solved by flashing lights?).

When Han and Chewie first come aboard the Falcon, there’s a slow zooming shot of the door, and a steady shot when the door opens. On the lower right there is a little box, on which I could animate a light. By reversing the shot of the door opening with the animated light and placing this shot in the place of Rey saying ‘I can do this’ right when she starts the Falcon’s engines, it would imply that the tracking broadcast began right at the start.

Next, when Han first comes aboard, he pokes his finger into some illuminated blue box on the wall across from the door. After this shot I could place the zoom of the door, and show the tracker is deactivated. That way it’s clear how Han found the Falcon and was given a reasonable amount of time to do it, and why the ship is now safe to travel to the Resistance base without fear of further tracking.

I think a lot of the disagreements over this movie have to do with situations in which a subtle shift in one’s interpretation lead to dramatically different readings of the movie at large. For example, when Finn is making his sacrificial run at the laser weapon and Rose saves him, there are two main ways to interpret the scene:

1. Finn had a shot at destroying the weapon, but Rose valued Finn’s life over the destruction of the weapon. Because of this, Rose’s actions were misguided and would have doomed the Resistance were it not for Luke’s intervention.

2. Finn had no chance of destroying the weapon, and his sacrifice, while a culmination of his character arc in the film, would have ultimately been a senseless waste. Rose acted rightly.

The trouble with these two interpretations is that they’re both equally valid in terms of what we see on screen. If Poe had said something along the lines of ‘Retreat, nothing can stop it now!’, then it would have been clear that Finn was acting out of pure unthinking hatred for the First Order. But he instead implied that it would take a suicide run to destroy the weapon, making Finn’s action heroic from the first interpretation.

This is just one example. This and others (such as Holdo’s leadership, Luke’s murderous moment, etc) rest on the shakiest ground for the audience to interpret in the way the filmmakers intend.

Colson said:

It’s located in Russia, so almost certainly from Russia with love.

WYSHS

moviefreakedmind said:

Creox said:

moviefreakedmind said:

dahmage said:

DrDre said:

TV’s Frink said:

I don’t remember anyone saying that girls couldn’t relate to Luke.

I do know my daughters identify much more strongly with Rey.

“I think there was an assumption being made for quite a while that girls didn’t care about Star Wars or that girls weren’t identifying with characters like Luke Skywalker or Han Solo; they were only identifying with Princess Leia or characters in other movies along those lines. And you know I think that it is not just Star Wars that is making this change, I think culturally, I want to believe that there is real movement and momentum beginning to happen where those kinds of lines are being blurred and people are recognizing in the creative community that um little girls, and little boys, for that matter are crossing over into identifying with lots of different characters and lots of different stories; And we as filmmakers should not be the ones providing those boundaries we should just tell the stories and they should be open a wide variety of not only gender but ethnicity. and that is another thing we are really working to do is to make the casting reflect society in a much more equal basis.”

• Kathleen Kennedy, President of Lucasfilm (2012 to Present),

Star Wars Celebration 2016

As I interpret Kennedy’s words she’s literally saying, that in the past filmmakers were providing boundaries by not casting women or people of different ethnicity in certain roles making it harder for women and people of different ethnicity to identify with these characters. She seems to thus imply that these past filmmakers (among them Lucas) were delibirately catering to boys, and white people, because they didn’t believe these stories would appeal to anybody else, and that only recently these lines are beginning to be blurred. Filmmakers should facilitate this movement by casting on an equal basis.

While it is true that men and women were not given equal opportunity in the film industry, I think it is faulty and inherently sexist to assume that a character’s gender is in any way important in the way men and women relate to these characters. As such, the fact that Rey and Jyn are female protagonists is important, because it reflects equality in casting, not because their gender makes these characters more relatable to women. If the inherent assumption is, that by casting female protagonists in Star Wars the franchise will become more appealing to women, then I would consider such a notion higly superficial and sexist.

It seems like you are suggesting that casting should go back to being less inclusive.

He obviously isn’t suggesting that. I don’t agree with his interpretation of Kennedy’s words. I actually think Kennedy was saying that girls and boys have more or less always been able to relate to all characters but now we don’t have to think of roles as being limited to one gender. But he obviously isn’t saying that he wants Star Wars to go back to the 70s and be all white again.

I care more that all children grow up seeing themselves represented in all types of roles, then I do about one or two casting decisions that I personally didn’t like. This is why Kelly Marie Tran is in my signature.

As someone who doesn’t care about Star Wars or children, I personally think that more inclusive casting is good, but I also hate how people are implying that it is something to consider when evaluating how relatable a character is. I don’t relate to any living person in real life and only relate to a few characters in film, and those few characters that I relate to are pretty diverse, and almost a 50/50 split in terms of male to female. I simply can’t relate to the notion that not sharing an arbitrary characteristic with a character makes him or her less relatable. I don’t get it, and probably never will. That doesn’t mean that I don’t want films to be inclusive to women and non-white actors. It also doesn’t mean that I don’t want people to go out of their way to make films reflect the diverse society that we live in. All it means is that I think it’s shallow to look at old characters and act like they’re less relatable because of their skin color or gender. One thing that I will admit to is that I actually am selfish enough to care a lot more about casting decisions that I like than I care about children seeing themselves represented, but my preferences in casting don’t have anything to do with race or gender so that shouldn’t conflict with your goal. Other than that, I pretty much agree with you.

Just want to chime in that the glaring part of your post is that you don’t care about SW. Not sure why you’re here then???

I cared when I first came here.

too much, probably.

It definitely looks more interesting. I wonder if it isn’t too short now, is there any more of the fight on the platform that could make it in?

It’s true, all of it.

I originally imagined that this planet would be in the same star system as Jakku, making their jump last no more than a minute and probably take less time than Kylo’s scene. But if they are doing this and not jumping to a more central system, the problem remains as to why Han and Chewie found them so quickly.

The problem really lies with the passage of time in this section of the movie. Each event leads immediately to another with no chance for downtime. I can’t imagine that more than ten minutes had elapsed between them leaving Jakku and being found by Han.

JEDIT: The only break point I can think of is sometime during Finn and Rey’s hallway conversation. After ‘I’m Rey’, cut to Kylo’s scene, then back to the Falcon falling out of hyperspace near Ponema Terminal. Cut to Rey in the midst of the pipes, as if they’ve had nothing but problems while in Hyperspace. That means the loss of Finn’s moment where he considers telling Rey the truth about himself, which is a shame. Maybe an even better break point in terms of flow would be after ‘he’s going to get you home. We both will’. Then there are no introductions at all, but it would allow Kylo to ask the question ‘what girl?’ for the audience, until she says her name later. Finn says ‘Rey’ in the next scene, but that could be edited out so that the first time we hear it is when Han asks her on Takodana.

Since I’m planning on removing the idea that the Falcon is easily trackable by anyone at anywhere in the galaxy, I think there should be a better reason for Han to find the Falcon as quickly as he does. The only way I can think to do that is if Rey intentionally travels to a major spaceport after escaping Jakku. So here’s the idea:

The Falcon jumps to Hyperspace after leaving Jakku, then immediately cut to Kylo being updated, in order to cover the trip through hyperspace. Kylo asks ‘What girl?’, and in answer to this we cut back to the Falcon leaving hyperspace and arriving near a new planet, followed by Rey and Finn’s introductions. It wouldn’t be too difficult to cobble together some imagery of this planet in the distance with lights moving here and there indicating that it is home to a busy spaceport. It could use my shot of the Falcon leaving hyperspace from Restructured as a base. After this, the previously bisected scene of the Falcon repairs would need to be joined back together, and Finn’s line ‘we need to get out of this system’ could be reinstated. Presumably this is Ponemah Terminal.

With those changes, I think it would make more sense why Han is able to find the ship so quickly, as well as the arrival of two separate gangs soon after.

CHEWBAKAspelledwrong said:

I appreciate the effort to actually paint something instead of using a cookie-cutter photo collage, but those don’t even look remotely like Alden or Woody.

Edit: and Han’s chin is crooked.

Why does Han’s stare remind me of this?

Ladyhawke

A wonderful fantasy romance. It has plenty of fun moments, and even the 80’s synth soundtrack isn’t enough to diminish it.

SilverWook said:

Interesting interpretation, but is there anything that’s been said by the filmmakers that is along those lines?

I don’t think so. But this interpretation was around before TLJ’s release, and with TLJ I think the meta commentary has grown beyond these two characters, and audience expectation (or its subversion) now drives the story itself.

Jay said:

Edit: I just watched the scene again and I’m so annoyed at how Luke completely forgets everything he learned about internal conflict by saving his father and Rey spoon-feeds this wisdom to him like she’s the Jedi master. Ugh.

I’ve found it helpful to look at Kylo and Rey as being written to represent Star Wars fans. Rey represents those who are avid and hopeful fans of the franchise, who know everything about the Jedi and what the ‘real’ Luke would do. This is why she’s so disappointed in what he’s become.

Kylo represents the fan who is tired of the whole dichotomy between good and evil, rebels and Empire, and wants to make the franchise about something else.

This is a big reason why it’s so hard to take these movies seriously - the stories aren’t written as a natural progression of events but more as a meta commentary on Star Wars itself.

snooker said:

Yeah, but people say ‘Luke would never do that, the scene betrays his character!’ and I don’t agree with them.

I don’t disagree with the direction they took, but it could have been better handled.

What if Luke had looked into Kylo’s future and explicitly seen him kill Han? Then you have the man who couldn’t kill his evil father facing the man who will kill his heroic father (and led to the destruction of the Republic). If they had focused on that drama I think it would have improved both Han’s and Luke’s stories in this trilogy.

It’s a shame that they muddled that message by making Luke surprised that Han was gone.

I don’t think anyone’s criticizing Mark Hamill’s acting.

snooker said:

Also I can’t believe that Obi-Wan is friends with this… thing:

How very dare you.

Mrebo said:

https://www.cnn.com/2018/07/16/politics/donald-trump-putin-helsinki-summit/index.html

Thoughts:

Conservatives got mad at Obama for blaming America and being overly conciliatory to hostile nations (including Russia), so this reverse is darkly amusing.

But does it really even matter anymore?

Do we want more Cold War?

And I find it amusing how you’ve tied yourself in a rhetorical knot to avoid simply stating something to the effect of ‘liberals want more war’, since that would get you laughed out of the room.

Mielr said:

I was watching a TV show the other day, and they were discussing the possibility of Hillary Clinton running for president a 3rd time. A comedian on the show said something like “we need another Hillary candidacy like we need another Star Wars sequel.” The audience groaned, but it made me think: in the minds of the general public, has Star Wars finally “jumped the shark”?

The comedian sounds like they were talking about Star Wars sequel fatigue, which I would definitely agree with.

But that seems different to me than ‘jumping the shark’, which implies that Star Wars has had a moment of such tonal absurdity that it can’t be taken seriously or even earnestly anymore. I don’t think that’s happened, despite some questionable moments in TLJ.

Just finished watching it. It’s really nice, seeing decent film scans of Star Wars in here.

The more I think about this movie the more I’d like to see a substantial paring down and reorganization of the scenes. The movie really works on a visual and emotional level, but a lot of the quips, jokes, and complicated exposition really detract from a simple story that is essentially about failure and remorse.

The movie also loses a lot of its emotional heft in strange editing. For example Luke’s death is handled very oddly.

In its current order:
Salt Flat: Luke tricks Kylo Ren. Ren Screams in anger.
Island: Luke collapses, then struggles to get up.
Hills: Rey looks back, and Leia looks troubled.
Island: Luke gets up.
Hills: Rey continues looking.
Island: Luke dies. Music becomes mournful.
Crait Base: First Order marches in, Kylo finds the dice, and looks up suddenly.
Crosscut between Rey and Kylo, then she shuts the door on him.
Crait Base: Dice disappear and pan out on Kylo.
Falcon flies away from Crait, with musical sting.
Falcon: Everyone has a happy reunion, then they sadly talk about Luke.

There are two issues with this. First, the dice don’t disappear when Luke dies. More importantly, the music of Luke’s death is interrupted by a short First Order theme which tramples on the moment.

I’d consider reordering it to play like this:

Salt Flat: Luke tricks Kylo Ren. Ren Screams in anger.
Island: Luke collapses, then struggles to get up.
Crait Base: First Order marches in, Kylo finds the dice.
Hills: Rey looks back, and Leia looks troubled.
Island: Luke gets up.
Hills: Rey continues looking.
Island: Luke dies. Music becomes mournful.
Crait Base: Kylo looks at dice as they disappear. He suddenly looks up.
Crosscut between Rey and Kylo, then she shuts the door on him.
Crait Base: Pan away from Kylo.
Falcon flies away from Crait. No music.
Falcon: Cut happy reunions. Start with the shot of Finn getting the blanket out of the Jedi book drawer, and leave the reunion for the final group shot.

JEDIT:

Actually, I would change the final ending of the movie further if it works to put the Luke Skywalker kid’s story right before the Canto Bight prison break.

The Falcon flies into camera, cutting the entrance to Hyperspace.
The Falcon scene happens without reunions as stated, ending with the group shot and no exterior in Hyperspace.
End of the Broom Boy scene with the ship streaking across the sky.
Cut to credits.

Dat_SW_Guy said:

“Star Wars - The First Order Is Not Intimidating & Here’s Why” By Jeremy Jahns

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D3il2rcqIMA

That’s a very good point.

It’s some of that, yes, but I think the Scouring of the Shire was more specifically about Tolkien expressing his fears about industrialization in Britain after the wars, and using this as a way to bring the conflict home to the characters on a deeply personal level.

And that’s a good message for a book, but not at all cinematic to have an extended cleanup after the main conflict has ended. Peter Jackson understood that at least.

yotsuya said:

Frankly the idea that they reset it makes no sense with IX being the saga finale. No sense at all.

For almost 40 years, movie three of the OT was the end of the Star Wars saga. You know, the movie where all the major villains were killed and everyone assumed that the Rebellion had won, and which in TFA’s backstory it actually had. George’s idea for sequel trilogies was constantly changing, and was at times going to be about the Wookiee planet, or the world of the Midichlorians, or about Luke finding his mysterious twin sister across the galaxy and requiring her to defeat the Emperor, at least before he got tired of Star Wars and rushed to the conclusion in ROTJ. Why are we taking George’s plans seriously at all anymore?

So yes, George Lucas and JJ Abrams and Michael Arndt reset the conflict in the universe for another trilogy. To draw a comparison: Mordor is again filled with bigger, meaner orcs with another evil spirit leading them, Aragorn has given up on the world of Men and gone into hiding, and another hobbit hero will need to find a wizard mentor and make everything right with the world. Again.

And it’s just a shame, since the seeds of greatness are within TFA from the beginning. A Republic split between a strong, centralized ‘Imperial’ government and a united confederation of self-ruled star systems would provide ample opportunity for conflict. Add to this the questioning of bringing back what is essentially a state-sanctioned theocratic order, and the rehabilitation of generations of soldiers conditioned for war, and you’ve got the beginning of a truly new chapter in what can really call itself the continuing Star Wars saga. And it actually is that sort of a movie, until the Senate is blown up by another superweapon and the Resistance becomes the Rebellion.

Finally, I’m somewhat amused at how much faith you put in a man who is famed for his inability to stick the landing of his stories, when he has to do it now not just for this trilogy, but for the entire Star Wars saga.
I don’t envy him his job.

chyron8472 said:

I don’t think this will ever not make me laugh.

One minor point as I rewatch the movie - Finn and Rose are able to escape the Raddus undetected by either party and go to another planet. Since Holdo’s plan is to rely on reinforcements from the Outer Rim after boosting the signal from Crait, why couldn’t a few Resistance soldiers have taken that cloaked hyperspace ship and gone to Crait ahead of the Raddus? Or have been ferrying people off the Raddus onto Crait for hours, preventing a situation where all of the Resistance’s eggs are in one basket?

Frink would say I’m trying to dislike this movie.
But I like nitpicking the plot.