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#1436743
Topic
Worst Edit Ideas
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In the cave scene of TROS, when the flashlight gag happens, replace Poe’s flashlight with an actual lightsaber to eliminate the gag. The flashlight remains a lightsaber throughout the tunnel sequence, but it is never commented on.

On Kijimi, when Finn and Poe argue and Finn leaves to find Rey, show Finn taking that same lightsaber from Poe as he gives Poe the binoculars. In the hallway scene where Finn dramatically looks around, have him ignite the saber. The saber remains ignited as he runs toward Rey and calls her name, but when she pushes him back she also force-pulls the saber into her hand.

On Ach-To, cut everything about Leia and her training. When Rey “takes both sabers to Exegol,” it’s the Skywalker saber and the Finn/Poe saber.

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#1436705
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

ThisIsCreation said:

Sorry if its been discussed already but the destruction of Kajimi has been removed

But now with talks of adding more of an uprising on the planet, would readding the destruction help?

It would slow the movie down ever so slightly, in a good way & shows us that they are willing to destroy whole planets on the whim of a little uprising.

I like the way they did the destruction practically. And I’m wondering how would it be a positive change to readd it

In theory, in a standalone kind of way, I can totally get where you’re coming from.

In a meta-sense, however, we’ve already had two Death Stars in the original trilogy, a Death Star planet that’s 5x stronger in TFA, and a broken Death Star as a location in TROS, so to then have every Star Destroyer also be a Death Star just absolutely kills any good will the movie has going for it. Audiences were rolling their eyes when Death Star II appeared in 1983, a bunch more were even more exasperated when they brought the idea back in 2015, and by the time I was watching TROS I was just laughing out loud while my friend yelled at the screen in confused frustration, both of us marveling at how stupid and creatively bankrupt the whole series (or at least Abrams) is. Destroying a planet is supposed to leave a huge impact, but it had already lost all impact in TFA (though Hal’s edit made it better) and it certainly didn’t have any left in TROS.

The less planet-destroying lasers, the better.

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#1435192
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

I’d just like to put out there that I don’t think “no one’s ever really gone” would be a good idea for a line. It had its place in VIII, and I get why they reused it for the IX teaser, but it might come across as too cynically meta if place in IX itself. I mean…

Also, that saber clip looks great Movies Remastered.

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#1434884
Topic
Zack Snyder's Justice League: Redux Ideas thread
Time

D-A113 said:

Question regarding cutting down ZSJL-
What would be the most effective way to shorten Cyborg’s backstory?

I’d definitely cut down the weird vision sequence where his dad voice-overs his powers in excruciating-yet-vague detail. Don’t need to see the dumb bear and bull fighting as a metaphor, for example. Also don’t think we need “the challenge will be not doing these things” because that lesson never once matters in the movie and is eerily reminiscent of Pa Kent’s infamously horrible teachings in Man of Steel.

Vilgefortz said:

Physical releases are finally here…

https://vimeo.com/556927672

😉

lmao

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#1432174
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

I’m suddenly remembering the scene in RotJ where a character speaking an alien language recounts the story of the previous movie to a cute group of childlike aliens.

This new puppet show is just making ST even more of an OT remake/knockoff lol. I think JJ would be proud we’re advancing his vision for the story.

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#1431987
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Tiny nitpick, but do we need the alien to say “Skywalker” three times, or even twice? The second time it says Skywalker, it sounded to me a bit like it’s just reusing the same audio as the first time he says it, maybe it’s just because he pauses after the word both times. Maybe I’m being silly, but I’m just thinking of what the alien actor’s “translated script” could have been and wondering how the same word is used so often in just one or two sentences. Maybe replace one with “Jedi?”

On that note, I also wonder if the voice actor (I forget who exactly, my apologies) couldn’t ham it up just a little bit with their cadence and tone to better match what’s happening on screen in the final cut. Maybe a quick dramatic pause before Luke deflects the blast, then a little flair and excitement in their voice when it happens. Like, in a way the kids could be laughing at how he’s telling the story, and not just at the visual of the puppets.

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#1428442
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Hal wants to release a Rey Nobody version of Ascendant, but all the work on the specifics of Rey Nobody is being done in a different thread for the benefit of all editors: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/REY-NOBODY-The-Official-Fan-Editing-Thread/id/76772

Any discussion or scene edits of Rey Nobody should go there. This thread is still about Ascendant 2.0 and will be until it is released, which could be a while.

I’m sure someone out there has an edit of the opening that goes from the title crawl to Kylo in his ship, but there’s not a Hal-made Ascendant version. That idea was discussed and rejected long ago.

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#1428159
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

I think Leia appearing as a ghost in the Palpatine fight would hurt the payoff on Tatooine where Rey sees Leia, without adding enough to the Palpatine fight to compensate. Rey hearing Leia’s “always,” which Hal has already incorporated from the trailer, is satisfying enough without being distracting.

Maybe it’s just me, but when the ghosts appear against Palpatine, I see it as a kind of catharsis where these Jedi that have spent decades against The Sith are finally getting their due; Sidious is literally facing his ghosts. For Anakin, Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Luke, that works and is satisfying enough, but for Leia? I’ve never had the impression from the movies that Leia and Palpatine had any real connection. Of course she was one of the major political and military opponents against the Empire as a whole, but she never had a big Jedi vs Sith connection, or a connection with Vader the way Luke did. Of course TROS finally introduces some more Jedi stuff for Leia, but in a fairly limited way, and if anything it felt more like the focus for Leia was on supporting Rey and saving Ben than battling Palpatine.

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#1428134
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

That many Jedi just makes it too comically busy, like I’d literally laugh if I saw that in the theater (as I did at many other things in TROS that this edit has tried to downplay). Qui-Gon died over a decade before the Emperor revealed himself and Windu doesn’t really have an emotional connection with the audience besides prequel nostalgia. Obi, Yoda, Luke, and Anakin are the ones that matter, and the only ones movie-watchers have already seen as ghosts.

Hal 9000 said:

Just have a regular, corporeal version of Ashoka walk in from stage right.

If Filoni had his way. Ahsoka is the Forrest Gump of Star Wars.

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#1427657
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Alright I believe that the Vader’s castle stuff is all we’re going to use out of all this, then. I can’t think of anywhere else in the movie where the rest of these things could go. Unless I’m not thinking hard enough.

Ach-To shot could be used if Hal didn’t want to use the existing one anymore, but it may not be worth the effort.

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#1427216
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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axlanian said:

https://vimeo.com/544409972
https://vimeo.com/544410005
https://vimeo.com/544410033 <— This is the fast one

Could 3P0’s line in the first video begin as soon as the scene cuts from Finn to the trooper? The initial silence of the transition is awkward, like something has clearly been cut. Maybe rework the trooper’s response to compensate, or take the time for 3P0’s line delivery to be slower and more natural.

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#1427003
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

sherlockpotter said:

Alrighty, Dagger discovery scene! The last time I tried to edit this clip, there was some concern that 3PO would know that this Sith artifact is the one they’re after. So I did a bit more dialogue tinkerage - now he thinks that “this must be the clue Master Luke was looking for.”

https://streamable.com/iy6dpe

There might be some subtle sync issues with the echoes in the cave, but I didn’t really notice until I muted the center channel and cranked the volume up, so I think it will be okay?

(You know, whether or not the other Dagger Vision components can be figured out, I do think that this scene and the new Jannah scene really help to smooth over some of the internal logic of the film. At least, that’s my impression.)

I like this a lot. The theatrical version felt almost like a parody, “what do you know, this random knife says exactly where the wayfinder is!” Just saying “this is the clue” is much better, and the quality sounds believably fine as far as I can tell.

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#1424680
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Brewzter said:

natestarwarsfan122 said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

sherlockpotter said:

Hey Hal, are you interested in using RogueLeader’s ideas for Kijimi in Ascendant too? About having it be mid-Civil War with people fighting stormtroopers off in the distance?

(Slight deviation from the Dagger discussions, I know.)

I would be interested in some spray paintings of Luke Skywalker on the walls.

Side note: I cannot get over the fact that the official canon explanation for why nobody came to help on Crait was that the First Order cut communication lines. Like, bruh. The whole point of the movie is that everyone was hopeless until Luke shows up.

It’s actually explained well in the book Resistance Reborn by Delilah S Dawson. It seems dumb when randomly referenced in the novelization, but has a lot of emotional implications for Poe, that ROS evidently ignored.

Do you remember when it was in the book? I don’t remember that part and don’t have time to go back and reread the entire thing lol

It’s the overall main plot of the book. The First Order had been capturing the biggest Resistance allies as political prisoners in a wide-scale organized attack, including some notable names from previous books by other authors, and so Poe & Finn go to rescue them on Corellia while the main Resistance hides out on Ryloth and another team acquires new ships from the junkyard planet in Jedi Fallen Order.

It was actually kind of fun with characters from other canon EU stuff (Battlefront 2, Jedi Fallen Order, Bloodline, Aftermath), all coming together to prepare for the final movie (too bad about that, lol).

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#1423338
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Coming into this current discussion late, but was the “heads up” at the beginning of these clips always there? Because it sounds clearly added in post, and also… doesn’t make sense with the visual? We hear Poe (I think?) say “heads up,” but then he and the rest of the cast spin around in sudden surprise, like they all just hear the horse hooves at the same time and nobody actually said “heads up” in the scene because nobody was keeping watch.

Probably not worth doing anything about, especially if it’s been there since the theater and I never noticed it, but these clips all starting with that moment just made it stick out to me.

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#1421323
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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oojason said:

Part Two of the Deleted Scenes for Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker is now out!
 

Ooh, even more appropriate for this setting. Your video will make a fine addition to my collection.

Happy April Fools everyone, btw. The joke is that this thread has 11k replies and we’ll still probably debate the Mustafar scene again at some point. 😛