And now we have subtitles, thanks to the amazing snooker! I’ve added those .srt files to the Google Drive folder for anyone that wants them too.
Alright, just uploaded versions I’m happy to sit with and send out until Andor season 2, a few minor tweaks from the previous to address some of RL’s points above (bats, OG score bleed, staff hits, foley volume).
“Jedha”: v3.8 v4
“Stardust”: v3.2 v4
“Rogue One”: v3.1 v4
Thank you so much for these! I was holding off on “finalizing” until I had at least heard from you, you always have really thorough feedback. A lot of this is already helping tie up those technical odds and ends; I don’t think I have it in me to keep rewatching these for that small stuff (hell, that was the whole process already) so the extra eyes really helps. Relieving that they seemed fine for the most part to everyone already.
I do agree about waiting until season 2 to finalize, but for now “final” to me is about not having to think about this for a while. I didn’t exactly have the healthiest relationship to my previous ongoing edits tbh. For that, I think I’m just going to let go of some of the more radical / alternate stuff I might have been interested in, at least for now. A lot of what you pitched does sound enticing though! Esp. your second ending pitch. When I have the space in my head and life for it, I’d love to help realize some of these somewhere.
I’ll respond to some of the more specific points below:
When I rewatched episode 1 on my phone at max volume, I noticed the sound of bats chirping a lot during in the scenes at Saw’s base. Sort of noticeable/distracting but not terrible.
I was actually wondering if “bats” to denote “cave” was a little too much lol. Can definitely reduce them.
I feel like the added shots during the rebel briefing do stick out a little.
I can live with that, that one shot I replaced of Jyn with a smile[?] on her face never worked for me, especially as the lingering closer to the exchange. Just never tracked to the prior conversation’s tone.
I am overall impressed by your music choices. I thought the music choice when Jyn and Cassian arrived to Jedha was pretty inspired, since the music has a slight “Arabia” vibe, which is appropriate considered Jedha was filmed in Wadi Rum. I also really loved the music choices for Galen’s death, and Cassian’s speech till the end of that episode. Really great.
This reminds me I should release a tracklist.
The Jedha arrival in particular is actually “Lebanon” by Cho Young-wuk from Park Chan-wook’s The Little Drummer Girl (2018) miniseries, which I highly recommend. I actually got on keyboard to play some notes from it as synth, just to better blend it to the the rest of the Andor OST lol
I think you’ve done an impressive job emulating the original score with Brittell’s work at times, and overall giving it the Andor vibe. I will say that I initially felt some of the music choices didn’t have the same “emotional weight” as the original tracks, like Your Father Would be Proud. I have rewatched bits and pieces of the episodes on my phone during and those moments that initially had less impact than the theatrical have grown on me more.
I was feeling similarly, but I figured, eh, it’s a novelty edit at the end of the day, the point isn’t to outdo the original, and ultimately Andor’s vibe is just less theatrical anyway. I actually insulated myself from the original score entirely by episode 2 so as to stop comparing the two. Glad to hear it’s grown on you.
I may be wrong but I think I noticed you re-inserted Chirrut’s line, “Is your foot alright?” between V1 and V2. I don’t have strong feelings either way about it but I’m curious why you decided to add it back in.
Also, I wonder if Chirrut’s staff hitting the troopers could be given a little more umph here and there. Sometimes it sounds like he is tapping them pretty lightly instead of hitting them so hard he is knocking them out.
I had to redo all the foley for that scene between the two versions because I felt V1’s sound work was really sloppy all around. I too didn’t really have strong feelings either way about it, which is why I didn’t bother cutting it the second time around. Good call on the staff hits.
You may interested, but I know there is an unused shot of the little girl Jyn saved looking up in the sky when the Star Destroyer is leaving that you could re-add to this version of the film if you wanted. There are a few other unused shots that could be useful here and there as well.
I would be interested in just seeing what you have at all, even if I don’t end up using them.
An opportunity for this edit: In the Partisan prison cell, Cassian says, “This is the first for me” in regards to being “worst cages than this”. This feels a little contradictory knowing that he has been in some pretty bad cages. You could argue he is being deceptive about his past, or being sarcastic, but I feel like with the added context of Andor, it would be better to alter this line to, “This isn’t the first for me” if possible.
Honestly, this never bothered me and I think Andor actually makes the scene work better for me personally. I like that it’s overtly not the truth now, particularly for the moment when Chirrut calls out that he is carrying a prison with him. It plays more like Cassian taken aback by some mysticism (he is probably carrying Narkina with him), as opposed to him being surprised Chrirrut said something poignant. Just feels a bit more in character.
I always felt like it was less about having been in cages before anyway, and more about Chirrut’s premise to relax. From Cass’ perspective, is he supposed to say “You’re right, I have been in worse cages too, I shouldn’t care about being held against my will”? It feels fitting for him to say something wry that minimizes the conversation through Chirrut’s own terms.
I think if this was a movie edit, I would suggest removing all Bodhi scenes before Cassian finds him (and you removed all but one already), but with this episode format I wonder how it would feel if the following Bodhi scene when he meets Saw was back-to-back with his first scene. You could still cut the Bor Gullet scene, but maybe you could subtitle Saw when he says Bor Gullet, and it could mean, “Torture him.” Or something like that, to explain why Bodhi is in a daze when Cassian finds him.
I was wondering if maybe the Saw scenes would actually play better in Andor’s new context. This is mostly for the potential / inevitable post-season 2 revisit, but season 1 already lays groundwork for Saw’s further descent into madness and paranoia. Maybe season 2 could make the Rogue One scenes land better as the final beats of a fleshed out arc.
As it is though, I still don’t see too much value in including all of them. Bodhi being in a daze contrasted to his first lucid scene tells enough of the story IMO, as does Saw’s brief distrust of Jyn’s reappearance.
I can totally understand if you want keep this edit pretty similar to the original film beyond a few trims, but I’d love get a version of this with the music separate if you wouldn’t mind sharing.
I’ll get around to this eventually, I don’t mind. I imagine it’ll be like when they released that Tom Cruise Mummy trailer without music haha.
Though if I end up too busy, I think some of it should be easily replicated by using something like Spleeter or UVR to isolate vocals on the center channel. Only percussion and vocals can make a clean center channel, given the targeted scene’s OST doesn’t have any drums (which luckily RO doesn’t use all the time). Percussion track in particular can preserve a good bit of things like clicks, taps, impacts, explosions, and footsteps for the foley.
I’m working on my own subtitles for these and I’d be glad to share them when I finish!
Thank you, that’d be great, I’ll fold them into the final versions when they’re ready. The timings at this point aren’t changing.
I was thinking about it, yeah. I’d still have to crack the episode bridges though, since the scoring is very intentional to the format atm, and it was a lot of testing to even get to where it is. For now, I’m going to polish up the current soundtracks before I start on that.
I’d also be lying if I said I wasn’t attached now to the start / end of the second episode moments in particular. The breaks alleviate some of the extended dryness I feel this could easily fall into.
This fucking rules.
Thanks for checking it out!
Always rules to hear from you snooker, thank you so much for checking it out! I’m glad to hear it all works out that way, it’s what I’d hoped when I first started this
Okay, I re-up’d a new episode 1 for anyone with access to the folder
EDIT: ok sorry, another one, v3.5 uploading right now. That should be it, but its pretty significantly different from v1
Oh, it was a lot. I rebuilt like 90% of the film’s sound. Episode 1 in particular needs to be tightened on that front a lot more though, early on I was just going for “good enough” to make progress.
New version of episode 1 later today, if anyone cares to hold off on watching the current version
EDIT: ok, exporting new ep 1
The first episode is actually the one I want to mess with more, I realize I’m not really happy with it now that the dust has settled on just getting through the foleying and re-scoring of the whole 2 hrs+. I worked chronologically so a lot of it was early in the process and I wasn’t taking it seriously yet.
I think I should have the space now to polish it up, but the problems with that first act are honestly still the problems, unfortunately. I’d love to make some bigger changes for the next revision if you had ideas.
What it says on the tin, pretty much. Andor brainrot has had me this past year, it’s genuinely become one of my favorite shows of all time - to the point I am probably an Andor fan more than I am a fan of Star Wars itself. This edit is kind of an expression of that with a movie I generally really liked - moving its energy from emulating the jaunty, swashbuckling OT, to more in line with its prequel show’s feel.
Up front, I don’t actually think this elevates or changes Rogue One in any meaningful way. The movie is still the movie, still fast paced and action oriented, particularly compared to Andor’s fiercer, slower, and paranoid ethos. But I do think the elements Andor is rooted in become far more apparent foregrounded to this soundtrack. Where the movie somewhat failed to recapture the energy and excitement of traditional Star Wars (and not for lack of Giacchino effort), the places where it takes itself seriously should now feel less dissonant in a [tonal] context that seriously considers them.
If nothing else, it’s just fun to have the show and movie connected via the same musical motifs and format!
Starts from the Lah’mu sequence, up to Cassian, Jyn, and co. flying out from the destruction of Jedha City.
Definitely want to work on this one more, it doesn’t quite work for me but that could just be the movie itself.
Starts from Tarkin taking the Death Star project from Krennic, up to Jyn and Cassian walking onboard the stolen shuttle to go to Scarif.
Starts from Rogue One pulling away from Yavin, up to Jyn and Cassian embracing as they are engulfed in the death cloud.
Cassian’s Intro
Cassian Speech
Recap of Ep 1 (In Ep 2)
Recap of Ep 2 (In Ep 3)
So generally - these are [kind of] done, but with the nature of the work to do an edit like this, I actually haven’t spent too much time reviewing and just pushed through to complete its concept. I truly do not know how any of this all plays together. So feedback would still be greatly appreciated - any technical things I missed, ideas you might have, or critiques of the music choices. It isn’t all just Britell’s Andor soundtrack here, there is some stuff from adjacent [hopefully obscure enough to not be recognized] sci-fi / historical / thriller shows and movies. I won’t rule out that there are better choices than the ones I landed on, super zoomed into an NLE timeline, taking it one scene at a time. Thanks for checking out if you do!
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In junction with what I’m saying though, it’s more like - I’m personally not a stoic buddhist, so that’s where I would disagree with Lucas’ admiration of those ideas in his work. At the very least, would be disinterested in it. If an audience is discomforted with detachment valued in that way, I do think there is space left by Lucas to feel that - you just wouldn’t be a Jedi in his world.
And again, this is where I feel like it’s always discussed so binarily - as “good” and “bad” interpretations. Flawed institutions, unwieldy pedagogy, and slavish dogma, etc. can be separate case study in the work from philosophical beliefs. It’s not contradictory for Lucas to posit those things and still come out believing Jedi are good. But could they be Good in the time/space he depicted? Exploring what can go wrong with tangible incidence, is not the same as exploring what is wrong with abstract ideas. And we always keep circling back to confusion over that messiness, when the messiness is almost the point. It’s war and politics considered over serial adventure, we’ve always known that, it comes with the territory.
But beyond that, the OT has the focused thematic answers from those questions one would be looking for anyway. Luke Skywalker has friends he cares about and succeeds through the love of a son to his father. You couldn’t be a prequel Jedi, but detachment is considered with far more balance with the whole saga in mind.
Channel72 said:
I agree with all this - it’s just bizarre that apparently George Lucas really believed he was portraying the Jedi in a positive light. The interpretation most people on the Internet seem to adhere to - that the Prequels purposely portray the Jedi as a flawed institution (like the Catholic Church or something) - is almost certainly incorrect. Multiple interviews with George Lucas reveal that he believes the Jedi and their anti-attachment philosophy was correct, and the only reason Anakin fell was because he gave in to his fear of loss.
I actually don’t think these things have to live contradictorily. Institution != the beliefs, what is taught doesn’t account for the pedagogy. Lucas believing he portrayed the Jedi as characters positively doesn’t preclude the notion that the Jedi Order as it was is cooked, especially when said Order is so pointedly entwined with a galactic government Lucas is criticizing. “Golden Age of the Jedi” is objective nomenclature that reflects status and power in a narrative indicting status and power. There is a lot more happening in what he’s talked about than the popular terms often dictated by fans in debate.
And like, Lucas can be wrong about his own work. If we were talking about real world baggage, this is its value in a fictional space that’s expanded beyond his authorial engagement.
Had some time to check these out (1, 2, 4, at least) and I think a lot of it mostly works out. Ironically movie 4, while having the most moving around, actually has the best technical transitions; there are still a few places in 1 and 2 where I think some of the music transitions could be implemented a little better. (Though I realize these are just some of the limits of fanediting, especially with the purpose of preserving the source as much as possible.)
Narratively though, 1 & 2 work as well as they should. It’s not like you’re really cutting anything out, and these do the job of streamlining the focus really well. Even the few space / time jumps feel in line with what was the show’s language already.
Re: movie 4, I prefer Maarva’s death as revealed originally. The juxtaposition of Cassian finally being free to B2 grappling with what he missed worked jarringly beautifully to that end already. Vel letting Kleya know as that moment doesn’t work nearly as well, particularly since the scene initially feels too tied up with the preceding Vel scenes. It feels like she’s visiting the shop to follow through on the Mothma threads, especially since it takes a bit for Vel to get to the point about Maarva. It works much better after Maarva Is Dead has been well established. I think it could be swapped for Bix being moved and asked about Kreegyr. You could even have the shop scene moved right after Cinta views the party moving Maarva’s body, draw the line clearer between Cinta learning it and Vel reporting it. Otherwise, solid work. Like I said before, the rearrangement all works, even the more implied time jumps.
I’ll continue to keep looking at these, great job so far
Something about movie 4 that stood out to me was Vel and Cinta being on Ferrix at the beginning, before Kleya explicitly outlines the assignment. I think it flows really well in the moment, but that later scene where Vel is told about finding and killing Cassian stands out in that context. What are they meant to be doing in the earlier scene if not already looking for him?
I know you’re trying not to cut anything, but maybe removal of Kleya’s “sending messages / loose end” pivot and recapping of who he is, would sell that this is something they were already doing.
“Have you heard from Cinta?”
“She’s doing what she’s told. Cassian Andor. You need to find him.”
“Find him.”
“We can’t have him walking around with Luthen in his head.”
“You mean kill him”
That probably goes against what you’re trying to do here though and honestly maybe it could stay as is for a hypothetical fresh eyes audience, who won’t realize it’s out of order. I just clocked it.
Vladius said:
What I mainly don’t like is all the insane real world baggage that gets dragged into it. The Jedi are like an ascetic Buddhist FBI that is also a fourth branch of government and also the leaders of the military and also diplomats and also bodyguards. The Republic is the Roman Republic but it’s also the United States during the Civil War and also the United States in modern times. The Senate is the Roman Senate and also the United Nations times a million. The enemies of the Republic are the Confederates from the Civil War and also modern international megacorporations. Anakin has aspects of Christ but is not perfect like Christ and ends up being the Antichrist.
All of the religion and philosophy in Star Wars is both Christian and Buddhist, Western and Eastern, per Lucas. Which means that it has both traditional good and evil, and suggestions of Yin and Yang “balance” stuff, without distinguishing between the two.
This all leads to confusion and really, really, really bad takes from fans about what it all means. Stuff like you should be equally good and evil, or that Anakin committing genocide on the Jedi was good and they deserved it. And then you have a bunch of EU writers, Disney writers, and Dave Filoni encouraging this.
I think this is actually the strength of the prequels as they are IMO.
Lucas challenges preconceptions of The Story with every subsequent movie starting from “I am your father” in ESB; where the PT contradicts the OT is intentionally in conversation. To me, what’d even be the point of these if the story were only the genre tropes and archetypes we could extrapolate from the OT? The “insane” real world baggage is what makes them worth handling in detail at all. It moves the needle from fairy tale to mythology. It’s not meant to be instructive.
Whatever analogues are in that mix shouldn’t be 1:1, otherwise then we would just be talking about Catholicism. Falling in line to real life historical or contemporary example is a hacky commentative form anyway; the only reality that demands consistency in fictional worldbuilding are the sociological and theoretical mechanics. Any philosophy or culture can be made up in that context, and should. That allows space to work with empathy / thought that real world sensitivities make difficult. If you’re looking for specific analogy, of course it’s incoherent. Of course all of this couldn’t really exist. But the exercise is about how something works, not what they are.
Your mileage may vary on what the difference is, but to articulate how I see the difference: Lucas isn’t writing about the United States or Christianity (just as examples). He’d be writing about hegemonic imperialism and the sociology of principled beliefs. From there your personal engagement is your personal engagement. The murkiness of What It All Means™ is a feature not a bug. I like that we can all have different perspectives about it.
That said, pre-PT lore is something I am obsessed with thinking about. As much as I like all the things I like about the prequels, it’s more in an admiration for what it attempts than its execution. I don’t think they are good movies or have even been well served post-ROTS. It’s difficult to parse because the prequels are very formative for me - I like movie and literature the way I do because of them probably. So a more congruent PT / OT might have changed that. But I can’t deny the appeal of just seeing the stuff Obi-Wan talked about in a more straightforward manner. It just wouldn’t have stuck as long I think.
I’ll definitely use these for a rewatch some time! Such a simple idea but really worth it. The re-arrangement ideas really highlight how tight this show was, not a single thing wasted.
I skimmed through to review your connective points, and actually had a few thoughts, though nothing too major. (Movie 2 is flawless on this front)
Something I might miss in this format are the credit drop moments, there’s something about not being able to sit with “Never more than twelve” in Movie 3 that is a little disappointing. There might be a better scene to transition to with more lead time than that Mothma dining room scene though. I was thinking you could switch it out with the scene of Syril in front of the ISB? There is a little more establishing shot and space before Syril stops Dedra. Whereas you currently have Perrin immediately talking over the fading synths from the previous scene. I also think the Vel/Mothma sequence might ramp up to prison break day a little better.
Movie 1’s transitions were the most obvious to me, and this is actually where I would be in favor of cutting ever so slightly more, or finding a new arrangement, at least a tiny bit of the Kenari segment. Maybe even just some rescoring work. I haven’t thought too hard about it yet, but I found both transitions a bit jarring.
I actually feel like this show is in a lot of ways trying to be for people who didn’t watch Rebels, though. It pulls this trick where there’s a new status quo as a refresh. The previous backstory becomes incidental exposition in service of a New Story.
For example, Sabine and Ahsoka’s history isn’t something Rebels watchers would be familiar with. New audiences and Rebels fans got that information at the same time. Functionally, the reception of that isn’t going to be that different between the two audiences. It’s a whole new dynamic we’re all on the same page of being introduced to.
This becomes the excuse through which the creative team can adapt and change certain things. Sabine is a slightly different character in these new dynamics. Ahsoka’s balance and zen is re-interpreted as overly detached; a character flaw as opposed to culmination. All of a sudden Thrawn isn’t just a smart Imperial who won battles, he’s Palpatine’s heir apparent. These things aren’t being worked through off of Rebels nor are they just picking up where it was left, they’re retcons in context, entirely new material out of it.
I think this is all a bad thing, btw. The show’s dialogue is overly expositional in service of this storytelling mode, and if the characters don’t feel entirely familiar, they’re play acting long-term relationships that haven’t been fleshed out anywhere, just told to us existed at some point. It’s more unnatural as a continuation of Rebels than it is as its own thing.
Another bright spot for me: I actually really like how this episode manages to - not justify - but kind of explain why Ahsoka has been so weird and counter to herself. That performance has still been bad and not very fun to watch, but there’s intentionality there that I can respect far more than anything in OWK or Mando.
So like what I got out of this episode was that Ahsoka before this was trying to train a Jedi the way she was most familiar with: as a wartime Jedi / soldier. (She couldn’t parse that out until now I guess).
And she had been treading so carefully (and half heartedly) on it with Sabine because that wasn’t something she believed in. But after everything she’s started to believe that maybe the alternative to that (who her and her Master were) can only lead to more Darth Vader.
Because they were those Jedi maverick types who didn’t quite fit into the dogma, and they were proud of that until it all went bad. Ahsoka chose to leave where Anakin clung on, and Ahsoka calls him on his hypocrisy on the way out. “I know you do, Anakin.” in response to his admission of wanting to leave sometimes is basically Ahsoka reading Anakin out loud. He doesn’t belong there any more than she does.
So when he falls to the dark side, it’s easy for her to extrapolate that it’s who they were in that institution was what was wrong. She blames herself for leaving that behind, for abandoning the commitment, and re-finds her “faith” in Jedi teachings, almost in the way Hell in Abrahamic religions motivates piety.
This episode was about remembering Anakin and The Clone War that brought her up with more clarity. What it was to her to be a Jedi before the war and that Anakin as he was, wasn’t just part of a Vader equation. Basically Ahsoka’s been misreading that history this whole time. Who the Jedi became in the Clone Wars was not all the Jedi can be.
I think we all expected her to progress from TCW as a cool, light-side aligned wanderer but I think this - her baggage about the Jedi Order - is more complex and pretty fun / interesting to untangle.
my friends and I counted an average of 6 seconds between lines of dialogue in the first two episodes, it’s dire
Slow pace isn’t bad, but this is mostly just super dull in that decompressed mode IMO. Maybe in light of the recent developments in Ashoka as a character this will get better - but Rosario has been sleepwalking through her performance up to this point. The more vibes-based storytelling I feel like Filoni is going for here also doesn’t entirely land when the visual part of the vibe often looks cheap. And the structure is so weird! The first four episodes could have been two, and this most recent one felt like it could have been much shorter, while also feeling like two disparate episodes mashed together.
And we’re over halfway through. The premise of Other Galaxy is only now starting
It’s such a weird, kind of bad show. But I kinda like it lmao.
I love Hayden Christensen
I was wondering you’d think about this episode! I felt the way Hayden acted here was similar to how you had him be in the new canon cut.
Yeah you know me, always been a Hayden truther, so seeing Hayden playing Anakin the way I always knew he could was sick. And it was great to see such a range he could play with here. The softness he has that even animated Anakin doesn’t, adds a lot of nuance to a performance where he is acting more outgoing and fierce. I feel like the character we get out of this bridging is only more enticing and interesting than he was before.
And he still gets to do the intense dark-sided work that was never in too much question! I think I only ever liked lightsabers as much as I did because Hayden was swinging them.
I’ve had a lot of issues with the show overall, but he was great
I love Hayden Christensen
I think for me the problem with fans recently is less about the opinions themselves, and more the rhetoric used / perception-of-industry expressed through them. Like, I did not like BOBF or Mandalorian, and Obi-Wan was pretty bad - but there’s this broad refusal to engage with why they might have turned out that way, in favor of an easy boogeyman scapegoat - Disney The Apparently Principled Entity, Kathleen Kennedy The Devil, Hacks On Payroll etc. - and like, not actually any of the stuff that could be interesting to dissect about the work. Did you hear Pedro Pascal doesn’t care about Mando anymore???
If it’s not melodramatic doomerism about a franchise, it’s gossip and agenda-driven speculation, not really about critique. You can have gripes, I have gripes, negativity is fun, but when you start pairing it with the most brain-dead understanding of the industry, I just mentally check out. And I think what rubs me the wrong way ultimately is that it contributes to Art As Content; all accountability goes straight to the top - the President, a CEO, the Corpo. These movies and shows are their products in the practical sense, sure, but the medium is still Art. It sucks to have the attitude of audience shift to this mode of Dissatisfied Consumer. That’s not the same as being a critic.
(NOTE: I also actually think “constructive criticism” in that way isn’t too much better. That’s still entitled.)
And look, I’m not about attacking, say, Deborah Chow or Rick Famuyiwa or Robert Rodriguez, even Filoni/Favreau personally. That would probably suck more. But they are still the authors of their work. And yes, corporate influence is real too! But parsing out where creative meets that in the middle, or even fails to compromise, is closer to what productive speculation would look like. You’re just harder pressed to really go in and be as mean as you want when the target is no longer a dehumanized Thing - which I get it - it’s probably a “fun” part of Narrativizing Media Dissatisfaction as anti-corporate “rebellion”. It’s just really not That, and the smugness about it is grating.
I think what makes it continually frustrating is that we also now have more instances in this new governance, of outliers to that Narrative, like Andor or Visions. You don’t even have to like them to see that collaboration and creativity isn’t as suppressed or micromanaged as some YouTube grifter would have you think. Hollywood isn’t just the execs, it’s also everyone working in it, and while you don’t have to automatically like everything because Someone worked on a thing - don’t you want to like more things? Media is communication, the process of receiving / deciphering shouldn’t be binary. We’ve moved far beyond telegraphs, right?
If it’s “fun” to talk about stuff, then think about stuff too.
but how are we supposed to feel cool and important if our discontent doesn’t karmically punish those who have the jobs we wished we had
absolutely! still based