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- #1362894
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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COVER UPDATE
Trying to get it to appear in the forum but no idea how to do it. LOL
COVER UPDATE
Trying to get it to appear in the forum but no idea how to do it. LOL
Here you go Hal,
If someone could let me know what the second font is and where I can get the old SW logo from I could finish this properly.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XPl6KFnvTKYMtU06JTUes6o9OAJmNmos/view?usp=sharing
JEDIT: Just fixed the issue with her hair.
Those aren’t mine but the style is very easy to duplicate. Graphic design way my trade for years. I just Googled hal9000 in images. Seems like there are loads but wasn’t sure which style you’re actually going for with this trilogy.
Not really; there’s not much I can do beyond waiting for the remaining bits and pieces from others as outlined at the top of the OP. Once the edit is ‘locked,’ I can do subtitles and chapters and stuff like that. Once I get the Naboo shot from snooker I will put out another workprint.
Actually, one thing we still need is cover artwork. There was a good front image to use posted a while ago, but does anyone with the know-how feel like crafting something to compliment TFA:R and TLJ:L?
What style do you need? Is it like this?
Is there room for some Prequel references we haven’t thought of yet? Or maybe we should recap those we have.
Good idea,
I think so far we have…
Extra Mustafar scenes by Lilian, Kewfish and myself
A Moon switch into Endor by poppa
Ewok and falcon scene by snooker
Kylo looking over Coruscant by Idir_hh
Kylo at Jedi Temple by Jonh and Poppa (maybe)
Coruscant ending by poppa, audio fix by myself
Naboo ending by Snooker
Vaders shuttle switch by Poppa
Anakin as a force ghost by jonh
Soundtracks
Duel of the fates or Battle of the heroes (depending on whos cut)
Ambush on Coruscant (my cut)
Across the stars (Over Ben & Rey’s kiss) but not confirmed if right to use.
Also I don’t know how it can be done, maybe by muting 3PO,but what do people think of adding the Stsr Tours clip of the Battle of Exegol into the film to extend the space battle? Personally I thought the battle itself was too short for a final fight
I agree, and after looking it up I would say there are definitely some good shots in there, but all I can finnd of the ride is just second-hand phone footage with the 3d double-vision effect still on. Do you know of a higher quality version online somewhere?
Closest video I could find. https://youtu.be/l0Kcyg_m3F0
“That’s how we’re gonna end the saga after 42 years is it?”
“So, you’re just gonna take the Skywalker name and that’s ok is it?”
I’ll stop now. Lol
What would Chewie really be saying at that point of the film that would necessitate “it is” for a reply? That and Rey’s response just felt like a crammed-in jump cut to me.
It’s time for lightspeed skipping.
It’s good to be together again.
It’s good to head home.
It’s good we all made it back.
Is it finally over!
Is it Porg roasting time?
Is it my turn to drive?
Is the falcon yours now?
Is the galaxy safe?
I mocked up the ending with the cockpit shot (music-only) and I think it actually makes the final music track smooth out a lot nicer towards the end!
I also increased the warmth of the cockpit shot to simulate the sun through the windows.
It would be cool to include R2 and maybe D0 behind BB-8 at the end.
https://vimeo.com/436658564
PW: faneditAnd it would be AWESOME to include the ghosts of Luke, Leia and Ben watching them fly off.
If you have the Falcons first clip a little longer then Ret’s final clip has the sun to her left, cut to the falcon with the sun on the left and end scene should work really well.
I like the music change as well
Yes but for the audiance seeing him in the cockpit makes the scene all more intense.
There were 2 clips of Kylo in the cockpit? and a close-up of his hands as he increases the speed of the TIE to put pressure on Rey.
Totally agree with the TIEs. While the idea and continuety is there I’m just not happy how the last part of the scene plays out and becomes a little to convenient compared to TLJ.
Awesome! Would love to be part of it!
I’ve taken a bit of a step back as I’m struggling to finish the last 12 small scenes. If you think you could help the list is on my faneditors assemble video.
Always happy to help where I can too.
Nice! Looking forward to your next version.
No, I don’t think so. It’s fine.
No worries!
Was there a conclusion of TIEs having Hyperdrives? I’m constantly getting into arguments online about this as I really don’t like the lightspeed skipping scene but there is also this https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/TIE/sf_space_superiority_fighter
I’m glad you decided to remove the lightspeed skipping scene.
I think it was actually one of the first things he thought about. He decided that it couldn’t be done seamlessly though.
I did it fairly easily and it flows so much better now. I can help if it’s something he wants.
Nice work dude! There’s some really interesting choices and arrangements here. Really like what you did with TFA scenes. Actually making me think about rearranging my own edit again.
How long did this take?
I started the week after the RoS bluray dropped (I had looked at the other movies prior but didn’t dig in until I had them all). I would say 2 or 3 weeks of actual editing over the course of 3 months. I had to take breaks, both to step back and re-think certain choices but also because I was going so gung-ho early on that I started giving myself mild carpal tunnel!
So glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun and I really can’t wait to see what other people do with the trilogy. There’s definitely potential for a coherent story there, the same as the prequels. Pretty sure I’ve seen some of your videos on Reddit - love how collaborative you are. Keep up the amazing work!
Thanks, Dude, Sorry I didn’t reply before. I didn’t get a notification that you replied.
That’s pretty good going. Gung-ho is always a great buzz at the start but it’s knowing when to quit that’s the real art. Always good to come back with a fresh eye.
Yeah, I don’t think TROS and be fixed by myself alone and it’s been awesome meeting so many amazingly talented people in this forum. Makes a change for all the arrogant bitchiness on Reddit. I’ll let you know when I do my next test screening…
Hal, Have you thought about removing Finn and Jannah from pointlessly going on DSII to “Help” Rey?
It might need some added color correction/grain to fit in better, but I think I’m ready to send this clip in!
This works really Nice! Is it worth adding a few frames of the ships lights flashing on and off to indicate overall failure and to give the under belly a bit more detail animation on the docking bay?
So basically Disney fan edited their own footage.
TRoS already felt like a mediocre fan edit of a better movie. I can already see the feedback threads in my head…
“Hey, it’s a good first step u/JJAbrams, but there’s a lot of unfinished stuff here. I know you cut the scene where Finn tells Rey he’s force-sensitive, but you forgot to get rid of the subplot about him trying to tell Rey something. You should cut that before going any further.”
“Getting rid of the first 20 minutes just doesn’t work either. The new opening with Kylo immediately on Mustafar is super jarring. Especially since you cut the stuff with Hux and Pryde on the surface, and Palpatine’s message to the galaxy.”
“That crawl is really clunky. In the main saga, an opening crawl really only has one word that’s capitalized, which is meant to be the most important part of the movie (like DEATH STAR) in ANH. But here you’ve capitalized like five different things, and some of them aren’t even proper nouns. Why is “REVENGE” capitalized? I know you wanted to get right to the action, but revealing Palpatine’s return in the opening crawl? I’m afraid that doesn’t work. Especially since you cut out the part where we see how he survived in the first place, and just used his line from RotS instead. I’m looking forward to a V2, I think most of these problems can be ironed out.”
“Cutting the subplot about Lando’s daughter just makes him look like a creep at the end.”
Accurate!
Hey folks, not sure if someone brought this up.
https://youtu.be/ECnectUdeOo?t=122Here, the narrator brings up a very interesting point:
When Rey fights those Red Guards/Sith Troopers after giving her saber to Kylo, they show the same action TWICE.Like, she kills 6 guards, then we cut to Ben killing some more Knights of Ren, and then she kills those same 6 guards again, simply shot from various different angles, as if they were complete different set of guards.
Which, once you see it, holy shit, you can’t UNsee it.
Was this already talked about/did someone already fix this?
As if I couldn’t facepalm this movie anymore. Haha! Great video. Robothead brought up the guards in another video but it wasn’t as well constructed as this. I’ve now gotta re-edit that scene AGAIN!!! Thanks. 😉
Ah, thanks MR!! It was a stray mask, staring me in the face the whole time! It’s fixed now.
You’re welcome mate. Thought it was something simple. 😎
For a minute I thought you noticed a hair continuety problem and was giving Jonh a run for his money. 🤣
Nice work dude! There’s some really interesting choices and arrangements here. Really like what you did with TFA scenes. Actually making me think about rearranging my own edit again.
How long did this take?
Are you talking about the round lighting panel in the room behind the falcon cockpit? In any case, I took another look and made a small adjustment anyway, because anytime I look at a shot I want to make a change!
No, it’s actually on Poes hair. It’s a large brush clone just above Poes right eye. Could be on a separate layer? I’ll send you a screenshot if it helps?
Removed Klaud from that 3rd shot, Chase, and sent Hal an updated clip!
https://vimeo.com/431939234
pw: fanedit
Great job Dude, Not sure if you noticed but there is a large clone dot on Poes fringe in the 1st and second frame.
Is there anyone with tracking and rotoscoping skills that could help me with a few small scenes?