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#1552217
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Sorry for the double post, but I did find a minor error at 1:20:20. As Rey reaches out to heal Ben, you can also hear her pick up her lightsaber and start walking away. This is likely because of the switcheroo that you did to this scene.

On a further note, if you do feel like fixing that, there was the Leia line of her saying “Come home” to Ben when she’s holding Han’s medal. I don’t remember if you ever shot down that idea, tbh.

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#1552215
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Planning on watching TLJ Rekindled and v3 back to back this weekend. Excited for this since I haven’t seen this movie in its entirety since v1 of this project. I went ahead and skimmed through some of the audio changes, and you did a fantastic job integrating them! I’m confident if I were a first time viewer (who I’ll be watching it with this weekend) I wouldn’t be able to tell the changes.

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#1551808
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Here is another thing I noticed which ChatGPT has happily explained the distinction between:

“…which has arisen from a dark Imperial fortress…”
“Arisen” is the past participle form of “arise.” The verb “arise” generally means to begin, originate, or to come up. Using “arisen” emphasizes the emergence or origination of something new or something that wasn’t there before.

“…which has risen from a dark Imperial fortress…”
“Risen” is the past participle form of “rise.” The verb “rise” typically means to move from a lower position to a higher one. Using “risen” emphasizes the act of elevation or increasing in power or status.

Both can technically work in the context you provided, but they give slightly different shades of meaning:

If you use “arisen,” it emphasizes the FIRST ORDER originating or emerging as a new force from the fortress.
If you use “risen,” it emphasizes the FIRST ORDER ascending or increasing in power from the fortress.
Given the narrative nature of the passage and the notion of the FIRST ORDER’s growing power, “risen” might be slightly more fitting. However, “arisen” could also work if you want to emphasize the emergence of the FIRST ORDER as a new or distinct force. Choose based on the nuance you want to convey.

Me personally, I think “arisen” is the proper word here.

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#1548147
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Hal’s Rogue One edit (a half-assed version of DigMod’s) (Released)
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Fullmetaled said:

honestabe said:

Waiting for Andor’s next season is a good call. Unless I am grossly mistaken, the final season has a timeline of a few years to lead into Rogue One. I just hope it is not significantly delayed by Disney’s current issues and the Hollywood strike drama.

It only had a week of filming left and then the actors strike happened.

Woah, that’s unlucky.

They don’t shoot things chronologically so it’s probably some scenes with a similar location in the middle of the season that need to be done. But since they’re so close, it makes me wonder if they might just work around that for now in post-production (depending on how long the strikes go for).

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#1548139
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"What If Star Wars: The Force Awakens Was Awesome" (Script Conversion Project)
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I mostly just describe what needs to happen on a scene-by-scene basis. ChatGPT recently introduced a new feature where you can have it remember how to respond to you for every conversation and response. I gave it a portion of TFA script so it’s responses are always in the form of a script.

For dialog, I’m usually a little more direct. You can tell it what needs to be said by a character and it will fill in the blanks on that, or you can tell it exactly what they should say in quotes.

It’s the most helpful for action scenes. Most of the time I just say something stupid like: “They fight on the wreckage, Ben aggressively and Rey defensively” and it fills in all the detail.

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#1548064
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"What If Star Wars: The Force Awakens Was Awesome" (Script Conversion Project)
Time

Hello everybody!

Recently, a small YouTube channel by the name of “PRISM” released a couple of YouTube videos detailing a potential Star Wars sequel trilogy which incorporates more prequel elements, plenty of scenes/action between the OT trio, as well as fascinating alternative takes of the characters that already exist in the sequel trilogy. What I liked most about the video was its use of AI imagery and narration.

Here is a description from the second video in the series: “Our goal with this series is to build a fan continuity that hopefully feels more authentic to the Star Wars experience fans have come to love, building off of 1-6, while still incorporating the new characters and over arching plot established by Disney. We are NOT reviving legends or George Lucas’ treatment in this cannon but instead reorganizing the Disney canon.”

Inspired by this novel use of technology, I decided to run a lot of these ideas through GPT-4 to create a functional script in my freetime. So far, I’ve made it about a quarter of the way through episode seven. I have modified a few of the ideas in the video slightly in order to be better for a movie / more believable story-wise. For example, I’m not pitting Jedi Master Luke Skywalker up against Captain Phasma or evil apprentice Rey. Those two would be defeated almost immediately. Yet, I also expanded on plenty of the ideas in there. For example, we get to witness Captain Phasma be a Jedi-killing badass.

I’ll link to the original videos and the rough draft of the script that I have so far below:
TFA Video: https://youtu.be/CyxQyNQ00qo
TLJ Video: https://youtu.be/xWaAQVU2IwQ
Script (ROUGH DRAFT, NOT EDITED YET): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m-Fdu0N-fXfqmZBReAobplCuQXBslmqI/view?usp=sharing

I would like to hear from some people on the forum here: What would you like to title the first film in this series? PRISM never actually titled the first one except referring to it as “The Force Awakens”, but I personally don’t think that title is appropriate anymore.

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#1547723
Topic
The ‘Custom Special Edition’ That Almost Wasn’t, But Then Was (Released)
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evansj1983 said:

I do find, though, that putting the lines you want in quotation marks and adding something like “I said slowly and menacingly” after that helps (if you use “he said” the AI tries makes the voice you want then narrator and they deliver the actually line in a slightly different tone so it doesn’t quite work)

Hey, this is a pretty good idea, especially seeing as how ElevenLabs probably intended for their service to be used to narrate books this way.

Would you say this works most of the time?

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#1547583
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

I’m not skilled at applying reverb but here it is with quieter volume and a very slight vocal reverb: https://youtu.be/8NFKKmt56yU

Here is the file with only pitch and eq changes so somebody else can tinker with the reverb and volume: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SA_mjRJS5yGCpETffTrWumPEf5P34MW1/view?usp=sharing

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#1547522
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

I can fix that. The original line was already a bit deep, so I didn’t apply as significant of a pitch change to it before putting it into the video. I still have the original so I’m going to experiment with EQ and a more impactful pitch change.

EDIT: Here is a -5 pitch change instead of -3 (Audacity) plus some EQ: https://youtu.be/IPEDsdQrjlc

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#1547490
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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krlozdac said:

Here are two test I had time to put together: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1skwWcHS3STJdEGOoNNSTji1qBlDo2wwW/view?usp=sharing

Whatever you did here sounds nearly perfect and I can’t seem to replicate it on my end. Your two other recent tests sound robotic so if you’re doing the same thing for everything I’m not sure what happened.

EDIT: FINALLY replicated it with the new line - https://youtu.be/4OoYAj4iFcM

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#1547399
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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That’s moreso for music covers I thought?

The truth of the matter concerning our current voice clone is that Adam Driver is reading an audio book with a higher pitched, cheerier voice. Meanwhile, Kylo speaks with a very dark authority in these scenes. Krlozdac and I tried to lower the pitch on the voice outputs but there’s only so much that can do.