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Hayden’s voice could probably be fixed - it would just take quite a bit of effort.

We’d need to rip the center channel of when he’s speaking from other parts of the film and isolate his voice with AI. Then we use that as source material for a voice clone. And then we input his lines from the Kenobi scene into the new ElevenLab’s feature. His lines would then sound like his younger self and be delivered exactly how they were originally.

But yeah that’s a lot of effort for only one piece to the puzzle. The camera work is always going to be out of place.

SpenceEdit said:

timdiggerm said:

SpenceEdit said:

I’ve decided to release two versions of AOTC, exactly the same except one will include the flashback scene from Obi-Wan Kenobi and the other will not. I’ve thought a lot about this, and I personally feel like having the scene is like slotting in a missing piece of the script, something that always should’ve been there. However, I can’t ignore that no matter how much tinkering I do, it will never feel like it’s completely a part of this film, as it was filmed 20+ years later than the rest of it. Some may be more bothered by it’s inclusion than others, and I’ve made a lot of changes beyond that that people may be interested in. So it’s going to be available with the scene (my preferred version, and the one I’ll personally watch) and without it.

Have you done much in making it look worse, so it fits the rest of the film better?

The problem is mostly that the cinematography styles don’t match and the actors are visibly two decades older.

Aren’t you using the deep fake version?

101 words is too many for a crawl. Ideally it should never reach 90 words as none have thus far.

I think what we have for the first two paragraphs has been locked in for a long time now. There’s really no sense in even touching those. As for the final paragraph, I actually appreciate how it mirrors The Phantom Menace’s crawl. Any additional links we can add to the prequel trilogy in this movie are very welcome because they clearly tried to distance themselves from those until IX.

Besides, as our good pal George would say: “It’s like poetry. They rhyme.”

I don’t want to start shouting in the house for that line and have my family think I’m crazy but my preliminary tests are pretty darn good. I just need to collect Poe lines from the required scenes and have the background noise stripped using RL’s isolation software.

Ideally, there are also other people on the forum here who might sound more like the actors. It mostly just depends on your inflections, though. But my microphone quality isn’t the most fantastic out there. I’m completely reliant on NVIDIA Broadcast AI tools to make it sound good.

Looks like you can now use your own voice in ElevenLabs on any of your previously cloned voices to guide the generation. Should make creating new lines pretty straightforward. I’ve done a fair bit of stage acting before so I should be able to handle this.

If I recall correctly, we wanted to fix Poe’s line about Ilum and add something about not wanting the sacrifice of the Republic to be in vain - in order words give a reason why they go in for another attack run on Starkiller.

I have to agree. This show is titled Ahsoka for a reason. It was supposed to be about her character’s journey and overcoming her harsh past. All of which is covered by the WBW. New Republic stuff just felt like stuff obligated to be there since it’s a TV show. And the emphasis on Sabine was… well let’s just say disappointing. Not much you can do about that except hope people identify some parallels between the two of them.

I like both Nev’s and Eddie’s. No real preference.

Yup I’m fine with Nev’s. Hopefully we can lay this topic to bed now 😉

You guys should be set now. For anybody else, PM me if he isn’t responding after a reasonable amount of time.

Agreed.

Commissioned works wonderfully. They’re only giving permission and direct authorization for Resistance pilots to search their territory for clues to Luke’s location, as well as the tools to travel beyond their own territories for such clues. Anything more than that would be seen by several Senators as an act of war against the First Order, which is what they’re trying to avoid.

Basically, they’re playing the political game. The Republic can tell the First Order that they aren’t fighting against them because they gave supplies to the Resistance under the pretense that it was only to find Luke Skywalker. But Hux is wise enough to realize that the Republic is just using this as an excuse to support them.

The New Republic needs to be set up as fragile in order to justify why a militia such as the Resistance is necessary in the first place. They’ve put all their eggs in one basket basically, which is to protect the Hosnian system.

We also don’t want Senators to outright support the Resistance, as this would clash with Leia’s scene where she considers that most of them think she’s crazy and won’t listen to her. It’s better that they’ve only commissioned and helped with the mission to find Luke Skywalker, rather than supporting an all-out war with the First Order.

Yes, this is the final crawl:

NeverarGreat said:

EPISODE VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS

It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, sworn
to rebuild the legendary
Jedi Order, has vanished.

With the Jedi now facing
extinction, agents of the
evil FIRST ORDER have
risen from the shadows
of an Imperial fortress
to claim supremacy over
all star systems beyond
the fragile New Republic.

Desperate for a hero to
help resolve this crisis,
the Senate has secretly
commissioned the pilots
of a brave RESISTANCE
to find the last Jedi and
restore the light of hope
to the darkening stars….

Do you think you’ll have more or less free time during the holiday season? lol

We are of the same mind it seems, SMan. I’m a huge fan of this edit, as well as CoD, but I just can’t stop myself from a purely extended version of ROTS. Plus, I actually slid the Yoda vs. Dooku duel into the end of my personal copy of this edit.

One day I’d definitely like to see a super-duper extended version of AotC with the Kenobi flashback in it. I’d mostly want to see if that scene allows for the rest of the Anakin and Obi-Wan scenes to make sense, as well as give purpose to Anakin’s rants about him to Padme. With Padme’s family scenes, the cringe from the Anakin and Padme’s love scenes might be subdued a little, too.

But I have a feeling this will probably remain my definitive version of Episode 2. Like you said, it’s just a fun film providing a great time now without all that baggage. You don’t really have to think about or justify any of the questionable content since it’s all been smoothly cut out.

It really depends on how radically he changes the story, for me at least. If he’s changed like 25-30% of it, I’d say there’s a good chance of it being super good. But if more than half the story is completely changed he’s gonna have a seriously difficult time using the available footage to weave that new narrative in a convincing way. My suspension of disbelief might be shattered if there’s just too much trying to be reconfigured.

Hal 9000 said:

The Force Awakens: Starlight
The Last Jedi: Reforged
The Rise Of Skywalker: Ascendant

You probably meant to say “Rekindled” because that edit you mentioned is a much more radical one.

szopman said:

smudger9 said:

Here is my edited flashback sequence. Lots of trimming here meaning I’ve got it down to 13mins with Huyang being the one that rescues her.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y4YuxylIKTCKHZJPsW8_0rF1omHsw33T

I don’t wanna be a pain in the … but I think you shouldn’t have trimmed the moment when Anakin’s ghost goes back from “evil” to “good”. I saw you trimmed a bit the transition and I think it would be better if those few extra seconds stayed. it was a great little moment, the facial expressions of Hayden was perfect and in my opinion, for the millennials fans it had a huge emotional impact to see how his face changes from ROTS evil Anakin to the good Anakin Skywalker again. I know it may be silly, as we talk about 5-10 seconds, but for me it was something that I spot right away, I remember it was really a big deal for me when I watched this episode 😉

This is also the only thing that immediately stood out to me (I watched this last night and forgot to comment).

Ok, it’s perfect!

Now, nobody else criticize it or this will go on forever! Jk, lol.

I think I actually preferred “pilots”.

I’ve got no real complaints 😃

Would it be possible to nix just “Luke” from the final paragraph? It seems a little unnecessary since only one character in this film has the name Skywalker. And we gave his full name earlier.

Unable to end this crisis
without the heroic Jedi,
the Senate has secretly
authorized the pilots of
a brave RESISTANCE to
find Skywalker and kindle
the light of hope to the
darkening stars….

I agree with both of your thoughts. Since the New Republic doesn’t serve much of a purpose in this movie it’s best to leave their reference as brief as possible here.

It just looks like you messed up on your verb tenses. Here’s an example of how you can fix that:

Amidst this rising threat,
only a daring militia
stands in RESISTANCE,
its brave pilots deployed
across the galaxy to find
the last Jedi and restore
the light of hope to the
darkening stars….

NeverarGreat said:

Across this dark expanse,
only one valiant militia
stands in RESISTANCE,
its daring pilots secretly
entrusted by the Republic
to find the last Jedi and
restore the light of hope
to the darkening stars….

This is cool but I’d make the following modifications:

Across this dark expanse,
only a valiant militia
stands in RESISTANCE,
its daring pilots secretly
equipped by the Republic
to find the last Jedi and
restore the light of hope
to the darkening stars….

Well there aren’t many commas in the second paragraph and those in the first are using them in the same manner/way that the final paragraph would be. So, if nothing else, it would make the sentence structure more rhythmic and almost poetic.