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Adywan -  Your latest 9 minute preview was terrifically coloured, and your new 'Probe Droid firing' sequence is just what I'd hoped for!  I like where the generators are more centrally-placed in the background now, and note that you changed the look of the whole background itself in the screenshots put up earlier.  I was also glad that your 'Wampa' sequence wasn't finalized (or at least revealed) yet, as some surprises before the release of this thing is a good thing I reckon.  That re-positioned gun behind Chewbacca looks great now too, by the way. 

 

doubleofive -  Good call on that 'missing' turret in front of the 'Power Generators'.  I am so glad that Adywan is planning to add it in, behind the foreground Probe Droid, rather than remove the one in the display screen, as I think this will be far better to referrence the rebel's territory behind the Droid.  Can you check your PM's later.

 

Shadowman99 -  Some nice ideas recently there, especially adding panel colour to the snowspeeder full-scale 'props' to match the miniatures.  I'm a big fan of that idea.

 

Jay-  Thanks for the welcome additions to the software. :) 

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Wow! So many screenshots and comments since I last had a chance to check in. It'll be a miracle if Ady ever finds time to actually do some work on this edit, with all our musings here that he has to read through....which thankfully he seems to.

Nice debate going on over this, but annoyingly, I am called away right now until Monday at the earliest, and won't get a chance to chime in about this whole 'TIE fighters seen from balcony' thing until then, till I get a few screengrabs of my own sorted out to show certain 'lead-ups' and 'exchanges' to the balcony idea, and hopefully give an option about why this is quite a logical thing for Adywan to show....

I want to thank doubleofive and RiccondilRinon for kindly agreeing to help me out with future 'shots' by the way, and I have a few things in mind yet that may be of interest to Adywan and others. I'll be in touch when I can.



Quickly while I remember! - That scene where Han and Lando 'swap places', with Leia inbetween, that was brought up previously....

I've never worried about it myself, as I've always looked on it as being a 'slight jump forward in time' during their chat as they all make their way along the city corridors....as the scene is so different from the first part of it - Leia is no longer holding Han's arm at this point, and the people and corridor 'set' now behind them (I'm not referring to the SE addition part) are totally different, as are the floor markings now. I just assumed that somewhere between this transitioning 'time jump', something occured to explain the characters now being on the other side of Leia. If Han's voice at the start of the 'change-over' had been modulated to seem 'low' at first, then rose quickly up to it's 'normal' sound level, this brief 'jump in time' to the new corridor area would have been
emphasised better I think.

Gotta go, I'm getting earache from the family! :(





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Darth Stewie - Why wait for Jar Jar? The fun will begin with Boba in 'Jedi'.... lol. ;)

Great 'signature' by the way!


GoodMusician, can you check your PMs when you get a chance.


Adywan, glad I caught your update there, before I shoot off for today. That's great that you've amended the 'little' Chewie getting shot at....but as far as having TIEs shooting at escaping ships in the distance during the 'balcony' shot, well that's just INSPIRED!


'Difficult is worth doing' - latest Honda advert :)
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ImperialFighter said:

seven said:


When Luke does into the cave and see's Darth Vader, you hear his Lightsaber activate off screen. Next shot is Luke holding his lightsaber at the bottom of the screen, when he slowly starts to raise it, we see the blade color 'pop' on instead of already being on


seven - Never actually noticed that one in the past if it's right. That's one of the sort of subtle touches that doesn't really matter if it's done or not, but really nice if it is kind of thing that would be good to see after years of rewatches. :)


Having now had a chance to check this one out, and study it a little, the shot seems okay to me. 'Freeze-framing' both the SE and GOUT versions at this point revealed that there has been some work done to the SE release here, compared to the GOUT release. Luke's Lightsaber blade has been changed, and a subtle glowing 'aura' is now evident when we first see it now. However, rather than the Lightsaber and it's glowing 'aura' suddenly 'popping on', I think it's just how it looks as it first appears in the frame, and is correct. Just offering another point of view on that one seven.



You have some nice ideas there by the way GoodMusician, especially on the score aspect of things (and I REALLY like that 'wisp of cloud swirling around as the Millennium Falcon turns through the clouds back to get Luke', Adywan), and it's great to generally see that some folks like yourself and others here, seem to be afflicted with the same 'curse' for 'continuity details' as myself, LOL!

topdawg193 - Your idea for some subtle graphics in those shots is neat.

RoccondilRinon - Nice call on the shadows there.

GoodMusician - Agreed about the shot at top being the far better one. I never would have spotted that in a million years, lol.

Ady - The bottom screengrab shows what I meant the other day about the 'little' Chewbacca being quite high up out of his snowcrater, and with his arms very close to his sides, compared to the immediate previous 'close-up' shot of him lower down, and with his arms outstretched at the sides.
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seven said:


When Luke does into the cave and see's Darth Vader, you hear his Lightsaber activate off screen. Next shot is Luke holding his lightsaber at the bottom of the screen, when he slowly starts to raise it, we see the blade color 'pop' on instead of already being on


seven - Never actually noticed that one in the past if it's right. That's one of the sort of subtle touches that doesn't really matter if it's done or not, but really nice if it is kind of thing that would be good to see after years of rewatches. :)



When we first see the long-shot of the whole 'plectrum'-shaped structure, it's 'leading edge' is straight all the way down....but on the first 'close-up' shot of it, as Luke walks back along it's walkway towards the entrance, it has a noticeable 'bend' in it above and below where the extended 'gantry' juts out. It looks like the shape of the previous long-shot 'plectrum', where the bend is at the 'rear edge', has been put back-to-front! Can the 'angles' of the 'leading edge' in the shot with Luke be adjusted above and below where the long 'gantry' on the right is, to look like they 'line up' more? However, a following shot at the entrance of Luke and Darth duelling is not so bad-looking, as it is more 'face-on' to us.



Quick question- Does anyone happen to know it if the design of the uppermost 'tower' area (the horizontal portion at the very top, complete with the two 'ball-shaped' structures either side) on the 'Executor' superstardestroyer, is exactly the same as the one on the 'standard' stardestroyer or not? Thanks.


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doubleofive - Thanks for that Lowry Digital article link. I saw it before, but couldn't remember where, and wanted to check it out again! :)

Seems like Lowry did decent work, and that it was Lucasfilm themselves that tampered with the colour-grading so poorly then?....
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ImperialFighter said:

Darth Stewie - Nice heartfelt post there fella. I've been thinking about this whole detail-orientated thing, and the fact that not all ideas from everyone here can possibly be accommodated by poor Adywan. Along with his own particular issues for changes he'd like to do, Ady has invited folks here to come up with ideas for 'fixes' and 'suggestions' towards his edits also, and by the very fact of us doing so, anyone reading this thread will come across things that they never noticed before, or never thought about before, where these movies are concerned. Unfortunately for some, it may 'niggle' them a little if certain things mentioned here are not 'attended to', now that they have been brought to their attention on this thread, as they will now NOTICE them, lol. Even Adywan cannot 'sort' or 'add' everything that is eventually posted on here for him to do on these movies, and he will disagree with a few things suggested anyway. Personally, although I have now read things that have been pointed out, that may not be 'fixed' for some reason or other, I know that Ady will be doing more than enough to make this the best 'Special Edition' of 'Empire' out there in the future, and that personally speaking, it is worth it to me to unavoidably read some of these things that will REMAIN un-amended, and not worry in any way about them once the edit eventually comes out, so that I can put forward a few of my own, in the hope that some may be actually done. The alternative is to NOT read this thread and just wait for the finished edit, and remain blissfully unaware of what hasn't been worked on. Finally, as it is impossible to second-guess Adywan's own particular choices for the work he prefers to do or not, and the fact that he will want to keep some secret SURPRISES for us of everything he's attempting until the first release, along with the fact that he has in the past attended to things that others haven't thought of, or worried too much about, while leaving other ideas alone that may have seemed more obvious to some, then I reckon EVERY idea put forward here by anyone is fair game at this point, no matter how trivial or 'out there' it may seem, and I'm sure Ady welcomes them all. So hang on to your hats, there's a few more surprises left in this baby to flag up!....


Ziz - I had hoped that wording as a whole would come across about how I personally realise myself, that most suggestions I put forward are unlikely to be accomodated, as at this point it's noticable about how 'detail-focused' I can't help being sometimes. It was just my way of saying that I hope that even the littlest of points I am sometimes bringing up, along with others, will be considered, as it's some of Adywan's more trivial, 'subtler' touches on his first edit that made it so good to me. I'm just enthusiastic about this project, as you and everyone else are, and hope that Ady will consider as many things as possible, no matter how trivial, in the course of his efforts.

doubleofive - Please check your PM's later
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GoodMusician said:

Adyan, I think that the Lightsaber activation sound he's speaking of is when Luke exits the Wampa cave.

If you listen carefully, the sound effects there are not quite right.


Absolutely. I can't remember who here, or where else this has been flagged up previously, but if you haven't already decided on this Ady, I hope you can give us a 'deactivation' to tie-in with the sound effect at this point at the end of the 'Wampa cave' scene, just before we then cut to the shot of Luke scrambling out in the snow with his Lightsaber attached to his waist....

Which reminds me - I've just realised that the 'Lightsaber in mid-deactivation' that I hope you choose to ADD to the shot of Luke going backwards through the 'window'....could be somewhat very similar to the speed and effect of Luke's Lightsaber as it tumbles and 'de-activates' during the shot where Vader cuts Luke's hand off. Only without the hand of course!

And during the 'birds-eye' shot of Luke hanging on the gantry (which you recently put a shot of on here)....along with a couple of overhead shots where Luke backs away from Vader after his hand is cut off....the yellow 'flashing' gantry lights seen in them are now 'reddish' compared to the 'yellow' of the other shots featuring them. Could you 'yellow' these particular shots up a bit to match?



*** Darth Stewie - Nice heartfelt post there fella. I've been thinking about this whole detail-orientated thing, and the fact that not all ideas from everyone here can possibly be accommodated by poor Adywan. Along with his own particular issues for changes he'd like to do, Ady has invited folks here to come up with ideas for 'fixes' and 'suggestions' towards his edits also, and by the very fact of us doing so, anyone reading this thread will come across things that they never noticed before, or never thought about before, where these movies are concerned. Unfortunately for some, it may 'niggle' them a little if certain things mentioned here are not 'attended to', now that they have been brought to their attention on this thread, as they will now NOTICE them, lol. Even Adywan cannot 'sort' or 'add' everything that is eventually posted on here for him to do on these movies, and he will disagree with a few things suggested anyway. Personally, although I have now read things that have been pointed out, that may not be 'fixed' for some reason or other, I know that Ady will be doing more than enough to make this the best 'Special Edition' of 'Empire' out there in the future, and that personally speaking, it is worth it to me to unavoidably read some of these things that will REMAIN un-amended, and not worry in any way about them once the edit eventually comes out, so that I can put forward a few of my own, in the hope that some may be actually done. The alternative is to NOT read this thread and just wait for the finished edit, and remain blissfully unaware of what hasn't been worked on. Finally, as it is impossible to second-guess Adywan's own particular choices for the work he prefers to do or not, and the fact that he will want to keep some secret SURPRISES for us of everything he's attempting until the first release, along with the fact that he has in the past attended to things that others haven't thought of, or worried too much about, while leaving other ideas alone that may have seemed more obvious to some, then I reckon EVERY idea put forward here by anyone is fair game at this point, no matter how trivial or 'out there' it may seem, and I'm sure Ady welcomes them all. So hang on to your hats, there's a few more surprises left in this baby to flag up!.... ***



More to contemplate then - The whole SE DVD release colouration changes from the 'rich-looking' (albiet shoddily presented so far) colours of the GOUT release are generally poorer, but the 'Asteroid' sequence is particularly so.

During the 'close-up' of the Millennium Falcon's 'swerve' manouvers amongst the asteroids (always one of my favourites), the rocks are ALL especially 'greyed-out' compared to the light brown tones of the ones seen in the shots before and after this one. Is it possible to add some light brown to SOME of these during the 'swerve' shot, to add a little colour to the shot overall, to tie-in better with the others?

I really like the idea that someone here suggested, for one of your 'judders' (as seen during your Falcon 'cockpit' interior heading towards the Death Star in SW Revisited) during the shot of the crew falling near the windows in the 'Stardestroyers taking evasive action' shot. That could be neat. Would one on the shot from inside the 'cockpit' of the Millennium Falcon 'taking off, and turning around slightly' as it starts to blast out of the belly of the asteroid slug, also be possible? I never really liked the 'outside movement' that is shown presently, and this would tie-in quite well with the previous shots of the crew 'falling about' due to the asteroid slug's activity due to Han's laserblasts.


Still hoping that some kind soul out there is able to PM me about posting certain SE DVD screenshots on my behalf, to better describe certain things I'd still like to suggest in detail here. I need to be able to give PAL 'timings' for these though.
One major sequence is the whole 'Hoth surrounded by stardestroyers' thing....

Fingers crossed. :)





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doubleofive said:

Don't point them out, or they'll be all I can see!


No worries there, and the great thing is that Ady's 'Star Wars Revisited' edit gave me more than I could have ever wished for when I finally saw it.


Nice to get an idea of some more of your plans for some 'do's and don'ts' that you have in mind in that last post of yours Adywan.

I've just a little time for more pedantry today. ;) -

As far as that 'fixing of the Probe firing closer to his location' thing, I don't know if you plan to move the explosion nearer to Chewbacca, or the other way round, but...when the actual 'little' Chewbacca himself is seen popping up, he seems to be standing too high up, and with his arms by his sides, compared to the immediate previous 'close-up' of him where he is not so exposed out of his snowbunker, and has his arms well out at his sides. Could you amend the 'little' figure to match a little? I do like how his head 'bows' a little as he ducks back down though.

As far as the Falcon exiting the ice cavern entrance/exit, can you add a subtle 'shadow' to the proceedings as it goes over the ice block 'debris' on the ground underneath it at that point? It's sure going to be nice to see all the reverse views of the engine 'glows' given a 'blue' hue by the way!

Not sure if you were referring to the 'orange glow' that occurs on the large asteroid (which I previously brought up too) near the start of the sequence or not Ady, but if you were, then c'est la vie. Ditto to the lack of a lasershot on the Mynock, although I do think it could stand even the 'end' of one having been shot at it, to tie in with the sound effect. As far as not adding some red to certain Falcon shots, nor redoing the AT-AT's leg 'pieces'....I respect your decision, as there is indeed a bit of work to achieve both of these things, and you are doing wonders as it is.
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doubleofive said:

No, nitpicky is pointing out lights in matte paintings that aren't consistant, and panel colors on the Falcon. Just teasing, ImperialFighter! :-P


LOL, yeah, I put my hands up!

What can I say?, as someone who has always worked in a 'creative design' environment, I am cursed with an eye for detail....and as a complete fan of the original Star Wars trilogy, I'm just glad to be getting the chance to point out the little things that I've noticed over years, along with some additional speculative ideas....to someone who may actually incorporate them. I actually missed out on hearing about Adywan and his FIRST Star Wars edit till it was finalised, which is pretty annoying for me, as there was a 'couple of little things' (It's a curse I tell you!) that I would have liked to have mentioned on THAT particular thread too.... ;)

Nice to know that someone like Ady is actually doing some of everyone's wishes along the way, on something we so obviously care so much about!


mumbles_ - That was a very nice link to some 'mistakes' on 'Empire' that you put up in your second last post there, which had some that I hadn't heard of before.
I hope Adywan had a look!
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ImperialFighter said:

Do you think you are able to add a touch of 'brick red' colour to some of the Millennium Falcon's relevant 'individual' panels? I mean on certain 'close-up' miniature shots where these panels are too darkened to 'black or dark grey' sometimes.

Shots such as the top and underneath of the Falcon, as it 'swerves' in 'close-up' during the asteroids from right of the frame to the left (A similar move by the Falcon is seen when it is shown going in the other direction, as Lando flies it for the first time alongside other rebel fleet spaceships, where it's 'rusty' red panel colouration is nicely obvious and far better-looking, although I realise the 'Empire' SE's overall colour is dark during the asteroids now)....and shots like when it turns to attack' the stardestroyer in 'close-up' to us....and during the miniature 'close-ups' where it travels with the rebel fleet at the end.


Just realised that I missed out the words '....as seen in 'Jedi' when I referred to the similar move as Lando flies it for the first time....because I didn't mean it to sound as seen in 'Empire'.

Hope that didn't confuse too many folks, and is the reason I sure hope someone can help me with screenshots, which will paint a thousand words....
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Octorox said:

On the issue of Boba's voice, I prefer Boba's new voice only because the old voice makes him sound like a scowling old man. It's only been 20-30 years or so since he was a young kid in Episode II. Just thought I'd throw in my two cents.



"It's not the years....it's the mileage!"

Oh wait, wasn't that....
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DMaarten - I agree with you, as I'm certain others do, and that is certainly a thing that could have been done with greater impact. Whether Ady is able to improve on it any is another thing. Although some folks suggestions on this 'Empire Revisited' thread have already given him some nice ideas to think about, whether he chooses to do them or not is another matter, as there seems to be so much for the poor bloke to do already to improve this thing....

I just know already that whatever Adywan decides to leave out, this edit is potentially going to surpass even his first 'Star Wars Revisited' one....and that is something we can all look forward to at this early stage.

Isn't it great though to have our own equivilent of an 'Industrial Light & Magic' effects facility, that we can directly put our own individual suggestions to, for this particular 'Special Edition'? :)

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Those new rebel troopers in front of the entrance are a great addition. They really add to the activity of the base in that shot.


ImperialFighter said:

Being one of the more poorly-realised 'design continuity' errors, this is one I'd REALLY like to see improved on, if possible - The moving 'practical effect' showing the top of the AT-AT's leg, is totally the wrong shape....

In the 'close-up' shot of the AT-AT's underneath, as Luke's cable 'rappel-attachment' sticks on after he shoots it upwards....and the 'close-up' shot where he is dangling from it using his Lightsaber....the 'rounded' end of the moving 'leg joint' is a far different shape to the better actual miniature design of that part. The 'rounded' bit of this prop, nearest to Luke as he kicks off it, should really have been more of a raised, 'hollowed-out' circular shape with the raised protuberance in the centre of it, with what looks like some holes (?) around that, inside the 'hollow' too. Can this in any way be improved to match the pieces seen in the colourful explosion that follows underneath the model?


I didn't get to finish off about this the other day, but here's the rest of my thoughts on this one -

I've no doubt that this sequence would be tricky for Adywan to fix, but I can but hope.... Here goes: Looking at this again, it seems that the whole moving 'prop' piece (that Luke 'kicks off' on during his Lightsaber swipe) should really have been a good bit BIGGER overall, as well as not matching the shape of the corresponding miniature piece. If that whole piece can be made bigger somehow, then that would be great, and I also reckon that the section of it that is seen 'sliding up and down' on the far right, is not exactly the correct shape either....and that with any hoped-for 'bigger'-replacement proportions of a new, main 'rounded' piece that you could insert instead, that we would only see a 'sliver' of this section in the far-right of the frame now, which would 'push up' HIGHER past the bottom edge of the overhanging 'flap' in the foreground. Also, the actual overhanging 'flap' section itself (seen above Luke) should be 'angled' more on the right-hand side, and it's detailing amended too, to better match the one on the miniatures if possible.

As well as during the colourful explosions underneath the AT-AT miniature just after Luke falls back to the ground....another good place to 'freeze-frame' the area concerned is when Luke and Zack are just passing the end of the first AT-AT that they fly past in their snowspeeder, during the start of the Hoth battle. It's a bright shot of the side of the AT-AT.

Finally, if you DO attempt something like this....could we see a hint of the OTHER front-leg 'rounded' piece in the frame on the left-hand side too, just when we first cut to the shot immediately after the 'rising Luke' one?....then have this hint of 'rounded' piece move BACK OUT of the frame to tie-in with the movement of the shot that occurs just before Luke's swipe with his Lightsaber?



I mentioned the other day, that as well as the above major sequence alterations, that there was 'something else' that I'd REALLY love to see if Ady agrees....

At this point, I would like to ask if there is anyone out there with the technical capability, who would be kindly willing to put up certain screenshots (from a PAL version ideally, for which I can give you the correct timings) on here for me sometime?....to help illustrate a further opportunity for a possible enhancement by Adywan that may improve something which never satisfied me in 'Empire' as it stands. If there is, can you please PM me, and I will get back to you about it with the details. Once sombody can add them here for me, I will see them, and be able to make my suggestions then. Thanks.

Just so you know....it involves a couple of things over THREE individial shots that are currently in close proximity to each other, TWO of which have always troubled me. I'd like to suggest something that could potentially tie these shots together into a much more exciting and threatening sequence.

It involves a sequence that has been alluded to in general terms by a few on this thread if I recall, but I'd like a shot at suggesting various elements, and 'alternatives' in detail, for Adywan to mull over. It involves the 'Hoth approach by the Imperial Fleet'....
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I'm another one who would love to see this available in it's widescreen aspect. This is a terrific movie that I loved when I was younger, and so do my brats. I picked up the PAL Region 2 version a few weeks ago when I saw it for £4 locally, but was disappointed to see it wasn't in widescreen.

I read somewhere that the Region 1 release (which does seem quite expensive to source now) doesn't seem to have the CORRECT widescreen ratio! Can somebody confirm this?

Good luck with this one.
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That 2 minute preview just got even better. Your subtle touches are some of the most enjoyable for me. The colour on the preview is a knockout!


For your consideration today -

Do you think you are able to add a touch of 'brick red' colour to some of the Millennium Falcon's relevant 'individual' panels? I mean on certain 'close-up' miniature shots where these panels are too darkened to 'black or dark grey' sometimes.

Shots such as the top and underneath of the Falcon, as it 'swerves' in 'close-up' during the asteroids from right of the frame to the left (A similar move by the Falcon is seen when it is shown going in the other direction, as Lando flies it for the first time alongside other rebel fleet spaceships, where it's 'rusty' red panel colouration is nicely obvious and far better-looking, although I realise the 'Empire' SE's overall colour is dark during the asteroids now)....and shots like when it turns to attack' the stardestroyer in 'close-up' to us....and during the miniature 'close-ups' where it travels with the rebel fleet at the end.

During the more 'blurry', faster-moving shots like the underside of it's 'attack' over the stardestroyer's windows, it would be nice to get a hint of an indistinct, brief flash of the 'brick red' panel colour if possible. For instance, if you freeze-frame the shot in 'Jedi' where we see the fast-moving underside of the Falcon, just after Lando has ordered "Pull up, all craft pull up!", that is a good example of how I mean it should look. I always liked the 'rusty bits' on the Falcon design, and too much of it is lost in inconsistantly-coloured shots now I feel.


Being one of the more poorly-realised 'design continuity' errors, this is one I'd REALLY like to see improved on, if possible - The moving 'practical effect' showing the top of the AT-AT's leg, is totally the wrong shape....

In the 'close-up' shot of the AT-AT's underneath, as Luke's cable 'rappel-attachment' sticks on after he shoots it upwards....and the 'close-up' shot where he is dangling from it using his Lightsaber....the 'rounded' end of the moving 'leg joint' is a far different shape to the better actual miniature design of that part. The 'rounded' bit of this prop, nearest to Luke as he kicks off it, should really have been more of a raised, 'hollowed-out' circular shape with the raised protuberance in the centre of it, with what looks like some holes (?) around that, inside the 'hollow' too. Can this in any way be improved to match the pieces seen in the colourful explosion that follows underneath the model?




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I've just gone back and added some more detail in my last post for you doubleofive. I hope you and Ady can follow the shots I mean now.

Ady, I thought you'd done a little work there on the 'blinks'! Good, then there's still the chance you might consider some?

Till tomorrow then.... ;)
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Right, I'm sqeezing in ONE more little thing that just came to mind, having been reminded of it by mentioning that 'knocked off' red ramp light....

ImperialFighter said:

Today's thoughts....

ImperialFighter said:

Going back to perhaps adding a red 'light' dot to the end 'close-ups' of the Millennium Falcon model at the end- It might look really good to also add the two red 'lights' to the front ends to, to also match the look of the Falcon as seen on the platform of the 'floating city', and when it blasts off from there. I think these would really help to make these shots look even better, and add to a sense of realism if they tie together more with the earlier platform shots.


I forgot that there is also an earlier model shot of the Falcon inside the asteroid slug, just after Vader says "I want that ship, not excuses" and his chamber closes.... This is a shot showing it's lit-up underside from a low angle. This time the two lights at the front of it are actually white light (like when it first flies down through asteroid cave) rather than red light.

There are inconsistencies throughout the original trilogy concerning these, but I wonder if it is possible to either have these red too, or perhaps CHANGING from white to red (or vice versa) during this brief shot, which would explain it a bit, and ties in with the next interior shot where Han is doing something and 'shutting things down'?


I would really like this red 'lights' issue looking a bit more uniform across the board during 'Empire' if possible. I think Han must have decided to upgrade his beloved Falcon a little, during his time with the rebels since 'A New Hope'! ;)

As far as what I said above about perhaps having the two 'front prongs' red 'lights' CHANGING....I've realised that the 'white' ones come on as the Falcon first enters the asteroid 'cave', so if you do have them 'changing' while it's 'parked' in the slug's belly....it will of course be from WHITE into RED!

Also, can we just have the ONE red light at the side of the cockpit 'arm', as is shown in certain 'close-ups' of the full-size prop at times, such as when C3PO scrambles aboard so not to get left behind in the ice cave? And could you remove the WHITE 'lower' one that is seen in the background during Leia talking to the crowd of orange-clad rebels....along with removing the RED 'lower' one that is now there when snowtroopers set up their gun emplacement in front of it, during the scene in the ice cave? If you DO decide to add the single red 'light' dot to the side of the Falcon (and red ones at the front too?), during the 'fleet' shots at the end, then the whole thing should be a bit more uniform over the whole movie now.

And my absolutely final :) thoughts on red 'lights' anywhere is this - I reckon on the shot of the Falcon actually 'landing' on the 'floating city' platform....that the red ones should come on at that point to match the shot of it soon after, where Han is walking towards Lando....and because it would 'add a little something to the shot' too. The red 'lights' would come on just off-centre of the two prongs, and either come on just at the point where it fires it's short 'jets' briefly....or just come on immediately a the point where the 'jets' have gone off again, and it has subtly jerked to FULLY being on the platform, where they would only be seen for a brief moment before the shot cuts to the next.
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Couple more quick ones for today, then I'm off to actually do some work!

That second (better detailed, less blurry) 'close-up' of the viewscreen 'surround' is a bit transparent at the bottom, and we can see Admiral Piet through it. Could you 'solidify' it for us Ady?

Need to look carefully for this one - On the initial long shot reveal of the 'plectrum'-shaped structure, on the side facing us near the position where the entrance into it is....there seems to be a couple of flashing 'lights' above and below the 'walkway' that Luke was hanging onto, that are NOT there in the next shot of Luke heading towards the entrance. Could you remove them for us?

I'll be back tomorrow with a couple of issues I'd REALLY like to see sorted that I think are relevant and could be neat!

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Well Adywan....the determinedly Star Wars-lovin' side of me that still survives and hasn't been totally disenfranchised yet despite certain 'creative choices' over the years by Lucasfilm....just fell over at the thought of how potentially wonderful this whole 'Empire Revisited' project may eventually turn out, judging by that initial 2 minute preview! Terrific stuff, and your new Probe entry/crash rocks! No more 'pink blob'! And no 'flames' now as the Probe Droid moves off from the crater.... And the now uniform Hoth Planet blue 'atmosphere'.... And the 'human-less' Wampa arm.... And a more-blinking Tauntaun now.... And the more natural colour throughout.... And the wonderful new starfields.... And that's just the first couple of minutes! We are so lucky to have you doing this amazing work for us to eventually enjoy, and many thanks for the ongoing updates. I wish I had half your technical prowness Ady. Where the hell did you learn to do all this?

One tiny point that was flagged up that I'd probably agree with, is the fact that perhaps your Tauntaun 'eye-blinks' could be a little more rapid, as the slower 'blinks' tend to still be a bit too 'animatronic'-looking, if you know what I mean. But hey, I'll take 'em over the existing footage any day!

Liked that '2010:The year we make contact' quote by the way vbangle. ;)


Onto business, here's a little something I've only just noticed recently -

As C3PO complains to Chewbacca carrying him "....Ow!....That hurt....bend down you thoughtless....", as he bends down to get in the Falcon....C3PO's head slightly hits the red 'light' fixture beside the ramp....and knocks it off! Maybe the 'Props' guys used double-sided tape for it! :) Anyway, can we get that sorted so it stays in place?



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Happy to oblige. Better keep that notebook ready Ady, as I have a few more over the next few days....

I don't expect you to like them all obviously, as every more critical fan has their own particular ideal ideas. But there may be the odd little thing or two that you like, and may not have thought of yourself already, and it's great to know that you are at least listening. I guess I'm making up for the fact that I came to the party TOO LATE to offer various proposals for your Star Wars Revisited'....only my favourite all-time movie!.... Curses! Anyway, you were kind enough to comment on the few of them that I PM'd you about, but I assure you I had plenty more, LOL!
Thankfully, your edit was fantastic anyway! :)

adywan said:

Anyway, does anyone fancy seeing the first 2 "finished" minutes (minus the crawl) of ESB:R, complete with new FX?


Are you kidding?, BRING IT ON!!!
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Today's thoughts....

ImperialFighter said:

Going back to perhaps adding a red 'light' dot to the end 'close-ups' of the Millennium Falcon model at the end- It might look really good to also add the two red 'lights' to the front ends to, to also match the look of the Falcon as seen on the platform of the 'floating city', and when it blasts off from there. I think these would really help to make these shots look even better, and add to a sense of realism if they tie together more with the earlier platform shots.


I forgot that there is also an earlier model shot of the Falcon inside the asteroid slug, just after Vader says "I want that ship, not excuses" and his chamber closes.... This is a shot showing it's lit-up underside from a low angle. This time the two lights at the front of it are actually white light (like when it first flies down through asteroid cave) rather than red light.

There are inconsistencies throughout the original trilogy concerning these, but I wonder if it is possible to either have these red too, or perhaps CHANGING from white to red (or vice versa) during this brief shot, which would explain it a bit, and ties in with the next interior shot where Han is doing something and 'shutting things down'?

When we first see the 'plectrum'-shaped construct that Luke and Darth duel on, it has two sets of double red lights on it's base....but when we see the underneath of the structure during the first half of Luke's fall from it (where his right arm seems to be the one that's okay now!), there are now THREE sets of red lights. Can you remove the middle set?

And I'm just 'throwing this one out there' for you to consider too at this stage for the future Adywan - If, as you indicated previously that you might, that you do indeed alter the start of your 'Jedi Revisited' to a more 'Executor' stardestroyer-focused beginning (which sounds great, and logical from Darth's standpoint too), as opposed to the 'too samey' standard stardestroyer passing overhead intro. of 'A New Hope's' perfect one....will you consider using that particular stardestroyer 'passing overhead' visual element SOMEWHERE. I don't know if you have thought yet about still using it in 'Jedi' (with shuttle removed, or shuttle and Ties removed?) somewhere in your future edit mix or not, and if you are, then great....but if not, perhaps you could have a think about this -

It currently runs at about 17/18 seconds (PAL version) from when the front tip appears, until the 'belly dome' detailing passes overhead, and because it's still such a fantastically majestic and powerful visual effect, it would be a shame not to utilise it somewhere. If you decide there is no room for it in your 'Jedi' intro. or anywhere else in your 'Jedi' edit, then what about re-using it in 'Empire'? - It would still be a good element EVEN if it has to be 'cut short' a little or 'speeded up' at your discretion. I'd far rather see a part of this used to say, replace the brief shot of the strangely fake-looking 'dark grey' stardestroyer that is seen approaching Hoth to the 'fast' strains of the 'Imperial March', which is an effect I never thought looked good. Althought the planet itself is nice. OR....perhaps you could use it as the basis for your 'Captain Needa shuttle going to meet the 'Executor' superstardestroyer' shot? The shuttle you want is already in place, and just the Ties would need to be erased. It might mean a little rejigging of whatever 'Executor' element below it, or ahead of it, that you would choose to use would be required, but it would still tie in with events after the next short scenes of Darth 'accepting the Captain's apologies', where the fleet is in the middle of breaking up in ALL directions anyway. If you DO use it somewhere, I hope you will choose to linger on the bottom of it long enough to keep the 'belly dome' detail in! Even if that means chopping of the first half or so of it's entrance.