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#320984
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STAR WARS: EP V &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - <strong>12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW</strong>
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doubleofive said:

No, nitpicky is pointing out lights in matte paintings that aren't consistant, and panel colors on the Falcon. Just teasing, ImperialFighter! :-P


LOL, yeah, I put my hands up!

What can I say?, as someone who has always worked in a 'creative design' environment, I am cursed with an eye for detail....and as a complete fan of the original Star Wars trilogy, I'm just glad to be getting the chance to point out the little things that I've noticed over years, along with some additional speculative ideas....to someone who may actually incorporate them. I actually missed out on hearing about Adywan and his FIRST Star Wars edit till it was finalised, which is pretty annoying for me, as there was a 'couple of little things' (It's a curse I tell you!) that I would have liked to have mentioned on THAT particular thread too.... ;)

Nice to know that someone like Ady is actually doing some of everyone's wishes along the way, on something we so obviously care so much about!


mumbles_ - That was a very nice link to some 'mistakes' on 'Empire' that you put up in your second last post there, which had some that I hadn't heard of before.
I hope Adywan had a look!
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#320870
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ImperialFighter said:

Do you think you are able to add a touch of 'brick red' colour to some of the Millennium Falcon's relevant 'individual' panels? I mean on certain 'close-up' miniature shots where these panels are too darkened to 'black or dark grey' sometimes.

Shots such as the top and underneath of the Falcon, as it 'swerves' in 'close-up' during the asteroids from right of the frame to the left (A similar move by the Falcon is seen when it is shown going in the other direction, as Lando flies it for the first time alongside other rebel fleet spaceships, where it's 'rusty' red panel colouration is nicely obvious and far better-looking, although I realise the 'Empire' SE's overall colour is dark during the asteroids now)....and shots like when it turns to attack' the stardestroyer in 'close-up' to us....and during the miniature 'close-ups' where it travels with the rebel fleet at the end.


Just realised that I missed out the words '....as seen in 'Jedi' when I referred to the similar move as Lando flies it for the first time....because I didn't mean it to sound as seen in 'Empire'.

Hope that didn't confuse too many folks, and is the reason I sure hope someone can help me with screenshots, which will paint a thousand words....
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#320865
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Octorox said:

On the issue of Boba's voice, I prefer Boba's new voice only because the old voice makes him sound like a scowling old man. It's only been 20-30 years or so since he was a young kid in Episode II. Just thought I'd throw in my two cents.



"It's not the years....it's the mileage!"

Oh wait, wasn't that....
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#320846
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DMaarten - I agree with you, as I'm certain others do, and that is certainly a thing that could have been done with greater impact. Whether Ady is able to improve on it any is another thing. Although some folks suggestions on this 'Empire Revisited' thread have already given him some nice ideas to think about, whether he chooses to do them or not is another matter, as there seems to be so much for the poor bloke to do already to improve this thing....

I just know already that whatever Adywan decides to leave out, this edit is potentially going to surpass even his first 'Star Wars Revisited' one....and that is something we can all look forward to at this early stage.

Isn't it great though to have our own equivilent of an 'Industrial Light & Magic' effects facility, that we can directly put our own individual suggestions to, for this particular 'Special Edition'? :)

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#320841
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Those new rebel troopers in front of the entrance are a great addition. They really add to the activity of the base in that shot.


ImperialFighter said:

Being one of the more poorly-realised 'design continuity' errors, this is one I'd REALLY like to see improved on, if possible - The moving 'practical effect' showing the top of the AT-AT's leg, is totally the wrong shape....

In the 'close-up' shot of the AT-AT's underneath, as Luke's cable 'rappel-attachment' sticks on after he shoots it upwards....and the 'close-up' shot where he is dangling from it using his Lightsaber....the 'rounded' end of the moving 'leg joint' is a far different shape to the better actual miniature design of that part. The 'rounded' bit of this prop, nearest to Luke as he kicks off it, should really have been more of a raised, 'hollowed-out' circular shape with the raised protuberance in the centre of it, with what looks like some holes (?) around that, inside the 'hollow' too. Can this in any way be improved to match the pieces seen in the colourful explosion that follows underneath the model?


I didn't get to finish off about this the other day, but here's the rest of my thoughts on this one -

I've no doubt that this sequence would be tricky for Adywan to fix, but I can but hope.... Here goes: Looking at this again, it seems that the whole moving 'prop' piece (that Luke 'kicks off' on during his Lightsaber swipe) should really have been a good bit BIGGER overall, as well as not matching the shape of the corresponding miniature piece. If that whole piece can be made bigger somehow, then that would be great, and I also reckon that the section of it that is seen 'sliding up and down' on the far right, is not exactly the correct shape either....and that with any hoped-for 'bigger'-replacement proportions of a new, main 'rounded' piece that you could insert instead, that we would only see a 'sliver' of this section in the far-right of the frame now, which would 'push up' HIGHER past the bottom edge of the overhanging 'flap' in the foreground. Also, the actual overhanging 'flap' section itself (seen above Luke) should be 'angled' more on the right-hand side, and it's detailing amended too, to better match the one on the miniatures if possible.

As well as during the colourful explosions underneath the AT-AT miniature just after Luke falls back to the ground....another good place to 'freeze-frame' the area concerned is when Luke and Zack are just passing the end of the first AT-AT that they fly past in their snowspeeder, during the start of the Hoth battle. It's a bright shot of the side of the AT-AT.

Finally, if you DO attempt something like this....could we see a hint of the OTHER front-leg 'rounded' piece in the frame on the left-hand side too, just when we first cut to the shot immediately after the 'rising Luke' one?....then have this hint of 'rounded' piece move BACK OUT of the frame to tie-in with the movement of the shot that occurs just before Luke's swipe with his Lightsaber?



I mentioned the other day, that as well as the above major sequence alterations, that there was 'something else' that I'd REALLY love to see if Ady agrees....

At this point, I would like to ask if there is anyone out there with the technical capability, who would be kindly willing to put up certain screenshots (from a PAL version ideally, for which I can give you the correct timings) on here for me sometime?....to help illustrate a further opportunity for a possible enhancement by Adywan that may improve something which never satisfied me in 'Empire' as it stands. If there is, can you please PM me, and I will get back to you about it with the details. Once sombody can add them here for me, I will see them, and be able to make my suggestions then. Thanks.

Just so you know....it involves a couple of things over THREE individial shots that are currently in close proximity to each other, TWO of which have always troubled me. I'd like to suggest something that could potentially tie these shots together into a much more exciting and threatening sequence.

It involves a sequence that has been alluded to in general terms by a few on this thread if I recall, but I'd like a shot at suggesting various elements, and 'alternatives' in detail, for Adywan to mull over. It involves the 'Hoth approach by the Imperial Fleet'....
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#320837
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Matinee (HDTV2DVD) (Released)
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I'm another one who would love to see this available in it's widescreen aspect. This is a terrific movie that I loved when I was younger, and so do my brats. I picked up the PAL Region 2 version a few weeks ago when I saw it for £4 locally, but was disappointed to see it wasn't in widescreen.

I read somewhere that the Region 1 release (which does seem quite expensive to source now) doesn't seem to have the CORRECT widescreen ratio! Can somebody confirm this?

Good luck with this one.
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#320704
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STAR WARS: EP V &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - <strong>12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW</strong>
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That 2 minute preview just got even better. Your subtle touches are some of the most enjoyable for me. The colour on the preview is a knockout!


For your consideration today -

Do you think you are able to add a touch of 'brick red' colour to some of the Millennium Falcon's relevant 'individual' panels? I mean on certain 'close-up' miniature shots where these panels are too darkened to 'black or dark grey' sometimes.

Shots such as the top and underneath of the Falcon, as it 'swerves' in 'close-up' during the asteroids from right of the frame to the left (A similar move by the Falcon is seen when it is shown going in the other direction, as Lando flies it for the first time alongside other rebel fleet spaceships, where it's 'rusty' red panel colouration is nicely obvious and far better-looking, although I realise the 'Empire' SE's overall colour is dark during the asteroids now)....and shots like when it turns to attack' the stardestroyer in 'close-up' to us....and during the miniature 'close-ups' where it travels with the rebel fleet at the end.

During the more 'blurry', faster-moving shots like the underside of it's 'attack' over the stardestroyer's windows, it would be nice to get a hint of an indistinct, brief flash of the 'brick red' panel colour if possible. For instance, if you freeze-frame the shot in 'Jedi' where we see the fast-moving underside of the Falcon, just after Lando has ordered "Pull up, all craft pull up!", that is a good example of how I mean it should look. I always liked the 'rusty bits' on the Falcon design, and too much of it is lost in inconsistantly-coloured shots now I feel.


Being one of the more poorly-realised 'design continuity' errors, this is one I'd REALLY like to see improved on, if possible - The moving 'practical effect' showing the top of the AT-AT's leg, is totally the wrong shape....

In the 'close-up' shot of the AT-AT's underneath, as Luke's cable 'rappel-attachment' sticks on after he shoots it upwards....and the 'close-up' shot where he is dangling from it using his Lightsaber....the 'rounded' end of the moving 'leg joint' is a far different shape to the better actual miniature design of that part. The 'rounded' bit of this prop, nearest to Luke as he kicks off it, should really have been more of a raised, 'hollowed-out' circular shape with the raised protuberance in the centre of it, with what looks like some holes (?) around that, inside the 'hollow' too. Can this in any way be improved to match the pieces seen in the colourful explosion that follows underneath the model?




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#320623
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I've just gone back and added some more detail in my last post for you doubleofive. I hope you and Ady can follow the shots I mean now.

Ady, I thought you'd done a little work there on the 'blinks'! Good, then there's still the chance you might consider some?

Till tomorrow then.... ;)
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#320620
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Right, I'm sqeezing in ONE more little thing that just came to mind, having been reminded of it by mentioning that 'knocked off' red ramp light....

ImperialFighter said:

Today's thoughts....

ImperialFighter said:

Going back to perhaps adding a red 'light' dot to the end 'close-ups' of the Millennium Falcon model at the end- It might look really good to also add the two red 'lights' to the front ends to, to also match the look of the Falcon as seen on the platform of the 'floating city', and when it blasts off from there. I think these would really help to make these shots look even better, and add to a sense of realism if they tie together more with the earlier platform shots.


I forgot that there is also an earlier model shot of the Falcon inside the asteroid slug, just after Vader says "I want that ship, not excuses" and his chamber closes.... This is a shot showing it's lit-up underside from a low angle. This time the two lights at the front of it are actually white light (like when it first flies down through asteroid cave) rather than red light.

There are inconsistencies throughout the original trilogy concerning these, but I wonder if it is possible to either have these red too, or perhaps CHANGING from white to red (or vice versa) during this brief shot, which would explain it a bit, and ties in with the next interior shot where Han is doing something and 'shutting things down'?


I would really like this red 'lights' issue looking a bit more uniform across the board during 'Empire' if possible. I think Han must have decided to upgrade his beloved Falcon a little, during his time with the rebels since 'A New Hope'! ;)

As far as what I said above about perhaps having the two 'front prongs' red 'lights' CHANGING....I've realised that the 'white' ones come on as the Falcon first enters the asteroid 'cave', so if you do have them 'changing' while it's 'parked' in the slug's belly....it will of course be from WHITE into RED!

Also, can we just have the ONE red light at the side of the cockpit 'arm', as is shown in certain 'close-ups' of the full-size prop at times, such as when C3PO scrambles aboard so not to get left behind in the ice cave? And could you remove the WHITE 'lower' one that is seen in the background during Leia talking to the crowd of orange-clad rebels....along with removing the RED 'lower' one that is now there when snowtroopers set up their gun emplacement in front of it, during the scene in the ice cave? If you DO decide to add the single red 'light' dot to the side of the Falcon (and red ones at the front too?), during the 'fleet' shots at the end, then the whole thing should be a bit more uniform over the whole movie now.

And my absolutely final :) thoughts on red 'lights' anywhere is this - I reckon on the shot of the Falcon actually 'landing' on the 'floating city' platform....that the red ones should come on at that point to match the shot of it soon after, where Han is walking towards Lando....and because it would 'add a little something to the shot' too. The red 'lights' would come on just off-centre of the two prongs, and either come on just at the point where it fires it's short 'jets' briefly....or just come on immediately a the point where the 'jets' have gone off again, and it has subtly jerked to FULLY being on the platform, where they would only be seen for a brief moment before the shot cuts to the next.
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#320615
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Couple more quick ones for today, then I'm off to actually do some work!

That second (better detailed, less blurry) 'close-up' of the viewscreen 'surround' is a bit transparent at the bottom, and we can see Admiral Piet through it. Could you 'solidify' it for us Ady?

Need to look carefully for this one - On the initial long shot reveal of the 'plectrum'-shaped structure, on the side facing us near the position where the entrance into it is....there seems to be a couple of flashing 'lights' above and below the 'walkway' that Luke was hanging onto, that are NOT there in the next shot of Luke heading towards the entrance. Could you remove them for us?

I'll be back tomorrow with a couple of issues I'd REALLY like to see sorted that I think are relevant and could be neat!

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#320611
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Well Adywan....the determinedly Star Wars-lovin' side of me that still survives and hasn't been totally disenfranchised yet despite certain 'creative choices' over the years by Lucasfilm....just fell over at the thought of how potentially wonderful this whole 'Empire Revisited' project may eventually turn out, judging by that initial 2 minute preview! Terrific stuff, and your new Probe entry/crash rocks! No more 'pink blob'! And no 'flames' now as the Probe Droid moves off from the crater.... And the now uniform Hoth Planet blue 'atmosphere'.... And the 'human-less' Wampa arm.... And a more-blinking Tauntaun now.... And the more natural colour throughout.... And the wonderful new starfields.... And that's just the first couple of minutes! We are so lucky to have you doing this amazing work for us to eventually enjoy, and many thanks for the ongoing updates. I wish I had half your technical prowness Ady. Where the hell did you learn to do all this?

One tiny point that was flagged up that I'd probably agree with, is the fact that perhaps your Tauntaun 'eye-blinks' could be a little more rapid, as the slower 'blinks' tend to still be a bit too 'animatronic'-looking, if you know what I mean. But hey, I'll take 'em over the existing footage any day!

Liked that '2010:The year we make contact' quote by the way vbangle. ;)


Onto business, here's a little something I've only just noticed recently -

As C3PO complains to Chewbacca carrying him "....Ow!....That hurt....bend down you thoughtless....", as he bends down to get in the Falcon....C3PO's head slightly hits the red 'light' fixture beside the ramp....and knocks it off! Maybe the 'Props' guys used double-sided tape for it! :) Anyway, can we get that sorted so it stays in place?



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#320492
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Happy to oblige. Better keep that notebook ready Ady, as I have a few more over the next few days....

I don't expect you to like them all obviously, as every more critical fan has their own particular ideal ideas. But there may be the odd little thing or two that you like, and may not have thought of yourself already, and it's great to know that you are at least listening. I guess I'm making up for the fact that I came to the party TOO LATE to offer various proposals for your Star Wars Revisited'....only my favourite all-time movie!.... Curses! Anyway, you were kind enough to comment on the few of them that I PM'd you about, but I assure you I had plenty more, LOL!
Thankfully, your edit was fantastic anyway! :)

adywan said:

Anyway, does anyone fancy seeing the first 2 "finished" minutes (minus the crawl) of ESB:R, complete with new FX?


Are you kidding?, BRING IT ON!!!
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#320482
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STAR WARS: EP V &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - <strong>12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW</strong>
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Today's thoughts....

ImperialFighter said:

Going back to perhaps adding a red 'light' dot to the end 'close-ups' of the Millennium Falcon model at the end- It might look really good to also add the two red 'lights' to the front ends to, to also match the look of the Falcon as seen on the platform of the 'floating city', and when it blasts off from there. I think these would really help to make these shots look even better, and add to a sense of realism if they tie together more with the earlier platform shots.


I forgot that there is also an earlier model shot of the Falcon inside the asteroid slug, just after Vader says "I want that ship, not excuses" and his chamber closes.... This is a shot showing it's lit-up underside from a low angle. This time the two lights at the front of it are actually white light (like when it first flies down through asteroid cave) rather than red light.

There are inconsistencies throughout the original trilogy concerning these, but I wonder if it is possible to either have these red too, or perhaps CHANGING from white to red (or vice versa) during this brief shot, which would explain it a bit, and ties in with the next interior shot where Han is doing something and 'shutting things down'?

When we first see the 'plectrum'-shaped construct that Luke and Darth duel on, it has two sets of double red lights on it's base....but when we see the underneath of the structure during the first half of Luke's fall from it (where his right arm seems to be the one that's okay now!), there are now THREE sets of red lights. Can you remove the middle set?

And I'm just 'throwing this one out there' for you to consider too at this stage for the future Adywan - If, as you indicated previously that you might, that you do indeed alter the start of your 'Jedi Revisited' to a more 'Executor' stardestroyer-focused beginning (which sounds great, and logical from Darth's standpoint too), as opposed to the 'too samey' standard stardestroyer passing overhead intro. of 'A New Hope's' perfect one....will you consider using that particular stardestroyer 'passing overhead' visual element SOMEWHERE. I don't know if you have thought yet about still using it in 'Jedi' (with shuttle removed, or shuttle and Ties removed?) somewhere in your future edit mix or not, and if you are, then great....but if not, perhaps you could have a think about this -

It currently runs at about 17/18 seconds (PAL version) from when the front tip appears, until the 'belly dome' detailing passes overhead, and because it's still such a fantastically majestic and powerful visual effect, it would be a shame not to utilise it somewhere. If you decide there is no room for it in your 'Jedi' intro. or anywhere else in your 'Jedi' edit, then what about re-using it in 'Empire'? - It would still be a good element EVEN if it has to be 'cut short' a little or 'speeded up' at your discretion. I'd far rather see a part of this used to say, replace the brief shot of the strangely fake-looking 'dark grey' stardestroyer that is seen approaching Hoth to the 'fast' strains of the 'Imperial March', which is an effect I never thought looked good. Althought the planet itself is nice. OR....perhaps you could use it as the basis for your 'Captain Needa shuttle going to meet the 'Executor' superstardestroyer' shot? The shuttle you want is already in place, and just the Ties would need to be erased. It might mean a little rejigging of whatever 'Executor' element below it, or ahead of it, that you would choose to use would be required, but it would still tie in with events after the next short scenes of Darth 'accepting the Captain's apologies', where the fleet is in the middle of breaking up in ALL directions anyway. If you DO use it somewhere, I hope you will choose to linger on the bottom of it long enough to keep the 'belly dome' detail in! Even if that means chopping of the first half or so of it's entrance.
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#320407
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I'd be happy to see it nearby his right hand myself... :)


ONWARDS-

The blue 'atmosphere haze' is uneven around the shot of the Hoth planet at the start, as the 'Probe' descends.

For the same reasons recently mentioned, could a red 'light' dot also be added to the side of the Millennium Falcon's cockpit 'arm' on the 'close-up' miniature shot inside the asteroid slug, where Leia is seen alone? And not so sure about this one, but could the shot also benefit from a little hint of 'light-spill' coming down on a part of the dark left hand side of the shot, tying in with the downlighting of the following Falcon set shots as our heroes investigate? The shot of the stationary Falcon on the 'floating city' platform at dusk shows a few 'pools of light' shining on the platform underneath it (although there is no hint of them as it takes off).

Can you remove the (admittedly nicely done) SE release 'flames' that are now shown around the snow crater now has during the long shot of the Imperial Probe Droid floating off? There are no 'flames' in the preceeding 'close-up' shot of the Probe rising out of the wide crater, but there is 'casing' debris around it.

Can you remove the strange 'white ball' that appears just at the end of the shot of the Millenium Falcon heading down into the blackness of the asteroid cave, just before it transitions to the shot of Lukes X-wing heading towards Dagobah?

When the 'skin flap' of the Luke's artificial arm is closed by the Medical Droid, it doesn't quite line up with the little portion of 'fake arm' that we can still see nearest the sleeve. Could this be amended?

And please consider this one too Ady - Could the metal 'clamp/binder' section nearest the sleave be actually removed, and replaced with a LONGER robe sleeve nearly up to where the flap area closes over? This would make it seem that not so much of his arm has been lopped off compared to scenes earlier in the movie, and gets rid of the 'faker-looking' veins on the dummy arm nearest the existing sleeve too....
The next shot which shows Luke's left arm clearly shows where the new robe 'seam' on the cuff would be.


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#320403
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adywan said:

I'm just going to answer a few of the suggestions at the moment because there have been so many.
ImperialFighter said:


An actual laserblast from Han's pistol hitting the Mynock that he shoots it off the Falcon inside the Asteroid Slug would be nice.

Well i was just looking at that shot and i would be able to put a laser blast in if he was actually holding his gun at that point. The shot they have Han has actually got some sort of tool and is holding it with both hands. They must have taken it from a cut shot of Han repairing the outside of the Falcon.
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/8616/hantoolwd6.jpg
ANSWER - Firstly, thanks for taking the time to answer ANY questions/suggestions Ady!
Although this shot is very brief and indistinct, when watching the SE release on my television screen, I can see what looks likes Han's right hand finger on the trigger of what he's holding, better than is obvious in the photo above. It's almost as if the silver barrel is incomplete, but is so brief that it is not too much of a problem. I didn't mean this shot though, as there is no laserbolt sound effect at that point. What I meant was the next shot where the Mynock falls off the Falcon amid 'sparks'. Is it possible to insert a laserbolt immediately as we cut to this shot, to coincide with the laserbolt sound effect that is clearly heard at this point? This would be a welcome addition I feel.
ImperialFighter said:


The 'steam/smoke' that comes out of the Carbon Freeze Chamber hole as Han is lowered is a satisfyingly large and dramatic amount.....however the amount that comes out of the same hole when Darth tries to do the same to Luke during their duel IS NOT. It always seemed an unsatisfactory and disappointingly small amount compared to the Han effort, and I would love to see this improved on if it is within your capabilities. If you agree of course! Another thing I think would add to the dramatic effect of both sequences, is that during the actual INITIAL big flurry of engulfing steam/smoke that emerges from the Chamber hole....a very brief blue flash or two is also superimposed on it then too, as is seen in subsequent moments during the process.

As has been said, during the sabre duel Luke isn't in the pit as it starts its cycle so the steam would be less as there is nothing in there to freeze so i won't be changing this
ANSWER - Well, you can't win 'em all! I do however certainly see the logic in your and Ziz's explanation of this.
ImperialFighter said:


And I'd love to see the Falcon's landing gear 'legs' retract a bit AFTER it has turned to escape from the lasers on the 'floating city' landing platform, just as it zooms away into the distance....

I'll see what i can do
ANSWER - Great, as this was always one of my favourite FX shots from the movie!
ImperialFighter said:


The second 'Probe' crash that Luke watches on his Tauntaun is a far better-looking object entry (longer, lighter streak effect ) than the initial bright pink 'blob' that crashes into Hoth. The shot just before the 'pink blob' shows the 'casing' of the Imperial Probe Droid heat up as it enters the Hoth atmosphere, then darken. I think the charred 'casing' crashing into the snow instead of a 'pink blob' would look far better, or at least would be better if it at least looked more like the one Luke watches.

Already been taken care of
ANSWER - Impressive....most impressive....(in best deep voice)
ImperialFighter said:


I don't know if you've got round to working out what you want to do with this particular scene yet, but here's a possible solution to Luke's 'missing' Lightsaber as he crashes through the 'window' during his duel with Darth.

His sabre is already on the gantry in the birds eye shot so no fix needed for this
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ANSWER - No doubleofive, it seems you're not crazy, and that it IS there! Hands up all those in the world that didn't notice it there before.... (mine certainly is!) Throughout numerous viewings on various screens and displays in the past, I just didn't realise that was meant to be it, lol. Having checked both GOUT and SE releases, I find it is still not obvious as the Lightsaber due to it's position and shadowing. I always thought that particular object was an item with a 'hose'/'tubing' attachment lying there with the other debris, rather than the hilt lying ON TOP of 'hose'/tubing'....and obviously could have done with your yellow arrow in the past!

Ady, I am using a very nicely set up television screen with excellent colour, brightness and contrast levels adjusted, and the whole gantry walkway on the SE release is coloured/shadowed in such a way where the shadowed Lightsaber seems to merge into it too much to be obvious. It does seem more noticeable in your vibrantly-coloured shot above though, especially with that arrow! Even though this seems to be it, the shot is so brief that your eye is distracted by either the struggling Luke in the centre, or the flashing gantry light on the left. If you are happy with the current solution of it lying on the walkway in this 'birds-eye' shot alone, I would ask you to consider moving it over a bit nearer where Luke is clinging on, which is the area viewers focus on, so that it's more easily seen as a stand-alone item. If you choose to leave it where it is, then I would ask that you perhaps 'bring it out' a bit from the shadowing and 'hose'/tubing' beside it. And to be really pedantic, the end of the hilt seems to cut off slightly at a strip edge on the floor of the walkway, rather than overlap it slightly to be nearer the actual edge of the walkway where Luke's fingertips are clinging on. The actual proportions of the edge of the gantry can more clearly be seen in the following shot's 'close-up' of the actual set that Luke scrambles back onto, which of course due to the angle of the shot, hides the fact that the Lightsaber is on it, even if you do put it nearer him in the 'birds-eye' shot.

I'd still love to see an added 'falling' Lightsaber deactivating near Luke as he goes backwards through the window before this though, so that it's easily identifiable amongst the debris during that brief shot....because it could be a very neat-looking, subtle addition to the proceedings, and help to more easily identify that it would be deactivated on the walkway seen in the 'birds-eye' shot.

(oh and the pics posted are just for reference. no colour correction has been done on these. i just brightened them so you can see them better)

And thanks for that, as I can now make the Lightsaber out! ;)
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Should there be 'sparks' as Darth cuts Luke's hand off?

Freeze-framing the shot doesn't seem to indicate that his Lightsaber handle was affected during this. If the sparks stay, would it be possible to have a small part of the bottom of Luke's Lightsaber handle being chopped off at the same time as the hand, and have the small piece falling away too, to explain the 'sparking'?

On the exterior model shot 'close-up' of the Medical Frigate ship near the end, as we pan left towards the inset 'window area' portal' (which it would still be great to see a small R2 and C3PO staring out of....), it seems that the actual angles of this 'inset', lit-up portion don't match the full size set ones. Could you amend them to do so?

Going back to perhaps adding a red 'light' dot to the end 'close-ups' of the Millennium Falcon model at the end- It might look really good to also add the two red 'lights' to the front ends to, to also match the look of the Falcon as seen on the platform of the 'floating city', and when it blasts off from there. I think these would really help to make these shots look even better, and add to a sense of realism if they tie together more with the earlier platform shots.

That's your lot for now....my brain hurts!
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doubleofive said:

ImperialFighter said:

doubleofive- I know that there is some 'debris' on the gantry in that 'birds-eye view' shot, but I certainly don't recall there being an obvious deactivated Lightsaber on it. I will check this out later today though.


If its not there then Ady can just put it there. I've always been OK with assuming it was there, so if it actually is, all the better!


Or maybe it's on the gantry but landed just out of frame! ;)
So many possibilities. Ady will keep us right.



Onwards with even more madness then-

As we see Luke first hurtling down towards the black abyss after getting his right hand lopped off....it seems that his right arm is intact now, and that his left one has been shortened instead, as if the Luke element has been 'flipped'....however, it reverts back to being okay in the next shot of him as he continues to fall towards one of the re-lit openings.

As Luke's slide through the 'tunnel' comes to an end before he falls through another opening, when he rolls to a halt, it is glaringly obvious that he still has a 'long right arm'. Could this particular scene be manipulated to look shorter?

The first 'close-up' of the viewscreen 'surround' as Admiral Ozzel chokes is faded-looking, but the second one has a far better-looking, sharper-defined 'surround'. Can this one be used for both shots Ady?
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doubleofive- I know that there is some 'debris' on the gantry in that 'birds-eye view' shot, but I certainly don't recall there being an obvious deactivated Lightsaber on it. I will check this out later today though.

Ziz- Although that doesn't satisfy me I'm afraid, it's certainly another way of looking at it, and Ady may agree with you.



The second 'Probe' crash that Luke watches on his Tauntaun is a far better-looking object entry (longer, lighter streak effect ) than the initial bright pink 'blob' that crashes into Hoth. The shot just before the 'pink blob' shows the 'casing' of the Imperial Probe Droid heat up as it enters the Hoth atmosphere, then darken. I think the charred 'casing' crashing into the snow instead of a 'pink blob' would look far better, or at least would be better if it at least looked more like the one Luke watches.
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Also for your consideration Ady....

Some of these things are more noticeable on the GOUT release rather than the darkened SE release, but as the Medical Frigate starship passes towards us near the end on it's initial pass, the 'window area' portal where Luke, Leia, and the Droids are meant to be, is not 'lit-up' in any way, but instead is 'greyed out'....but in the second, next immediate shot where the Frigate moves away from us, the portal IS 'lit-up'. Some kind of lighting coming from the greyed out portion would be nice, as it's meant to be a bright area.

Also, in the Frigate's initial pass, just behind the greyed out 'portal', there comes a square white light and 2 blue thin ones, which are also there in the very last last shot of it, as it recedes away before the credits. However, these lights are missing from a 'close-up' shot of that particular area on the Frigate as we pan to the left towards the 'close-up' of the exterior of the 'lit-up' portal at one point....and should we be seeing a partial hint of R2 and C3PO through it?....as they are positioned near the 'window' at that point in the proceedings, looking out....

In the 'close-ups' of the Millennium Falcon in these end shots, could you put back some sort of 'brick red' colouring into the relevant panels on it that are now darkened?

A red spot of 'light' on the exterior side of the Falcon's cock-pit area in the 'close-up' model shots would be neat too, to mirror the look of the full-scale version more.

The rather mobile and 'lit-up' Medical Droid that works on Luke's mechanical hand/wrist area, seems too suddenly 'static' and 'switched off' as Luke's 'workings' are closed up by it. Could we see it's still 'lit-up' eyes and blue chestplate light perhaps slowly glow 'off' as we see it suddenly immobile next to Luke, to make the transition a little less jarring? Either that or a subtle robotic arm movement for a moment still.

Could you add a little gold/yellow colouring to the tiny C3PO seen moving slightly through the passing 'window area' portal at the end, as he places his arm on top of R2D2? I really used to like this 'matted in projection' (?) shot at the end of 'Empire', but due to the darkened overall colouring of this scene now on the SE release, you can hardly make out the figures or the movement compared to the GOUT release....

An actual laserblast from Han's pistol hitting the Mynock that he shoots it off the Falcon inside the Asteroid Slug would be nice.

The 'steam/smoke' that comes out of the Carbon Freeze Chamber hole as Han is lowered is a satisfyingly large and dramatic amount.....however the amount that comes out of the same hole when Darth tries to do the same to Luke during their duel IS NOT. It always seemed an unsatisfactory and disappointingly small amount compared to the Han effort, and I would love to see this improved on if it is within your capabilities. If you agree of course! Another thing I think would add to the dramatic effect of both sequences, is that during the actual INITIAL big flurry of engulfing steam/smoke that emerges from the Chamber hole....a very brief blue flash or two is also superimposed on it then too, as is seen in subsequent moments during the process.

And I'd love to see the Falcon's landing gear 'legs' retract a bit AFTER it has turned to escape from the lasers on the 'floating city' landing platform, just as it zooms away into the distance....

Not that I want this edit to take you forever Ady, but I know you are capable of many wonderful tweaks judging by your first appreciated efforts, and I say the more ideas from folks the better. I have no expectations, as the stuff you choose to do or choose NOT to do, is for you alone to decide. You are the one doing the work at the end of the day. I only know that what you eventually come up with will please many, many fans around here and elsewhere.







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Your short re-coloured 'Hoth Battle' and 'Luke training with Yoda on Dagobah' clips are a marvel Ady. Everyone here should check them out. 'Empire' is truly coming back!

In the meantime, here's some more madness for your consideration (or your obliteration) along the way....

I don't know if you've got round to working out what you want to do with this particular scene yet, but here's a possible solution to Luke's 'missing' Lightsaber as he crashes through the 'window' during his duel with Darth. See what you think -

....with Darth having seemingly deactivated his Lightsaber (perhaps you may choose to show that happening at this point) before he moves to cling to the wall during the initial wind turbulance....just after we see Luke lurch to the right of the frame with his 'activated' Lightsaber for the last time, and we then see him start to get sucked out of the window backwards....could his Lightsaber now be seen slightly separate from him, IN THE MIDDLE OF DEACTIVATING, as it has blown out of his hand with the force of the pressure amongst the other assorted debris?....and before the shot ends, could we see that Luke's Lightsaber has TOTALLY deactivated during it's fall alongside Luke?....then after Darth looks down....in the 'birds-eye' shot we see of Luke hanging on the gantry, could we see that his deactivated Lightsaber is sitting somewhere near his right hand, having thankfully landed on the gantry beside him. It has been a close thing....as it's shaded silver and black hilt is seen at an angle (underneath the railing, and partially obscured in the same way as Luke's right hand is partially obscured by the railing as seen from our POV), with part of it actually overhanging the edge of the gantry....and when we cut to the next 'close-up' of Luke hauling himself up, we now see the shaded silvery tip of the hilt, with it's buttons, hanging over the edge on the right of the frame, as Luke careful misses knocking it over with his right arm (the footage is ideal for this)...setting us up for when he later re-enters the gantry structure's 'opening', armed with his Lightsaber again....

And any Lightsaber activation or deactivation mentioned here doesn't even require accompanying sound effects, as the wind effect sound is very loud at these points, and will seem to have drowned them out.... :)



ADDENDUM: Of course, there are other possibilities that could be done to show what happened to the Lightsaber too - Such as during the 'birds-eye' shot of Luke hanging onto the gantry, the Lightsaber could be seen to be hovering somewhere just above him, suggesting that he is holding the Lightsaber in place 'with his Force powers'....and we see it gently lower onto the gantry near where he is hanging, just before the 'close-up' of him clambering back onto the gantry....
OR
During the 'birds-eye' shot of him hanging onto the gantry, he looks to his left at one point....where he could be 'suspending, then bringing up the Lightsaber' using 'his Force powers'....and then once he's clambered onto the gantry in the 'close-up' just after, he watches briefly as he seems to be gently 'raising the Lightsaber' to rest on the right of the gantry beside him....
OR
We ONLY see the bit at the end there where he's clambered onto the gantry in the 'close-up', and watches briefly as he seems to be gently 'raising the Lightsaber' using his 'Force power', and rests it on the right of the gantry beside him....

Of course you can choose to leave it all as it is, and perhaps he's just used his 'Force powers' in the intervening time before we rejoin him to 'bring up his Lightsaber' from the fall in some UNSEEN way....but I rather hope you show something or other.