That would be better like this…
"The life force of your bond, a dyad in the Force. A power like life itself. Unseen for generations. Your coming together will be your undoing. And now, the power of two restores the one true Emperor.
So excited! Cannot wait to see how these “finished” copies look!!!
When was That? I haven’t heard from him in ages. I hope his film is going well.
It was quite a while ago.
I did have a pm with him where he said he was working on something. An aged Bryan Cranston has a striking resemblance to Shaw, I think that was something he was exploring.
Luke hitting a Grand Slam and taking out an AT-AT sounds hilarious and it is exactly the type of exaggeration that Luke was talking about in TLJ with “The Legend of Luke Skywalker”
The galaxy in TFA thinks Luke is a myth because of his god-like status.
Just thought of a fun change that could make for a good easter egg. When Rey is on Pasanna and stumbles across the kids watching the puppet show, how hard would it be to make it look like Luke versus the First Order and slightly extend the shot as a nice callback to TLJ. Especially with Rey’s reaction afterwards. Doesn’t seem like it would be too complicated for someone to mock up. Not even sure if it is worth the trouble though…
It’s nice seeing something you suggested like forty pages ago coming to fruition haha
It might be good to have Luke and the walker falling which would explain why the kids are laughing.
Yeah, I’m with you on this. Do you have a high res version of the images you’ve used?
This was not made by me. All credit to Cinefy
It might be good to have Luke and the walker falling which would explain why the kids are laughing.
It’s in this thread! I had suggested it and found someone mocked one up. Not sure who let me see what I can find!
I believe this was Cinefy
That would be nice for pacing. I also suggested some planet arrival/leaving scenes which would be awesome if some talented people here could create them.
The work on this has been great so far. I would love to see the 4k look like this, but I would love to get a link when completed.
I know there was talk for “Ben, come home.” but I don’t know where the progress on that was
Another audio line mix up. This time with Leia and the medal:
https://vimeo.com/515537252
Pw: fanedit
I think it plays well with Kylo’s statement before:
“You can’t go back to her now. Like I can’t.”
VERY rough mockup of the Emperor/Pryde scene with added dialogue about Rey:
https://vimeo.com/515106270
It was still Palpatine’s plan to use Rey’s father until he discovered it wouldn’t work. But whatever is the easier for the viewer to understand.
Exactly. Now we’re onto something!
Edit: flipping around the responses somehow makes it flow even better
Emperor:
The Princess of Alderaan has disrupted my plan. But her foolish act will be in vain. I want the girl, the force is strong with her.
Pryde:
Yes, my lord.
Emperor:
Her journey nears its end. Come to me on Exegol, General Pryde. The Final Order begins.
Pryde:
As I served you in the old wars, I serve you now.
And then while on Exegol:
“I don’t want you dead… I want you here.”
"Long have I waited… your father… Ben Solo… now YOU will take the throne.”
“Weak… like your father.”
Yes, however for it to work the “Long have I waited…” and assumptions that this always has been the plan needs to be removed.
It needs to be clear there was 3 targets in this order:
Maybe instead of “Weak… like your parents”, when Rey resists it can turn to “Weak… like your father”
This could work using existing Palpatine quotes to piece it together:
Emperor:
The Princess of Alderaan has disrupted my plan. But her foolish act will be in vain. Come to me on Exegol, General Pryde.
Pryde:
As I served you in the old wars, I serve you now.
Emperor:
I want the girl, the force is strong with her. Her journey nears its end. The Final Order begins.
Pryde:
Yes, my lord.
“Search for the girl. She may be yet of some use to us”
I agree. Just thinking of options!
List of space/ships shots that could hopefully be made by someone with WAY more skills than me:
One thing that would be very nice for V2 is more establishing shots. Maybe some of the technical gurus on here could make some shots of the Falcon or Ochi’s ship in space heading towards Kimji or Tatooine at the end of the movie.
Like how @poppa made the shot of Ochi’s ship flying away, anything that can add some breathing room. Maybe a shot of Ren’s TIE approaching Anch-To? Rey taking Luke’s X-Wing and leaving Anch-To in space? Or maybe a tease of Vader’s TIE leaving Endor?
Quick mockup of Mustafar:
https://vimeo.com/512027766
The shot before Kylo needs to be cleaned and slightly extended.
Does any have the new shot of the TIEs flying towards the camera over the trees?
I know it was posted in this thread but can’t seem to find.
It could be like this:
TIEs approach Mustafar -> Poppa’s shot of TIEs and trees -> Fly over trees with castle in background (possibly extend without the TIEs to focus on the environment) -> Kylo fighting
This proposed order would allow us “the audience” to follow the TIEs down to the planet as they approach an environment similar to Kylo’s before we cut to his rampage
