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#1484005
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STAR WARS: EP IV 2004 <strong>REVISITED</strong> ADYWAN *<em>1080p HD VERSION NOW IN PRODUCTION</em>
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Octorox said:

adywan said:

darkzip said:

I’ve got the upscale done. Looks great to me. I’ll do another post once I have it somewhere accessible to others.

search for it on thepiratebay

Thanks for doing this darkzip. I just checked it out. Unfortunately you used the NTSC version of ANH:R but didn’t remove the 2:3 pulldown first to return it to its native 23.976fps and has resulted in a 29.97fps file with multiple duplicate frame throughout, resulting in jerky playback. You’re best bet would have been to use the PAl version for the upscale. It has a higher resolution than the NTSC and would result in an even better result. You can then just change the framerate from 25fps to 23.976fps without having to reencode and remux with the NTSC audio

I have the PAL video/NTSC audio remuxed already as well as Topaz. If darkzip isn’t able to do it, I’d be happy to do an upscale similar to what I did with Brave Little Toaster.

I’d love to get a proper upscale copy of this older version. Count me in.

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#1483871
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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NeverarGreat said:

Good one! However, I’m constrained by the mouth movements to put the word ‘destroyed’ at the end of the phrase, so perhaps:

“And General, without that shield destroyed…nobody can save us.”

What about “And General,” only reason I didn’t have that was because it was repetitive. Also lets the scene breathe a little between C-3PO’s line.

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#1483869
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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“Black Leader, the Falcon has landed!”
“All fighters clear for takeoff, all fighters clear.”
“All teams, altitude confirmed, hold for jump to Light Speed.”

“General, the Senate has mobilized the fleet! They’re launching within the hour.”
“They haven’t got a chance.”
“Oh my, without the Republic Fleet we’re doomed!”
“We need to destroy that shield… if not, no one can save us.”

Then cut to “no one, from nowhere” Rey

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#1482485
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
Time

Good points Sherlock! I made a few small edits to your take:

The galaxy is in crisis.
Luke Skywalker, working
to restore the legendary
Jedi Order, has vanished.

In the ensuing chaos,
Imperial sympathizers
have begun rising in power.
Declaring the New Republic
to be broken and inept,
they demand a return
to the Empire under the
guise of the FIRST ORDER.

While the Senate stalls,
a few determined members
secretly form a daring
RESISTANCE to the threat.
Believing that Luke can
end the Imperial threat
once and for all, they
pursue a lead to the
Last Jedi’s whereabouts…

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#1482141
Topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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NeverarGreat said:

I do! It’s a good reminder not to lose sight of the basics like the First Order’s villainy. Though I wonder if there could be a way to work in their menace without having them outright attack the Republic, as well as offering this peace. In the film Poe looks astonished at the hangar which could mean that they are so reclusive that almost nobody in the Republic knows about them.

I will think on this further.

How about this?

Episode VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS

Luke Skywalker has vanished!
In his absence, the peaceful
New Republic is afraid,
countless threats have been
made by a mysterious
Imperial remnant known as
the FIRST ORDER.

In a surprising move, these
sinister agents have promised
to end the conflict on
the condition that the
Jedi Order is finally
declared extinct.

General Leia Organa, skeptical
of this offering, has secretly
organized a RESISTANCE to
investigate this threat, and
to find her brother amidst
the darking stars…

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#1482132
Topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
Time

That’s an interesting take! Because I’m obsessed with crawl-writing, I took a stab at your new idea, although somewhat different. I think it is good to establish the First Order as a threat off the bat, especially given the Jakku village scene that kicks off the film.

Hopefully you like it 🤷‍♂️

Episode VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS

Luke Skywalker has vanished!
In his absence, the peaceful
New Republic is in chaos,
countless attacks have been
made by an Imperial remnant
known as the FIRST ORDER.

In a surprising move, these
sinister agents have promised
to end the fighting on the
condition that the Jedi
are finally declared extinct.

General Leia Organa, skeptical
of this offering, has secretly
organized a RESISTANCE to
investigate this threat, and
to find her brother amidst
the darking stars…

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#1482072
Topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
Time

How about this one?

79 words:

It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, striving
to restore the legendary
Jedi Knights, has vanished.

In his absence, warriors, raised
under the cruelty of exiled
Imperial remnants, have emerged from
their fearsome hidden fortress as
the sinister FIRST ORDER, terrorizing
star systems throughout the galaxy.

With the New Republic falling into
endless chaos and division, a
few brave senators have secretly
organized a daring RESISTANCE to
find the last Jedi, and restore peace
to the darkening stars…

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#1481892
Topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
Time

If you can’t tell, I love writing Star Wars crawls. I made a few adjustments to yours:

It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, striving
to restore the legendary
Jedi Knights, has vanished.

In his absence, malevolent forces,
raised on a hidden Imperial fortress,
have established the sinister
FIRST ORDER, terrorizing star systems
throughout the peaceful New Republic.

With the New Republic falling into
endless chaos and division, a
few brave senators have secretly
called upon a daring RESISTANCE to
find the last Jedi, and restore peace
to the darkening stars…

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#1479376
Topic
STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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adywan said:

The Skywalker saga is 9 films, like it or not. I like the sequel trilogy so if i want to connect anything to that, then i will.

Just a few suggestions if you are open to them:

  • Boba Fett, depending on how it goes, potentially use Hal9000’s alternate jetpack scream and “death” audio with Temuera Morrison. It sounds a lot less cartoony than the original '83 version.
  • Add the Ghost from Rebels to the space battle
  • Edit in the door for Palpatine’s vault in the throne room, the one Rey goes in to get the Wayfinder in Episode IX
  • Remove the shockwave from Death Star II (not sure if already planned) and alter the explosion so it appears that Death Star II is intact enough to be what is in Episode IX
  • Smooth the original jump cut for where the celebration scenes were inserted in '97
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#1473771
Topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
Time

Building on that, here’s my take…

Luke Skywalker has vanished.
In his absence, a new sinister
power has risen to threaten the
galaxy. Descending into endless
divide, the New Republic has failed
to address this growing threat.

In the wake of this failure,
Leia Organa has organized a
daring RESISTANCE to find the lost
Jedi, and restore a light of hope
to the waning stars.

The evil FIRST ORDER, emerging
from a hidden fortress of the
fallen Empire, hastens toward
the haggard wastelands of Jakku,
where a clue to Luke’s whereabouts
has been discovered…

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#1471683
Topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
Time

Here is a take on CaptainFaraday’s using some of the other ideas posted, and just removing Snoke entirely (like TLJ does):

Chaos reigns! The New Republic
has been decimated. In the wake of
this terrible disaster, the treacherous
FIRST ORDER races to seize control
of the galaxy’s central star systems.

General Leia Organa’s RESISTANCE is
desperate for the return of Jedi Master
Luke Skywalker, certain that he can quell
the rising threat and restore a spark of
hope to their fight.

But the Resistance has been exposed.
As the First Order speeds toward
the rebel base, the brave heroes
mount a desperate escape…