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#294235
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Star Wars Prequels/Original Trilogy: The Complete Scores (Released)
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Hey all, thought I might bring you a new surprise. I've been working on a Complete Empire Strike Back Remastered Set.

I know what a lot of you are thinking:

"But Bernard, I have the Anthology!"

or even worse

"But Bernard, I have the Special Edition! Why do I need this?"

Quick and simple answer is: You do.


I know most of you probably aren't as musically literate as I am or know John Williams perhaps as well, but I'll try to explain.



The Anthology is an amazing release. Every-time I have doubts, I go back to it. It was really well done and I have to say was an exceptionally well put together set. (It single handedly saved the ship :-p )

It still has its problems however.


Empire Strikes Back has a few errors. Three or four of the tracks have their channels flipped. What I mean by that is that the Left And Right channels are swapped.

Under normal circumstances, you hear the violins in the left channel and the cello/bass in the right (string wise). With the channels flipped, you hear the opposite...

Now a lot of people are like "Oh... well... whatever" but please, realize, the invention of Stereo and surround sound were done BECAUSE of this! To preserve this balance...

Back when music was recorded in mono (which wasn't too many years ago and actually as many of you know, Star Wars did have a mono-mix), music had no definition.

Since the creation of the symphonic orchestra, there have been specific places for instruments to sit based upon hundreds of years of tradition and study. The orchestral sound is best balanced the way it is intended to be heard and the way the instruments are intended to be seated.

I actually got a CD recently that's a re-release of an old John Williams LP. It's called "Rythms in Motion." In the insert for CD, replicated from the original in the LP, it says how "It seems like stereo was invented for John Williams, not the other way around!"


One of the amazing aspects of Williams music is his unique ability to master stereo sound. From instruments handing off melodic lines across the spectrum, to the use of mixed sounds from both sides of the sound field, he is a master.

Now, the Anthology errors are few and simple to fix... The Special Edition errors are many and impossible to fix.


On the Special Edition, there were only two music editors. Whats interesting is while listening to the score one day, I noticed on Main Title that this French horn solo was in the wrong channel and I nearly shit a brick!

I stopped. Played it again. Heard it again... was so confused I went as far as to pop in the DVD to make sure it wasn't like that in the film!

In sooth it wasn't. I did a little research and found that one of the editors... in EVERY SINGLE CUE HE EDITED... Flipped the Horn Channels.


Now, unlike the anthology error with the left/right channels being swapped... when individual instrument channels are flipped... there's nothing I can do.I don't have the masters (obviously) and I can't go back and isolate a single instrument in a down mixed release such as these.

So the problem becomes "What do you do?"

Well, I've done what I can. I've replaced almost everything with the Anthology... and fixed the errors on the anthology.

Another interesting problem with the Special Edition is it's lack of sound field. For example, if you listen to "Imperial Walkers" in the cue "Battle of Hoth" on the SE, and listen to the same cue on the Anthology... you will no doubt hear the difference.

This is that infamous cue that starts out with the really low, metallic, baning piano parts. If you listen to the SE, you may only think there is a single piano! The irony is John Williams says in his liner notes for this cue "The more pianos the better!"

And in the SE it sounds like a single piano... because they narrowed the mix to the point where you only hear a single piano in the center...instead of one on each side!

So yea... If I haven't convinced you yet, let me also explain that neither set truly sounds the best they can. Both have a very dead sound and could use some nice re-mastering so I have done that as well.

Anyways, the set is coming along really well. I'm actually to the Imperial Walkers cue right now. heh

Anyways, this is the cue list so far:


Star Wars: Empire Strikes Back Complete Re-mastered

Disc 1 (1:08:51)

01) 20th Century Fox Fanfare - [0:27]
02) Main Title - [1:40]
03) Probe Droid (Original) - Echo Base - [6:33]
04) Wampa's Ice Lair - [3:35]
05) Visions of Obi-Wan - [3:34]
06) Snowspeeder's Take Flight - [1:51]
07) Aboard the Executor - [3:14]
08) Attack Positions - [2:11]
09) Ion Cannon - [1:56]
10) Imperial Walkers - [9:41]
11) Beneath the AT-AT - [4:18]
12) Escape in the Millennium Falcon - [3:06]
13) The Asteroid Field - [4:21]
14) Arrival at Dagobah - [3:38]
15) Setting up Camp - [1:21]
16) Luke's Nocturnal Visitor - [2:39]
17) Hans Solo and the Princes - [3:32]
18) Jedi Master Revealed - Mynock Cave - [5:48]
19) Training of a Jedi Knight - [1:43]
20) The Magic Tree - [3:38]

Disc 2 ( )


# Probe Droid (Film Alternate) * - [1:19]
# Imperial March - [2:59]
# Yoda's Theme - [3:25]


* Denotes uncorrectable flipped channels

Anyways, this set is coming along really quickly. I should probably be finished by tomorrow and have it all uploaded and ready to be downloaded by then. I'll keep you all up to date.
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#294126
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Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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I must add,however, that Lucas didn't shoot a film... she shot a documentary.

When it came time to release it, he sat back, looked at what he had, and decided what story to tell... breaking down things, removing things, and adding things.

It's ironic that they had to delete some great scenes because of "time constraints" that he puts on himself, but that the whole ending sequence could have been tightened like how some of us have done it ...myself included... without removing Vader if his wish is such... lol...

But he seems to simply waste out time with things... I suppose to cover up the flubs...make them not last as long...

But yea... he films sooo much stuff... I think that anyone not paying attention would get confused...and then of course, there's when he takes stuff from green/blue screen and decides "I don't want this on mustfar! I want this on my back porch!" and then we wonder why the tea cozy doesn't end up in the right hand! lol
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#294091
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My Symphonic Forces Series (Released)
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Hey, I didn't think I'd get to these tonight, but it looks like I will so I'll continue where i left off:

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STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume VI "Grevious Flees"

On the album, there is a cue called "Grevious and the Droids." Back when I was editing my Episode III score, I noticed that only half of this cue was used here. The other half was actually used during the chase through Utapau latter in the film. I wondered where it had been intended to go, so I lined it up and layered it over Episode III and found it fit perfectly.

The cue begins right after Obi-Wan and Anakin get captured by the ray shields, when R2 flys into the hall in in hot pursuit by two droidikas.

The cue continues on, showing the Invisible Hand in space, and then on through their conversation.

In the film, the music doesn't begin until after Anakin has freed Palpatine. It would play up until the Invisible Hand begins to break in half, right before General Grevious' escape pod ejects.

Here, I continue the music up until it's completion. Why most of this was tracked out is not really known. It's possible that Lucas simply felt there was too much music in the beginning of the film. Most Star Wars films don't have much music in the beginning, but the battle sequences at the end of the film usually have a lot, so John Williams naturally composed music for quite a bit of the opening sequence.

But again it's hard to say. I personally like all the music written for the whole opening sequence but it's hard to say except perhaps personal choice on Lucas' part to remove it and perhaps give it a feeling of being slightly longer than it is, with a heightened reality.

Here is where you can view "Grevious Escapes.".
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STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume VII "Probe Droid" Alternate and "Ice Planet Hoth" Complete

Perhaps one of the strangest changes I've seen to a film was this.

The opening to Star Wars: Empire Strikes Back begins with the usual "Star Wars" opening, about a 1:30 of music. Then, the next cue "Probe Droids" begins, but not when it's suppose to. Rather, it begins slightly late, and then is dialed out. Next, the alternate of Probe Droids" begins, removing some of the beginning. The rest of the cue plays, never quite being where it's meant to be against the film.

Then, as we see Luke from the sky, the remainder of the alternate plays up until we have a close up of luke. This then goes back to the original cue which plays until look is attacked and is being dragged away.

As he's being dragged away, another cue is tracked in as Han enters Echo Base, and the rest of the music is, for the most part, left out up until Leia confronts Han about leaving. This plays, but is slightly off from where it is intended to sync, which continues up even past R2 and 3PO come out from the hall. Most of the rest of the cue is not used in the film.

Here, I replace all the original music, synced correctly and completely in the film as originally intended by John Williams.

Why Irvin Kershner decided to do this I'm not quite sure. I know a lot of times if the music is meant to sync up directly with certain actions in the film, a lot of times the music will me moved slightly off the mark so as to change the intent and make it less blatant. But the amount of changes and tracking in and out of music here is daunting.

Perhaps one of the reasons why Lucas doesn't like Empire that much is because of it's slightly more jovial attitude towards the characters and the scenes. Not being taken that seriously seemed to have had an effect on the score by Williams and his score. Some of the cues seem to have a very different feel than those of the original film, and seem like a grave departure from the original score. Perhaps for this reason as well, and to remove that heightened sense of "somethings different," his score was mostly unused and replaced.

This is where you can view my edit of "Probe Doird" and Compelete "Ice Planet Hoth".
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STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume VIII "Droid Invasion" Complete and "Introduction of Jar Jar"


Perhaps one of the strangest moments in the score to Episode I is a small omission made as Qui-Gon runs through the forest with a myriad of other animals being persued by the Droid Transport Tanks. He runs into Jar Jar and then manages to fall out of the way of these tanks that both float and are apparently going so far they will run you down (lol right).

Anyways, the music meant for this sequence is unused in the film. A little later, As Jar Jar introduces himself and talks about Otta Gunga, the music meant to accompany this is unused. Instead, it comes in much latter when he jumps into the water but is tracked Incorrectly, causing a small portion as they step onto the landing to get into the main bubble to have to be removed.

In my video, I replace all the music and sync it correctly with the film.

Why then changes were made is hard to say. It may simply be because that small portion as Qui-Gon is being chased didn't fit well enough, and that the SFX by Ben Burt, which were very well tediously done, worked better alone. The omission of Jar Jar's theme may have been because they felt that the thematic material for Jar Jar wasn't necessary and detracted from the story, so they left it out until Jar Jar jumped into the water. The music here, having been synced differently caused them to have to remove a small repeating section near the end in order to fit the sequence correctly, so that removal is obvious.

This is where you can view this edit of "Droid Invasion" and "Introduction of Jar Jar.".
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Although not Part of the Symphonic Forces Series, I felt now would be a good time to talk about a set of three videos I did replacing the original score as written by John Williams for Battle for Naboo re-edited as it had been intended and seen by John Williams.

The last videos to be edited using Window Movie Maker, these edits can be a bit rough at times and were quite hard to make. I tried at first using Audio with them, and remixing the music into the film, but there were so many edits, and so much going on, that it quickly became impossible to sustain good sounding audio with the new music mixed in over the old for all the videos, so I opted to simply have video and music.

Star Wars: Battle For Naboo Re-Edit Part I

In this first video, we see the final moments of Sidious telling Nute to "Wipe them [the Gungans] out. All of them."

The first bit of music heard is the alternate to the "Gungan March." As mentioned earlier, the percussion can be isolated and used separately. For this reason, several alternates surfaced of this. Firstly you have this original version, then you have the percussive alternate, then you have the version on the 2 Disc Phantom Menace Set, then you have the film version which differs only slightly from the 2 disc set version so it's not entirely worth mentioning.

After this, begins the cue "The Battle Begins," which most will recognize as the music used as the Droid Army Comes to life and begins to march towards the Gungans. The dramatic difference, and yet amazing ability for the cue to be used in both cases is astounding and speaks to John Williams creative ability.

The second half of "The Battle Begins" is used in the film, as Padme and the group enter the courtyard in Naboo, however the scenes is slightly extended in the film and some of the music is looped, causing most of it to be incorrectly synced.

The next cue, "The Battle for Naboo I" begins earlier than it is used in the film, this caused a lot of the edits in the film because of the incorrect syncing. Again, like mentioned before, sometimes editors will move scores to be slightly off their mark so as not to heighten certain moments as much. Some of the scene as Nute speaks is extended in the film, which wouldn't work for the score so it was looped. Originally, Darth Maul even had a line here.

The shot then cuts back to the Gungan Battle. Notice that in the film, they seemingly enter into the Hangar Bay almost instantaneously. In the film, it seems to give the illusion that the Hangar Bay is on the other side of those doors, but anyone with a keen eye looking down from an aerial shot of Naboo would realize that the hangar Bay couldn't begin there. This created some continuity issues, but the original edit fixes them.

Back in the Gungan Battle, the music here lays completely unused in the film and unheard to most people as it's not available on the album.


From here we jump to the Hangar with "Battle for Naboo II." A lot of this sequence I had to cut, which stands to reason why they use different music in the film: so they could extend it. I wasn't quite sure how this music was meant to go as they got into their ships but when you get to the moment where the ship gets hit by the laser blast and falls to the ground below, I knew that I'd gotten it at least mostly right.

The music then jumps around and shows us on the bridge of the droid control ship, as the attendant is being told to activate the droids. The music here is quite different than what's heard in the film obviously as we just talked about that. Most won't recognize this music either as it's not released.

One of the many things I ended up having to do was reincorporate many unused shots including one here as the starfighters come up from the bottom of the screen towards the Droid Control ship. This music then segues into "Hangar Battle," as the ships begin dog fighting in space.

Another shot is of the starfighter being hit by enemy fire and falling down away from the camera. (notice the cymbol crash as it gets hit).

The film cuts back to the hangar as the group walked towards the door which opens, revealing Darth Maul. Here is where most people might get confused. In the film, we're use to hearing the choir begin singing Duel of the Fates. In the original, however, we arn't sure if they were suppose to. There isn't much space for them to, and from the score we've discovered, it doesn't appear that they did.

Star Wars: Battle for Naboo Re-Edit Part II

This second video begins with "The Duel Begins." You'll notice as the sequence begins, there is no music. Some argue that there must have been music for this but if there is, I have yet to find it.

As "The Duel Begins," listen for the two horn notes as the Jedi open their lightsabers. Also notice the exchange between the flute and the horns with the Duel of the Fates motif as the camera angles change, jumping between Maul and Obi-Wan. Agian, I had to incorporate some unused footage, but because of the limitations of the program I had, I was unable to incorporate it properly.

This then cuts to the group being held up by the Droidikas. The cue "Anakin Takes Off" begins. This predominately how it is in the film except for some minor switching around of shots.

Listen for the little moments that match up such as when the fighter gets hit by the laser blast and the flutes fly up. Then the timpani accent the beats as Anakin activates the fighter, it begins to ascend, and as the shots change (this is how it is in the film).

In the film, some of the shots are extended, such as Padme and the group running down the hall, and as such, the music is looped in the film. I shortened them to replace the music as it had been intended.

The transition to "Duel of the Fates" is a bit of a mystery. No Duel of the Fates recording has surfaced that seems to match this short battle so it is believed that a fully orchestrated version of Duel of the Fates found, just like the album version but with extra percussion and notation, was to be edited over this fighting as seen here.

Notice the extra cymbal crashes and flourishes. This is exactly like how it is in the film, except a different Recording.

This then cuts to the Gungan Battle. The question becomes "What were the droids doing all this time?" It's hard to say. The pacing of the three battles was so much, that it becomes hard to get any editing done in such a manner that is shows what needs to be shown, but also does what needs to be done without stretching too much of the battles.

In making these edits, I noticed that almost ALL of Jar Jar's lines and stunts were completely removed. It would seem that a great deal of the Gungan Battle was not in the original edit and for that reason, plus the pacing, it's possible th Lucas went back and completely re-edited this sequence. He speaks on the DVD about how difficult editing the three sequences together was, that there were several versions and that he exploited Jar Jar and his "bumbler"-ness to tell more of the story of the Gungan's so it would seem this part to be true as well.

The next cue is "Battle for Naboo III." It took me a while to figure out how this cue was meant, but once I re-inserted an unused bit from the battle between the Jedi and Maul, I realized exactly how it was at least meant to start off. I love how the instruments really bring out the motions of Maul's lightsaber. The spinning action, as it hits the Obi-Wan's saber. And even as Maul jumps up to the second level it works really well. I'm sure there was probably more to that shot, but no more has been released so I couldn't do anything but cut to the next shot.

The script, unfortunately, was of little to no help in these chances as the script available was pretty close to whats seen in the film and not what the previous edits had been.

The battle then jumps to the hallway battle between the droids and Amidala and her group. In the script, though, it described this as not being split up as seen in the film. Padme says to Panaka "We don't have time for this, Captain." He then says "I have an idea," and looked to the window and explodes it open. In the film, the scene is split in two and put inbetween more of the space battle. Here I edited it together and it worked wonderfully.

The film then cuts to Anakin in space getting close to the battle, then back to the gungan battle. I shorten most of that cut though.

Then we're back in space as the squadron spins into the deflector shield. In the film, this music does accompany this but again, is slightly pushed off the mark. If you watch in my edit, the first boom of the timpani hits as one of the fights explodes, then you see the others shoot their bombs, hitting dome and the dish and exploding with further "booms" from the timpani. Also that matched up because of this, when Anakin's controls are released, the orchestra flares with the change in color on the controls.

Also, as one of the enemy fights explodes as it hits a pylon, the cymbals crash as well.

Then as we're back in the hall way, Padme turns to Panaka who blows the window while the orchestra flares. The music in the film here is synced a bit differently as I said, but this seems to be the way the music was intended.

Star Wars: Battle for Naboo Part III

In this final video, we begin with "The Great Battle." Seen being recorded on the DVD, this cue is not used in the film. Instead, an edit of Duel of the Fates takes its place.

This cue plays until the three become trapped by the force fields. Then the cue "The Invisible Wall" begins.

The next shot, we jump to "Gungan Retreat." Again, much of the Gungan battle is underplayed in the film. Perhaps seen as unimportant and merely a decoy in the original, it really left a lot of the story about the Gungans out. As stated in the Pod Racing video, the film version of this utilizes the tracked cue "Pod Racing," but without the tatooine percussion. It allows for the extending of the sequence past this short insert.

The next scene takes us to where we left off from Padme and her group. Notice the statue in the background? It looks to have been added latter as in the next shot, taken from a bit latter in the film (but according to the released script would have been the next) it is no longer present. This is perhaps to give the illusion of them having traveled further by simply removing the statue and saying "they're in a different hall now."

This next cue is "Anakin's Crash Landing," After Padme and her group are captured, it jumps to Anakin being grazed in his ship and crash landing in the hangar of the Droid Control Ship.

The next cue "Qui-Gon's Death (Original)," is the album take on the cue "Qui-Gon's Death." The film version has many different things layered in to try to spruce up what John Williams had. As you'll notice, only the strings and the choir whispers are present as Maul and Qui-Gon battle, but in the film, tracked winds and other slight percussion is tracked in, filling in more of the sound which would have been slightly empty.

This is a more modern practice. The didn't use to be able to do this until recently when we started recording instrument sections, percussion and wind and such, all at once, but miked separately so they could be removed or isolated in a mix. Past that most of this music is how it is in the film.

As Padme is brought to the throne room, there is a small glitch, but when she gets her guns and manages to get the throne room to herself and the group, in the film, the music is looped to show her shooting more droids, but in the original edit it wasn't meant that way.

That is, as best as I can tell, how the original edit was meant. After recreating the original score from the video games, albums, dvd and such, and finding an incomplete cue list, we managed to figure out and deduce that this is what the original intent behind the Battle for Naboo was by John Williams, which required me to re-edit the film itself, otherwise I wouldn't have.

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And finally, my most recent edit that I just uploaded will by my final entry for now. If anyone has any other they think I should add, let me know. I have a few ideas floating around in my head from the OT and such that I'd like to try. If anyone has any ideas, let me know.

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume IX "Through the Flames" and the alternates to "Leia's News" and "Funeral Pyre for a Jedi"

In the film, after the death of Darth Vader, we cut to seeing Wedge and the Millennium Falcon getting to the Death Stars Main Reactor. In the film, the music for this moment is replaced with a much more foreboding, dark, and more solemn sounding piece tracked from Empire Strikes Back as Leia decides to turn around to get Luke from the Bottom of Cloud City. This is more somber than the fanfare originally intended for the scene.

Here I replace those first few moments.

Latter, we see Leia talking to Han, and revealing that she is Luke's sister. This version seems to highlight "He's my brother"much more than the film alternate because it moves more in this section rather than hanging onto the "re" note. Rather than stating simply Han and Leia's theme, it goes into a rendition of the Ewok theme as Wikit interrupts: the first welcomed interruption by someone.

We next see Luke burning what is left of Darth Vader. The film version is most similar, and is almost simply a lift of the film version of "Binary Sunset." Here, in this alternate, we hear a much grander version of the same theme, with completely different orchestrations and a melodically slightly longer version leading into the Ewok celebration.

The want for the changes are pretty much as stated. The transition from Anakin's death needed more time perhaps. Then the use of the Ewok theme was truly unnecessary and the Han and Leia theme worked fine in this moment. Then as Luke burned the body of his father, It's possible that Lucas wanted something with the melody of Binary Sunset. Williams original intent for Binary Sunset being different, he possibly felt that this might need an alternate and so decided to write two renditions using the same melody, but orchestrated differently.

Here is were you can view "Through the Flames" and Alternaes of "Leia's News" and "Funeral Pyre for a Jedi."

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Well, I hope you all enjoyed my break down. If you have any questions let me know. If there are any scenes you think I should do, I'd be welcome to hearing from you.

I thought you all might be interested in these changes and why they were made and be able to compare them for yourself and see which you feel you like more, in the end, giving us all more insight into the films we love.

Anyways, hope you all liked them, and there are more to come!
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#294082
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My Symphonic Forces Series (Released)
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Hey all.

I’ve been doing some edits for a while but I’ve never posted on here about them before. One of my favourite composers alive is John Williams. His ability to compose is second to none. I hope to one day be able to compose music that is thought of as fondly as his.

In my ever growing attempt to learn what he does (in essence apprentice myself to him from afar) I’ve been studying what he does, the decisions he makes, how he orchestrates those decisions, and just about everything I can learn about him musically speaking.

As my understanding of him grew, and I began to branch out from his albums into more curious areas of research like the actual scores themselves (because the album edits are just that, edits of the scores), I began to learn more. Certain tracks I was always curious about made me wonder where they came from and such.

For example, there was a cue on the Jurassic Park album that I never listened to, and ironically enough, it’s the track that Steven Spielberg specifically speaks about in his notes of the album. “Raptor Attack.” I never listened to it because it didn’t mean anything to me. It wasn’t in the film, it was mostly atonal and not really listen able.

As I began to study the Jurassic Park score, I realized that some of that cue was used in the film during the kitchen sequence, so I layered the rest of the cue over the film and viola! That’s where it was meant!..

And thus began my growing attempt to understand John Williams, his film presence, and the decisions made in post production with the films to better understand the entire process.

I made a few videos about Jurassic Park, but then I branched off into some other films like Star Wars.

I thought I’d make a thread, and talk about the videos, post links to them on from youtube, and allow you all to comment and talk about them here.

I know a few people have done this before, but when I started it I was completely unaware. I found a few of their videos and I have to say, I don’t think they really went to the full extent that I do in these.

I take the DVD’s, rip the video and the 5.1 audio, remove all the un-needed sound/music, and remix in the correct or alternate music.

So lets begin!
 


 

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces: Volume I "Binary Sunset"
 

What better way to begin this process than to look at one of the most iconic moments in Star Wars history.

To better understand this scene we have to look back to 1977 and John Williams career up to that point. John Williams was not the ever-day household name he is today. In 1977, John Williams had, however, done many scores, but most of them in television.

None had matched in the scope or wide acceptance that Star Wars would offer excluding perhaps the disaster flicks from several years earlier and the great “Jaws.”

Because of these factors, one might say that John Williams was still not entirely sure of himself or how best to fit the film musically.

One must also remember the changes that the film scores through John Williams career up to that point had gone through. The previous scores had been very small and intimate. Some were even very dated such as his score to “Daddy-O” or films with a jazz/beach boys like score lol. Then you had other films that called upon his jazz backgrounds but were more pure jazz such as “Cinderella Liberty.”

Again, excluding Jaws (the film that got him the recommendation for Star Wars) and a few other scores, John Williams had not scored many serious orchestral scores.

With all this in mind, John Williams ear, as wonderful as it was, saw/heard things differently than George’s.

When George heard the original composition for the scene Binary Sunset, he asked John for something else. John’s original piece was much more darker, and forebodings. It called upon no real thematic material, but rather upon raw emotions that Luke must have been feeling or sensing, or as an audience member, telling us that whatever Luke sees as his future, or wishes for his future, we know that it is much darker than he could realize. His loss of his only family, the moving into the cold loneliness of space, the dealing with the loss of a friend, fighting for the survival of all his new ones, and his eventual and unavoidable fate of dealing with the Empire and its dark Lord Vader.

Lucas, however, saw the scene as hopeful. Luke looked out to the suns and perhaps in his naive-ity, wished for things much greater. And it is this insight into the character–along with a grand statement of his theme–that Lucas wanted.

The Special Editions released by RCA in 1997 have a booklet and the booklet speaks to this:

Note: Ben’s Theme, The Force Theme, and Luke’s Theme are used interchangeably.

"The subsequent cue, Binary Sunset, begins with flutes playing Luke’s theme, with clarinet interjecting with a key change. Ben’s theme is used to accompany Luke as he gazes longingly at the desert planet’s twin sunset, beginning with French horn and soaring magnificently into full orchestra. Williams originally scored the scene with a darker, mysterious cue that did not utilize thematic material (see track 13). It was revised when George Lucas suggested that Ben’s theme would more effectively convey Luke’s dreams of leaving Tatooine. Three themes then round out the track: flutes briefly state the Rebel Fanfare, Luke’s theme returns with solo clarinet, and a flute/horn combination plays Ben’s theme, punctuated by celeste and chimes. "

Furthermore, the sequence of Luke leaving to go look at the setting suns, as well as the scenes after it, discovering that R2 has run away, are also orchestrated much darker as well.

Here, you can view the original “Binary Sunset.”
 


 

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces: Volume II "Pod Racing"
 

Perhaps not one of my better edits (as I had a lot of trouble ripping this, it kept ripping at a really really slooow speed and I tried to speed it up as much as possible but it never quite fit right, not to mention the original music protruding through).

From the first edit, we now go to Episode I.

For the first time in twenty years, Lucas and Williams return back to the Star Wars universe and bring us the tale of Anakin and his turn to the dark side.

One of the scenes Lucas most wanted was a “high speed race,” but being in Star Wars, it had to be alien yet familiar, so he created the pod races. Most of this sequence is without music up until the sabotage that Sebulba left on Anakin’s Pod-Racer begins to take effect.

The music in the film begins with the correct cue, “Sebulba’s Evil Deed,” but the second the piece of Anakin’s pod falls off, the cue is replaced with “Escape from Naboo.” This cue plays all the way until the two pods get connected, and then another cue is tracked in, “Gungan Escape” which then plays to it’s end, several tense moments before Anakin crosses the finish line.

Perhaps the best explanation for this change is those few moments without music. Williams original cues play all the way through and then segues into “Hail to the Winner.” In the film, those tense moments gives you a sort of “Wait? did he just? He did! HE’S GONNA–! HE WON!” sort of moment… where as the original Williams version you continue on with a sort of excitement of knowing he’s done it before he’s done it, which can often be a problem with film scores at times, telling you somethings going to happen before it happens. Imagine hearing the “Jaws theme” before he arrives. You know he’s there. Same sort of problem here.

(Ironically, “Gungan Retreat” is tracked to replace “Pod Racing,” (the cue right after “Sebulba’s Evil Deed”) and “Pod Racing” is latter tracked into the film to replace “Gungan Retreat.” This may also be another reason why. With the Battle for Naboo completely re-edited and restructured, the need for music to cover some of it was imperative. “Gungan Retreat” is much shorter than “Pod Racing,” so using “Pod Racing” instead was a simple answer.

The problem, however, is that Tatooine has a certain sound to it. There are two things musically usually used to signify Tatooine. One is this motif that plays as R2 and 3PO fall to Tatooine in the escape pod from the Tantive IV and also in Episode I as the Queen’s ship arrives at Tatooine. The second is a certain percussive sound that I call the “Tatooine Percussion.” First heard in A New Hope as the Tuscan Raiders attack Luke, this percussion in A New Hope consists primarily of tuned logs, slap sticks, and steel plates to create an appropriately savage sound. Here, some of that percussion is used again in a very similar motif to the beat used in A New Hope, but re-orchestrated of course without using the percussion as the center-piece like in A New Hope.

The problem then of course becomes what to do about the percussion. Well, modern recording processes have changed greatly since 1977. The percussive tracks of any recording can be tracked in and out at will. (Did you know, for example, that Escape from Naboo had a much more active percussive track, as did Arrival at Coruscant. Both are all but tracked out and minimized.)

In doing so, you create alternates (hence why my set lists the alternates as percussive alternates and the others as “Tatooine Percussion.”

Here, you can view the original intended usage of the two cues “Sebulba’s Evil Deed” and “Pod Racing Complete”

PS: Sorry about the occasional moments where the original sound comes through. This was back before I had the great programs I have now heh.
 


 

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume III "The Arena"
 

Jumping now from Episode I to Episode II, “The Arena” is perhaps one of the most sought after changes to Episode II.

The reasons for this change are explained a bit in the DVD to Episode II. Ben Burt, sound designer and head editor of sound for the 6 films is somewhat notorious in John Williams circles.

Ever since the release of the Special Edition films, his name has circulated with a bit of a stigma. One of the biggest changes made to A New Hope, was the 90% tracked out fanfare as the Rebels begin to turn into the Death Star trench. Many fans, when watching the new version of the film were appalled by this change that seemingly occurred for no reason except perhaps to highlight the SFX of the newly re-done shots.

In Episode II, Ben Burtt experimented with creating a “music sound” of his own, utilizing all sorts of sounds. This was originally meant to accompany the Factory scene which Burtt was really excited to work on because from a sound effects level, this would be the apex of sound design.

Ultimately, Lucas decided to ask Williams to record a cue (quite late in the game) to use for this moment in the film. Most of the music was unused and edited past recognition, but the damage perhaps had been done.

Burtt then fought to use his percussive sounds in a different scene: The Arena.

In the end we know what won. Most of the Arena sequence didn’t use score. Instead, if you watch the film and listen carefully, you can hear the crowd noises and the percussive beats of unknown percussion.

Also, with the removal of the music, Lucas was able to go back and re-edit some of the sequence, extending and shortening certain moments.

Interesting side note: some of this cue is unavailable and isn’t on the album, however this should replace the original music with only minor edits.

Here, I have gone back and replaced the music in the mix so you can hear how “The Arena” was meant to sound.
 


 

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume IV "Boys Into Battle"
 

Perhaps one of the first things I noticed when I saw Episode III for the first time was the missing intro to “Boys Into Battle,” or “Battle over Coruscant” as some call it. On the album, as the Opening Credits finish, there is a loud fanfare of activity which then goes into a percussive rendition of the theme from Star Wars.

Like the last video, simple percussion is used instead of the full music by John Williams. The removal of the transition leaves the scene rather quiet and instead of the full orchestra, they do a complete opposite of removal of the percussion in “Pod Racing” and remove the orchestra, all but two loud Taiko drums from the cue give a beat until the music is tracked back in after the two jedi fighters fly by.

The tracking out of the music gives the sequence a much more “What’s going on?” feel than it would if John Williams original music had been left in. The length of the missing music is rather short, but the change is quite powerful.

This is where you can view “Boys Into Battle”.
 


 

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume V “General Grevious” and "The Elevator Scene"
 

This next video from Episode III highlights two other scenes meant to have music accompany them but were ultimately left without music (or at least most).

After I made this video, it was brought to light that the music that accompanied the landing of Obi-Wan and Anakin in the hangar of the Invisible Hand was also different.

In the film, you hear most of the cue “Get 'em R2” which has the Rebel Fanfare in it. The film, then edits most of the rest of the cue out, and instead jumps to a bit of music from the end of the cue, then to a bit of music from the scene itself and finishes off with music that was meant to be latter, as Obi-Wan and Anakin head off into the Invisible hand. Most of the second half of this cue is unreleased and completely unheard except for a few moments in the film. The last minute or so of the cue, however IS available. Had I known that the music was meant to accompany the scene from when Obi-Wan asks R2 to find the Chancellor up to when they give R2 the communicator, the video would have started earlier.

If you’d like to view that, I have it in the first few moments of my edit of Count Dooku’s death in my Episode III re-edit thread.

This video, however, starts from when General Grevious is first introduced in the film. The film, however, limits the usage of his theme and simply ends it very promptly after a single statement, once he begins to talk. The cue itself is partially heard on the album, but for the most part is unreleased (except in video games).

This cue finishes in the video. There is some controversy over the shot between these two scenes when R2 sees the two Battle Droids enter the hangar. This may or may not have been in the original edit.

The next sequence is “The Elevator Scene.” This video presents the Album alternate of this cue. There are two versions: one as heard on the album, and one that has some extra percussion in the beginning. In my Count Dooku’s Death re-edit video, you hear the latter of the two.

This video, however, preserves the original Album version of the cue. It’s possible, however, that the percussive version was meant to be the one used as most of the cues in the beginning of the film use a great deal of snare drums and other percussive instruments, highlighting the military-esque aspect of this section of the film.

Here is where you can view “General Grevious” and “The Elevator Scene.”
 


 

STAR WARS Symphonic Forces Volume VI "Grevious Flees"
 

Coming Soon! hehe… I’ve got too many of these to do at the moment… But I thought I’d post this now…

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#293707
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Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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oh yes, lol... I meant to comment on those lol

Gernally I like the idea you're going for. Afew of the shots I don't like but it's persona choice. Like the shot of anakin lying down watching what's going on with Obi-Wan. It always felt like a waste of time.

I like the idea of intercutting between Obi-wan jumping back up and taking out the droids, and Anakin and Dooku battling up the stairs... good idea lol.

I like how this video starts. If only the expression of Palpatines face were a bit different lol.

The flipped shot of them fighting was a good idea. It works well and seems fresh. I actually had to do a double take becuase I thought it was a shot I hadn't seen before... but then I realized the table was in the wrong place... that's the only thing really heh

I think I like the seduction one better... simply becuase it seems... more concise...and works well. The remorse one first is a good idea... but it cuts awkwardly from Anakin breathing to him walking back and such...

Some cool ideas though heh
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#293699
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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Lol... I only thought about cutting his line because I didn't understand it... but it was explained that maybe it was becuase he feared loosing Padme...

I guess that makes sense... if he was dreaming about her dying for a while.... but if it was just that night, the why would he fear loosing her yet?...

I dunno,I'm wondering about that whole thing lol... I'll leave it.

I'm gonna play around with the killing of adooku a but I think... some of the shots are sped up too much and I think it could be a bit better.

The thing I wonder is...WHY is anakin making such a strained face when he kills dooku??

Lightsabers cut through anything...with EASE....and he's using TWO! lol... why does he have to make a strained face at all? It should just but slice... done... walk awaylol..

I guess it's why I wanted to really add that yell there... so that the face connected to something ...something more tangible and...well.. .accurate lol
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#293688
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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See, that's the thing.

If you listen to the Audio commentary, Lukas wanted to include something that showed off R2 becuase it was really the first chance that they could do almost anything with him...

They tried to make him look cool, and show he could take care of himself as marvolo said, by doing the scene.

Thinking further on it, it presents a large problem. If I remove that portion, then I'd probably have to remove all the shots to R2 still in the hangar. If I did that, then we might wonder why R2 wasn't responding to Obi-Wans summoning. .. so I may end up leaving it... although I see both of your points about the scene...

I kinda explain in another thread that Episode I is split into three sections.

Part I is most like Episode I in its jovial, good guys being good and happy portion of the film.

Part II is most like Episode II and is about the Love relationship between Anakin and Padme.

Part III is the dark part where Anakin Turns and then setting up the for Episode IV.

As such, some parts in Episode I and Part on of Episode III seem somewhat jovial and this is just that. In the commentary Lukas states that it was really the only time he could do something with R2, which he wanted to do badly and felt the fans would want. He wanted to do something with him before it got dark and the tone changed which would then render it inappropriate.
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#293681
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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I might remove it.... I kinda like it... I know I laughed in the threatre...

It's not a flame thrower btw... it's his rocket boosters. He coated them in oil, and then turned them on to float away, they had the deleterious effect of igniting the oil and setting the two on fire ... which was the intent... heh

I dunno...I always liked it heh... but you are right about slowing down the action...I left it on the beginning of these clips because when I zoom out on my editing program to select a region, I couldn't quite tell if I was getting it all, so I was adding a few seconds before and after the fight lol...
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#293660
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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Well all, I'm working on another Dooku edit. People really seemed to like what I did before but I've seen some good ideas out there and thought I'd try them.

For one I tried to remove the backflip and simply use him jumping. I also saw someone took the Dooku fight and had added some music from Episode II to it and I thought "Well, that kinda does something interesting for the fight.

I did notice something about the fight... there is just something all around odd about it. It's placement is odd... it's tone is strange... it's on-again-off-again fighting style is REALLY weird...

I added the music but I'm not sure which I prefer more. The other videos I had layered "Entrance of Dooku" lightly underneath just to keep a subtle ambiance... but past that I never put music in the dooku battle.

Anyways, I also thought about that one moment right near the end where the two get push off from each-other...it creates quite the delay... so I have made an edit without those few seconds just to see if I could keep the action going.

Also, to heighten the sense of Anakin's Anger, I placed a couple yells into the fight. two after Dooku says "You have hate, you have anger. But you don't use them." one is a long roar, and the second comes right after it giving it a nice "Raaaa-AH!" sound... as if dooku's lines might have done something...made him tap into the anger....

Also, when he actually severs Dooku's head, I added another yell.

Also, I removed that shot I wasn't happy with right after Palpatines line "It is only natural." Instead, I placed a shot of anakin, and moved the next shot forward. I split the next shot in half. The first half you simply hear under the new angle, and the second half you see and hear.

You'll see...

Anyways let me know what you all think. With or without music? With or without the moans? I also inserted a shot of Palpatine before Dooku force pushes Obi-Wan just to offset it slightly. DOes it work? Any ideas with that?

Here is WITH new music:

Dooku V4 - WITH music

Here is the same thing without the new music:

Dooku V4 v2 - WITHOUT music


EDIT:

I've kinda decided I like it without the music. I think I've finally figured out what's so odd about the first half of the fight... it's not really a fight at all... it's just a way to get them to talk... to state a few things...how things have changed... a set up for the second half of the fight which is the REAL fight... having music over the first half seems... out of place...

I'm also wondering about cuting the line "I sense great fear in you Skywalker." I'm thinking of maybe just having it jump to him saying "You have hate...anger... but you don't use them." I think it will be more powerful that way.
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#293659
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Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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hehe... I'm glad you've come to see the darkside--er I mean the Light :-p

Anyways, I thought I might post these in here since we are still kinda talking about Dooku here... I would also encourage anyone who's interested in my edits to go to the thread I made My Episode III re-edit. Shameless plugging aside lol...

Anyways, I saw someone took the Dooku fight and had added some music from Episode II to it and I thought "Well, that kinda does something interesting for the fight.

I did notice something about the fight... there is just something all around odd about it. It's placement is odd... it's tone is strange... it's on-again-off-again fighting style is REALLY weird...

I added the music but I'm not sure which I prefer more. The other videos I had layered "Entrance of Dooku" lightly underneath just to keep a subtle ambiance... but past that I never put music in the dooku battle.

Anyways, I also thought about that one moment right near the end where the two get push off from each-other...it creates quite the delay... so I have made an edit without those few seconds just to see if I could keep the action going.

Also, to heighten the sense of Anakin's Anger, I placed a couple yells into the fight. two after Dooku says "You have hate, you have anger. But you don't use them." one is a long roar, and the second comes right after it giving it a nice "Raaaa-AH!" sound... as if dooku's lines might have done something...made him tap into the anger....

Also, when he actually severs Dooku's head, I added another yell.

Also, I removed that shot I wasn't happy with right after Palpatines line "It is only natural." Instead, I placed a shot of anakin, and moved the next shot forward. I split the next shot in half. The first half you simply hear under the new angle, and the second half you see and hear.

You'll see...

Anyways let me know what you all think. With or without music? With or without the moans? I also inserted a shot of Palpatine before Dooku force pushes Obi-Wan just to offset it slightly. DOes it work? Any ideas with that?

Here is WITH new music:

Dooku V4 - WITH music

Here is the same thing without the new music:

Dooku V4 v2 - WITHOUT music

EDIT:

I've kinda decided I like it without the music. I think I've finally figured out what's so odd about the first half of the fight... it's not really a fight at all... it's just a way to get them to talk... to state a few things...how things have changed... a set up for the second half of the fight which is the REAL fight... having music over the first half seems... out of place...

I'm also wondering about cuting the line "I sense great fear in you Skywalker." I'm thinking of maybe just having it jump to him saying "You have hate...anger... but you don't use them." I think it will be more powerful that way.
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#293524
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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Hey all...

I did an edit of the End Sequence... and as I did it , some more ideas came to mind so I ended up creating two versions... neither is complete. Both have errors... but both have some good ideas...

I'd like you all to watch parts 1-3, then these videos because these videos are short... and if you watch them alone, sometimes they can feel very short... so watching them in sequence will help give some better ideas of how they'd fit together.

Also, there are a TON of edits in both of these...far too many to mention here. I'd rather you watch and compare them yourselves. Tell me what ideas you like, what you don't. What stick out strong and what sticks out like a sore thumb. There are some errors in the videos...and the music isn't "finalized" but these are the general ideas.

If you have further ideas, let me know.

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First off, I'd like you to see the one that is what I had envisioned in my mind (I do recommend watching all of the other three before watching this one):

Part 4 Version 4

This one ends without the final sequence (it would be simliar to whats in the next video). My original idea was to have the tantive 4 cross across the final shot and then either fly towards the planet or be in orbit around Tatooine.

It became too difficult and I wasn't able to do what I wanted with my program so I decided to try another approach with that. (so if you like that idea and can help me, that would be appreciated. My program doesn't have rotoscoping ability. If I could simply completely remove the Tantive 4 from the surround shot of it arriving at Coruscant, I'd be able to do this shot).

In this video, Yoda's visions might need to be re-done as none of the visuals are that important. I'm thinking of maybe throwing some other shots in... perhaps some unused stuff from Episode III or some things from Episode IV.

Some of the shots are ripped from the other films. Two of naboo might need to have a filter added but I'm not sure how to do that on my program yet... I came up with an idea but I havn't tested it. If anyone knows how and could let me know...?

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This is the second version, much more like the version I did a while ago, but also has some new ideas and elements. I'd like to hear what you all think.

Please, watch Parts 1-3, then this video as well... and compare this one to the other one... I'd love to get some feedback on the ideas of where to put things.

I say to watch parts 1-3 first because this video is short and it feels to go by really fast and it helps if you watch them in sequence to get an idea of how they fit together.

Anyways, here is the other version:

Part 4 Version 5

Thanks!
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#293456
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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You know, I wondered what happened to my last thread myself... it appears that once it passes the third page mark in this forum it is pruned so lol

As for the changes... I was never sure I wanted to do them myself. I always like the subplot and it irked me it was removed... there's still another scene that was just Padme, Bail and Mothma talking... and it irks me that THAT'S not on the DVD...

What's worse is that ... it seems like they just kinda dumped the sturr on the DVD...

In the other dvd's, they FINISHED the deleted scenes and put them on the dvd... here, they mostly lay unfinished... which kinda annoys me.

As for the removal of Vader, I guess it was something that I was always unsure of...

The fan boy in everyone wanted to see Vader again... but going back and exploring the films and listening to the commentary and reading about the scenes and the inflections and what was going on... I have to say that I've gained a little more insight into what exactly Lucas wanted to capture and if there's one thing, the acting really did suffer in this film.

In the others, a lot of the problems with the acting I'm almost certain came from the fact that the films were re-edited soo much... it removed a lot of the acting and left strange leftovers of acting in parts that made no sense... like Anakin smiling in Episode II when he made Padme uncomfortable. Unless you've read the deleted scene, you don't understand why he should be smiling at all... and by all rights, he shouldn't be in the film edit because there was none of the humor of the filmed scene... but yet you see him smiling and it makes it really weird...

It's a bit annoying.

As far as Vader in this film... I think that removing it works for one big advantage...too much of the end of the film leaves you off where the next one starts... and in removing Vader, you also remove the Death Star... (you also remove the "Nooo!" lol)... you also remove Leia being brought to Alderan... (and since Yoda going to Dagobah is deleted anyways, you loose that as well).

What you're left with is a streamlined ending... that shows padme giving birth, dying, her funeral... and that takes you to Tatooine...and leaves Luke and Obi-Wan there... with none of the rest of that stuff...

It removes a lot of film time, and also alleviates a lot of the "Well, the next film starts right after this" feeling associated with it.

In a way, the deleted footage could almost be turned into another film itself... and in some ways should really be used as such... rather than as an ending sequence to Episode III.

A lot of them would be good to use either that way, or as flashbacks latter in the films... like in ROTJ... not to say I'm going to be doing that... lol but they make FAR more sense there than they do at the end of Episode III.

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#293455
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Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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I personally hadn't thought about it... Imean yea, it's obviously CG...

In the directors commentary you actually hear...I think it's Rick McCallum say "And that's actually Christopher Lee," I suppose poking fun at it lol

I never thought much about it... removing it is an idea... looking back and your edit, DarkHelmit, I can now see what you mean by removing it... It does kinda take away a little bit though...

In a way, I kinda like that it's in simply because it shows that he's not this frail old man... that he can still do things... although it's a bit dramatic to do that much lol...

If only there were another way to have him get down the stairs... without cutting away for so long...

Good points... and I'm glad you liked my edit :-p
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#293358
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My Episode III Re-Edit (v 2007) (Completed)
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Hey all…

As some of you are aware, I mostly have been posting in the Episode 3 Re-Edit thread… well, I decided to branch off becuase I felt I was really kinda taking over the thread and I felt somewhat bad for this.

I’ve decided to go back to Naboo–er… I mean…

I have decided I’d like to try my hand at re-editing Episode III… the entire film. Most of my edits would be little… if noticed at all.

Perhaps the biggest thing I’d like to change is the revelation of Anakin as Darth Vader (simply for continuity sake). This means changing a few lines here and there… which isn’t difficult… I had throught about uploading it to youtube, but I’m uncomfortable with the idea of uploading the whole movie to YouTube.

Currently, I have a few edits uploaded. So far, I’ve re-edited from “It Can’t Be” through to leaving Yoda’s visions. The final video is being worked on currently, but I also decided recently to try my hand at the Dooku Battle.

First off, I’d like to discuss changes I’d like to make:

  1. Removal of Anakin as Vader (again, mostly minor edits until the end).

  2. I’d like to trim the opening Battle and Bring in some small changes.

  3. I’d like to incorporate a lot of the unused Score as well as certain percussive alternates to the film versions.

  4. I’d like to incorporate some of the deleted scenes, namely the Loyalist/Rebellion underplot… it was entirely unnecessary to the film not only because it makes sense in the story, but also because without it, Padme almost doesn’t exist in the film and being the reason why Anakin turns, I believe it is crucially important that we understand her as well.

  5. The big change is the battle near the end. I’ve already finished these edits.

  6. I’ve played with Yoda Meditating to make it a conversation with Qui-Gon.

  7. I’m creating a shot of the arrival of the Tantive IV to Tatooine dropping off Obi-Wan, and the removal of any mention of Leia.

  8. Most of the other edits would be minor ones to speed up the film and correct pacing.


I’m interested in thoughts or ideas. Has anything been done like this before?

Also, If you’d like to see what I have done, you can view the videos here:

End Battle Re-Edit Part I

End Battle Re-Edit Part II

End Battle Re-Edit Part III

You can also view the dooku edit (what I’ve done so far) here:

Dooku Edit Version 3

Let me know your thoughts!