Bingowings said:
By slug tummies I direct you compare the upper curve of the small Ss with the lower curve. The upper curves are perfectly rounded but the lower curves have more of a point to them (all be it smoothed but still more angular than rounded). The P in Empire has a very strange droop to the curve to (compare it to the R and you will see what I mean).
These will stay the same, as they are present in the original logo for The Empire Strikes Back from 1979/1980, which I'm trying to replicate exactly. For the logo on the first page, I used the Astro font (Lucasfilm's official Star Wars font) and based the logo around the 1997 SE logo. For this one, I used an EPS of the original '79/'80 logo, and I've compared the two extensively (even overlaid the EPS on top of the actual logo on the poster) and they're 100% identical.
Bingowings said:
Look at the curve of the C in Back, can you see how the diagonal of the A makes the already off curve seem to bend up?
Also present in the original logo and will not be changed.
Bingowings said:
Kerning adjustments will help tweak the spacing between some of the letter forms too and help you avoid the crunching together thats very obvious in the ESB title it will also help prevent the clashing of close fitting uprights (like the vertical lines where the T in Strikes almost collide into the S and the R creating the illusion of a double width)
This I can do - I'll do my best to tweak the kerning so there aren't any "double-width" lines without compromising the look of the original logo.
Bingowings said:
Be warned it's really labour intensive work which is why some of the faults do (as you point out) turn up on official materials like posters because designers often can not arsed to do it right or don't think their audience will notice. Part of the problem is that the SE title designs were created to be seen with outlines filled in so the spaces between the letters were given more definition. Bear that in mind when you making outline only versions. In effect you are creating a totally new design because removing the coloured in sections you can no longer rely on them to iron out any clashes in the positoning of the letters.
Oh, I've discovered how labor intensive it can be. It's not fun stuff.
However, while some of these peculiarities in the ESB logo that you've pointed out may be due to laziness on the part of the original designer, they've been that way since 1979 and (to me, anyway) are as much a part of the "look" of the logo as anything else. "Fixing" the strange slope on the "P" in "Empire" and the weird "C" in "Back" would be just as bad, to me, as disconnecting the "ST" and "RS" in the Star Wars logo.
And the only one that's based on an SE design is Jedi, and I think that one turned out fairly successfully - one change I did make was to extend it vertically so the distance between the top and bottom of the logo (not counting the bottom of the "J") is the same as that of the SW and ESB logos. There is something funky about the bottom of the "J," but I've got a very long time to work out the kinks in that one.
Bingowings said:
Best of luck because this sort of work looks so easy until you actually try doing it and you have already done a much better job than many I've seen.
Thank you, that means a lot coming from someone who very clearly knows quite a bit about this stuff! I think these new ones are a huge improvement over the ones I did back in February.
Sumguy21 said:
I'd remove the curved edges.
Also, take a look at places where two stroked edges almost meet, such as the "H" and "E" in the word "THE" for the RotJ and STR in "STRIKES." They look a bit awkward, I'd consider moving them apart just a bit so they don't look like they flow into eachother so much. This also goes for the "A" and the "C" in "BACK."
Also take a look at the "E" in "THE" for ESB. I would remove the indentations for the "E" where the stroke tries to fill in the gaps in the letter.
The curved edges will be removed - I decided that last night after attempting (unsuccessfully) to animate the opening crawl for Star Wars and was quite unhappy with the way the rounded edges looked.
As I said above, I'll be working on the kerning to get rid of the "double" lines where letters are too close together.
Now as for the "E" in the ESB logo ... I can try making the "forks" of the E a little thinner so the outlines don't touch, but I'm not making any promises with that one. I'll see what I can do. I'm hoping it doesn't result in the need to make the "THE" (and thus the top bar of the "E" in Empire) bigger, but I'll see if I can improve it.
Now, one last thing - how's the yellow color on the logos? While animating the crawl (attempting to, anyway), I noticed that my yellow was a lot more yellow than the GOUT's logo (which is actually kind of greenish-yellow). And then I noticed while editing later that Adywan's ANH:R crawl was a lot less yellow than the GOUT's crawl - his was a bit more orange.
So any opinions on the color of the crawl/logo? (I'm still toying with the idea of blue for ESB and red for ROTJ, but as I'm working on SW for the moment I'm just asking about the yellow/orange style)
Oh, and a quick update, I'm now about 14 minutes into the film. So far I've had to speed up 4 Revisited shots by a few frames to match the GOUT - the first can be seen in the 7.5-minute WIP clip on YouTube, it's where Ady removed the jump cut when the door Threepio and Artoo walk through explodes (six frames missing due to jump cut removal), the second and third were the first two wipes in the movie (around ten frames or so missing from each during the wipes - not sure if this is a Revisited thing or an SE thing), and the third was a shot of Threepio in the desert that was missing one frame. None of these are noticeable - the audio sync of the mono mix during the jump-cut-door-explosion fix is a little off, but no one's said anything about it in regards to the YouTube video, so unless there are major objections to this method, I'll probably be keeping these sped-up shots.
And I've also decided that I'm replacing Ady's new canyon establishing shot with the SE version, as the only reason to keep the Revisited version would be for continuity with Episode II, which is completely useless with these edits as the prequels don't exist for their purposes.
Now I *really* need to find a way to rip the AVCHD SE on a Mac. Handbrake doesn't work. Anyone else got a suggestion? Please?