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#1225804
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Batman Forever : The Tim Burton Cut Ver.3
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About time I come back to this edit. I have something to say…

Now that I think it over, Ver. 1 of this edit seems, how you say, “Lighter and Softer”, in comparison to Ver. 2. Why do I say this?

Well, I listened to Ver. 2 more closely with my headphones a couple days ago, and the choices of Danny Elfman’s score in this case make the film sound much creepier than the actual film itself.

Now I’m not saying this is a disadvantage — because it’s totally not!

The music makes the film more enjoyable and reminicent to the Burton films, particularly to those who utterly despised the film or deemed it merely ‘unwatchable’ with most of Elliot Goldenthal’s score and the acting performances of the villains. Plus, the added creepiness should please fans of Batman Returns and the deleted footage works well in fixing some of the issues the film ended up with.

Overall, I love The Tim Burton Cut as much as others do. It works well in trimming the campy overtones and making the film seem darker and more to the point.

ThatGuyWhoEdits, don’t give up on Ver. 3! I’ve been working on my own cutlist for my edit of the film, and I think you’ll be in for a pleasant surprise once you see it!

Here’s something to get hyped for in the meantime: for the Two-Face introduction at The Second Bank of Gotham, I will be removing the lines “LUCK! Blind, stupid, simple, doo-dah, clueless LUCK!”, “…for YOU!” and “Or, in your case, beer and pizza!” to make the character seem less of a laughing goofball and more of a sinister foe. Lucas Caprucho’s comment on the “BFTTBC : Two-Face Revisited” concept video inspired me for this decision, and TGWE, may I suggest you do something similar! ^^

Plus, I’m thinking of adding a blood effect for when characters are gunned down. A certain Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince edit has achieved this challenge, and I believe I can do the same for BF.

And finally, I’ll leave TGWE with a suggestion: if you want, you can rename Ver. 3 of BFTTBC into “Batman Forever: The Tim Burton Cut - Revisited”. I think it’s a cool name for you to use. 😃

Wish me luck, everyone! And TGWE…

…stay gold. 😉

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#1200356
Topic
Batman Forever : The Tim Burton Cut Ver.3
Time

ThatGuyWhoEdits said:

Okay so it’s been a looooooooong time since i gave an update on my BF cut & well it’s not good.

For starters i went & tried to isolate some of the more explosive scenes in BF & see how the sound effects along with the vocals would come out after using the expanded soundtrack as the extraction & the results are pretty much the same as in my Ver.2 cut in fact they’re nearly identical even after applying the radio announcer effect.So i’m pretty much in a deep trench at the moment & contemplating whether or i should continue cause it’ll pretty much be my Ver.2 cut just with the bank scene included,Nygma during the stickly crime scene deleted,& just little snippets of the deleted scenes from my Un-Official director’s cut.

=/

You’re adding a radio announcer effect? Wow!

My advice: try messing around with Adobe Audition for a bit until you’re satisfied with the result.

And I hope you’ll be able to innovate with the colour correction.

Good luck!

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#1177850
Topic
Batman Forever : The Tim Burton Cut Ver.3
Time

Sounds like pretty good planning out you got there, Chris. What with the success of your UnOfficial Director’s Cut of the film, you’ll now have more deleted footage to add into the film. And if I may leave a few suggestions:

  1. For the 89-style opening sequence, have darkened clouds appear as a background over the “DIRECTED BY JOEL SCHUMACHER” credit, and have the credit fade out there.
  2. Remember in September last year with your Two-Face introduction concept video, the one that had the exterior shot at the end of the video of Gotham City with the Batsignal lit up in the sky? Use that.
  3. I think the idea to have city shots that look similar to Burton’s Gotham is a fantastic idea.
  4. I hope you can innovate with the new colour grade for this version of your most popular edit. 😃
  5. Hopefully your edit on the safe sequence will bring back memories of your old concept video on Vimeo.

Share your thoughts on my ideas for your edit and good luck! ^^

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#1167043
Topic
ANDREAS presents: Prisoner of Azkaban & Order of the Phoenix [REVISITED]
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Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Truth be told, the scene at the staircase never really worked for me.

But why? Line delivery? Behaviour? I’m eager to know.

Does anyone else find this scene bad?

Well, the scene played out a little weak to me. I guess a little more could’ve been added to that short moment before Harry leaves. Plus, a rather unnecessary mention of Hogwarts’ restriction of underage wizardry.

I completely understand if you feel you want to leave this scene in. It’s only my suggestion.

Hmm, interesting. I’m not against you, but I’m not sure I’m entirely with you either. I like the scene - I think it creates some extra tension and show some character growth, standing up for himself, and also depicts all the emotions coming with puberty.

I agree with you that it’s short - perhaps a bit redundant, and I can’t help but feel that a lot of stuff was left on the cutting room floor.

Completely understood.

Also, I believe you said you’ll be adding a few deleted scenes to the film. Care to enlighten?

All the ones there are, with the help of JJPotter’s amazing restructure of them.

Well, JJ used a stellar spinning background for the Knight Bus deleted scene, mayhaps you could ask him where he got such a background. ^^

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#1166049
Topic
ANDREAS presents: Prisoner of Azkaban & Order of the Phoenix [REVISITED]
Time

Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Truth be told, the scene at the staircase never really worked for me.

But why? Line delivery? Behaviour? I’m eager to know.

Does anyone else find this scene bad?

Well, the scene played out a little weak to me. I guess a little more could’ve been added to that short moment before Harry leaves. Plus, a rather unnecessary mention of Hogwarts’ restriction of underage wizardry.

I completely understand if you feel you want to leave this scene in. It’s only my suggestion.

Hmm, interesting. I’m not against you, but I’m not sure I’m entirely with you either. I like the scene - I think it creates some extra tension and show some character growth, standing up for himself, and also depicts all the emotions coming with puberty.

I agree with you that it’s short - perhaps a bit redundant, and I can’t help but feel that a lot of stuff was left on the cutting room floor.

Completely understood.

Also, I believe you said you’ll be adding a few deleted scenes to the film. Care to enlighten?

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#1165690
Topic
ANDREAS presents: Prisoner of Azkaban & Order of the Phoenix [REVISITED]
Time

Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Truth be told, the scene at the staircase never really worked for me.

But why? Line delivery? Behaviour? I’m eager to know.

Does anyone else find this scene bad?

Well, the scene played out a little weak to me. I guess a little more could’ve been added to that short moment before Harry leaves. Plus, a rather unnecessary mention of Hogwarts’ restriction of underage wizardry.

I completely understand if you feel you want to leave this scene in. It’s only my suggestion.

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#1153090
Topic
A Special Announcement from CamSMurph!
Time

Hey guys. It’s me again. I’ve come to give an announcement regarding my Batman Forever re-edit.

Now, recently I’ve joined the SuperHeroHype Forums, and following a suggestion from a fellow user on the forums named “Dark Raven”, I’ve come to a conclusion.

Batman Forever: Bigger, Battier and Better is now…

Forever Noir!

Now, what are the specs behind this marvellous change, you ask?

Well, basically it’s the same intention as Bigger, Battier and Better, only in a Logan Noir-styled fashion.

The source material will be presented entirely in black and white for that convincing ‘period’ feel. Plus, I will be mixing Hans Zimmer’s score from The Dark Knight and Batman v Superman with the original soundtrack by Elliot Goldenthal.

Now go here to the forum on the SHH site for a look at my new, revised cutlist: http://forums.superherohype.com/showthread.php?t=537703

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#1153080
Topic
Batman Forever : The Un-Official Director's Cut
Time

Just saw it, and by far, it looks great! 😄

I enjoyed the tweaks you made to the deleted footage, and couldn’t help but notice a few differences.

You seem to have excised Two-Face’s laughter after he flips his coin in the helicopter, and I see you’ve added the panning shot of Arkham from the U2 music video (you forgot to add that to your list).

Nice job! 😃

Overall, I give version 2 a 9.5/10.

Hopefully this year, you can go back to your Tim Burton edit of the film. 😉

Oh, just to let you know for the future, there are a couple of shots from the U2 music video (which I indeed will be using for my edit), featuring an alternate shot of the bat flying towards the camera, and one including an alternate angle of Batman staring at the Statue of Liberty.

Right now, I don’t see any possibility of you using those shots now that you’ve completed work on the current version, but I thought I’d just let you know in case you do.

So that’s my review, and feel free to reply asap. 😃

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#1152096
Topic
Batman Forever : The Un-Official Director's Cut
Time

Good luck on your revised edit! 😃

Oh, and just in case you forget, be sure to include these shots from th U2 music video:
-Extended shot of the bat flying towards the camera
-Extra shot of the helicopter approaching the Statue of Liberty (I presume this may be difficult for you to implement, but try your best)
-Alternate panning shot of Arkham Asylum

Hope this helps! 😄

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#1141764
Topic
Batman Forever - Dark Knight Edition
Time

Nice idea there, TGWE. I know it’s only been a few days since you’ve signed up on this site, but you never stop running out of snappy ideas relating to the fanediting universe. If you ask me, I believe there is someone out there who has been hoarding information for years on end about the Dark Knight Edition. This edit is said to be one of the most professional fan edits across the globe. So, if anyone has any information on this edit, PM me or TGWE.

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#1120578
Topic
Batman Forever: Bigger, Battier, & Better
Time

The Ritty said:

CamSMurph said:

Last time, I shared with you all my ideas for a Batman & Robin recut.

Today, I’m here to announce…

…that I’ve begun development on a another Batman fan edit.

The Batman film, in question?

Batman Forever.

I’ve already discussed this through my buds over on the fanedit.org forums, and overall, they seem to appreciate the idea.

Here is my proposed cutslist:

  1. CG Warner Bros. logo.
  2. Arkham Asylum new opening.
  3. Opening titles sequence, matching that of Batman '89 and Returns.
  4. Wayne Enterprises exterior shot.
  5. Bruce Wayne meets Edward Nygma.
  6. Suit-up sequence.
  7. Alfred’s “Can I persuade you to take a sandwich with you, sir?” and Batman’s “I’ll get drive-thru” replaced with “Do try and bring this one back in one piece, sir” from B&R.
  8. Two-Face introduction.
  9. Batman and Chase introduction. Cut Chase’s “hot entrance”.
  10. Batman’s first fight. Alternate angles and extra dialogue.
  11. Bank vault escape. Cut the guard’s moaning, including “Hey! That’s my hearing aid!” and “My shoes are melting!”. Added brief alternate angle of Batman aiming his grappling gun.
  12. Helicopter fight. “This’ll fix him!” replaced with “If the Bat wants to play, we’ll play!”. Reinserted extended fight between Batman and Two-Face.
  13. Cut Two-Face’s parachute.
  14. Added flashbacks from B89 to the underwater shot.
  15. Nygma experiments on Mr. Stickley. His “game show” and surfing gags are cut.
  16. Bruce watches GNN news report and goes to Wayne Enterprises for the investigation. Gordon’s “Yep, definitely suicide” is cut.
  17. “Bad Days” by The Flaming Lips is retained.
  18. Edward plants the second riddle at Wayne Manor. His “Wayne Manor…” and “Hmph!” are cut.
  19. Bruce arrives at Chase’s study and asks her out to the circus.
  20. Circus raid plays out mostly the same. Gossip Gerty’s lines are cut.
  21. Bruce takes Dick in as a ward. Clips from B89 added to the Flashback sequence.
  22. Batman meets Chase on the rooftop. Chase’s “Last night at the bank I noticed something about Two-Face” is shortened. Batman’s “It’s the car, right? Chicks love the car” is cut.
  23. Entire car chase between Batman and Two-Face is gone.
  24. Bruce checks up on Dick at the gym.
  25. Edward becomes the Riddler. His “Question Mark Man?” is cut.
  26. Riddler and Two-Face team up.
  27. Casino heist sequences removed.
  28. Dick helps Alfred with the washing.
  29. Batman ends up at the beauty salon.
  30. Riddler and Two-Face escape with the jewels.
  31. Bruce and Alfred solve the third riddle.
  32. Nygmatech press conference. Montage of Two-Face and Riddler taking hits from the box is cut.
  33. Dick discovers the Batcave.
  34. Chase gives Bruce a present.
  35. Dick’s drive in the Batmobile is maintained. It brings wit and charm to the film.
  36. Bruce’s “terrible morning” speech now features cameos from Returns.
  37. Nygmatech party. U2’s “Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me, Kill Me” plays during the party. Edward and Two-Face’s bickering about whose entrance was better is cut. Alternate angles of Batman’s fight are added.
  38. Batman’s close encounter with Death at the abandoned subway station.
  39. Bruce and Dick at the Batcave. Bruce watches the GNN news report and contemplates on his parents’ wake.
  40. Batman arrives at Chase’s apartment.
  41. “Bats on the Brain” scene at the Riddler’s lair altered.
  42. Bruce quits as Batman.
  43. Chase comes over for dinner.
  44. Bruce tells Chase about his childhood fears.
  45. Two-Face and Riddler’s raid on Wanye Manor. Two-Face’s first flip is cut.
  46. The giant bat scene plays out as Bruce’s nightmare.
  47. Bruce wakes up.
  48. Chase chained to the couch.
  49. Bruce and Alfred solve the final riddle.
  50. Batman suits up, sans butt shot.
  51. Robin and Batman team up.
  52. The climax plays out mostly the same. Robin’s 60’s Batman reference remains. Riddler’s “Was that OTT? I can never tell” and “Bummer!” are cut.
  53. Two-Face’s death at the capable hands of Batman.
  54. Edward is taken to Arkham.
  55. Batman and Chase kiss outside the asylum.
  56. New Burton-style ending.
  57. Michael Gough and Pat Hingle dedication cards.
  58. End credits.
  59. New closing logos.

So, have any suggestions? Feel free to leave them below. 😃

I’ll watch! I started my own 2 weeks ago and gave up lol I agree with a lot of the cuts like the hot entrance the sandwhich line… I think personally I gave up when we got to twoface lair with sugar and spice… Is it available to watch? Thanks.

Actually, I’ve yet to start editing. I think you should press forward with tour cut or start again from scratch. Now talk to me: what conflict do you have with the scene in Riddler’s lair?

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#1115809
Topic
Batman Forever: Bigger, Battier, & Better
Time

Last time, I shared with you all my ideas for a Batman & Robin recut.

Today, I’m here to announce…

…that I’ve begun development on a another Batman fan edit.

The Batman film, in question?

Batman Forever.

I’ve already discussed this through my buds over on the fanedit.org forums, and overall, they seem to appreciate the idea.

Here is my proposed cutslist:

  1. CG Warner Bros. logo.
  2. Arkham Asylum new opening.
  3. Opening titles sequence, matching that of Batman '89 and Returns.
  4. Wayne Enterprises exterior shot.
  5. Bruce Wayne meets Edward Nygma.
  6. Suit-up sequence.
  7. Alfred’s “Can I persuade you to take a sandwich with you, sir?” and Batman’s “I’ll get drive-thru” replaced with “Do try and bring this one back in one piece, sir” from B&R.
  8. Two-Face introduction.
  9. Batman and Chase introduction. Cut Chase’s “hot entrance”.
  10. Batman’s first fight. Alternate angles and extra dialogue.
  11. Bank vault escape. Cut the guard’s moaning, including “Hey! That’s my hearing aid!” and “My shoes are melting!”. Added brief alternate angle of Batman aiming his grappling gun.
  12. Helicopter fight. “This’ll fix him!” replaced with “If the Bat wants to play, we’ll play!”. Reinserted extended fight between Batman and Two-Face.
  13. Cut Two-Face’s parachute.
  14. Added flashbacks from B89 to the underwater shot.
  15. Nygma experiments on Mr. Stickley. His “game show” and surfing gags are cut.
  16. Bruce watches GNN news report and goes to Wayne Enterprises for the investigation. Gordon’s “Yep, definitely suicide” is cut.
  17. “Bad Days” by The Flaming Lips is retained.
  18. Edward plants the second riddle at Wayne Manor. His “Wayne Manor…” and “Hmph!” are cut.
  19. Bruce arrives at Chase’s study and asks her out to the circus.
  20. Circus raid plays out mostly the same. Gossip Gerty’s lines are cut.
  21. Bruce takes Dick in as a ward. Clips from B89 added to the Flashback sequence.
  22. Batman meets Chase on the rooftop. Chase’s “Last night at the bank I noticed something about Two-Face” is shortened. Batman’s “It’s the car, right? Chicks love the car” is cut.
  23. Entire car chase between Batman and Two-Face is gone.
  24. Bruce checks up on Dick at the gym.
  25. Edward becomes the Riddler. His “Question Mark Man?” is cut.
  26. Riddler and Two-Face team up.
  27. Casino heist sequences removed.
  28. Dick helps Alfred with the washing.
  29. Batman ends up at the beauty salon.
  30. Riddler and Two-Face escape with the jewels.
  31. Bruce and Alfred solve the third riddle.
  32. Nygmatech press conference. Montage of Two-Face and Riddler taking hits from the box is cut.
  33. Dick discovers the Batcave.
  34. Chase gives Bruce a present.
  35. Dick’s drive in the Batmobile is maintained. It brings wit and charm to the film.
  36. Bruce’s “terrible morning” speech now features cameos from Returns.
  37. Nygmatech party. U2’s “Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me, Kill Me” plays during the party. Edward and Two-Face’s bickering about whose entrance was better is cut. Alternate angles of Batman’s fight are added.
  38. Batman’s close encounter with Death at the abandoned subway station.
  39. Bruce and Dick at the Batcave. Bruce watches the GNN news report and contemplates on his parents’ wake.
  40. Batman arrives at Chase’s apartment.
  41. “Bats on the Brain” scene at the Riddler’s lair altered.
  42. Bruce quits as Batman.
  43. Chase comes over for dinner.
  44. Bruce tells Chase about his childhood fears.
  45. Two-Face and Riddler’s raid on Wanye Manor. Two-Face’s first flip is cut.
  46. The giant bat scene plays out as Bruce’s nightmare.
  47. Bruce wakes up.
  48. Chase chained to the couch.
  49. Bruce and Alfred solve the final riddle.
  50. Batman suits up, sans butt shot.
  51. Robin and Batman team up.
  52. The climax plays out mostly the same. Robin’s 60’s Batman reference remains. Riddler’s “Was that OTT? I can never tell” and “Bummer!” are cut.
  53. Two-Face’s death at the capable hands of Batman.
  54. Edward is taken to Arkham.
  55. Batman and Chase kiss outside the asylum.
  56. New Burton-style ending.
  57. Michael Gough and Pat Hingle dedication cards.
  58. End credits.
  59. New closing logos.

So, have any suggestions? Feel free to leave them below. 😃