Ok I just grabbed the edit and here is my feedback:)
I liked the new crawl. Much more strong.
Nice little touch you removed the walking "bug" when the shot fades from jejerod to dagobah.
Even aestheticaly the colors/mood(warm) match when you fade from yoda's death to jabba's palace the fade seems to be a bit fast. i would prefer a slower fade/transition just to slow down things and take a breath/moment to enhance the death while establishing an other set. The music cut worked pretty awesome tho :) (pacing)
The fades from Luke to tattoine might seem work like they did in Empire but it was set on short period of time/simultaneously. Sure they mirror Leia that bends next to R2 for some reason :).Your fades add some tension that PT try to do. Not my style but i like the effort.
Nice little reel from ESB ;)
Tho i would like to know where 3PO was when luke took off. we see R2 for sure. Maybe a dialogue from him that is IN the shot but you DONT see him. it might work.
I loved the cuts you did with the droid-eye-door scene. It feels like its was meant to edited that way.
Again the dialogues of jabba and the rearrangement of the shots really gives the feeling that something is underground filthy and dangerous.
When C3po says we are doomed we suddenly cut to palps arrival. I would like to see some music tension begins a bit earlier from the doomed line so you are used to go from one Tone to an other.(pacing)
I like the fade when palps laughing but its nice to have it with the way that the door opens. It will lead the eye better with the motion.
Very very nice with the jabba dialogues as well with the well timed cuts. it adds a lot to the gangster all seen character.( I would prefer jedi weapon rather lightsaber word)
Nice you cut the R2 drink servant subplot :)
I liked the fast paced jedi action :) Nice clever cuts here and there. It sure feels that it was the right time for leia to act too. more fast with the mayhem. In the original felt slow. good job!
I wouldnt mind to cut the droid rescue because it was established from luke that they will do that. Focus on the explosion and the escape.
I liked the new piece of dialogue from C3po in the forest.
Very nice touch have chewie watching the troopers with the team!
I loved the music in the bike chase. It felt like indy ;)
NICE fade with Leia that something mysterious coming and again with the other fade that cuts to our heroes again :)
Nice treatment with the god dialogue. Han feels stressed and not goofy :)
I like the approach of cutting human facts from this movie. I would love to see cut the ewok that smokes a pipe.
Nice cut of i must obey my master. :) less desperate. more vader
The star destroyer next to the death star seems a bit static and off. I would like you have executor that is the main focus of next shots.
Not good choice of a slowed xwing engine sound. There are available shuttle sounds.
Nice little TFU music.
Why vader and luke is flipped and then they are flipped again? Vader's chest is flipped too(continuity)
I liked the shot that the death star were presence on the battle. but why the executor too?(continuity)
The death star missing from Luke's close up.
Nice of the bring those down there.
The death star is still missing from the fire at will shots
Same as the above with the alliance will die shots.
The saber sounds like i commented in the preview clip needed to be less repeated and with more music in them. the Duel pacing tho feels so tight and good.
Nice cut from lando to han trying to open the door. It seems that they are stressed and desperate
Good riddance tarzan :)
A little rough cut from Han planting the explosives and then he runs to avoid them
Anakin's symphony/theme doesnt feel right to vader's death.
Nice little ROTS music it matches with the tone
Not fan of the slowmo when luke places the fire to vader.
But I liked the ending. Much better feeling rather the cheezy dancing.
The audio were pretty low and when the credits appeared the volume was poped to hell.
Some credits are overlapping the original ones and cyan tones are different from the original.
Nice Credits at the end :)
-Angel
