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Did you consider/have you considered using sade1212’s visual effects of Palpatine’s face-change during Windu/Sidious? Watched octoroxx’s edit today and it was very seamless and effective IMO. EDIT: Never mind saw your response on this! (For those looking, it’s on page 44.)
Also, on a separate question, I appreciated octoroxx’s adding of little bits of dialogue largely in the 1st act (see below) to make Obi-Wan and Anakin more on equal terms / brotherly to more firmly establish that relationship and improve the ‘you were my brother Anakin!’ angle of the fall. Would you consider adding that to a hypothetical v8?
“-Removed or replaced all instances of Anakin referring to his training and/or calling Obi-Wan his master in order to better establish his independence and their relationship as peers at this point in the timeline.
-Anakin shoots down Palpatine’s advice to leave Obi-Wan behind the first time, rather than having to be pushed twice.
-Replaced the line “Are you coming master?” with the more jocular “We doing this or what?”
-Trimmed Anakin and Obi-Wan’s dialogue to remove reference to Obi-Wan’s training. Anakin is his own Jedi at this point.
-Anakin greets Obi-Wan with a casual “hey” after showing up late to the briefing
-Removed references to Anakin’s training and his time as a little boy. Again, he addresses Obi-Wan by name rather than title. The emphasis should be on Anakin and Obi-Wan as friends and “brothers”, not master and apprentice.”
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g2NmJYOkNHSzvguMgKMvTYaCcPSQqwOKI6nQNjMoxQM/edit?usp=sharing
Apologies if you have considered this and addressed it elsewhere - I did do a search but couldn’t find anything directly addressing this. EDIT: Never mind again - trawled back to page 28 and saw your response on this!