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- #792509
- Topic
- Star Wars Episode I: Cloak Of Deception (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/792509/action/topic#792509
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I just watched this and great job Hal! If not for my memory and a few quirks like low res deleted scenes I would have totally forgotten this was an edit.
I don't know if you're still taking opinions for v4 but I'll just throw a few things here while it's fresh in my brain:
- Thank God for the cuts in Jar Jar and Ani antics. Particularly the ending battles were really improved because of that. There's one more i feel you could cut and it wouldn't hurt is Jar Jar "wissa going home!"
- For deleted scenes I feel the probe droid one is indispensable, it explains why Qui-Gon is rushing to the ship which was never done in the movie. The others are fine but don't really add much.
- The added SotE soundtrack on the pod race is very well done. At first I was concerned because I always loved the SFX on that race and felt the lack of music enhanced the action but you didn't bring the music to the forefront so it merged very well.
- I'm glad you're re-adding "the negotiations were short" because I always like that little playful side of Obi-Wan. Though if I'm honest I didn't even notice it was cut until Qui-Gon is on Naboo and says "there were no negotiations"
- I noticed the opening crawl faded to black very quickly and early. I don't remember how it is in the original movie but it felt much faster than ep 4-5 (that I just watched recently).
- Similarly the end credits stutter a lot and it's a bit jarring. Presumably you sped them up to catch on the inserted Edit Credits but I'm not sure why it's not a smooth scroll and it takes you out of the movie. I would prefer if you let the credits roll normally and then add the Edit credits at the very end (similar to what Harmy did)
- I thought the Gungan part would feel rushed without the underwater stuff but it flowed very nicely. I do love the submarine "there's always a bigger fish" part but there's no way to include this without the Gungan city. Do you think there's a way to cut the antics in that part to allow you to leave it in or is it not salvageable?
- I'm not sure you should cut the part where it's mentioned Anakin's never won a race because then Padme's reactions feel very weird. She goes from being friendly in the deleted scene when she wakes him up for the race to being very annoyed 3 mins later saying "you jedi are far to reckless the Queen does not approve"
- Another scene I'm not sure why you removed is "this one is a decoy!". I felt it was clever and I always loved the sound of that door closing super fast :P
- There's one edit I wish you'd made and it's Darth Maul' death. I always felt the time that elapse between Obi-Wan hanging and Maul cut in half was ridiculously long and completely made Maul appear dumb for not realizing what was happening. I feel if the scene were quicker it would be a matter of not being able to react in time as opposed to just looking like an oblivious inactive dumbass. Particularly if you cut the part were he furrows his brows and Obi-Wan is looking pretty much straight at Qui-Gon's lightsaber it might enhance the scene.
I think that's pretty much all I got. Sorry for the wall of text.
Can't wait to watch TAS!