It's me again :P
Watched this tonight and your edit really improves the movie a ton. It's still my least favorite by a large margin since I pretty much dislike half of it (everything from the Arena till the Dooku fight). Anyway here's my jumbled feedback.
- Loved the addition of the deleted scenes with Windu and Obi-Wan as well as Padme sitting down with Dooku. I also enjoyed the Padme in the Senate one but I'm not sure about the one with Padme's family though. Aside from the fact that i don't believe her family is ever mentioned anywhere else the scene just feels out of place and weird. And she's the Queen of Naboo so why on Earth are they living in a small house and acting so.... colloquial? It just doesn't work for me.
- Loved your edit of the Dooku fight, it works really well to have Yoda and him just use Force powers. The only 'issue' is that right before Yoda says "much to learn you still have" you can see Dooku reaching for his lightsaber and the next cut his arms are extended in Force pull. But I'm sure it has to be cut that way and it can just be explained as him changing his mind.
- I kinda miss the Bank robot tweaking his voice in the original :) also not sure why you cut the part when Lars explains he would have gone back for Shmi but he can't because of his leg.
- I kinda wish you'd trimmed the Naboo scenes even more, at least the frolicking, rolling down the hill bit. I feel their relationship is well developed even if you cut this.
- i thought I'd mind Dex's removal but it works well with the assassin mentioning Kamino. The only thing is that when Obi-Wan goes to the Library he says "according to my information" but he never got any info since he doesn't meet Dex. It can be assumed he did some research on his own but still.
- The scene between Dooku and Sidious. Why the removal of "Lord Tyranius" since he's meeting with the Emperor and he's his pupil so obviously he should be a Darth. But while i relish any scene with Sidious I always felt that it was more interesting if Dooku was just a Dark Jedi and was really trying to fight the Senate corruption. Everything he says to Obi-Wan is true and he seems (!) genuine. It just seems weird to me that he would spill everything to him if he really sides with Sidious.
That's all I have from memory and I need to hit the sack :)