You could have all just said something constructive instead of destructive about my scene idea. It’s much easier to be kind than it is to not be kind.
For the most part, people are just commenting about how it’s not at all appropriate for this kind of edit. As for the content, I only skimmed it.
The first question you got was: why? Do you think this adds to the film, aside from putting your stamp on it perhaps?
The second was: how? No one here, on any project that I’m aware of, is filming entire scenes of the original trilogy to this extent, with new voice work of main, existing characters and everything. This is well outside of the technical scope of every ambitious project on the site, and it doesn’t even seem to have a clear reason for being made, from what you’ve said.
But I think the most appropriate place here for that kind of thing is probably indeed the script writing and re-writing area. Maybe people could have been more polite (I didn’t think anything was that bad), but no one in this thread should probably be giving you feedback on the writing itself, anyway. Constructive, destructive, or otherwise.