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#1450081
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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szopman said:

Hal 9000 said:

How are we on the Mustafar intro? Last I recall Neverar was addressing the potential suitability of the Biomes short, though there was some question about the speed of the pan and whether it would work in practice as well as we would hope.

Barring future input, here’s where it remains at present, which I’ve never been anything other than happy with: https://vimeo.com/manage/videos/529875645

It’s amazing, you should totally include it in V2! ; )

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#1450080
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Hal 9000 said:

How are we on the Mustafar intro? Last I recall Neverar was addressing the potential suitability of the Biomes short, though there was some question about the speed of the pan and whether it would work in practice as well as we would hope.

Barring future input, here’s where it remains at present, which I’ve never been anything other than happy with: https://vimeo.com/manage/videos/529875645

It’s amazing, you should totally include it in V2! 😃

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#1449398
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Hal 9000 said:

The only thing I’m doing is to remove Finn’s line about R2 backing up his memory, so that it isn’t completely undermined before it even happens.

I like the idea from DOTF for R2 to tell 3PO about everything he had forgotten, though. But we don’t have the resources to cobble anything satisfactory to imitate it.

I think we would need to implement it as some kind of quick sequence of the Saga flashbacks. Though, I dunno if that’s doable.

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#1448228
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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CamSMurph said:

szopman said:

Why not go with “I am nobody”? Someone implemented that, no?

I think it would work better than a(ll) jedi.

Mr. DominicCobb implemented that in a test clip for his own TRoS re-cut. You should definitely check that out, because it’s as seamless as it can possibly get! 😉

Yeah, I saw it, u right, that was his clip. It was seamless and sounded much better than I am all the/à jedi

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#1446636
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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sherlockpotter said:

In other news, I’ve been playing with a new reading of the word “end” for the Leia training. I’m at the point now where I need a clean set of ears to listen to it. Let me know how it sounds, and if you think this version works any better than the other!

Old version (Version A): https://streamable.com/y02l42
New Version (Version B): https://streamable.com/6dn00m

Wow, it’s just perfect.

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#1435179
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [2 episodes upgraded to v2.0, 3/5 seasons released to v1.0]
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Have you considered maybe releasing a version without those blue crawls? I mean, they are nice, but not really necessary to follow the story. + we didn’t have them in “the Mandalorian” either 😉

Apart from some superfluous crawls, good job, I saw some episodes and they were well edited and pacing was perfect.

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#1415831
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [2 episodes upgraded to v2.0, 3/5 seasons released to v1.0]
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dgraham414 said:

I’ve been going through these episodes and really the only issue I have with them besides technical ones is the opening texts. I feel like they aren’t needed at all… They just take up time that honestly leaves me bored. I feel like taking the first few minutes of an episode and doing a cold open before the title card is better.

+1

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#1404249
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The Mandalorian Episode 2: Search for the Jedi (Released - RT 2h 29mins)
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JakeRyan17 said:

I don’t feel like her using lightsabers takes away from Luke, any more than Ben using a lightsaber in the cantina takes away from Vader showing up later.

This episode introduced Din to the concept of the Jedi, as well as serving as a warning to what they could be. This is Din getting a glimpse of what could become Grogu’s future. That’s fairly significant. Her reluctance to help and her prowess in battle feed into that insight. It all gives Din a choice of whether this is the path he wants for Grogu or not.

+1

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#1404242
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The Mandalorian Episode 2: Search for the Jedi (Released - RT 2h 29mins)
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So, in the end, you are gonna go with a bit trimmed version of 2x01 or you decided to use the version you shared hersome time earlier (with Mando obtaining the armor quite fast 😄)? Because I really love what you did there, it os brillant.

I guess that since you cut 2x4,2x7 would be cut as well?

And I am wondering how much of the Ahsoka episode you had to trimm? ☺️

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#1404241
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Fan edits of Star Wars novels : 'Labyrinth of Evil' edit released
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Lately I ve been rereading The Hand of Thrawn books, and I think it could be simply and smoothly edited into new films timeline. After first few chapters those are my observations:
-changing 19ABY into, lets say, 14ABY.five years is long enough, and then the events of the TT seems more recent.
-changing Solo children into one Ben Solo (minor character anyway)
-removing references to reborned Palpatine.
-fixing some minor continuity issues
-maybe add some minor easter eggs (ST/ new canon names for eg) here and there.

JEDIT
Quick question. I wanted ask about the fanedit antipirate policy that is applied in this case.
If I owe an original book im English, it os okay to obtain a fanedit of this book in the same language in ebook format? Or look for the ebook veraion of it here?

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#1402676
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Star Wars: <strong>The Rise Of Skywalker</strong> Redux Ideas thread
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JakeRyan17 said:

TestingOutTheTest said:

https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/A-Palpatine-less-Edit-of-The-Rise-of-Skywalker-Released/id/74454/page/1

I read through the overview, it seems unclear what drives the plot. Why are they going from place to place to place to place if not to get to Palpatine?

You could always establish something about some old Sith fleet on Exegol or Katan fleet from EU. You could make the protagonists lookin for it just to find out it was already discovered by the FO 😄