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- #1334503
- Topic
- Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1334503/action/topic#1334503
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Dang!
Dang!
Oh my god Bobson!
I was gonna post this !
It is pretty difficult to get the motion tracking working on the elder head, but I’m commited to making it work!
Yeah that and all of the interviews of Oscar Isaac saying things like “they’d make beautiful babies”
Oscar Isaac REALLY wanted Finn and Poe to be gay
me too
Very old image, ignore ignore ignore lol
I will try to add some ducks… : )
Ope, I made it a little bit longer than you needed !
I’ll cook that up real quick for ya
how much longer do you need it?
Oh my god that’s so good !!!
I’m still thinking about my ‘Sith Fleet as the MacGuffin’ idea, so I came up with a crawl:
The iron grip of the FIRST ORDER has spread to the farthest reaches of the galaxy. Whispers of a long abandoned IMPERIAL FLEET circulate the core worlds.
GENERAL LEIA ORGANA dispatches secret agents to gather intelligence while SUPREME LEADER KYLO REN, determined to crush the RESISTANCE, searches the galaxy for this rumored fleet.
Meanwhile REY, the last hope of the Jedi, researches ancient Jedi texts hoping to find clues to defeat her dreaded rival…
I feel like it’s missing something, and I feel like the last sentence can be improved. Keep in mind, with this version, the opening would pan down to the Resistance base where Rey is levitating.
My justification for Theed being so small is that if it was any closer it would sort of go against my brains idea of what surrounds it. But, it could just as easily be some other city.
I was having problems with placing the heads around, but more work will be done.
We need something obvious to clue the audience in.
I agree
I added Theed into the distance of this shot and applied color correction in order to visually suggest the idea that Ajan Kloss is Naboo.
I can’t really find any places to add Elder heads?
I added Theed into the distance of this shot and applied color correction in order to turn Ajan Kloss into Naboo.
This can be dragged-and-dropped into any edit - instantly transforming Kef Bir into the forest moon of Endor!
DM me for a High Quality version!
I love that !
An orange tone might work better?
The extended Luke and Leia fight has proven itself very difficult to complete so it might not end up finished.
And I’ve been having a surprisingly hard time finding good audio for Threepio because of his specific intonation in that scene.
I’m going to work on Ajan Kloss -> Naboo. It sounds super fantastic !
And I’ll be rendering a High Quality version of my Endor establishing shot.
You could just not mention the planet’s name and add a second sun to that one shot with Rey’s speeder
Wow! That gave me an idea!
Maybe the crawl explains that Kylo Ren is searching for a rumored hidden fleet that he can use to dominate the galaxy. The Resistance learns about this and wants to stop them. The fleet becomes the macguffin.
Later in the movie, when Ren finally finds Exegol, we discover that Palpatine has returned!!
The order could go like:
Rey Training intercut with Kylo on Mustafar
Poe and Finn’s mission
The Resistance briefing - The largest fleet the Galaxy has ever known is hidden on Exegol (presumed to be abandoned), and the First Order almost has it!
Ren builds his mask again to block out the ‘calling to the light’. (If going by what Snoke said in TLJ, the Force is starting to ‘even itself out’ now that Palpatine has returned, pushing Kylo further to the light.)
Rey and Friends go to Pasanna.
Rey and Friends go to Kjimi
Ren finds Exegol and Palpatine. Palpatine seemingly recruits him.
Rey and Friends at The Death Star
Ben is redeemed
etc etc
This is very rough but something like this might be able to work
he looks like a preorder bonus
I really really want Luke to haunt Kyloooo