No, please don’t! The Star Wars universe has shrunk too much already, and without the Jawa scene there’s no association with Tatooine that would cause it to make sense.
Agreed
Yes!!!
Picture of Naval ship burning today in San Diego where i live. Lots of white and black smoke. Just a good current example that came up today haha i def need more bellowing smoke tho
There seems to be a ton of references lately. 😬
I personally prefer the fanedits of Rogue One and Solo that include the intro and crawl. It’s unique to Star Wars films and immediately puts the viewer into that universe. Plus, who doesn’t like a little dopamine rush from the nostalgia of seeing that yellow text scroll up the screen?
Sounds good. If you really want a TPM vibe, replace the child with a baby jarjar. 😄
I wonder if it would flow better to cut Mando in the cockpit so that the first time we see him is stepping off the Razor Crest? I suppose you could include the shot of him from behind. It would add a little mystery to who is piloting the ship as it descends on the planet.
(Virtually all solid materials will emit a white smoke when first heated. This white smoke is actually moisture. As the material dries out and breaks down, the colour of the smoke will change. Natural materials will change to tan or brown while plastics and painted surfaces will turn to grey.)
The smoke was something i considered a lot, so i tried to balance between white and black smoke. Ill go through though and see what i can’t do
Perhaps just reducing the speed of the smoke would be enough? I really like what your doing here and am looking forward to the finished piece. Keep up the good work!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XHWqd6uNv2rqKoPJfmYcjs43OB3SYKTF/view
Thank you! I don’t know why the other link isn’t playing but here’s a current trailer for example
The smoke plumes on Naboo resemble what would come from a camp fire instead of a burning structure. I’d suggest using something similar to the examples below.
Looks great!
Option A please. 🙂
There are already a few edits that ditched “ghouls” successfully and it really improves the scene IMO.
They aren’t part of the Sith Fleet, they’re regular First Order destroyers. Although this seems to be a point of confusion for a lot of people, so maybe something could be done to clear it up?
Wow, this whole time I thought they were Sith destroyers sent out like the one that blew up Kijimi. Thanks for clearing that up!
Isn’t it odd that the star destroyers are just hovering above these planets waiting to be attacked and not just firing their cannons as soon as they arrive?
Although I’m not a huge proponent for turning the Final Order troopers into clones, it would be a simple way to explain how they were able to man all of those Star Destroyers, as well as not have Finn kill his own former brothers in arms during the final battle.
Great thinking!
Those are both good reasons.
Just for the fun of it, I made a version where the music builds up and then goes straight into the SW closing theme to make it a little more climactic. This only required a few trims. Thoughts?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BtfVInm_6IjaExI2E2LlSScrexpDi2NN/view?usp=sharing
Looks good but is there a particular reason why you didn’t have the Razor Crest jump to hyperspace before the credits? Here’s a rough version:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Slg79VVlnPngh1XhYUtnrtXZ_DUOhsgy/view?usp=sharing
Gave Ochi’s ship one last shot!
https://vimeo.com/432503419
pw: faneditI moved Kylo over a bit, and I reversed the direction of the camera. This way, Kylo is moving out of frame and the focus is drawn towards the ship. I also adjusted the music timing to hit on the wipe.
Looks great Poppa. My only issue is the time frame between Rey running toward the ship, Kylo staring, and the ship flying away. This makes it feel like Kylo was just standing there the whole time it took for Rey to run over to Ochi’s ship and take off. Seems like he would call out to her or maybe use his force powers to prevent the ship from leaving. Even though you did an excellent job, I think it might be better to stick with the theatrical version.
Would be great if there was some dialogue to help explain the cave scene but not a deal breaker for me.
The orange looks really nice. Can you apply that to a few scenes with the Emperor?
I find it hard to believe that Poe would start a chit chat with Finn as they’re about to be shot so I’ve removed that, Hux saying “I’m the Spy” and Finn saying “No you did not!”
No Chat Shooting: https://vimeo.com/431985484
With all of Reys new powers, it would’ve been easy for her lift everyone out the quicksand so I’ve had to speed this scene up so it happens too fast for her to think.
Quick Sand, Quicker: https://vimeo.com/431985721
Usual password.
Let me know what you think…
The Quicker Sand clip isn’t opening up for me but the No Chat Shooting is a huge improvement.
*Quicker Sand works now and I’m liking it.
Cutting an entire series down to that time is very impressive. I’m glad you cut the baby yoda scene although others may be a little upset. 😄 Do you think the work print will be available to view soon?
Everything has looked great so far. Just curious what the runtime is at this point?
I agree with nearly all of this, it would make Finn much better
Same here. The eyeroll level is going way down with these edits.
The destroyers breaking through the surface is a nice visual but seems pointless and unrealistic in every way. I like the idea of revealing them later in the film (preferably already in flight).
