- Post
- #1587817
- Topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
- Link
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1587817/action/topic#1587817
- Time
Okay, I finally found some time to dig into this project a little. Here is the state of the flashback sequence.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VBFPUHnRAGrGfMWsUy5pnSo31u54SY0m/view?usp=drive_link
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kDmXzsVWWzbfOoC8DKCLNvfSex2wV3-I/view?usp=sharingThe delivery of “Leia sensed it as she trained you” could be better, and possibly the wording. Rey responds with, “She still trained me,” which sounds a little redundant.
I hate to lose the reference to Padme, but I think it flows better (and lets us get away with the alteration a little more cleanly) without it. 😕
WOW. That seems pretty much perfect to me!