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g00b said:

Perhaps something like this:
[…]
Reeling from the death of their
close friend and rebel leader,
Jedi Knight KANAN JARRUS,
the Lothal Rebellion struggles
to maintain the cohesion to
retake their home planet which
is relentlessly being ravaged
by the Empire.

Much better! But it’s quite a long sentence and when reading it loud (which I like to do, to check how it sounds when reading) I do feel a need for pause.

The easiest fix for this is to just put a comma after “planet”. And then I would move “which” down a line.

Reeling from the death of their
close friend and rebel leader,
Jedi Knight KANAN JARRUS,
the Lothal Rebellion struggles
to maintain the cohesion to
retake their home planet,
which is relentlessly being
ravaged by the Empire.

Forgive me if this have been discussed before, but i just say everything that pops into my mind 😃

Would it be better to have the (Rebels) episode number in the title?
Something like:

"Rebels

Episode X.X
SECRET OF THE TEMPLE"

(I don’t know if it will fit here, bu I like episodes in Star Wars media!)

Should the Emperor, Pryce and Thrawn be capitalized like KANAN JARRUS?

The end of the second paragraph seem a bit clunky to me, but then again - I’m not a native English-user, so perhaps it is my language skills that is lacking. There will be better words to use than in the following example, but maybe something like this?

"the Rebellion struggles
to maintain the cohesion to
retake their beloved home world
Lothal, that is relentlessly
shattered by the Empire .

g00b said:
I’ve added this to the spreadsheet for those who like a chronological watch!

Absolutely glorious! Thank, g00b!

(And if anybody else is using a little laptop and wondering where this information is: scroll to the right, my friend 😄)

Wow, great information Daiyus!

Still trying to save this gem until the project is finish, but it’s getting harder…

One thing I thought about - it’s probably a little outside the current project, but I wanna mention it anyway:
With the new season of Andor there is a bit chronological overlapping between Andor and Rebels.

Have you considered adding some sort of timeline in you spreadsheet, showing where to watch the corresponding Andor-episodes between your Rebels edit-episodes?

In other words: something like EddieDean has done with his Clone Wars-spreadsheet, where it’s mentioned when you should watch the movies and TOTJ between the Clone Wars-episodes.

I think it would be cool to jump between Andor and Rebels as we count down to the Battle of Yavin.

This edit will make a fine addition to my collection.

Octorox said:

Yes, that’s the intention. To sort of slowly create a wedge between Padme and Anakin so when Anakin says “you’re with him!” (Meaning Obi-Wan) at the end of the film it makes a little more sense for him to think that. Earlier in the film, Padme asks Anakin to talk to Palpatine about letting diplomacy resume, and he shuts her down, so she realizes that she can’t really expect him to come through for her on this issue and pivots to Obi-Wan instead.

Ah, I see! And you’re right.

Anakins turn to dark side is quick in RotS, but his turn against Obi-Wan is an even bigger head scratcher for me.

Some extra wedge between them earlier on would be welcome.

If Padme says Obi-Wans name in that sentence, won’t that make it seem like he is the one she was talking about when she said she knows a jedi they should consult?

£15 GBP came his way from me.

What a great project! Would love a link!

Acbagel said:

Should I spend approximitely the next month ONLY doing VFX to fix Cad Bane’s appearance?

Would appreciate a link to number 5!

Nice touch! But I think the “y” looks a bit weird?

I knew there was one thing I could not remember when I wrote the last post:

I don’t think we got any clues/hints that the Wim don’t trust Jod not being a Jedi early on, but then all of a sudden Wim says something like “If you are not a Jedi, then how did you do that?”.

I recall KB say she has calculated the odds and therefore don’t trust him, but I don’t think we see the other kids, and certaintly not Wim, be mistrusting toward Jod before this scene?

I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you earlier, smudger9, but life happened and it was not before this weekend I got around to watch the whole thing.

First of all: This is the way to watch Skeleton Crew. It flows so much better as a movie. If I ever gonna watch the show again, is will be this version.

The nitpicks:

I think maybe this has been discussed in the thread before: But when landing at At Attins twin planet the kids go exploring while Jod clearly stays behind. But then, all of a sudden, he’s with them at the tower. Knowing what was a cut fra episode, I can see why it had to be this way, but I think it will be confusing for someone who hasn’t see the show before.

The sidequest of the parents was always a weak point for me when I watch the show at D+. It still is. But I feel there was a too lang gap in their story in the middle of the film. We see them try to hack the barrierer system at 1:15:00 and then we don’t see them again before 45 minutes later. To be honest I forgot the sidequest before it popped up again.

One thing I never understood in the series is the reaction of the characters after KB and 33’s “crash landing” at the end. We clearly see them pull opp the ship before they crash. Would id be possible to make ut look like the crash actually happened. With some kind of explosion maybe?

And as always: as a foreigner, I would really appreciate subtitles. There were many lines I didn’t quite catch, because of all the other sounds and music and my limited English.

Anyway - thanks for this edit! I really liked it!

VulgarisMagistralis said:

So… this is still going on, eh?

Sure it is!

At tuesday Pixel gave us a sneak peek at how ho solved the Leia chase scene:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sO4Tf-XfWAs

I’ve not watched book 1-4 yet, but I’m still happy that number 5 is right around the corner!

(In my head but this one will be called Mando No. 5 (A Little bit of Grogu))

Please be gentle if this is a dumb question, but my knowledge of video formats, codecs and containers are limited.

In the folder there are two version, one in ProRes.mkv and one in MOV. I grabbed the first one since mkv is a format I’m used to, but noticed something strange when I started to watch: It seems my left speaker is the main one for sound and talking, not my center speaker.

I tried to download the MOV-version and everythings seems (and sounds!) fine, with the sound coming from the center.

Is there something wrong with the ProRes.mkv-version or is it just my computer that can’t handle ProRes?

I really liked the show when it aired, but I suspect I will like the Smudger-version even better - I usually do.

So I’d appreciate a link 😃

It’s really good!

The only nitpick I have, is that the smooch at 0:46 is a little bit too loud. It sounds more like it would do in a parody of kiss, than an actual kiss.

Just saw ESB. These edits are fun stuff!

Again was the flashback the peak for me, this time from Yodas perspective.

I never saw the original cartoon, so this is a new experience for me. And even tough I liked the first one, it took me a little time to get used to the concept, if that makes sense. With ESB I was already onboard and knew more what I was about get. I think that helped this movie.

Excited to see the last one!

Just saw A New Hope, and oh my! This was Star Wars on speed! 😄

This was really high paced, with no place for a little breather for an old man like myself. Action, action, action! But indeed a fun watch. I especially liked the flashbacks and to see a clip of Han changing his mind about helping the rebels.

Amazed by the skills of the editor. Looking forward to watch the rest!

oojason said:

‘Star Wars - Die Skywalker Saga - DVD Box Set’ _(the German release of the 9-disc Saga DVD box set)

Wow, this title raised mye eyebrows - until I saw that it was a German title.

A possible title for a fan-edit where all the Skywalkers end up dead? The “Die Skywalker! Die!” Saga!

This is the way.

The changes is fun to read, to see if I have caught any of them while watching. I rarely do! I’ve only watched TCW once, so it hasn’t got very stuck in my memory.

And it’s always fun to get a glimpse of the process - from your first version to how it ends up after input from the other members of the forum.

Just started this today, and have seen the first four episodes.

The first two truly are a little clunky. But I doubt its possible two make any them better, when the source material is what it is. The Duchess of Mandalore was a treat tough, but Assassin was OK at best.

Looking forward to the rest, I guess it will only get better now that the introductions is over with.

On a side note: It’s interesting to first watch the episode and then to read the posts in this thread discussing it.