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#1458230
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Stranger Things - Film Edition (Released)
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Hello everyone, a few updates.

Although this topic hasn’t been active, many people have been asking for my Stranger Things series-to-films edits (some of them providing great feedback) and I am really happy about that.

But I haven’t been quite happy about the quality of these edits for some time now. So, currently, after a lot of practice on simillar projects I haven’t shared yet (including His Dark Materials and Penny Dreadful edits), I am in the process of revisiting Stranger Things.

I have completed Stranger Things 3 with better pacing, smoother transitions and a shorter runtime cutting 20 minutes of the 3h and 22min film that originally was.
Now I am close on finishing Stranger Things 2 as well (I don’t know if I am going to redo the first film, I am actually quiet happy about that one) and here is where I need some help and advises.

Again my main goal is to achive better pacing and smoother transitions and, of course, a shorter runtime, the main issue being the whole plot with Eleven leaving Hawkins. Since it was an unpopular chapter that didn’t seem to affect the main plot, I am plannig to remove The Lost Sister episode again, resulting to a slightly shorter cut than the 3h and 5min cut that is currently sitting on.
However, since I am going for an even shorter cut, I am thinking of removing El’s visit to her mom as well. The film will follow Eleven until she finds Hopper’s files and then catch up with her again when she enters Will’s house, leaving her absence as a mystery. In this case, I will put together a new film (something like a companion film) which will follow Eleven’s journey outside of Hawkins where she finds her mom and Kali before reunite with the gang.

Which of the two versions you think would work better? Would you be intrested in a shorter Stranger Things 2 with a huge chunk of Eleven gone, plus a companion film, or do you think that leaving Eleven’s story out of it would affect the narration of the film?

Any kind of feedback or idea that I haven’t thought of would be much appreciated.

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#1437676
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Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: The Exodus Edition (a WIP)
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You have some really exciting stuff here. I love the color correction and your take on Ron leaving.
I am curious to see what you are cutting out of your edit, since you are putting back some of the deleted scenes (many of which are crucial to the film).

CamSMurph said:

Molly vs. Bellatrix:
https://vimeo.com/568449410

(Would someone care to change the thread’s title to “Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: Exodus”, please?)

Is there a way to remove Bellatrix getting chopped to pieces? I never liked that choice, since it is never established that Avada Kedavra can do that to a person. Also, it kind of takes away Voldemort’s “special way of dying”.

Anyway, keep up the good work and I will definetely be looking forward to check out the final result!

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#1432272
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Shazam! The Magic Edition (Released)
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I wasn’t a big fan of Shazam, not that I didn’t like it, just wasn’t crazy about it when I saw it.
And definitely wasn’t a fan of the Superman scene, so… you got me at Black Suit Henry Cavill Superman!

Joke aside, having his face in the film is a huge thing, but that is certainly not the only great ascept of this edit.
Without all the forced or pointless jokes and cheesy bits, I felt that your edit had a logical and smooth pacing, nice transitions between added footage and above all I felt that I wasn’t missing anything that was left out of the original cut.

Great work, definitely a must upon re-watches!

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#1400059
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His Dark Materials: Film Edition (Released)
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chrisvilla said:

Watched the first one. What a great edit. There was just one scene which spanned the start/end of 2 episodes that jumped in time a bit too quick, but tbh I don’t know what else you could have done. Using the airship scene helped with it.

Overall, superb. Great focus on the Lyra story line and removal of all that Boreal and Will stuff which was just just there to pad it out for TV purposes. Can’t wait to check out your second edit! Great work.

Thanks a lot, my friend!
Looking back at it, there are some jump cuts I would definately fix and some other stuff I want to adjust, but if there is one thing I am sure and confident about is the the parts that I left out and overall the story I wanted to cover in this first film.

Thanks again for watching and I am looking forward to your review of the next installment.

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#1399438
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His Dark Materials: The Subtle Knife (WIP)
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chrisvilla said:

I’ve only just discovered this edit-in-progress (and season 1) and am extremely excited to see. The series so far have been excellent, but struggled structure-wise to make it true to the book AND so that noobs to the story will want to tune in each week. And there’s no way you could condense the plot into 3 2-hour movies (ahem cough cough Golden Compass). Looking forward to seeing your first season edit (will PM) and especially this season!

Thank a lot!
Will’s origin was a tricky plot to pull off, that’s why I removed it completely.
And I think I am keeping it that way for this edit too. The viewer learns about Will’s past as Lyra is gathering information about it.

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#1399428
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His Dark Materials: The Subtle Knife (WIP)
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HIS DARK MATERIALS: THE SUBTLE KNIFE

Since Series 2 of the BBC One/HBO show His Dark Materials ended, I started working on how these 7 episodes could work as a full-length movie.
(I’ve already broken Series 1 into two films which are still available through PM… although I am not quite happy with the end result and I am planning on re-doing them at some point).

THE PROBLEM & MY GOAL

While the series captures the essence of the beautiful themes and rich characters of Philp Pullman’s novels pretty well, pacing is a big issue throughout the episodes.
In this edit I intend to restructure some of the key plotlines and character moments, while keeping some of the greatest parts of the series and removing some of the parts that in my opinion didn’t work so well.
Since the series follows many characters in different places and worlds, my goal is to create one full-length film with cohesive chapters rather than present those plotlines simultaneously.
Ι used existing soundtrack and OST for merging scenes and smooth transitions and created two band new montages for the opening scene. I also added captions in every scene where a new location is introduced to give a better understanding of the different places and how they are connected.

CHANGELIST

SPOILERS AHEAD for those not familiar with the books or the series.

Restructured: Opening Scene

Sample: https://vimeo.com/496410584
password: fanedit1

Restructured: Lee meets the Witches.

Sample: https://vimeo.com/496415271
password: fanedit2

Restructured: Mrs Coulter interrogation of the captured witch.

Sample: https://vimeo.com/496445373

Removed: All Magisterium’s councils.
Removed: Most of Witches’ councils.
Removed: Dr Lanselius’ trial.
Removed: Will’s visit to his grandparents in Oxford.
Removed: Mrs Coulter and Thorold’s interaction.
Reduced: Lee arrives at Yenisei River and travels straight to Grumman’s cabin.

Sample: https://vimeo.com/496448353
(typo will be fixed)

Removed: Boreal’s henchman questioning Lyra in Mary Malone’s office. She just runs out of the elevator when he finds them.
Removed: Mary Malone’s family.
Removed: Serafina Pekkala’s daemon meeting with Iorek Byrnison.
Removed: Lyra and Will going to the movies in Oxford.
Removed: Boreal visiting Mary Malone’s office.
Restructured: Lyra and Will searching for the Tower of Angel’s entrance.
Removed: Will’s first attempt on using the Knife.
Removed: Tullio captured by the Specters.
Removed: Mrs Coulter in Will’s Oxford. We only meet her later when Will breaks into Boreal’s house.
Reduced: Lyra and Will planning their break in.
Reduced: Witches traveling with Lyra and Will.
Reduced: Mary Malone in Cittàgazze.
Restructured: Mrs Coulter and Boreal in Cittàgazze. Boreal dies from the Specters that Mrs Coulter summons.

Sample: https://vimeo.com/496603494

Removed: Mrs Coulter learning about Lyra’s destiny.
Restructured: Will meeting his father and Mrs Coulter finding Lyra.

The film is currently sitting on a 2hour and 57minutes runtime, which is fine by me, although it could loose 5-10 minutes. I didn’t want to split the series into two films again and I was trying to avoid the 3hour limit.
The project is in its editing process and I am very pleased with the result I am getting.
I am open to suggestions and/or notes and I will post an update as soon as my cut is ready.

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#1369978
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GAME OF THRONES - FILMS I-X // & HOTD [Community Thread]
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Finally got to watch your cut. And I loved it as much as loved the previous.
The musical composition, the editing style, the dialogue trim, everything was at the high level I was expecting.

I have to say that this film may have been the least exciting for me, but that had nothing to do with your choises. It sort of felt like a Part 1 of a two parts story, since you’ve said you had been working on Film 5 parallelly, which makes me more excited for the next instalment.

Some minor notes:
I liked how you presented the events in Kings Landing with the wedding and Prince Oberyn’s arrival as well as Daenerys’ regime in Meereen. The only issue I may had was about Jaime’s and Bronn’s relationship. It seemed short and not fully-developed, which I guess progress further in the next film.
The events on the Wall and beyond the Wall were also well presented, but I wish we had seen more bits with Ygritte before the tragic event on the battle.

Again, I am a huge fan of what you are doing with these edits and I am super ecited for the next one,
Keep up the amazing work!

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#1338012
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Stranger Things - Film Edition (Released)
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Anakin Starkiller said:

In my books a film should never exceed 2 and 1/2 hours.

As I said that’s the perfect runtime for me too.
But in my books a film should also have structure, logic and continuity. And in this case I made the choice to sacrifice the runtime in order to achieve those goals.

So if for example Steve appears in the end of Film 1 with blood on his face, I can’t get rid of his stupid argument with Nancy because that’s where Jonathan comes and breaks his nose.

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#1337873
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Stranger Things - Film Edition (Released)
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ANNOUNCEMENT

I decided to revisit the whole project from the start, since I have not been happy with the final result for some time now. Many transitions between scenes were a bit rough and some plotlines may have not been quiet easy to follow.
Major adjustments accured on all three films for better pacing and a more immersive experience for first time viewers and fans alike. Naturally, this also made the movies a bit longer.

As soon as all three films are available for sharing I will post another announcement and update the original post with the new runtimes and changelists.

For now, I can share with you some of the changes I made for “Stranger Things 2”.
As some of you pointed, losing Eleven’s storyline may has not been the brightest choise. So, in this approach
I decided to include her whole arc insted of a flashback later on.
But this choice lead to a much longer final cut. So, in my current cut for “Stranger Things 2” I left out the whole Lost Sister plotline, since many viewers find it odd and hasn’t really anything to do with the overall story.

In order to justify some developments throught the movie, I made two new scenes.
The first one is a dream sequence at El’s mother’s house where she sees what happened back in Hawkins which leads to her return.
https://vimeo.com/411732825
(password: edit1)
The second one is an alterantion of Brenner’s voiceover while El is closing the Gate, replacing his footage from Kali’s illusion with scenes from Season 1 and including a brief appearance of El’s mother istead of Kali.
https://vimeo.com/411737234
(password: edit 2)

While I do believe that losing the Lost Sister plot makes a better movie, it surely creates a problem with El’s new punk look. I can only hope that Hopper’s comment about Aunt Becky giving her those clothes makes up for it.

Now, in case Kali returns in future seasons, I also made another cut with the whole Lost Sister plot in it.
In this cut, El travels to Illinois after finding out about her sister in her contact with her mother in Hopper’s cabin.
https://vimeo.com/411747304
(password: edit3)

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#1333391
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His Dark Materials: Film Edition (Released)
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Fated-Dualist said:

I love the logo and font used in the thread (though you may have spelled ‘Compass’ wrong?)

Some very agreeable choices that you have trimmed as well. I hope to get my hands on the blu ray soon, and when I do I’ll be in touch t oask if I can have gethold of a copy of this alluring edit.

Lol. Thanks, I didn’t even noticed that. I will edit the post.

I am excited for you to check my edit and give some feedback.

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#1329338
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His Dark Materials: Film Edition (Released)
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His Dark Materials is a fantasy drama television series based on the trilogy of novels of the same name by British author Philip Pullman.
The story is set in an alternative world where all humans’ souls manifest as animal companions called daemons and follows the life of a young orphan girl named Lyra who is living at Jordan College, Oxford, in a world governed by the Magisterium, a religious and political body. Lyra is said to be the subject of a witches’ prophecy that she will change the world. In her search for a missing friend, she uncovers a series of secrets that link to a mysterious substance called Dust, and meets a young boy named Will. Fate leads them both on a journey of epic proportions and ultimately to other worlds.

ABOUT THE EDITS

While the series captures the essence of the beautiful themes and rich characters of Philp Pullman’s novels pretty well, enhancing them with gorgeous imagery and well-composed music, Ι find that pacing was a big issue throughout the episodes.
In my edits I intend to restructure some of the key plotlines and character moments throughout a series of films, while keeping some of the greatest parts of the series and removing some of the parts that in my opinion didn’t work so well.

THE COLLECTION

His Dark Materials: The Golden Compass
Runtime: 2 hour 2 minutes

Τhe first film includes Episodes 1-3 of Series 1 and focuses on introducing the world, establishing the characters and exploring the relationship between humans and deamons. This film covers mainly Lyra’s life in Jordan College and London and the Gyptian’s attempts to find their missing children.

PLOT AND CHANGES

PART ONE: LYRA’S JORDAN

  • The film starts with Lord Asriel delivering baby Lyra to Jordan College during the Flood.

Note: The text in the beginning of Episode 1 served only as an exposition tool, which I didn’t like, so I got rid of it. I think it is better for the viewers to discover this world of humans and deamons by themselves, as well as Lyra’s role in the events to come.

  • Jump forward to Twelve Years Later where we follow Lyra, Pan and Roger in Jordan College. Lord Asriel visits Oxford to inform the scollars about his work, Lyra meets Mrs Coulter and the Gyptians organize the search for the missing children.

Note: Pretty much everything from Episode 1 is the same (including the opening credits where I added the “Golden Compass” subtitle) with some minor tweaks here and there.

PART TWO: THE GENERAL OBLATION BOARD

  • The film then follows Lyra to London where she bonds with Mrs Coulter.

Note: I removed their visit to the Royal Arctic Institute, as well as every scene of them on the terrace.

  • The Gyptians arrive at London as well to find the Gobblers’ lair where Roger and Billy once were. Lyra discovers Mrs Coulter’s unusual connection with her deamon and Lord Boreal searches Jordan College for clues about Dr Stanislaus Grumman before he crosses through the Window.

Note: This will be the only hint of the existance of other worlds in this or the next film. I just wanted to include the scene as teaser for the events in The Subtle Knife.

  • Father MacPhail vistis Mrs Coulter and Lyra learns the truth about Lord Asriel. Farder Coram and John Faa inform Ma Costa about their failed mission and Lyra and Pan decide to break into Mrs Coulter’s office to discover what she is hiding.

Note: Lyra finds some documents about the General Oblation Board and the Station, but nothing about the machine that cuts “something”. The original scene gave up too much and I always thought it was weird that Lyra couldn’t connect the dots.

  • At the party, Lyra learns the truth about the Gobblers and Mrs Coulter and escapes from the flat. The children are getting ready for the North and Lyra gets captured.

Note: We never learn what happens to the reporter at Mrs Coulter’s party, we just know that Boreal “took care of her”.

PART THREE: THE SPY

  • Mrs Coulter goes to Jordan College where she learns about the Alethiometer that Lyra possess. Back in London, the Gyptians save Lyra and take her with them. Mrs Coulter is in destress and Lyra arrives at the Gyptians’ council.

Note: A huge chung of Episode 3 and Lyra’s time with the Gyptians has been removed. Lyra never learns that the Gyptians always knew about her father, the State Police invading Gyptains’ boats is only mentioned during the council and Ma Costa reveals the identity of Lyra’s mother way later in the film.

  • Mrs Coulter sends her Spy-Flies to find Lyra and Tony with Benjamin break into Mrs Coulter’s apartment. Lyra finds out how the Alethiometer works and shares her secret with Farder Coram.
    Tony arrives back at the camp where he tells everyone about Benjamin’s fate. Lyra runs away before Ma Costa reaches her and tells her about her origins. The Gyptians travel to Trollesund and the Spy-Fly returns to Mrs Coulter.

Note: I kept the identity of Lyra’s mother hidden until the end of the film to serve as the last big reveal that changes her point of view for the events to come.

His Dark Materials: Northern Lights
Runtime: 2 hours 30 minutes

The second film includes Episodes 4-8 of Series 1 and covers Lyra’s journey into the Far North.
The main story remains pretty much the same as presented in the series, except the complete removal of Boreal and Will Parry.

PLOT AND CHANGES

PART ONE: TROLLESUND

  • The film starts with Lee Scoresby and the Gyptians arriving at Trollesund followed by the opening titles with the “Northern Lights” subtitle in the title card.
    Farder Coram and Lyra visit the witches’ consul with the hope of contacting Serafina Pekkala. After his failed attempt to find his old friend Iorek, Lyra meets Lee and Serafina Pekkala’s deamon finds Farder Coram and John Faa to tell them about the location of the missing children. Meanwhile, Lee finally talks to Iorek.

Note: No conflict between Farder Coram and the witches’ consul about their mission, he and Lyra go straight to his basement where the consul tells them about Iorek Byrnison, but not where to find him. Lyra’s first encounter with Iorek is removed, as well as the whole backstory of Farder Coram with Serafina Pekkala.
Mrs Coulter’s plots with the Magisterium have also been removed.

  • The next morning, Lyra learns about Iorek’s lost armour. She finds him and asks the Alethiometer where it is hidden. After regaining his armour, Iorek and Lee join the Gyptians’ mission. Mrs Coulter visits King Iofur Raknison on Svalbard and togehter they plot Asriel’s capture.

PART TWO: SOME SORT OF GHOST

  • As the Gyptians travel North, John Faa asks Lyra to use her Alethiometer to learn more about Bolvangar. The Alethiometer also tells her about a ghost in a fishing village nearby. Lyra and Iorek travel there, where she finds Billy Costa.

Note: As the Alethiometer spins, I added a brief montage of Bolvangar and the village. Also, Lyra doesn’t report to Coram or Ma Costa about going there. One plothole that came up during the editing process is the fact that Lyra acts like she knows about her father being held by the bears when she talks to Iorek. I can only hope that it is implied that the Gyptians learned about it from Serafina Pekkala’s deamon and told Lyra.

PART THREE: BOLVANGAR

  • After Billy’s funeral, some men enter the camp, capture Lyra and take her to Bolvangar. At the dining hall of the Station, Lyra sees Roger.

Note: The whole scene with Dr Cooper and Lyra at the Station has been removed and a voiceover of Lyra realizing that the place she is being taken to is Bolvangar has been added when she sneaks a peek out of her trap. In a voiceover later, when she is being escorted to the dining hall, she introduces herself as Lizzie Brooks.

  • Lyra and Roger find the room with the cutoff deamons. The next day, Mrs Coulter arrives at the place while the Gyptians travel to save Lyra. At the dining hall, Lyra explains her plan to escape, before the doctors take her to the room with the cutting machine. There, Mrs Coulter finds her and takes her to her chambers. She tells her that she knows about the Alethiometer and Lyra escapes once more, initiating her escaping plan. The Gyptians arrive at the Station, save Lyra and the children, while Mrs Coulter is hiding from the fight.

Note: Not much have been changed here storywise. A scene with Dr Cooper and Dr Rendal has been removed, as well as the scene of Ma Costa killing a guard durig the fight. Also, I removed the scene of Mrs Coulter killing the nurse after the battle.

PART FOUR: KING OF THE BEARS

  • Lyra, Roger and Iorek travel out of the Station with Lee’s balloon. On the ground, the Gyptians sort out the severed children as they continue on their way back to Brytain. The same night, the balloon is attacked by Cliff-ghasts and during the fight Lyra falls off the balloon. When she wakes up, Lyra is being taken to King Iofur Raknison’s palace, where she meets a prisoner who tells her that her father has taken Iofur with his side. Lyra meets Iofur and persuades him to challenge Iorek into a fight. Iorek arrives at the palace and kills Iofur, taking his place as the King. Later, Lyra rejoins Roger and she decides to take the Alethiometer back to her father. Mrs Coulter learns that Asriel is continuing his experiments in his laboratory and she prepares an army. Lee is safe on the ground.

PART FIVE: THE TEAR IN THE SKY

  • Lyra, Roger and Iorek arrive at Asriel’s house, where she tells him that she knows the truth about him. Later that night, when Roger is asleep, Arsiel explains to Lyra everything about Dust and his plans. Mrs Coulter and her troops arrive there as well, only to find nobody inside. Asriel has taken Roger and Lyra with Iorek and the rest of the bears follow them up the mountain, where the are being attacked by the Magisterium’s airships. Asriel opens a portal to another world, killing Roger, while Lyra is watching. Lyra mourns the death of her friend and decides to follow Asriel into the portal to learn more about Dust and why it is so important. As she enters the portal, a young boy in another world, Will, finds a window and they both travel to an unknown world.

Note:
Again the main events following Lyra are here. I removed completely Thorold, the first encounter of Asriel and Roger, Lyra and Roger talking before sleep and a scene between Mrs Coulter and MacPhail on the zeppelin. Will’s first appearance is right at the end of the film, where he finds the window. It is obvious by his clothes that he is from a different world and the police sirens inidcate that he is on the run. Anything important that we need to know about him is being reaveled in the next film.

His Dark Materials: The Subtle Knife
Runtime: 2 hour 57 minutes

Unlike the previous films, this one covers the entirety of Series 2.
The film follows Lyra in a new world, Mrs Coulter’s attempts to find her, Lee’s journey and the war between the Witches and the Magisterium. We also meet Will Parry for the first time.

PLOT AND CHANGES

PROLOGUE

  • The film starts with Episode 4’s narration of the history of the city of Cittàgazze and the origins of the Subtle Knife.

Note: Though it is pure exposition, that scene was so beautifully filmed I couldn’t lose it, so I placed it as the prologue of the film. Footage from the original prologue were used later in the film for other porpuses.

  • After the history lesson, I put together a brand new montage following the aftermath of the Northern Lights events. Airships are surrounding Asriel’s laboratory and Mrs Coulter is looking at photographs of Lyra. Inside the empty laboratory, we take a close look at the window through which the tear in the sky can be seen, then cut to black. A voice calls for Lyra and we see her waking up in a new world. She and Pan travel through the forrest, until they reach the city in the sky. Cut to the opening titles with the “Subtle Knife” subtitle.

PART ONE: CITTAGAZZE

  • Lyra and Pan enter the city of Cittàgazze. They wonder around the empty streets until they find a cafe. There, they meet Will, a boy from another world who doesn’t have a daemon. Lyra runs away scared. While sitting by the sea, Will finds them and they agree to stay together. They search the abandoned city and find two sisters, Angelica and Paola, who inform them about the Specters, creatures that only adutls can see.

Note: As said above, I wanted to create small chapters inside the film covering the characters and their arcs at their location. So unlike Episode 1 of the series, we see Lyra and Will’s first contact uninterrupted.

  • Lee Scoresby travels to meet the Witches. He tells Serafina Pekkala about his plan to find a man named Stanislaus Grumman who thinks he can help him protect Lyra. Queen Ruta Skadi arrives to inform them that the Magisterium captured a sister witch.

Note: After Lee arrives at Lake Enara, we see the Witches flying to their lair, a scene taken from the original prologue.

  • Back at Cittàgazze, Will and Lyra are chatting when they realize that there are two Oxfords, one in Will’s world and one in Lyra’s. Lyra wants to visit Will’s Oxford with the hope to find more about Dust. Later that night, the Alethiometer tells Lyra that Will is a murderer, while he reads a letter from his absent father.
    At Svalbard, Mrs Coulter interrogates the captured witch, asking her about Lyra. While she is telling her about the proghecy, Queen Skadi arrives and kills the Cardinal.

Note: There were two interrogation scenes which I merged into one.

PART TWO: WILL’S OXFORD

  • The next morning, Will and Lyra cross the window through Will’s Oxford. At Geneva, after the Cardinal’s funeral, Father MacPhail asks for elections. While discovering the new Oxford, Lyra visits a museum where the Alethiometer tells her to find a scholar in St Peter’s Univercity. Before leaving, she meets Lord Boreal who introduces himself as Charles. Meanwhile, Will visits his mother who he has left alone. Lyra finds the scholar, Mary Malone, and tells her about Dust and the Alethiometer. Dr Malone takes her to the Cave, a machine through which she studies Dark Matter. Later on, Will and Lyra meet at the Botanic Gardens where Will tells her that he accidentally killed an intruder and now the police is looking for him.

  • In Geneva, the Magisterium elect Father MacPhail as the new Cardinal and attack the land of the Witches. Mrs Coulter goes to MacPhail and tells him that she is going in search of her daughter.

Note: We don’t see Boreal until he meets with Lyra. I removed the Witches talking about the Cardinal, Dr Lanselius’ trial, Mary Malone talking to her colleague , Will visiting his grandparents and Mrs Coulter talking to Thorold. It is assumed that Mrs Coulter makes the decision to search for Lyra after the witch’s interrogation, not becauese Thorold told her so.

PART THREE: THEFT

  • The next day, Lyra decides to go to Will’s Oxford by herself, leaving Will in Cittàgazze. Will wakes up and searches the place for Lyra. He discovers Angelica staring at the city’s tower where she tells him about the Guild.
    At Will’s Oxford, Mary warns Lyra that a detective was looking for her. A strange man finds them both and Lyra runs away before she comes across Boreal who offers to give her a lift with his car.
    Back at Cittàgazze, Will finds a note Lyra left for him. Back inside Boreal’s car, Lyra tells him to stop and gets out. Sorty after she reallizes that he stole her Alethiometer. Will finds Lyra crying, where she tells him what happened. Meanwhile, Mary finds a way to communicate with the Cave.
    Later that night, Will and Lyra go to Boreal’s house and ask for the Alethiometer back. He tells them that he needs a knife that is hidden in Cittàgazze’s tower and they make a deal.

Note: In this chapter the narration is shifting between Oxford and Cittàgazze for a more suspenseful viewing.
Mary Malone is not shown in her office and her meeting with the detective has been removed. Lyra doesn’t talk with him either. When he finds them in the elevator, there is a jump cut of Lyra storming out of Mary’s office, which appears like she is getting out of the elevator.

PART FOUR: JOPARI

  • In the North, Stanislaus Grumman uses a ring to summon Lee Scoresby to him and Lee finds himself above the Yenisei River. He makes his way by boat until Grumman’s daemon leads them to him.

Note: Lee’s visit at the Samirsky Hotel and his investigation about Grumman have been removed. So did Mrs Coulter’s talk with him.

  • Back at Cittàgazze, Will and Lyra are looking for an entrance to the tower. They find a door nearby and they break in. Meanwhile, Lee and Grumman (aka Jopari) talk about Lyra, the Knife and Asriel’s plans.
    Back inside the tower, Will and Lyra find Giacomo Paradisi the original owner of the Subtle Knife. There, Will fights Tullio (Angelica’s brother) for the Knife and he loses two of his fingers. After waking up in Giacomo’s chambers, Paradisi teaches Will how to use the Knife to open and close windows to other worlds. Then he climbs up the tower to end his life, as his fate is complete now that Will is the new bearer of the Subtle Knife.

Note: Boreal doesn’t visit Mary’s office and Paradisi’s talk with Will and Lyra has been trimmed. Jopari agreeing to follow Lee has been removed, since it is implied later on. The Witches’ meeting has also been removed.

  • In Lyra’s Oxford, Mrs Coulter meets with Boreal where he tells her that he has Lyra, before taking her to the window near Jordan College (from the first film). Lyra and Will come up with the plan to steal the Alethiometer without losing the Knife. Jopari gets into Lee’s balloon and the fly off to find Lyra. Meanwhile, Mary is finally communicating with the Dark Matter. Back in Svalbard, Serafina Pekkala attacks the Magisterium’s airship and crosses through the tear in the sky.

PART FIVE: THE MISSION

  • In Cittàgazze, Will and Lyra discuss opening windows into Boreal’s house. The Angels tells Mary that she must find the entrance to Cittàgazze and save the kids. Meanwhile, Will and Lyra find Angelica and Paola mourning over Tullio, who has been attacked by the Specters, blaming them for his fate.
    The same night, Will and Lyra prepare for their mission. Lyra goes to Boreal and Will cuts a window inside his house. Will tries to grab the Alethiometer, but Mrs Coulter caughts him. Lyra meets her mother and Will fights Boreal. Eventually, they both escape with the Alethiometer and the Knife.
    In Will’s Oxford, Mary finds the window, decives the guard and enters Cittàgazze.

Note: Mrs Coulter’s time in Will’s Oxford has been removed. We first see her when she finds Will in Boreal’s house. The Magisterium’s meetings have also been removed, as well as any scenes with Mary in her house.

PART SIX: THE RESCUE

  • In Cittàgazze, Will’s hand is getting worse, while Angelica with Paola and other children come after him and Lyra as they hide on the roof where Serafina Pekkala saves them.
    Lee with Jopari also arrive at the tear in the sky and Mrs Coulter with Boreal cross the window from Oxford to Cittàgazze. Mary finds Angelica and Paola and promises to lead them to a safe place. Up in the air, Jopari talks to Lee about his family. On the ground, Serafina treats Will’s wounds.
    Lee and Jopari fly above the city of Cittàgazze and Serafina talks with Will about Lyra. In the city, Mrs Coulter discovers that she can control the Specters and sends them to kill Boreal. The same night, Lee’s balloon gets attacked by the Magisterium’s airships and Lyra, Will and the Witches confront the Specters. After Lee and Jopari crash to the ground, Will wakes up from a nightmare.

Note: Mary’s time in Cittàgazze has been trimmed significantly (we first see her when see finds Angelica and Paola) as well as Lyra’s and Will’s course through the jungle. Mrs Coulter’s and Boreal’s exploration of Cittàgazze has also been trimmed substantially. I also took the liberty to create a new scene that changes parts of the narrative. Mrs Coulter doesn’t poison Boreal, instead she summons the Specters to kill him. We never see him actually dying, but we hear the Specters attacking. Later, we see him dead at the cafe.

PART SEVEN: BELOVED SON, BELOVED DAUGHTER

  • On the ground, we see that Lee and Jopari have survided the fall and Ruta Skadi reports to Serafina about Asriel. Lee and Jopari have a gunfight with the Magisterium’s troops in which Lee takes a severe hit and urges Jopari to leave him. Before his last breath, he calls for Serafina. Mary leads Angelica and Paola to the safety of their parents campsite and she begins her journey. While Serafina is off to find Lee, Will finally finds his father, Jopari, before a trooper shoots him down. Mrs Coulter finds Lyra sleeping and kidnaps her, while Serafina finds Lee’s body. Voiceover of Asriel’s speech until we see him speaking to the Angels.

Note: The scene where Ruta Skadi finds the Cliff-ghast has been removed, as well as part of Mary’s journey. In the final scenes before the epilogue, some lines of dialogue have been reomved and Mrs Coulter finding Lyra has been moved right after Jopari’s death.

His Dark Materials: Republic of Heaven
Runtime: 2 hour 34 minutes

Τhe fourth film covers Episodes 1-4 and parts of Episode 5 of Series 3 and follows Will’s journey to find Lyra, Mrs Coulter’s attempts to protect her daughter, Lord Asriel’s war against the Authority and Mary’s discoveries in a strange new world.

PLOT AND CHANGES

PROLOGUE

  • The films starts with Xaphania’s narration of the history of the Kingdom of Heaven and the importance of the Rebellion while the new Eve emerges.

Note: Episode 1’s footage remains untouched, only with the addition of an amber tint istead of green.

  • After the history lesson, I put together a brand new montage following Will in his search for Lyra through multiple worlds and his first encounter with the Angels. Cut to Lyra dreaming about Roger and then to the opening titles with the “Republic of Heaven” subtitle.

Note: I removed Will asking the old lady about Lyra and I pasted footage of later episodes of Baruch searching for Will.

PART ONE: THE ENCHANTED SLEEPER

  • Lord Asriel travels to a world oppressed by the Temple to recruit General Ogunwe, while Mrs Coulter is keeping Lyra in a drugged state on a remote island fortress. In Geneva, Cardinal MacPhail orders Father Gomez to find and kill Lyra. Baruch and Balthamos tell Will that Lord Asriel needs him and that he must go to him. Using Lyra’s alethiometer they find her location and Balthamos accompanies Will to rescue her, while Baruch goes to inform Asriel about the Knife Bearer.

Note: I removed Lyra’s attempt to escape and Father Gomez’s visit to Fra Pvel, since they didn’t really help with the progress of the plot. I also removed Ogunwe’s older daughter completely.

PART TWO: THE BREAK

  • Ogunwe enters into the Republic of Heaven where he meets with Ruta Skadi. Will and Balthamos reach a fishing settlement where they join forces with Iorek Byrnison, while Father Gomez uses a spy-fly to locate Mrs Coulter and Lyra. Baruch reaches Asriel’s Republic, where he gets attacked by an Angel loyal to the Authority and dies, after delivering his message. Balthamos senses the death of his partner and decides to quit the mission and leave Will.

PART THREE: REUNIONS

  • In Geneva, the Magisterium’s troops board on airships, where agent Salmakia, the Gallivespian spy, follows along and informs Asriel about their destination. Will arrives on the island fortress alone, with Iorek hidding nearby, and finds Lyra drugged. Mrs Coulter sneaks on him and asks for his help. Will decides to leave her and Lyra, after realizing her noble intentions. Father Gomez arrives on the island as well. While confronting Mrs Coulter, Will opens a window inside the room with the intent to steal Lyra. After trying to open the window again, Will breaks the Subtle Knife, while Salmakia knocks Mrs Coulter unconscious and Will and Lyra run away. Outside, Iorek is fighting with the Magisterium’s troops and the children escape in another world with Salmakia going after them. Asriel finally arrives on the island as well, only to find the chapel empty with Marisa lying on the groud.

Note: I removed Mary Malone in Ogunwe’s world - but we follow her journey afterwards- and Asriel’s interrogation of Alarbus. I also decided to make Balthamos leave Will because his presence on the island offers absolutely nothing to the plot. I also removed Alma meeting Will and her involment in the fight after Lyra’s escape.

PART FOUR: THE SERPENT’S JOURNEY

  • Mary travels through worlds, consulting her notes and I Ching, when she encounters a Mulefa, a sentient being which uses seed pods as wheels. In the Republic of Heaven, Asriel keeps Marisa captive in order to interrogate her about the Knife. Lyra wakes up from another dream about Roger and she determines to travel to the Land of the Dead to rescue him. She and Will find out that agent Salmakia has been with them all along and plan to return to Iorek to ask him to mend the Knife. Asriel’s council decides to trust Marisa and let her stay with them, even though she doesn’t admit knowing anything about the Knife. Salmakia finds out that Marisa was responsible for breaking the Knife and informs Asriel. Mary follows the Mulefa to its kind’s camp where they tell her about sraf and her mission. Lyra and Will find Iorek who helps them fix the Knife, as Asriel confronts Marisa and shows her the prisoner Angel. While he is torturing him, Marisa steals the Intention Craft and escapes not knowing that Commander Roke snuck inside. Will and Lyra open a window and cross through the Land of the Dead.

Note: I put together a brand new montage of various moments of Mary travelling up to the point where she first meets the Mulefa. I removed Gomez returning to Geneva and Ogunwe and Ruta’s concerns about Marisa. I also removed Dr Cooper’s first appearance - we know nothing of her return and the Cardinal’s plans until the end of the film.

PART FIVE: LYRA AND HER DEATH

  • Marisa arrives at Geneva and confronts MacPhail for wanting to kill her daughter. Will and Lyra find themselves in a place full of people who have died but are not 100% dead yet. While they try to figure a way to the Land of the Dead, a man and an old woman tell them about how every person has their own Death, a life-long companion who greets them when they die. While she is asleep, the Cardinal steals Marisa’s necklace cointaining a piece of Lyra’s hair, which will help him locate and destroy the girl using a machine he calls the Bomb. Lyra decides to call for her Death who agrees to help her and Will go to the Land of the Dead to find Roger. The Boatman, a man who delivers the dead, agrees to take them with him, but points out that Pan cannot follow. Lyra is devastated, but determined to rescue Roger and Pan feels betrayed left alone on the dock. Meanwhile, Mary improvises a spyglass through which she can see Dust. Back in Geneva, MacPhail and Dr Cooper prepare Mrs Coulter for the incision procedure that will unleash the Bomb. However, Dr Cooper experiences guilt and halts the operation. MacPhail kills Dr Cooper and Commander Roke, who came to rescue Marisa, while Mrs Coulter’s daemon frees her from the device. MacPhail, willing to sacrifice himself, takes Mrs Coulter’s place, but she disables the mechanism before the Bomb detonates. When Alarbus tells the Regent Metatron that Will is the new Knife Bearer, Metatron intervenes and triggers the mechanism, killing MacPhail. The Bomb detonates as Asriel witnesses the ground tearing apart and Mary watches Dust aggressively escaping the Mulefa’s world.

Note: I removed Marisa wondering around the Magisterium, as well as her capture by the guards. Instead, it is implied that she has been caught in her sleep. I also made a significant change to the plot that affects this and the next film. In my cut, when the Bomb detonates Lyra is still sailing to the Land of the Dead and the explotion does not reach the Land of the Dead, as it happens in Episode 5 of the series. Instead, Metatron’s interference twists the Bomb’s porpuse to only cause the tear in the ground and the extinction of Dust.

His Dark Materials: The Amber Spyglass
Runtime: 2 hour 29 minutes

Τhe fifth and final film covers parts of Episode 5 and Episodes 6-8 of Series 3 and covers Will’s and Lyra’s journey through the Land of the Dead, Lord Asriel’s plans against the Authority’s regent and Mary’s role as the Serpent in the Mulefa world.

PLOT AND CHANGES

PART ONE: THE LAND OF THE DEAD

  • The films starts Metatron’s proclamation against the humans as Mrs Coulter gains her consciousness. Meanwhile, the boatman ferries Lyra and Will across the waterway to the Land of the Dead. Cut to opening titles with “The Amber Spygalss” subtitle.

  • Back in the Republic, Witch queen Ruta Skadi, who is working with Asriel into the Abyss, dies when her daemon is pulled into the chasm and perishes into dust. Will and Lyra wonder around the Land of the Dead where they come across some deceased denizens who are being harassed by the Harpies, the guardians of the Underworld, while Serafina Pekkala demands Asriel to answer for her sister’s death. Mrs Coulter returns to the Republic, believing that Lyra perished in the explosion. Asriel travels to meet with Iorek Byrnison, since he was the last who has seen Lyra in the world of the living. Will and Lyra finally find Roger and together they set off for the higher ground of the Purgatory to free the dead.

  • Lord Asriel returns to the Republic to tell Mrs Coulter about Lyra’s plans. Meanwhile, Will reunites with his father. Later, Will and Lyra lead the other to the Purgatory’s higher point, where Will opens a window, allowing the dead to leave. Then, they both open a window to the Republic of Heaven to find their daemons.

Note: The first part of the film is basically a back-and-forth between the events of Episode 5, 6 and 7. Beacuase of the way the last film ends, the explotion does not affect the Land of the Dead and all scenes around the chasm have been removed.

PART TWO: THE CLOUDED MOUNTAIN

  • Lord Asriel asks for Mrs Coulter’s help in his plan to deafeat Metatron, as his Angel army converge above the rebel camp and the battle begins. Ogunwe’s soldiers rendezvous with Lyra and Will and escort them back to the camp after fending off cliff-ghasts. Metatron summons Mrs Coulter and Asriel to the Cloud, where he reveals himself as a former mortal named Enoch who became divine. Mrs Coulter feigns loyalty to Metatron while he defeats Asriel in physical combat. As Coulter’s monkey daemon activates the bomb beneath the Cloud, Stelmaria, Asriel’s daemon, helps him and Coulter to pull Metatron into the Abyss, killing them all. While Asriel’s forces celebrate their victory, Lyra and Will discover the Authority’s crystal prison that fell from the Cloud. Will cuts it open and the ancient Angel immediately dies. Having sent their daemons to the Mulefa’s world for safekeeping, Will and Lyra follow them there.

Note: No drastic change in this part; just minos tweaks here and there.

PART THREE: THE BOTANIC GARDEN

  • Will and Lyra have finally found peace. As they search for their daemons, the Mulefa lead them to Mary, who explains about the escaping Dust. Mary reveals giving up being a nun to experience life and love beyond religion. When Will and Lyra realize they are in love, Dust rains downward, restoring all worlds. Serafina Pekkala arrives and reunites Pan and Will’s daemon with their humans. Xaphania informs Will and Lyra that all windows between worlds must be closed to prevent Dust escaping and Spectres forming. Seeking guidance, Lyra discovers she can no longer read the alethiometer because she has matured. Knowing neither can survive long-term in an alternate world, Lyra and Will sadly agree to separate, promising to reunite in the afterlife. The group return to Lyra’s world. Lyra and Will say goodbye and promise to visit the bench in the Oxford Botanic Garden every midsummer’s day to remember each other, before Will permanently closes the window between them. As promised, he breaks the Subtle Knife. Lyra returns to Jordan College while Will reunites with his mother.

Note: The only major change here is the removal of Father Gomez. While this subplot gives a porpuse to him and Balthamos, it kind of ruins for me the emotional aspect of the main events. Also, I rearranged the text in the final moments of the last episode to give a reinforced feeling of finality and I removed the part about Lyra’s future adventures. As much as I would like to see an adaptation of The Book of Dust I hardly believe this would ever be a possibility.

All films are available through PM. Any kind of feedback would be much appreciated.

UPDATED ON JAN 23

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Anakin Starkiller said:

No Eleven. Every scene with Eleven up to the point where she appears in Byers’ house was removed.

I mean it makes sense for runtime but at the same time you’re losing by far the best plotline. If anything, I’d rather have a movie just covering El’s story in Season 2.

I hear you. I struggled a lot with this choise.
As I said,my main goal was the runtime and with her whole story the film was just too long.

I want to revisit the whole project sometime in the future (maybe after Season 4) and maybe then I will try to make a seperate film.

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UPDATED ON MAY '25

The idea for these fanedits is to recut each season of Stranger Things into full-length films like a horror franchise from the '80s. My goal is to create a set of cohesive films to be watched as a recap of each season or as a first-time viewing experience. This project is a product of passion, love and respect for the original material and it is not designed to serve as a replacement for the show.

Stranger Things: The Vanishing of Will Byers

Runtime: 2 hours 45 minutes

Description

What is different/new?

  • Added samples of the original score throughout the film.
  • Added Vecna’s clock chime when Will encounters the “monster”.
  • Combined the two night search parties into one sequence / Intercut with the boys finding Eleven in the woods.
  • Added flashback of Eleven being locked in the lab closet as a ‘dream sequence’ on her first night at Mike’s.
  • Added flashback of Eleven killing the guards right after she attacks Lucas.
  • Added flashback of Eleven in the void as she strolls through the supermarket/Added Vecna breathing/walking towards Eleven sound.

What is removed?

  • Removed Jim Hopper’s introduction.
  • Removed Benny Hammond.
  • Removed Lonnie Byers.
  • Removed Terry Ives.
  • Removed Jonathan getting caught for spying plotline.
  • Removed Eleven recognising Will from the photo in Mike’s room.
  • Removed cops investigating Barb’s missing.
  • Removed Hopper finding Eleven’s room in the lab.
  • Removed Nancy in the Upside Down.
  • Removed ‘Lando’ running joke.
  • Removed Will waking up in the hospital.
  • Removed Steve at the Wheelers at Christmas.

What is cut down?

  • Cut down school bullies.
  • Cut down Wheeler family.
  • Cut down Steve’s entourage.
  • Cut down Steve/Nancy romance.
  • Cut down agents looking for Eleven/spying on Joyce.
  • Cut down Dr Brenner trying to reach the Upside Down.
  • Cut down Will’s phonecalls.
  • Cut down Nancy and Jonathan hunting the Demogorgon.
  • Cut down preparation of the sensory deprivation tank.
  • Cut down Joyce/Hopper interrogation at Hawkins Lab.
  • Cut down Joyce and Hopper in the Upside Down.

Is this a plothole?

  • Why is Eleven wearing the yellow ‘Benny’s Burgers’ t-shirt, instead of her lab gown, when they boys find her in the woods?
    Perhaps she didn’t have to wear the gown all the time? Or maybe she disguised herself before escaping from the lab?
  • Why is Jonathan spending the night at Nancy’s ?
    Maybe because they were both very shocked after discovering the Demogorgon in his photos?
  • How did Hopper find the boys hiding in the school bus?
    Perhaps he had already looked elsewhere?
  • How did the kids know how to build a sensory deprivation tank?
    Maybe because they are really good students? Or maybe Eleven knew how to make one.
  • Do Steve and Nancy get back together?
    No, they don’t.

Stranger Things 2: The Mind Flayer

Runtime: 2 hours 43 minutes

Description

‘The Mind Flayer’ covers exclusively the main events of Stranger Things 2, leaving out Eleven’s time outside of Hawkins.

What is different/new?

  • Eleven’s return as the opening sequence / Rearrange Eleven’s backstory / Intercut with Hopper leaving Ego’s from Season 1
  • Steve and Nancy not dating since last year, but remain friends.
  • Demodogs reach Byers’ place shortly after the group’s arrival.
  • Alternate montage of Dr Brenner as Eleven is closing the gate.
  • Alternate ‘One Month Later’ montage.

What is removed?

  • Removed Joyce droping Will at the Arcade.
  • Removed Murray Bauman at the police station.
  • Removed Nancy and Steve visiting the Hollands.
  • Removed Nancy having guilts about Barb.
  • Removed Halloween party.
  • Removed Will’s sessions with Dr Sam Owens.
  • Removed Bob driving Will to the lab / Removed their conversation during Will’s possession.
  • Removed Eleven asking to go for trick-or-treating.
  • Removed Hopper being late on Halloween night.
  • Removed flahback of Eleven killing the squirrel in the woods.
  • Removed Nancy and Jonathan planning to expose the Hawkins lab and visiting Murray Bauman.
  • Removed Lucas/Max arguments.
  • Removed Eleven visiting her mom/finding Eight.
  • Removed Will’s interrogation in the shed.
  • Removed Billy visiting Ms Wheeler/brawl with Steve in Byers’ place.
  • Removed Dustin reuniting with Dart inside the tunnels.
  • Removed Hopper meeting with Owens at the pub.

What is cut down?

  • Cut down the boys stalking Max.
  • Cut down Owens’ activities in Hawkins Lab.
  • Cut down Hopper investigating the rotting crops.
  • Cut down Max/Billy interactions.
  • Cut down Joyce/Bob interactions.
  • Cut down Dustin/Dart interactions.
  • Cut down Hopper/Eleven fixing the cabin and setting up the traps.
  • Cut down Hopper in the tunnels.
  • Cut down Bob solving Will’s drawings.
  • Cut down Will hospitalised at Hawkins Lab.
  • Cut down Dustin and Steve looking for Dart.
  • Cut down kids at Snow Ball.

Is this a plothole?

  • Lucas revealing the truth about Will and Eleven to Max off-screen.
    Did I really need to include that scene?
  • How did Dustin find Steve to help him with Dart?
    He explains to Lucas he couldn’t find anyone else
  • How did Lucas find Dustin and Steve?
    He got Dustin’s message off-screen
  • Why did Nancy and Jonathan arrive at Hawkins’ lab together?
    Perhaps they were both worried about their brothers’ whereabouts
  • The kids going to the tunnels despite Steve’s forbidding.
    Thank God he’s covering his bruised face

Stranger Things 2: The Lost Sister

Runtime: 59 minutes

Description

‘The Lost Sister’ covers exclusively Eleven’s journey during her absence from Hawkins.

What is different/new?

  • Police chase in Pittsburg as the opening sequence.
  • New “flashback scene" of Eleven visiting her mom inside the void.
  • New “vision scene” of Eleven seeing Will being possessed and the Mind Flayer behind the gate.
  • Added “Tribulations” by Kyle Dixon & Michael Stein as the ending credits roll.

What is removed?

  • Removed Eleven referring to ‘the girl her mother was showing to her’ as “different”.
  • Removed Becky mentioning Joyce and Hopper while talking to the phone.
  • Removed Eleven’s memory of Max skating around Mike, while focusing her powers.

Stranger Things 3: Τhe Mall Rats

Runtime: 2 hours 56 minutes

Description

What is different/new?

  • Removed experiments in Russia / New sequence created as a cold open leading to Billy’s car crash as the opening sequence.
  • Murray Bauman’s introduction as a new character.
  • Removed Dustin reaching to Suzie for Planck constant / Removed ‘Never Ending Story’ song / Re-purposed Season 4 scene as Suzie’s final reveal.
  • Embedded stylized English subtitles for Russian dialogues.

What is removed?

  • Removed Billy/Mrs Wheeler flirt.
  • Removed Hawkins Post employees.
  • Removed Billy in the Upside Down.
  • Removed Joyce at Scott Clarke’s place.
  • Removed Billy and Eleven/Max at Holloways’ dinner.
  • Removed the kids investigating Holloways’ place.
  • Removed Mayor’s place.
  • Removed Joyce/Hopper/Alexei before they arrive at Murray’s.
  • Removed hospital fight sequence.
  • Removed Steve/Robin getting caught by the Russians and Dustin/Erica looking for them.
  • Removed Steve/Robin romance.
  • Removed Hopper/Joyce/Murray/Alexei driving to Hawkins.
  • Removed 4th of July festival.
  • Removed Dr Sam Owens arriving at Starcourt Mall.
  • Removed news report and Steve/Robin applying for a job at the video store.
  • Removed Lucas/Max teasing Dustin at Byers’.
  • Removed post credit scene at Kamchatka.

What is cut down?

  • Cut down ‘Scoops Troop’ trying to solve the Russian message.
  • Cut down Mayor Larry Kline.
  • Cut down Heather’s plotline.
  • Cut down Joyce/Hopper romance.
  • Cut down boys vs girls teen drama.
  • Cut down Eleven/Max looking for Billy.
  • Cut down ‘Scoops Troop’ trapped in the elevator/walking through the underground base.
  • Cut down Joyce/Hopper/Alexei at Murray’s.
  • Cut down ‘Scoops Troop’ at the movies.
  • Cut down Joyce/Hopper/Murray in the underground base.

Is this a plothole?

  • How Billy escapes from his abduction?
    The Mind Flayer lets him free so he can complete his plan
  • Why Nancy and Jonathan return to Mrs Driscoll at night?
    Maybe they found a new lead, or maybe they wanted to check on her
  • Hopper having seen the Russian guy in the Mayor’s office off-screen.
    Did I really need to include that scene?
  • Why isn’t Jonathan with Nancy when she visits Mrs Driscoll at the hospital?
    Maybe she went without telling him
  • How does Hopper get the ‘Todfathr’?
    Did I really need to include that scene? His car exploded so he took (or stole) another one
  • What happens to Alexei?
    We last see him at Murray’s, but does it really matter to the plot? At least he doesn’t die in vain
  • The kids decide to look for Billy in Hopper’s cabin off-screen (and they all made a stop to change their outfits).
    Maybe Eleven felt more confortable putting herself in a state like that in her own space
  • How can the ‘Scoops Troop’ escape from the underground base without being caught?
    They are very stealthy. And the Russian guys didn’t seem so smart anyway
  • Why is Steve’s face so messed up?
    Because of his fight with the Russian guard? Although he seems fine when he knocked him out… Don’t bruises and cuts show up after a while?
  • Why did the adults come to Starcourt?
    Perhaps they had looked and couldn’t find the children anywhere else?
  • With Suzie’s original cameo gone, what happens to her character and the Planck constant she provides?
    Murray gives Hopper and Joyce the correct code to open the vault / Suzie’s reveal comes later in the film in a repurposed scene from Season 4 first episode

Stranger Things 4: Τhe Curse of Vecna

Runtime: 3 hours 12 minutes

Description

‘The Curse of Vecna’ covers exclusively the events in Hawkins, Mike visiting Will and Eleven in Lenora and Eleven’s training in NINA.

What is different/new?

  • Alternate/shorter September 8, 1979 opening scene
  • Alternate/shorter ‘Letter to Mike’ sequence / Replaced “California Dreamin’” with “Teens” by Kyle Dixon & Michael Stein.
  • Alternate Crissy’s death scene / Removed Eddie reacting to her being possesed
  • Alternate sequence of the news coverage of Chrissy’s murder / intercut with Steve/Robin/Jason/Nancy’s reactions / Max visiting Dustin.
  • New ADR of Max/Dustin/Robin/Steve driving to Reefer Rick’s boathouse explaining how they found out about it.
  • New introduction of the NINA Project / New Dr Brenner’s re-introduction / Removed Nevada dessert / Removed Eleven interacting with Dr Brenner.

What is removed?

  • Removed Dr Brenner’s morning routine.
  • Removed Rainbow Room intro / Lesson’s with Ten.
  • Removed Eleven being bullied in the classroom.
  • Removed Steve/Robin driving to school.
  • Removed pep rally at school.
  • Removed Eddie at the cafeteria.
  • Removed Nancy/Fred vs Jonathan/Argyle sequence.
  • Removed Mike/Dustin searching for Lucas’ replacement.
  • Removed Crissy/Eddie in the woods.
  • Removed Tammy Thompson.
  • Removed Mike landing to Lenora.
  • Removed Max comparing Eddie to Ted Bundy.
  • Removed Nancy/Fred driving towards the Trailer Park + interacting with the cop.
  • Removed millitary men visitng Hawkins.
  • Removed policemen visiting Jason.
  • Removed Jason informing his entourage about the Hellfire Club.
  • Removed the gang finding about Reefer Rick at Family Video.
  • Removed Fred’s dead familly vision in the woods.
  • Removed ‘The Massacre at Hawkins Lab’ flashback after the incident at Rink-O-Mania.
  • Removed kids in Lenora returning home after the incident at Rink-O-Mania / Mike and Eleven fighting / cops arresting Eleven.
  • Removed Jason and his entourage visiting the kids from the Hellfire Club.
  • Removed Max visiting the school council at her house + Lucas’ place.
  • Removed Nancy/Robin visiting Victor Creel at Pennhurst / Creel family backstory.
  • Removed Max visiting her “mother”.
  • Removed Dustin’s Freddy Krueger reference.
  • Removed agents at Wayne Munson’s trailer.
  • Removed Eleven’s “light bulb training”.
  • Removed Hawkins Police assembly.
  • Removed Two being punished.
  • Removed Robin’s bat rabies comments.
  • Removed cops interrogating the kids at Wheelers’.
  • Removed Dr Brenner punishing Two.
  • Removed Eleven re-entering the tank.

What is cut down?

  • Cut down Max’s session with the school council.
  • Cut down basketball final/D&D campaign.
  • Cut down Mike/Eleven/Will at Rink-O-Mania.
  • Cut down Nancy/Robin in Hawkins Public Library.
  • Cut down the Hawkins group at Creel House.
  • Cut down Jason and his entourage at Rick’s place.
  • Cut down the Hawkins group searching for Skull Rock.
  • Cut down the Hawkins group at Lover’s Lake.
  • Cut down the Hawkins group in Upside Down.
  • Cut down Stece/Nancy romance.

Is this a plothole?

  • How do we know that Jason and Chrissy were dating?
    Although it’s not very obvious, there’s a shot in the basketball game where Jason points at Chrissy after scoring and she blows him a kiss
  • How did the Hawkins group know where to find Eddie?
    They were trying to contact Eddie’s friends, from whom they got the information that Rick was Eddie’s supplier
  • How did the group gather at the Trailer Park the morning after Fred’s death?
    They bumped into Nancy by chance on their way home from visiting Eddie
  • Where is Joyce?
    Jonathan mentions that she is heading to Alaska, presumably on a business trip
  • How did Eleven end up back in Hawkins Lab?
    The objective of removing NINA’s location is to create a similar level of confusion to that experienced by Eleven. Maybe Dr Owens drugged her on the way to the silo, or maybe she fell asleep in the car
  • No Victor Creel???
    The group gathers the necessary information about Vecna’s connection to the Creel House from Nancy and Robin’s research
  • How did Dustin knew they had to play Max’s favorite song?
    He just… assumed it might help, based on Will’s connection with music during his time at the Upside Down. TBH, Victor’s narration didn’t give a more convincing explanation to the significance of music
  • Why did Steve/Nancy/Robin/Eddie go to the Wheelers’ house in the Upside Down?
    Nancy told them about her guns off-screen

Stranger Things 4: The Monster and the Superhero

Runtime: 1 hour 45 minutes

Description

‘Τhe Monster and the Superhero’ covers exclusively Hopper’s storyline in Russia, Joyce and Murray’s adventures and the boys against Lt. Colonel Jack Sullivan’s attempts to locate Eleven.

What is different/new?

  • Embedded stylized English subtitles for Russian dialogue.
  • Stranger Things 3 post credit scene at Kamchatka as the opening sequence.
  • Lt. Sullivan visiting Dr Owens in Nevada right after the title sequence.
  • “Teens” by Kyle Dixon & Michael Stein playing as Joyce receives the package from Russia.
  • Hopper surviving the explosion / being captured and tortured by the Russians / being transferred to Kamchatka flashback just after Joyce discovers the letter.
  • Brief montage of the aftermath of the Rink-O-Mania incident just after Joyce and Murray leave the house.
  • Shortened sequence of Suzie getting NINA’s address.
  • Hopper’s storyline concludes with him reuniting with Joyce and finding the ‘monster lab’.
  • The boys’ storyline concludes with them finding the military tyre tracks.
  • Lt. Sullivan’s stoline concludes with them arriving at the bunker.
  • Clip of Eleven waking up right before the ending credits.

What is removed?

  • Removed the “elephant” scene.
  • Removed “Enzo’s” thirsty comments about Joyce.
  • Removed Joyce/Murray scenes traveling to Alaska.
  • Removed “Enzo’s” ‘odds to success’ guesses.
  • Removed Mike talking to Will about his fight with Eleven.
  • Removed Yuri lying about not being Yuri.
  • Removed ‘Neverending Story’ reference.
  • Removed Suzie’s father and siblings.
  • Removed Joyce/Murray/Yuri in the church.

What is cut down?

  • Cut down Yuri’s cringiness.
  • Cut down Argyle’s silliness.
  • Cut down Murray’s obnoxiousness.

Stranger Things 4: Τhe Mind Lair

Runtime: 2 hours 29 minutes

Description

‘The Mind Lair’ covers exclusively the events of the final two episodes of Stranger Things 4.

What is different/new?

  • Young Eleven passing out / waking up in the bunker as the opening sequence.
  • Shortened Vecna inside Nancy’s mind sequence just after the title sequence, tying in with Dr Brenner explaining Henry’s intentions to Eleven.
  • New color grading of Henry discovering the Upside Down.

What is removed?

  • Removed the Hawkins group planning and going to the weapons store.
  • Removed Dr Owens telling Eleven that she is free to go.
  • Removed Steve’s ‘dream family’ narration.
  • Removed Yuri sabotaging his plane / Joyce and Hopper talking about their date / Hopper speaking with Agent Stinson.
  • Removed the Hawkins group preparing for battle.
  • Removed helicopter pilot’s dialogue.
  • Removed Eleven explaining about ‘the piggyback’.
  • Removed Argyle making a pizza while the others prepare the sensory deprivation tank.
  • Removed “pineapple on pizza” debate (it’s good, get over it).
  • Removed Will/Jonathan conversation while preparing the tank.
  • Removed the “I piggybacked from a pizza dough freezer” line.
  • Removed ‘Benny’s Burger t-shirt’ reference.
  • Removed Robin/Vickie making PB&Js.
  • Removed Nancy/Jonathan talking at Hopper’s cabin.

Is this a plothole?

  • How did Eleven come up with the idea of using the sensory deprivation tank to contact Max?
    Although it’s not really explained, while Eleven was listening to the Hawkins group’s plans to kill Vecna, she realised that Max was in danger, and since she was already familiar with the practice of contacting someone through the Void, she told the boys that she needed a sensory deprivation tank off-screen, so Argyle drove to the nearest place he knew they could find something useful

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Anjohan said:

Season 8, being as underwhelming as it has been, has made it necessary to change up certain end game aspects. Which is why I’m making a quick blueprint on the last season to work my way up to with the remaining films.

This is the rough cut of my version of Daenerys’s turn to madness:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Glzr5zTcILk&feature=youtu.be

As a rough cut it is put together pretty good, with room for impromvent.
But will this mean that Missandei’s death and Danny’s intense look over the city won’t make it to the final cut?

Also, I am and will be waiting for some update for Film 4.

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Ι finally finished Film III “A Feast for Crows”… and it was a blast!
I have to say that Season 3 might be my favourite and I was a bit anxious about your cut.

I also have to admit that some things weren’t exactly how I was expecting them to be, but your editing was trully flawless and the whole film felt really smooth and delightful.
As I have said before, this progect is your artistic vision and I am going to watch it as such.

! SPOILERS, I GUESS !

I really liked the fact that you chose to begin the film with a “cold start”.
At first I thought why didn’t you start the film with Sam running away from White Walkers, as the previous one ended, but then I came to realize that showing from the beginnig the aftermath of the battle was a smart choice.
The return of Daenerys was definitely a plus, but I was hoping to see also some of the scenes out from Season 2 you left. Especially her vision in the House of the Undying because of the events of the final season.
One other thing that I was hoping to see and didn’t make the cut was the whole ‘The Bear and the Maiden Fair’ arc. But I understand why you chose to left it out and, if I have to be honest, it didn’t affect at all Jaime’s and Brien’s growth throughout the film.
Finally, concerning the “big event” of Season 3, I was hoping that you would leave it completely untouched for I believe it is trully a flawless sequence. But again I liked what you chose to do. Merging of the ‘mergins’ in a montage between the weddings of the Freys and the Lannisters, was I really smart move. And of course THAT ending. A “cold start” and a “cold end”. Genius.

Summing up, I think Film III was a bit more ‘artistic’ than the previus two films and I absolutely loved that.
I have said it before and I will say it once more: You are doing God’s work here. I salute you, frined.
I can’t wiat for Film IV!