Taolar

Doctor M said:

dark_jedi said:

WOW Boon is gone? wonder if I could log in now or if I am still banned LOL, I friggin HATED that site for a long time and some of the admins there, wonder if they are gone now to,hell maybe the site is better now, who knows.

+1.  Boon was a major issue.

For the record I've never had a single problem with Boon.  Actually, the opposite:  He's always been very supportive of me, and this project. He was the first person to reply when I started this thread, and one of the first to review the workprint.  I like the guy a lot, and not just because of his glowing review. ;)

FE.org has been fairly good to me too, although I never felt totally at home there.  My only real issue is that when I released my workprint they moved my Son of Jorel thread from the "Fanedits IN PROGRESS" forum to a new "Workprints and Previews" forum, which got a lot less traffic (and now
that I've re-checked, it actually doesn't appear in the main forum index page anymore).  I'm sure it was meant to better categorize it, but in the end it makes it invisible to most readers unless they do a search for it, and that's probably what caused it to not be seen by L8wrtr and Jelio.  Oh well.

Back on subject: Taolar, although I love the name you've been using, perhaps a name change on the next version would be a good idea.

I'll definitely come up with something different.  That's what I get for taking so long to finish it.  Hey, what do you think about just using a Kryptonian symbol and letting people call it The Edit Previously Known as Son of Jorel?  ;)

L8wrtr,

There is no need to apologize. After letting my project go dormant for 2 years, it would be ridiculous of me to claim eternal rights to the title.  And "Son of Jor-el" is said several times in Superman 2, so its totally expected that another fan editor would eventually come up with the title idea on his own. So no hard feelings.  I should've gotten mine out years ago!

Best of luck with your edit.  I'll be sure to check it out.

-Taolar

markapplelover said:

Taolar said:

Oh, I have no idea.  I haven't downloaded it.  Their page is here: http://fanedit.org/12931/

 

I meant YOUR version.

Have a search on Demonoid for Taolar or "Son of Jorel"

Oh, I have no idea.  I haven't downloaded it.  Their page is here: http://fanedit.org/12931/

FYI, the Superman 1 & 2 combination fan edit released last month on Fanedit.org, titled "Superman: Son of Jor-El" is not mine.

Hopefully there is no confusion.

markapplelover said:

I can't find it on Demonoid. Can anyone tell me the name of the file so I can find it?

 

Very eager to see this.

Search for "taolar".

I can't believe its coming up on 2 years since I released that.  Damn, I need to get cracking.  :)

Thanks everyone for the continued interest.  Its not dead.  Just in a coma.

Hi Lorang,

Unfortunately I've had two computer crashes.  While very little of SoJ was lost (nothing I didn't have copies of, I think), I did lose all the software configurations I was using for various things, like converting the HD footage, and haven't had the time/motivation to get everything re-installed and re-configured.  So nothing has been done yet.

Thanks for your continued interest.  I'm not giving up!  Just procrastinating...

-T

Thanks Chewtobacca!  

Adywan, thanks for these!  I'm showing Empire at my annual marathon this weekend.  The audience is a bunch of geeks who will SO appreciate your color corrections.

Were the higher bitrate mkv's that you hinted at ever made available?

Thanks again,

-T

Hey, that would be cool.  I'd love to have that as much as I'd love to get the original Superman II in HD!

Hey guys,

I'm sorry to say I haven't done very much with this project since releasing the workprint.  Nothing at all in the past few months, other than thinking about it.

My deadline of releasing it "sometime this year" isn't possible.  I have too much going on.

But this project is NOT DEAD.  I will release this.  And hopefully will have much more time between Christmas and April.

Thanks for still being interested.  I'll do my best not to disappoint.

-T

demomanTNA said:

First of all fantastic work so far Taolar. I really look forward to seeing the final edit. Anyways there is one thing that has always bothered me on the first Superman that is still there on the workprint cut. The Kryptonite rock around Supes after Miss Tessmarker saves him from drowning is no longer green. Is there any chance that could be fixed by putting the green back in the rock by any chance?

I never noticed that before.  I took a look at it, and it does appear to be the same color, but not glowing.  For some reason I never noticed that.  I'll see what I can do, but can't make promises.  :) Thanks!

lorang said:

Hi Taolar hows things coming along with this its been 2 months since any word! Really looking forward to your finished product as I believe it will be the definitive Supes Fan Edit that will be out there. 

Hi lorang, I've been too busy to do much work on this, unfortunately.  But that's because business is up, which is good.  It definitely feels like the economy is getting better.  Hopefully this will somehow mean I can spend time on this in the near future.  I'm still passionate about it.  And I plan to show some stuff off by the end of the month.  :) Thanks!

Tons O' Fun said:

So I finally got it off demonoid, and I must say it really did bring that nostalga of being a kid and remembering the movies for being much faster pased and I found it really enjoyable. For not having watched Superman 1 or 2 in years I feel the edit worked in bridging the 2 movies into one I really wasn't sure where one ended and 2 began, great job.

The only thing I can say is I do miss the Mt. Rushmore bit, and when Zod and crew are terroizing the town Ursa suddenly has a police badge on and I can't remember if she took it from a character you removed, but I'd like to see where she got it from.

Glad you enjoyed the workprint. :)  The Rushmore scene is a little too golden age comic booky for this edit.  And I'll see what I can do about explaining the badge, because I agree that it shouldn't just come out of nowhere like that.  I can't make any promises though.  Thanks!

-T

Oldfan said:

I do agree that the warning is pretty much useless. ...

 

I still disagree.  FF, I suggest continuing to use the warning.  Fair use laws are fairly nebulous.  But one of the four things that courts look at when deciding is it's use for commercial gain.  If you place the warning, you'll be less likely a target than fan editors who don't.  It's not any sort of a guarantee against prosecution.  But it might be one step in your defense's job of swaying a jury.  And if lawsuits are ever brought against fan editors, I think it's safe to say they will target the biggest offenders first and those actually doing it for profit.  Having a warning in the front will at least support your argument that you're not doing this for any gain.  Actually, I'd suggest a disclaimer saying that you did this only for educational purposes (your own), which is another factor that the courts decided is allowed in fair use.

Like I said, it's not a get out of jail free card.  It may not help you at all.  But it could be a factor that helps your defense, if it ever comes to that.   And even if some viewers find it annoying, it's really only a couple seconds of their time.  No real harm in keeping it in.

Just my 2 cents.

lorang said:

Hi Taolar how are things coming with the project since the initial pre release 4 months ago, have you managed to resolve any of the niggles you were going to work on, I was so blown away by the pre release would love to know what you've tickered with or changed on the way to your final cut???

Hey Lorang.  Yeah, I'm tinkering here and there.  Things are going slow though, and nothing's been crossed off the list.  Winter is a rough time of year with the business, and I'm just now starting to get time to work on this.  Actually, I should have most of the weekend to myself.  And now that I have my HDDVD drive back, I'll be able to do some FX stuff.  So maybe that list will get smaller.  :)

One advantage to the warning screens is they protect the fan editor, at least in theory, by showing that he did not create the fan edit in order to make money off of it.

Try VLC or mplayer.  The Mac versions will let you watch Xvid AVIs.

discostewart said:

Fair point, im just racking my brain how to fix this one issue cause i think every plothole can be dismissed or explained away but this one bugs me hehe. What about your idea of the audio overdub? you could take the line: "where does superman always fly?"

Unfortunately that line doesn't exist.  Otis says "he always flys off" and all Lex says is "Where?"

I will keep working on in though.  It bugs me too.

One cool idea might be a cgi paper (there are some in the streets scens if i rememeber that could say something like"LUTHOR AT LARGE" or "CRIMINAL MASTERMIND ON THE RUN"

Did you actually watch my edit?  :)  10 seconds into part 2:

Its going to be cleaned up and animated for the final release.

p.s. please get your ass into gear i want to show people your cut, but not till its done.

Ok.  :)

discostewart said:

Stewart says: Its tricky but i personally would put a very short version of the prison escape in.

Actually, I don't have a problem with most of the prison scenes (apart from the escape by hot air balloon, which could never be successful), if these were two separate movies.

In my version only night passes between the two parts.  It just can't make sense that Lex would have enough time to plan an escape, invent that black box, etc.

STEWART SAYS: Actually on rewatching it does work, he just thinks their arm wrestle is pathetic. One thing i noticed is the sound cut is a bit abrupt on the window throw scene though ;) Thats probably what made it stick out first time round. Also i would take just a short segment of the town street scene and put it before the arm wrestle scene as its just a usual editing tactic to have an establishing shot (ie ok, now we are in a small town).

Yes, I agree that an establishing shot would make the scene work better.  I'm going to try a couple things.  Thanks for your suggestions.

side note: I did think about reinserting the "cop car scene", most of the schtick can be taken out of it with clever editing (the chessy lines and hand blowing could be removed). This would:

Ugh... that really is an awful scene.  I understand your points.  I just don't see it fitting into my edit at all.

 STEWART SAYS: True, yet as you repairing the scripting issues from the original, is there is any other non-time dependent scene (ie a scene that can easily be moved forward, that isnt linear to the story), to "suggest" more time has passed. 

I hear you.  I'll take a look at it.

FINAL IDEAS:

I know if u do my ideas, ive lengthened the film, but mostly in areas where the flow is already good, and only with very shoert scenes. i hope im helping and not being annoying, i did do editing at media college but a looooooong time ago. :)

Not annoying at all.  I appreciate the input.  :)

- the bit where superman tries to hug his dad i dont think translates well, ilike the intention but it just looks odd. Could u cut after "my son" somwehere?

Yeah, it is a little odd, and has been edited a bit already to make it feel a bit more natural.  But I like it because its one of the only scenes that shows his affection for his father, and it also shows Kalel's loneliness, his inability to have any physical contact with the only person who he can really tell his secrets to.  Which makes his giving up Jorel for Lois Lane more meaningful.

- if u wanted to lose a scene from part 1 the whole Luthor swimming scene could be removed (sound editing permitting), as it doesnt further any plot really. So u go straight from the ice palace "my son"scene to "look ma no wires".

Well the scene serves a couple purposes for me.  I edited so Ms. T shows some defiance, and that she's becoming fascinated with Superman, both of which I need to do to make her changed motive for free-ing superman realistic.  It also has the news reporter, which if I didn't use, it would make my use of a news reporter at the end even more out of place.  On a minor note, it shows that Lex is wearing wigs, which explains why his hair style changes every scene.  It also sets up a little mystery of what his "crime of the century" is.

- One other thing, in the ice palace, i would consider reinserting the other crystal being tried first, as it just gets rid of that niggle of him choosing the right one first, plus it gives an indication that he learns other stuff while there "son of jorel " etc.n Just seemed a harsh edit for me.

Ok, I'll take another look at it.  Although, since we no longer see him leaving, it can be assumed that he plays with the controls all day, and learns all sorts of things off camera.

I hope some of this is useful, i loving the edit and desperately wanna own the dvd ;) when you releasing the final file ?

Sometime this year, after I get my ass in gear.  :)

Thanks for the input!

Looking forward to both!

In the case of this movie, I'm glad I wasn't familiar with the graphic novel beforehand. It seems like a lot of people who've read the novel are having a hard time reconciling the differences. The one thing that most people agree on is that the opening credits were a masterpiece. I'm thinking that's because they were new to everybody.

I agree.  I hadn't read the graphic novel in 5+ years, and purposely didn't pick it up before watching the movie, because I didn't want to be analyzing the movie, comparing it to the GN, etc.  And, except for a few things, I loved the movie.  All of my friends who did the same enjoyed it too.

After re-reading the GN after watching the movie, I was reminded of a lot of things that I wished were in the movie.  But it would've been impossible to do under 4 or 5 hours.

I was 15 when Watchmen Issue 1 hit the stands, and I couldn't believe what I had bought. The issue had so much going on with it that I think I reread it 3 or 4 times, and got more out of it with each reading. And each issue was, to me, more amazing than the last.

I went into this movie KNOWING it couldn't be as good as the graphic novel, even so, my expectations were very high. I believed the hype, which is usually a bad idea. Most movies cannot live up to their hyper-distilled in-your-face trailer. The Watchmen is not a perfect movie, but I wasn't expecting a perfect movie, so I was glad to get a great one.

Zack Snyder found the right tone, the right actors, and the right FX guys. He was able to distill the plot down to a bare minimum, sometimes feeling a bit rushed, but without damaging it. Like any good movie based on a novel, the Watchmen managed to feel just like it's source, even though the bulk of it had to be cut out.

Except for Ozymandias. all the main actors were pitch perfect, dead ringers. But Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach just stole the movie. Rorschach gets the best lines in the graphic novel, and Haley plays them all to full effect. I do not have a single critique of his performance. This actor was born to play Rorschach.

The FX were all great. I was a little afraid, after the movie 300, that the greenscreen scenes would stand out as fake, but they they all looked real to me. Dr. Manhattan looked great too, although some of his animation was a little stiff.

At times the movie did feel a bit rushed to me, but maybe that's only because I know the source material so well. The movie was 2 hours and 40 minutes, and it felt like a 90 minute action movie. They say an extended version is planned for DVD. I could easily see the story feeling comfortable at 3 1/2 hours, and I usually don't like long movies.

Last night it felt a little too graphically violent, but when I flipped through the graphic novel today I remembered how violent the comic really was. It's funny how getting a little older can make me more sensitive to this stuff. Also the sex scene is probably a little too explicit, since it is definitely tamer in the comic. And while I really applaud the studios for not changing Dr. Manhattan's image, there is at times a distracting amount of blue dong. This is without a doubt an R-rated movie.

Last but not least, the ending. Going into the movie, I was bummed at the reports that the ending had been changed. The graphic novel's ending was definitely strange, but I think that's part of what makes it so good. I realize why they felt like they had to change it for the movie. It makes sense, especially since they didn't have the time to properly set up the original ending. Actually, the new ending isn't that different, and surprisingly, may make a little more sense than the original. I didn't feel let down.

Anyway, the two people who came with me who hadn't read the graphic novel, loved the movie. My freidn Jason, who is as much a crazed fan of the original comic as I am, enjoyed the movie too. There was a lot that could have gone wrong with the adaptation. But Snyder pulled it off, in his own style.

I give this 4 1/2 out of 5 stars, and will go see it again soon!

It was supposed to be the latest version, but I wasn't able to render it in time.  Not a big deal though, since there aren't that many differences so far.  So I showed the same one that I released in December.

I do have a list of changes that I'm want to do, but I'm going to keep most of them a surprise.  :)

Thanks FF.  Looking forward to your Trek release!

Hey Everybody,

This weekend I did my final test screening of SoJ to an audeince of ten on a huge projection screen.  The audience was comprised of people who aren't editors, nor fanedit fans, and mostly people who hadn't seen the original Superman in many years.  It was a success, with only two issues being pointed out after the show, both of which I already planned to fix.

Seeing it on a huge screen was a lot of fun, and the vast majority of my FX shots stood up to basically being zoomed in on, so I was surprised and happy. I did notice some new issues that no one has raised though, and will put them on my list of fixes.  Also I had some ideas for some easy improvements that I hadn't thought of before.

For those editors that have the chance, I highly recommend doing a test screening of your edit, especially on as big a screen as you can.  Seeing it on a huge screen, and through the eyes of people who are just viewers, and not interested in the editing process, gave me a different perspective on mine, and I think the final product will be improved because of it.

-T

discostewart said:

Im watching your cut right now and reeally enjoying it. You asked for feedback so here are theits i didnt like as much.A lways feel negative to say what you dont like so please take that if i havent commented on something its cause i loved it and thought 90% of it was great ! Also bear in mind its been years since ive seen the original so i going from memory.

Cool.  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and am always up for hearing some thoughtful criticism while I'm still hammering down all the nails.

SPECIFICS
- i thought the first half of the movie (cd1) was seemlessly put together, i personally would prefer if it was edited down a bit as it takes quite a long time for us to get to the real main part of the story (zods arrival), not sure what edits u could make. (The flying scene with louis goes on for a while tho, particularly as we get another scene of this later on as they fly after niagra falls). But i just genuinally felt it needs alittle more cutting down to get the flow in line with modern cinema.

I hear you.  But this movie is still his only origin movie, and the beginning serves a very specific purpose, and pace.  I've shorted several scenes, including the destruction of Krypton.  The beginning still is at this deliberate pace to contrast the quicker pace of the rest of the movie. 

The flying scene is actually considerably shorter than in the original.  I'm afraid cutting it further will ruin that scene.  There has to be enough time for her to realistically seem to get comfortable with flying, so she can take the risk and then fall.  The time after that fall is about as short as I could manage without it looking chopped up. 

I'm always up for finding ways to shorten the run-time of the film, without taking out anything essential.  Each scene left, especially in the first half, serves a purpose.  Maybe I'm missing something, but I can't see what else can be cut without damaging the film.

* - you can tell you've paused frames for us to read the paper headlines at  the start of cd2 it looks odd (unless this is a glitch on my copy)

Actually, that's an unfinished FX scene.  I just put in temp photoshoped stills of how  I want the newspaper to read.  Making it move is probably the toughest FX shot I have left to do.

- you dont explain how lex luthor finds the north palace. Not sure how u can include it without the prison break tho.

Yeah, this is probably the biggest plot hole that I've created (even though it corrects even bigger plot holes).  I've tried using dialog over their snowmobile trip to explain how he knows where to find the fortress, but none of it works. 

But considering how Lex already seems to come up with knowledge out of thin air (like how does he know Kryptonite will hurt Superman?  How does he know that meteorite that had fallen was Kryptonite?  How does he know Superman can hear the higher frequencies, etc...), this really isn't that big of a plot hole.  At least that's how I justify it to myself.  :)

But if you have an idea of a solution, I'm up for hearing it (as long as it doesn't involve putting the prison scenes back in.)

As an aside,i never liked how he "magically" picks the crystal telling him about zod, in the original doesnt i take him some more time to find it ?

Yeah, in the original he tried one more crystal.  But I think that scene is unnecessary. 

Superman has no trouble operating it for the first time, apparently because the crystal subconsciously guided him to that.  And at the end Lex gains, out of thin air, the knowledge of how to operate the molecule chamber.

In this scene Lex asks for Ms. T to hand him a specific crystal, which turns out to be the one about Zod.  It's as if he knew what he wanted somehow.

My rationalilzation is that this Kryptonian technology is so highly advanced that the user interface has reached a state of perfection.  Maybe the sound the crystals make is them communicating with whomever is using it, subconsciously instructing him how to get what he's want.

- i like the jump from the scene with zod et al burning the snake (15.25 on disc 2) with the snake on fire to the fire atniagra falls but it feels a bit inserted there. ie very short scene with no real plot furtherence. shouldnt this be part of when they come out of the water (as original?) ?

Actually the scenes weren't connected in the original either.  But I will look into merging them because I agree that both are too short as it is.

* - why do u edit the krypton female arm wrestling the guy in the cafe? it doesnt explain why he gets thrown thru the window. also by editing the scenes there we dont really see zod getting increasingly impatient with weak humans,  he just jumps to get "bored" with humans. It seems to jump too quickly to the army arriving.

I edited them out for a few reasons: 1) the acting in that scene is horrible.  The hicks really ham it up, and it just doesn't fit in with the rest of the edit, 2) the way it was shot wasn't very cinematic, 3) they threaten to attack Ursa  first, thus giving Zod justification for the throw, making the viewer sympathetic to them, when it's not necessary.  This scene takes place soon after the moon scene, where they killed everyone for no reason.  So them out of nowhere, throwing this guy through the wall isn't out of character.

I agree that my solution is a bit sudden and so not perfect. But I haven't come with a better one.  Please give the original scene a watch and let me know if you have any suggestions on how to fix it: http://www.heathenofeden.com/zoddinersceneorigDIVX.avi

* - the gap between superman losinghis powers and wishing to regain them now seems too short, perhaps of rediting could suggest a longer passage of time?

Acctually, you'll be surprised to know that in the original Superman 2 there are 8 minutes 47 seconds between the scene where he loses his power and the scene where he's hiking back to the fortress to regain everything.  In my version the time between is 11 minutes and 27 seconds.

-  at 1:09(cd2) i would go straight from "good morning metropolis" to "just minutes ago" as the guy isnt a great actor nd this make sit seem to flow better in my view.

I'll give it another watch.

I LOVE the new ending (removal of time trvael and kiss, set up for the (awful) superman returns).

* Only commentis please "remove the to be conitNued".

Someone else mentioned that too, and I was against it.  But after watching it over the weekend, I've come to the same conclusion.  There's no need for it.  It's out.

I hope u dont mind my suggestions. Its nearly my perfect version of superman ut if u dont agree with some of my comments then i will hapilly live with the nearly perfect version ;)

Thanks for the input.  it's why I released this copy.  It is very much appreciated.