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#256746
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King Kong: The Spence Edit 2.0 (Released)
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Hello all. Today, like some of you, i purcahsed the King Kong Extended Edition. Loving this new material (the extended and new scenes, and the deleted scenes that weren’t incorporated into the film) i’d like to re-edit the film again, sort of a second version of my previous edit. It will keep the same ideas, but the edit will be very different. I will not just be adding new scenes to it, certain parts of the edit i want to completely redo. The Venture voyage will especially get some work, and a couple of the new action scenes will go into the island section.

My thoughts thus far:
-though i still dislike the jimmy/hayes story, there is a little more closure to it now thanks to some deleted scenes. I may incorporate some of them. Though I don’t want to focus on it too much, that storyline is unavoidable.
-I may try to get the crew onto the ship even faster. Though I like the New York stuff, the real meat of the film begins with the Venture.
-Englehorn, Hayes, Choy, and Jimmy all have some really great deleted scenes i’d like to incorporate. It adds to their characters and makes you care for them more.
-The stampede might go. Or at least be shortened. This would be to incorporate the swamp sequence and the triceratops scene.
-I’d like to replace Ann’s awkward meeting with Jack with the deleted scenes, where she overhears him talking down on Vaudeville actors. This also tells you she did Vaudeville, making the New York scenes unimportant.

I have some other ideas too that i need to play with a bit more. I’ll gladly take suggestions, too. If you haven’t picked up the Kong Extended Edition you should. It’s a big improvement over the theatrical cut, though it’s still not perfect.

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#254882
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MI:II Edit (* unfinished project *)
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Hey folks. I was thinking of doing an edit of Mission Impossible II. I’m not the biggest fan of the film, though i think a lot of it is good, i think its filled with bad lines, crappy music and subpar editing. I would try to remedy as much of this as possible and bring the film up to the level of 1 and 3.

I’d love some ideas on what might help. Here’s my preliminary ideas.

  • take out the useless opening scene with the doctor explaining Bolerafont and Chimera. This gets explained to us twice later in the film. Unnecessary and poorly executed.
  • some of that silly car chase with Niah.
  • get rid of some of the ridiculous slow motion. This is Mission Impossible, not Walker Texas Ranger.
  • replace some of the crappy electric guitar score, replace it with some of Michael Giaccino’s fantastic MI:III score.
  • remove all the horrible “i’m doing this, and this is why!” explanation scenes. We can understand whats happening when we see it. I don’t need to be told what I’m seeing as well.

This film might not get a huge reworking, as I don’t know how much can be fixed/changed. Any other ideas anyone has I’d love to hear.

Also, I know there was a re-release of the film with a 2nd disc. Anyone know if this set included any deleted scenes?

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#252111
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Star Wars prequel film noir (* unfinished project *)
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I very much want to work on this project, it's the only edit i am involved with at the moment (other than my Matrix Reloaded edit i cant get to freakin' work!). Anything you need help with let me know!

My defenese of this scene is that its so much like an old universal horror movie it's almost too fun to pass up!

On the "Noooo!", I actually thought it worked a bit better with the narration and new music, it came off less silly and a little more dramatic. The No! makes sense if he tells you why he's yelling it.
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#251938
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Star Wars prequel film noir (* unfinished project *)
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I did a quick test last night, mainly for my own entertainment. I took the sequence of Anakin being put in the Vader suit, wrote some quick narration, read it myself, and threw in some effects. It's rough and in no way final, it's just to kind of give an idea of where this thing could go.

The voice is me, i'm sick and i didnt have time to record it more than once. It's not very good i'm afraid. The music is from the Philip Glass score to the 1931 Dracula movie.

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#251510
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Star Wars prequel film noir (* unfinished project *)
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i love the idea of palpatine doing the electricity routine. that has to go in. I think we need to piece together a basic plot outline, and by we i mean anyone that wants to help. e-mails and pm's as well as this thread should be utilized. Once we have the basic plot and know what we want to use from what movies, we can piece the "script" together in no time

i'm so excited about this i could pee.
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#251125
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Feedback Wanted: ROTS - The narration cut
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Hey everybody. If you haven’t seen the Film noir edit thread, please do so. There’s a great project happening in there. That project involves re-editing the entire movie, changing the story, it’s a true re-imagining. the most interesting aspect is the hard-boiled voice over that Anakin will have. A suggestion was made that some stuff from the novelization be used as some of the narration. This led me to read the book again, and i love loads of stuff that was in there.

I would like to do a very minor re-edit of ROTS, nothing like the Film Noir edit, which I still want to help with, but I would like to add narration for Anakin to the film as it is. I think this could bring out a lot of good stuff that the actors (and the director) couldn’t convey.

Here’s the plan:

*Use ADM ROTS edit as a basis (I consider this the best version available.)
*Change very minor things that annoy me (a little bit of the editing in the Sidious/Windu fight, some bad dialogue, etc.) Nothing big, or anything that would change the storyline at all.
*A New narration would be written using the novelization as its basis. Things would be rephrased into the first person, as if they were Anakin’s thoughts. This will only be where i think it’s needed and/or applicable. This will require a voice over actor, somebody taht does a good Anakin voice, or somebody that can just deliver it well.

Let me know what you guys think, and again, if you havent checked out the star wars film noir thread, please do. It’s gonna blow you all away.

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#251090
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Star Wars prequel film noir (* unfinished project *)
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that doesnt necessarily make them bad guys, they're just also manipulative. And if Anakin can draw enough parallels between the jedi and the sith, the dark side may appeal to him even more.

plus, it adds some depth to the later episodes. perhaps the jedi kind of needed to be wiped out, to balance everything out, so that Luke could begin a sort of Jedi renaissance.
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#250866
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Star Wars prequel film noir (* unfinished project *)
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what i thought might be a cool idea is that the Jedi themselves, at this point in time, are corrupt, but their teachings and philosophies are still pure and light. Anakin could kind of confuse the whole thing as being corrupt, and go to the darkside, which does not try to restrain him ("unlimited power!!") whereas obi-wan wants him to realize the jedi teachings have value. or something.
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#250636
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Star Wars prequel film noir (* unfinished project *)
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Here's a little bit of work i did, just a couple of pages. Very rough, but I think it's going in the right direction. I tried to incorporate some of the stuff you guys were talking about with a couple things of my own. I liked the idea of the Jedi being the police of the planet, with Mustafar being like a prison. However, to keep continuity, the Clone Wars had to have happened, so I figure why not just make them have occured in the past. Maybe Anakin having some 'Nam-esque flashbacks could add to his confusion and ultimately to his downfall. It also gives the Jedi a little bit more of a hypocritical side, which i thought was an interesting idea Lucas didn't really push enough. Perhaps the Jedi set up the war to get themselves more power, to gain popularity with the people. This betrayal could make Anakin turn on the Jedi, especially if he has awful memories of the war, and decide that the Sith and their freedom, their unrestrained power, is the better path to go down.

Anyway, let me know what you think.


FADE IN:

EXT. HAD ABADDON PRISON, NIGHT

A volcanic wasteland, lava flowing from many directions. The
camera eventually finds the burning body of Anakin Skywalker,
charred and black, he moans in pain.

ANAKIN (VO)
I never expected to end up here.
Taken convicts to this joint dozens
of times, never thought it'd be the
end of the line for me. These
volcanic spots are too unstable to
build on, not to mention how
unpleasant it is to be here anyway.
The Jedi stick their prisoners here.
Sure, we can't kill the bad guys,
but we can stick them in this hell
hole until they eventually take a
wrong step and end up in the hot
stuff. Just like I did. I ended up
just like everyone else the Jedi
think are "scum". No one else saw
what I saw. How I got here is a
long story, but it's one worth
telling. And it's looking like I
got all the time in the world.

EXT. HAD ABADDON CITY, DAY

A sprawling, huge city filled with bustling streets. The
highways reach far up into the skies. Ships and planes fly by.

ANAKIN (V0)
Had Abaddon. City of the Republic.
Policed by the Jedi Knights. Here
live the rich, the aristocrats, the
politicians. Since the Clone Wars
ended, Had Abaddon has become a
planet of peace and prosperity, the
main source of democracy in this
galaxy.

We now see flashes of battles and destruction, scenes from
various media involving The Clone Wars.

ANAKIN (V0)
The clone wars are forgotten much
too quickly. While the nation, the
Jedi, they all move on, I can't
help but remember the horrors I
witnessed. It was only a few years
ago after all.
2.


We now see Anakin with his wife, Padme.

ANAKIN (VO)
I've tried to move on, just like
everyone else. I have a wife now,
and a kid on the way.

Shots of Anakin fighting various bad guys, and various
villainous looking guys getting slammed behind bars.

ANAKIN (VO)
I police the city, take down the
criminals, the low lives, lock 'em
up in the joint. Protect the
citizens, preserve the peace.

Now we're showing Anakin doing various things involving the
force.

ANAKIN (VO)
When I'm not taking down who the
Jedi tell me to, Master Obi-Wan has
got me training, practicing,
improving my power over the force.
Apparently, I've got more potential
than any of the other Jedi. I'm
like their little science experiment,
their lab rat. Their secret weapon.