āCool, what are the main elements you plan to cut from your edit?ā
A lot of filler, while making sure to keep the breather - as a screenwriter I know how to apply the ātension & releaseā principleā¦
Combining ep 3 & 7 already cut the flashback scenes in halfā¦
I took care to keep in mind, and on screen, the tragedy of Solās demise, while trying to create empathy with Osha (which is non existent at the moment!).
The actual conclusion of the episode 8 is draging too long, for my taste, Sol is dead⦠Osha is escaping, so I reduced in lenght the scene under the tree⦠I used however some shots under the tree that I cross-cut during the conversation with Vernestra - as quick visual flashback, suggesting how maybe, Mae donāt remember anythingā¦
I also used a lot of ovelapping sound editing between scenes, J-cut and L-cutā¦
I while try to compile the modifications that Iāve made soon.
The actual lenght is 2hrs 56min with credits and āfan edit noticeā
All in all, I rearranged the continuity a lotā¦