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Just uploaded the general changes. Although I feel calling them “general” is kind of misleading. But it’s the best terminology I can come up with for now. There are no additions this time around, since I can’t find (nor do I believe there is) an official release with deleted scenes. So, instead, we’re left with just “-” for deleted, and “/” for changed or altered. I’ve removed a few lines of dialogue via sound editing, so those will be marked as “Audio:”

Keep in mind that, due to my concerns about consistency with the other two, this list isn’t final and subject to change.

Okay, that’s enough talk. Click on the spoiler tab below to see the changes I’ve made so far:

/ Opening crawl
– Kylo Ren’s visit to Mustafar (Ren finding the wayfinder is mentioned in my rewritten opening crawl instead, making this scene pointless)
– Epilepsy-inducing close-up shot of Palpatine
– “Everything.”
– “Kill the girl.”
– Falcon lightspeed-skipping scene, as it isn’t needed
– “They’re not with me. Ugh.”
– Part of Rey’s training course to make her less invincible
– “General, the falcon still hasn’t arrived. Commander’s asking for guidance.”
– Rey handing Luke’s lightsaber back to Leia
– First half of Rey’s conversation with Poe and Finn over the falcon
– “We’ve decoded the intel from the First Order spy, and it confirms the worst. Somehow, Palpatine returned.”
– Leia giving Luke’s lightsaber back to Rey
– Stormtrooper’s talk about the Knights of Ren
– Kylo Ren’s meeting with the First Order about the spy
– Shot of laughing Passana child (Too Disney-fied for me)
– “Palpatine wants you dead.”, “Serving another master?”, “No. I have other plans.”
– “…Why didn’t you?”, “You could’ve killed me. Why didn’t you?”, “You can’t hide, Rey. Not from me.”, “I see through the cracks in your mask. You’re haunted. You can’t stop seeing what you did to your father.”
– “I don’t want to have to kill you. I’m going to find you and I’m gonna turn you to the dark side…”
– Poe’s “They fly now.”
– Leia and Rose’s conversation with the X-Wing pilot about being more optimistic
– Rey and Finn’s conversation about what Finn was gonna tell Rey
– “Bones! I don’t like bones!”, “Bones? Never a good sign.”
– “I’ma blast it.”, “Don’t blast it.”
– Knights of Ren entering Pasaana
– All of Rey and Kylo Ren’s confrontation on Pasaana
– Chewie’s capture and “supposed” death scene
– The First Order’s capture of the Millennium Falcon
– Pryde and Hux’s discussion on Chewie, including the reveal that he’s alive
– All mentions of Chewie’s death during Rey, Finn, Poe, and C-3P0’s conversation on Ochi’s ship
– And yes, all “For Chewie” lines
– Pride and Hux informing Kylo that the scavenger is on Kajimi
– Rey sensing Chewie on the ship
– Zorii giving Poe the imperial medallion (due to the removal of the next scene)
– The entire episode on Kylo Ren’s ship, including the following four subplots:
---- Rey finding out she’s a Palpatine (Luke reveals this instead, and it’s stated that Rey found this out earlier, either in this movie, or possibly even in TLJ)
---- Chewie getting rescued
---- General Hux’s rebel spy reveal (and eventual death by Pryde)
---- The crew getting the Falcon back
– “I don’t know why they’re not following us, but I don’t trust it… Landing gear’s busted? How busted?”
– Scene with Palpatine reminding Kylo to kill Rey
– “Wh-wh-wh-what is that?”, “It’s the death star. It’s a bad place from an old war.”, “It’s gonna take us years to find what we’re looking for.”, “Oh, dear.”
– Scene where BB-8 and D-O play with Endor wildlife
– Scene where Finn and Jannah start getting romantic with each other
– Scene where Finn and Poe argue with each other
– “You can’t go back to her now. Like I can’t.”
– “The Dark Side is in our nature. Surrender to it.”
– “Leia knows what must be done, R2. To reach her son now will take all the strength she has left.”
– “REY!”
– Shot of Rey leaping higher than the wave
– “…Ben’s hand.”
– Palpatine making Pryde general and ordering him to destroy a planet
/ Moved Kylo Ren’s scene with Han Solo to after the destruction of Kajimi instead of before, fixing a flaw in the plot structure. Scene now begins after Lando’s line, “We had each other. That’s how we won.”
– “She’s going to Exegol.” Thus includes the cutaway to Rey flying over there, too.
– Poe’s big speech intercut to the montage of the resistance preparing for their flight to Exegol. (Doesn’t feel very Star Wars-y. Plus, Finn and Poe’s discussion before the montage gets the same point across just fine.)
– “How do you know?”, “A feeling.”
– “They’ve landed a troop carrier.”, “Jam the speeders.”, “We can’t, sir.”, “Why not?”, “They’re not using speeders.”
– “Not bad for one lesson.”, “You had a good teacher.”
– “You’re doing great, buddy. Tower’s up ahead!”
– “I never wanted you dead. I wanted you here…”
– “You will take the throne.”
– “…Our blood.”, “I haven’t come to lead the Sith. I’ve come to end them.”, “As a jedi?”, “Yes.”, “No. Your hatred, your anger. You want to kill me. That is what I want…”
– Audio: “…As all the Sith live in me…”
– “I’m staying with you.”
– “With your hatred, you will take my life, and you will ascend.”, “All you want is for me to hate, but I won’t. Not even you.”, “Weak. Like your parents.”, “My parents were strong. They saved me from you.”
/ Moved Kylo Ren’s return to just a little later for greater emotional impact
/ Same with Kylo running inside Palpatine’s lair
– Audio: “The ritual begins! She will strike me down and pledge herself as a Sith.”
– Audio: “She will draw her weapon! She will come to me! She will take her revenge… And with a stroke of her saber, the Sith are reborn!”
– “…Every one we knock out is a world saved!”
– “Where did they get all these fighter craft? They have no navy.”, “It’s not a navy, sir. It’s just people.”
– “As once I fell, so falls the last Skywalker!”
– “Do not fear that feeble attack my faithful. Nothing will stop the return of the Sith!”
– “Let your death be the final word in the story of rebellion!”
– “You are nothing! A scavenger girl is no match for the power in me! I am all the Sith!”, “And I… Am all the Jedi!”
– General Pryde’s reaction before he dies
– Rey and Kylo kissing
– Shots of Cloud City, Endor, and Jakku as the Final Order is destroyed
– A few shots of rebels hugging
– The lesbian kiss
– Chewie getting his medal
– “Where are you from, General?”, “The Gold system.”, “Well, what about you, kid?”, “Oh, I don’t know.”, “Well, let’s find out.”
– Reaction shot of Rey looking at the Skywalker dinner table
– Rey burying Luke and Leia’s lightsabers
– “Rey Skywalker.”

After giving it some more thought, I decided to remove all shots of the X-wing fighter pilots, including Poe’s, during the Starkiller base climax. This places the space battle in the background, and puts more of the focus on the ground level with Rey, Finn, and Han. Thus, the ending is even more simplified, and the Episode IV references are more like a homage instead of a ripoff.

Removing more shots of the pilots from the X-wing battle during the Starkiller base climax in the hope that it’ll reduce the Episode IV comparison effect some more.

nmxuci5970 said:

can I have a link to the work print for the first of the sequel trilogy eye painter edit as this looks the better way to suit its needs

PM sent!

Workprints uploaded. PM me if you’re interested.

CaptainFaraday said:

I’m interested to see how some of your changes play out - I like the theatrical cut a lot more than you do, but I agree, it’s a movie with some notable issues. I’ll wait until there’s a V1 though, cos as much as I’d like to watch the workprint, my time is completely dominated by Real Life Again for the next month or so.

Understood. Take care of yourself, Cap. Hope things are going well for you.

Anyway, I just uploaded the workprint. It’s available for anyone who wishes to PM me.

Just uploaded the workprint.

Get a Gilbert Gottfried soundalike to dub over all of Princess Leia’s lines.

Just released the lossless 1080p version. PM’s sent.

I have decided to release workprints for all three of my sequel trilogy edits soon. Two reasons: the first is to try and keep things consistent, specifically with TLJ and TROS. The second is because I feel I could use a second or third opinion to weed out any more inconsistencies that I may have missed or overlooked.

I’m currently rendering the first drafts of the opening crawls as I type this, and just like a lot of other things, they are a work in progress. I will most likely rewrite them before the official release. Other things that aren’t complete yet are the wipes, crossfades, and color grading.

If you want the specifics, keep reading. If not, you’ve got the cliff’s notes version of this post, and you can PM me for the workprints when I successfully release them.

I made some cuts in the middle of a few lines. I erased what remained of those lines for the workprint so that only the lines that I plan to keep will be featured.

I also started work on the color grading for all three edits. TFA and TLJ are both getting a more orange tinted D55 film look LUT, mainly to fix the not-so-Star Wars-y cyan tint that was prevalent in all three movies. I’m currently using a Kodak D55 LUT for TFA, and a Fuji D55 LUT for TLJ. TROS is the bluest of the three, so I decided to apply a more neutral Kodak D60 LUT instead. Since all three LUT’s are overly bright, I have temporarily readjusted them with the primary color wheels until I officially begin work on power grading them. They still look bright (at least, on my computer monitor), but the readjustment I’ve done should keep things from getting overly bright on most screens. Nevertheless, the color grading is incomplete in these workprints.

I haven’t worked on the wipes yet, so don’t expect any Star Wars style transitions. I know, and I will get to those.

Aside from the lines of dialogue I have removed, most of the sound editing is still incomplete. I’ve only added a couple crossfades throughout all three edits so far, and thus I have a long way to go. So, if the audio cutaways sound choppy or abrupt, it’s because I haven’t polished them up. I will take care of them, so ignore them for now.

I think that’s the gist of what to expect from the workprints. If you want to take a look at them (and give your two cents), feel free to PM me and I’ll send the links when they’re released.

I have decided to release workprints for all three of my sequel trilogy edits soon. Two reasons: the first is to try and keep things consistent, specifically with TLJ and TROS. The second is because I feel I could use a second or third opinion to weed out any more inconsistencies that I may have missed or overlooked.

I’m currently rendering the first drafts of the opening crawls as I type this, and just like a lot of other things, they are a work in progress. I will most likely rewrite them before the official release. Other things that aren’t complete yet are the wipes, crossfades, and color grading.

If you want the specifics, keep reading. If not, you’ve got the cliff’s notes version of this post, and you can PM me for the workprints when I successfully release them.

I made some cuts in the middle of a few lines. I erased what remained of those lines for the workprint so that only the lines that I plan to keep will be featured.

I also started work on the color grading for all three edits. TFA and TLJ are both getting a more orange tinted D55 film look LUT, mainly to fix the not-so-Star Wars-y cyan tint that was prevalent in all three movies. I’m currently using a Kodak D55 LUT for TFA, and a Fuji D55 LUT for TLJ. TROS is the bluest of the three, so I decided to apply a more neutral Kodak D60 LUT instead. Since all three LUT’s are overly bright, I have temporarily readjusted them with the primary color wheels until I officially begin work on power grading them. They still look bright (at least, on my computer monitor), but the readjustment I’ve done should keep things from getting overly bright on most screens. Nevertheless, the color grading is incomplete in these workprints.

I haven’t worked on the wipes yet, so don’t expect any Star Wars style transitions. I know, and I will get to those.

Aside from the lines of dialogue I have removed, most of the sound editing is still incomplete. I’ve only added a couple crossfades throughout all three edits so far, and thus I have a long way to go. So, if the audio cutaways sound choppy or abrupt, it’s because I haven’t polished them up. I will take care of them, so ignore them for now.

I think that’s the gist of what to expect from the workprints. If you want to take a look at them (and give your two cents), feel free to PM me and I’ll send the links when they’re released.

I have decided to release workprints for all three of my sequel trilogy edits soon. Two reasons: the first is to try and keep things consistent, specifically with TLJ and TROS. The second is because I feel I could use a second or third opinion to weed out any more inconsistencies that I may have missed or overlooked.

I’m currently rendering the first drafts of the opening crawls as I type this, and just like a lot of other things, they are a work in progress. I will most likely rewrite them before the official release. Other things that aren’t complete yet are the wipes, crossfades, and color grading.

If you want the specifics, keep reading. If not, you’ve got the cliff’s notes version of this post, and you can PM me for the workprints when I successfully release them.

I made some cuts in the middle of a few lines. I erased what remained of those lines for the workprint so that only the lines that I plan to keep will be featured.

I also started work on the color grading for all three edits. TFA and TLJ are both getting a more orange tinted D55 film look LUT, mainly to fix the not-so-Star Wars-y cyan tint that was prevalent in all three movies. I’m currently using a Kodak D55 LUT for TFA, and a Fuji D55 LUT for TLJ. TROS is the bluest of the three, so I decided to apply a more neutral Kodak D60 LUT instead. Since all three LUT’s are overly bright, I have temporarily readjusted them with the primary color wheels until I officially begin work on power grading them. They still look bright (at least, on my computer monitor), but the readjustment I’ve done should keep things from getting overly bright on most screens. Nevertheless, the color grading is incomplete in these workprints.

I haven’t worked on the wipes yet, so don’t expect any Star Wars style transitions. I know, and I will get to those.

Aside from the lines of dialogue I have removed, most of the sound editing is still incomplete. I’ve only added a couple crossfades throughout all three edits so far, and thus I have a long way to go. So, if the audio cutaways sound choppy or abrupt, it’s because I haven’t polished them up. I will take care of them, so ignore them for now.

I think that’s the gist of what to expect from the workprints. If you want to take a look at them (and give your two cents), feel free to PM me and I’ll send the links when they’re released.

Just tested out the lossless 1080p version. Everything looks good. The only thing that might be troublesome is that it’s currently 17.7 gigabytes large. However, because of its 2 hour and 25 minute length, I’m not sure there’s anything I can do to make it smaller without sacrificing the video and audio quality. I’m gonna test out a lossy 720p version, which is sitting at a much smaller 6.38 gigabytes.

I’m gonna work on releasing the 1080p version this weekend, then I’ll try testing and releasing the 720p version later on. I’ll release the technical specs on both versions somewhere in the middle of all this.

Atom-88 said:

I think the colour correction looks a lot better than the comparison shot, so I would say they seem just right mate👍.

Glad to hear! I’ve been a little busy recently due to the holiday season, but I’m gonna try testing the newer grade on my HDTV to see if any issues show up. If I’m lucky, I might release it just before Christmas.

Atom-88 said:

Good to hear Eyepainter, would love a link once completed 😁

Thanks, Atom. I’ll be happy to send it once I’ve finished it.

I’ve just about completed tweaking the black levels on the color grading. However, I have a few caveats. I’ll demonstrate by showing off some more screencaps.

Now, in a perfect world, I could just lower the black levels and the only thing being affected would be the black levels. However, that’s easier said than done. No matter how careful I am, the entire image follows suit by default, and the natural result is a darker image as you can see in the spoiler tag below. The top examples are the original grade, while the bottom examples are the tweaked grade:

Because of this, the tweaked grade is both a blessing and a curse. A blessing, since darker areas now look more accurate. A curse, because this means that some of the details are too dark to see. The bushes in the example below reveal this problem:

The next few examples show how the black levels look during brighter scenes. Both for better and for worse.

These next few screencaps show what the black levels look like in darker scenes; especially those at nighttime. You’ll notice that some of the details are either harder to see or gone completely in the tweaked grade:

The asylum scenes were the first major red flags that the black levels needed to be readjusted. The first example looked like daytime on my HDTV. Hopefully, the tweaked grade has fixed that problem.

More examples of how the black levels are affected during daylight scenes.

The assassination attempt on Miles Dyson was the biggest reason I decided to readjust the black levels. Look at the nighttime sky in the top example. Yikes!

This particular shot has been quite troublesome. I’m not sure if it’s entirely my fault, because the Skynet Edition that I’m using also suffers from this. Take a look. This is literally what’s on the blu-ray:

I don’t know if the film prints were deteriorating at the time or if something happened during the telecine, but the dark gray nighttime sky definitely looks wrong. The bottom example below is perhaps the best reason for the tweak:

Look at Sarah Connor’s outfit in this example:

My last screencap is one that oughtta be familiar for the fans. It too shows the strengths and weaknesses of the tweaked grade:

That’s it for now. What do you think? Does it still need some readjusting, or does it look just right?

JackNapier said:

Replace every lightsaber sound effect with a loud sexual moan and a moist slapping sound. Also replace Darth Sidious with David S Pumpkins.

Don’t forget to add saxophone music to the fights. The circle would never be complete without it.

Just tested out the lossless 1080p version, and everything looks good with the exception of one thing. The picture looks too bright in places, particularly in a few night shots. I’m gonna go back to the color grading and tweak that up. Otherwise, I think the rest of the movie looks right.

Sound editing is done. Since I haven’t gotten feedback on which ending to go for, I’m going to stick with the theatrical ending for now. Gonna do some testing in the future to make sure all is well before I release it.

General changes announced. Here’s the list in the spoiler tag below. “–” means deleted, “/” means altered or changed, and “++” means added or extended, because a singular plus sign now looks like a bullet point, so I’ll be using a double plus sign until further notice.

/ Changing the opening crawl
– Removed some of the jokes
– Attempting to lessen the snooty british tone of the First Order fleet, especially General Hux
– Removed Poe’s bad blood with Leia
– Lessening Paige’s role in saving the rebellion as well as the overly patriotic tone of the scene
/ Changed Luke from murderous psychopath to a jedi who fell to guilt and self-hatred over his failure to train Kylo Ren
++ Added “Luke Has a Moment” deleted scene
– Attempting to remove the “flying Princess Leia” moment
– Removed Poe’s conspiracy subplot revolving around Holdo
/ Changed Holdo to a more heroic figure
++ Added “Caretaker Village Sequence” deleted scene
/ Altered and removed scenes and lines about Rey’s parents for consistency with Episode IX
– Removed all moments of Luke using his lightsaber on Kylo Ren in flashbacks
++ Added “Alternate Opening” deleted scene to introduce Finn
– Removed Rose and Finn’s romantic relationship
– Removed all of Canto Bight
– Removed DJ
– Removed all of Finn and Rose’s episode on the First Order frigate
– Removed Captain Phasma
– Removed Rey’s rejection of Kylo Ren’s offer to join
– Removed Kylo and Rey’s force fight for Luke’s lightsaber, including its destruction
/ Re-edited so that Holdo’s kamikaze run on the First Order fleet interrupts Rey’s decision
– Removed Kylo’s lie about Rey killing Snoke
– Removed most of Kylo’s angrier scenes during Crait battle to create a more ambiguous ending
– Removing Finn risking his life to stop the battering ram cannon
– Removed Rose’s “saving” Finn, as well as her line about “saving what we love”
– Removed most of Rey from Crait battle up until she has to move rocks to create a more ambiguous ending and tone
/ Soften up Kylo Ren slightly during his Luke Skywalker confrontation to create more ambiguity
– Removed ending scene with the jedi children on Canto Bight

Just looked at the two remaining versions of my edit, and my conclusion is this: Much of Finn and Rose’s journey together makes little sense without Poe’s conspiracy theory subplot intact. And because I’ve always intended to remove that subplot from the beginning, I have no interest in bringing it back just to give Finn some more screentime. I also think that Finn and Rose’s big showdown with the first order (and Captain Phasma) muddied up the story’s already messed up structure even further (and don’t get me started on BB-8’s hacking of a walker).

Taking out Finn and Rose’s sequence on the first order fleet did a much better job at simplifying the ending, since all we have to focus on for the first ending is 1. Rey, Kylo and Snoke, and 2. The resistance escape combined with Holdo’s kamikaze attack. Taking out Rose’s crashing into Finn during the Crait battle doesn’t hurt, either. And because Episode IX ditches Finn and Rose’s relationship anyway, there’s no point in trying to keep that love story in.

Bottom line: I’ve made up my mind on how to edit Finn. I’m going to add the alternate opening deleted scene at around two-thirds of the way through the film (Just before the first ending begins), and have him do a few things during the second ending on Crait, including trying to stop the battering ram (and before you panic, you can rest assured that I’m still cutting out Rose’s “rescue” of Finn, and keeping as much of Finn’s sacrifice for the greater good out of my edit since there’s no way to resolve it now).

I still have to take care of a lot of small edits with this one, but now that I’ve decided how to handle Finn, I have the big stuff taken care of. So, I’m going to steal a page from my friend, CaptainFaraday, and release a general overview of the major changes first. Then, once I’ve taken care of the tiny things, I’ll release a more thorough and detailed changes list later on down the road. Be on the lookout. I’ll be releasing the changes list soon!

I’ve just scrapped the version where Finn doesn’t show up until near the end credits. Mainly because a lot of important bits during the Krait battle have Finn. So, instead of juggling between three different versions, I’m now juggling between two: One where Finn is brought back to life about two-thirds of the way through (and conveniently skipping the romance between Rose, Canto Bight, and the codebreaker episode altogether), and the other which has Finn’s theatrical journey, but heavily edited. I’m leaning more towards the first, but I’m gonna have to take look at both versions again before I come to a final conclusion.

Atom-88 said:

The new colour grade look really good and so much better especially with the blue tint gone, looking forward to seeing this edit👍

Thanks, Atom! I think I’ll stop playing around with the color grading and say that it’s done for now. Moving on to the sound editing sometime in the future.

Here are the demo shots as promised. One thing I should note beforehand is that I changed the color space settings, which changed the LUT somewhat. Here’s what it looked like originally:

That pic was posted at the beginning of the month, and since then, I’ve been playing around with the color space options to see what the results look like. I changed the color science from DaVinci YRGB to DaVinci YRGB Color Managed. I turned off automatic color management and set the color processing mode to SDR Rec. 709. Then I changed the output color space to Rec. 709 Gamma 2.4, to bring up a LUT that looks like this instead:

Besides that, and raising the midtone detail, everything else has been left untouched. I have placed the examples in the spoiler tag below. I don’t think anybody will mind, since everyone has seen the film, but because a few of the images contain spoilers, and because this post will get really, really long if I don’t, I’ve decided to place the demo shots in spoiler territory. Enjoy, and let me know what you think!

Get Beavis and Butthead to do a fan edit of Return of the Jedi.