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- #694943
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- Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/694943/action/topic#694943
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INT. NYAX/FORCE HOUND'S MEDITATION CHAMBER
Standing within his meditation circle, the Force Hound -- his body completely naked and shrouded in shadow -- moves to each tall candlestick surrounding him, passing his left hand over each of them and igniting white-hot flames through the Force in turn.
Once the circle of flames is complete, the Mandalorian sits down in the centre of it, crossing his legs as he does so. Bracing his arms against his crossed legs, he bows his head and begins his meditation.
Nothing happens at first, but gradually the glow of the white flames grows brighter and brighter. Soon, it glows so bright that a fog of pure white light fills the circle, casting almost everything beyond it into complete pitch black darkness; only the artificial stained glass window, lit with a myriad of colours, hovers alone in the darkness before the circle.
Lifting his head back, the fog of white surrounding him coalesces, focusing into a tight beam of almost-solid white light. Beyond the circle, the stained glass window begins to glow brighter until it becomes a miniature, multicoloured sun. As the Force Hound draws in a huge breath, a beam of varicoloured light fires down from the window and strikes the column of white light, passing through and piercing the Mandalorian.
The Mandalorian's closed eyes fly open, and his body begins to radiate with yellow brillance, dissolving into multicoloured light. Transforming into an amorphous mass of multicoloured energy, the Force Hound begins to ascend up the beam of white light, streams of rainbow light rising along with him.
EXT. SPACE
The coloured mass of energy that was the Force Hound finds itself flying through the depths of space, streams of varicoloured light passing beside and beyond it. Passing through the universe at speeds faster than light, the stars move past CMOE like blazing white fireflies. As it moves through the universe, Cmoe finds itself accerating to greater-and-greater speeds; soon the stars become long strings of white light, the rainbow-coloured streams like rods of solid light.
Eventually, Cmoe decelerates, and the starlines and rainbow beams fade away as it phases out of the physical universe.
EXT. TARTARUS
Cmoe enters a dark universe where the blacker-than-black sky is criss-crossed with thin vein-like lines of blood-red light. Under this abysmal sky lies a surface like partially-solidified magma, black-and-red.
Though desolate, the surface of this world is not empty; rising up like misshapen trees, wailing and gnashing their mouthparts, are the conjoined forms of countless immortal souls damned to eternal torment in this place. All noticing Cmoe passing over them, they reach out to it, grasping, all to no avail.
Passing over this nightmarish landscape, Cmoe fades out of this existence.
EXT. GEHENNA
Cmoe emerges into a world made up of shards of stone which rise up like billions of long, jagged teeth towards a dark purple-black sky.
Atop each of the stone teeth, amassed like ants on food at a picnic, are millions upon millions of black, vine-shaped creatures. Unable to all fit together on the shards of stone, many lose their hold and plummet to the surface below, where they are chewed to pieces against the wickedly sharp rock surface.
Passing through this universe, Cmoe fades away.
EXT. SHEOL
Cmoe now finds itself in a windblown universe where the sky is completely dark. The surface below is covered in trillions of crumbling bones, the only inhabitants a few translucent black shades which barely move over the face of their world.
Flying over the shades of Sheol, Cmoe disappears.
EXT. CHAOS
Emerging, Cmoe finds itself in a cosmos that is empty and dark save for an eerie, swirling green vortex which sits at its heart. As Cmoe moves toward the green vortex, the sound of atonal flute playing can be heard.
Passing into the immense green vortex, Cmoe is sucked down into it.
INT. VORTEX
As Cmoe speeds down along the swirling, liquid green sides of the vortex, the blasphemous chantings of an unseen chorus can be heard.
UNSEEN CHORUS: (O.C.) Yog-Sothoth fhtagn. Azathoth fhtagn. Yaldabaoth fhtagn ...
EXT. VOID
Cmoe emerges from the vortex into a deep, dark void. In the centre of this void lies the DEMIURGE -- an amorphous blob made up of many conjoined, inverted suns.
As Cmoe moves toward the Demiurge, the Nuclear Chaos throws out tendrils of coloured light, trying to ensnare and smother the smaller entity. Cmoe flies through these tendrils effortlessly, cutting them asunder like a hot knife through butter. Uttering a galaxy-shattering bellow, the Lurker at the Threshold throws out more-and-more tendrils to capture the ball of glowing radiance.
The increasing number of tendrils prove to be powerless against Cmoe, and the sphere of shimmering radiance speeds along its course, transforming into a razor-edged, multi-dimensional star as it reaches the Blind Idiot God.
Like an arrow of radiance, Cmoe collides with the All-in-One, piercing through to Its all-consuming heart. Releasing a death cry that could shatter the multiverse itself, the Demiurge dies and explodes.
The resulting pure-white conflagration quickly spreads throughout the black void, overtaking and consuming it completely, leaving a solid gray blankness behind in its wake. Within the centre of this virgin blankness floats the infinitesimal form of a human male infant, his feet and hands drawn into his chest and his eyes tightly closed.
As the infant begins to grow -- rapidly aging into a toddler, a prepubescent, an adolescent, and finally into an adult -- the grayness fades away, replaced with the familiar form of the physical universe, its infinite black sky filled with infinite white stars.
FLASH TO
The Force Hound sitting naked, cross-legged, within the centre of his meditation chamber. The flames of the candlesticks surrounding him have gone out, and he is awake, his eyes open, his meditation at an end.
