About This Fanfix:
The Book Of Boba Fett Rewritten is a fanfix with the intent on giving Boba back that edge to his character he once had in the original trilogy by making him less apologetic and sympathetic to others around him, making his followers question his judgement less & removing unneeded dialogue from him where possible as well as fix any other issues within each episode to better convey the story being told.
If you didn’t like The Book Of Boba Fett series storyline this fanfix series edit won’t change that as my goal is to keep the same content for the most part but fix the glaring issues the show had for example cut back on Fett coochie cooing the rancor, not having Fennic make the decisions for Boba or second guessing the decisions he makes to name a few. I also attempt to address a few other issues for example like speeding up the speed bike gang, removing the Jabba kitchen droid chase scene and showing less of Boba getting his ass kicked in he’s series first fight scene.
Chapter Change list:
Chapter 1: Stranger in a Strange Land
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cut the first shot only of the stormtrooper in the sarlac pit as the bright white clean armour along with the bright lime slime cheapens the scene.
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removed a few frames when the tusken raider squeezes the bug juice into Bobas mouth as again the thick bright lime slime comes across as cheap.
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cut Boba running his hands down the watchdogs face after knocking it out.
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cut Boba explaining to the rodian he wants to also free him too
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trimmed Boba politely asking to move twi’lek majordomo along during the palace throne room scene after not paying his tribute.
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trimmed Bobas dialogue in the cantina in Mos Espa so he appears more direct and less friendly.
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rearranged the assassin fight scene to show a more capable fighter in Boba by having him fire on assassins just before they put their shields up and editing the fight to show Boba taking less hits, also the gamorian guards cut into the fight quicker.
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trimmed Bobas dialogue with the tusken kid while digging in the desert as its obvious what is conveyed through hand gestures alone
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cut Boba telling the rodian he could help him escape the tuskens if he keeps quiet, he now just states “I could strangle you with this ankle chain and feed you to the watchdog”
Chapter 2: The Tribes of Tatooine
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cut Boba explaining his holding the gaffi stick the same after being hit during training.
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trimmed the train heist scene to show Boba throwing the droid driver off the train instead of threatening the droid with his gaffi stick then watching the droid open a window and hop out.
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removed the lizard going up Bobas nose during the tusken scene now shows Boba coughing after the tusken throws powder into his face sending him into a dream state only showing the lizard leaving after he finishes his trial so the audience is just as surprised as Boba when he learns the lizard is not part of the dream.
Chapter 3: The Streets of Mos Espa
- Updated Chapter 3 to v1.1 with the following changes -
- trimmed the speed bike gangs initial slow start up scene before chase
- improved the yellow speed bike cut to during chase before crashing
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cut Bobas dialogue with the palace droid being concerned over hearing the name Jabba
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cut Boba asking for Fennecs advise in the throne room
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slightly trimmed the speed bike girl moaning to Boba about not working
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slightly trimmed Boba getting off his bantha before seeing Pykes for pacing
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cut Boba crying during the tusken funeral
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trimmed the Krrsantan fight to show Bobas limp feet while being crushed by Krrsantan to portray Bobas in alot more peril and cut to the speed bike girls entrance quicker.
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trimmed and rearranged what was originally Boba casually walking down the stairs while putting his robe on during Krrsantan fight.
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cut Boba explaining how he feels about his situation after the fight with Krrsantan to Fennec during the feast scene.
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cut Fennec questioning Bobas decision on freeing Krrsantan
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trimmed a lot of Boba doting over the rancor
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cut Boba being surprised and asking “did he just lock the door” when going to see the mayor, also cut Fennec saying “let me” when trying to open the door Boba now instinctively leaves it to Fennec to open.
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heavily trimmed and sped up the speed bike chase scene
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trimmed and sped up the cyborg eyed biker guy driving whilst also removing the exposed set scenery corner backdrop mistakenly found in the scene see here 😬
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cut the bad joke Boba made to cyborg eyed biker guy about “keeping an eye on them”
Chapter 4: The Gathering Storm
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trimmed Boba talking to his bantha
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removed Boba & Fennec breaking into the palace right under the guards noses by re arranging the scene to not show how close the pipe they entered is to the main gate.
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cut the droid chasing antics in the kitchen
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cut Fennec stating they need to get to the hanger
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slightly trimmed fennec shooting the main gates chain when escaping by a few frames.
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rearranged the sarlac pit scene removing the special edition version beak to the sarlac and removed fennec yelling at Boba to “shoot it!”
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cut Fennec telling Boba “it’s not safe in there” as hes leaving sarlac pit.
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shortened the cantina twi’lek Garsa Fwis conversation to Krrsantan.
Chapter 7: In the Name of Honor
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cut Bobas reaction to Mando getting Freetown people to work for free
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cut Boba explaining to Fennec his decision to stop spice coming to town for the Freetown peoples assistance.
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rearranged scene to show Boba making his decision to stay in mos espa instead of going to his palace to fight after hearing what the speed bike girl says and not going back on his decisions.
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sped up speed bike gang as they drive around town while fennec explains the plan
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cut Boba asking Fennec what to do now
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cut the flashback to the tusken raider attack
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rearranged the Cad Bane showdown to imply the reason Boba doesn’t retaliate is because he knows Banes dirty tricks and Fennec will be the first to be shot, similar to how it went down with the marshal of Freetown, also Boba speaks less.
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its now Bobas decision to send Fennec to Mos Eisley to hunt down the Pyke leader.
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sped up speed bikes entrance into the fight
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cut Bobas line “welcome back santan” he just now says “I have to confess I thought you were gone"
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cut cyborg eyed biker guys spinning shot, now when the Pykes start shooting at the bike gang members they start limping away beaten holding Krrsantan
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rearranged the Pykes vs the towns people shoot-out to show a lot less Pykes being shot down, they are now seen as more of a threat
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cut Bobas lines to Bane “these are my people”
It bothered me that Boba left Fennec to sort out the person involved with killing his tusken family at the end of the show, then she just leaves through the door bit anti-climatic. So I’ve addressed this glaring issue with an alternate ending 😉
PM me if your interested in seeing this fanfix
Any more ideas to improve this series are welcome. 😄
