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#1506134
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Harry Potter: Enhanced Editions (Audiobooks) (Books 1-6 Released)
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Master Lawdog said:

Darth Muffy said:

Hi Lawdog,
Good to see your final edit for your Enhanced Editions audiobooks looks to be coming along 😄👍.

ratopag said:

… Some looped music can be quite unnerving, the worst example is chapter 32 of The Order of the Phoenix (Out of the fire).

Admittedly that chapters background music loop for The Order of the Phoenix can be a bit distacting by having music that finishes with a climatic finish every 40 seconds for over 10 mins. Small criticism for an otherwise perfect fanedit.

I’m sorry to hear that. I’m not exactly sure which part it’s in.

Its The Order of the Phoenix Chapter 32 - Out of the Fire for the first 10 mins or so but again no big issue just a little distacting is all.

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#1502875
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Guardian of the Force (an Obi-Wan movie edit)
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daneditor said:
Rescoring tends to result in the new score having to be too loud - I’ve heard this in other edits as well, because you have to drown out the remnants of the original score. So it’s just not worth doing in most cases. But I agree that the score is pretty mediocre, like it has been for other recent Disney Star Wars stuff.

Agree

daneditor said:
If you think the Grand Inquisitor is bad here you definitely don’t want to watch the full series.

Very true 😂
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daneditor said:
I cut nearly all of his and Reva’s scenes. If he remained dead then Reva would have no arc at all, as presumably it would mean cutting the scene where she and Vader fight.

Your’ve got the right amount of screentime for the characters down to tell the story but it might benefit to remove that scene of the grand Inquisitor lying lifeless on the ground after Reva uses her saber on him as it just confuses things more later when hes back alive.

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#1502868
Topic
Harry Potter: Enhanced Editions (Audiobooks) (Books 1-6 Released)
Time

Hi Lawdog,
Good to see your final edit for your Enhanced Editions audiobooks looks to be coming along 😄👍.

ratopag said:

… Some looped music can be quite unnerving, the worst example is chapter 32 of The Order of the Phoenix (Out of the fire).

Admittedly that chapters background music loop for The Order of the Phoenix can be a bit distacting by having music that finishes with a climatic finish every 40 seconds for over 10 mins. Small criticism for an otherwise perfect fanedit.

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#1502305
Topic
Guardian of the Force (an Obi-Wan movie edit)
Time

daneditor said:

Glad that you liked it. 😃 Being able to cut the underwater base scenes/the second Leia rescue plot really helps the pacing of the movie IMO.

Found you Dan, 😁
The removal of the problematic inquisitor base antics was the main appeal for me and edited in a cleaver way keeping the story going plus the no second Leia rescue plot is a bonus. By piecing the best bits from the now many Kenobi fanedit movies this is my go to for watching Kenobi now 😃👍.

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#1501924
Topic
Harry Potter Extended Editions (Released)
Time

JJPotter…

Wow JJPotter edits got an upgrade! These are my go to Potter films over theatricals anyday whether their 4k 10-bit ultra 100gb MKV or SD 640x480 100mb AVIs the editing will always shine through and these additions in v2.1 are very well recieved 😁👍.

Just offer your edits in best and biggest you can do only and let others encode it to whatever they want it as and if they can’t, well not your problem 😋.

For those not up to speed with the improvements and changes added to v2.1 by JJ:

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:26:35

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Coloring adjusted on the spinning Knight Bus scene.
• Added smoke effect to Great Hall post-Hogsmeade scene.
• Trimmed the Fat Lady torn portrait scene to remove the duplicated line that was in the post-Hogsmeade scene. In my original edit, I left the duplicated line in to try to make it seem like Ron was overly excited about the Shrieking Shack. I received complaints about the duplicate line, so it was removed.

v1.5 Change List:

• All deleted scenes have been added in + 1 new scene was created.
• Added spinning Knight Bus scene with blue screen removed and spinning background added.
• Added extended bird scene.
• Added Sir Cadogan portrait scene.
• Added Great Hall post-Hogsmeade scene with Harry color change when he eats the candy.
• Created and added a new Sirius Black attack scene so the Common Room deleted scene would make sense when added.
• Added Common Room scene following Black’s attack.

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:45:42

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Adjusted volume levels during the Yule Ball deleted scene.

v1.5 Change List

• All deleted scenes have been added.
• Added Hogwarts students welcoming the Durmstrang and Beauxbaton students with the Hogwarts school song.
• Added scene where Harry tries to ask Cho to the Yule Ball.
• Added scene showing Durmstrang student asking Hogwarts student to the Ball as Ron and Harry look on.
• Music modified to work with the above 2 scenes.
• Full version of “Can You Dance Like a Hippogriff” added. Scenes with Harry, Ron and their dates watching Hermione and Krum altered to fit with the longer song.
• Karkaroff/Snape scene outside of the Yule Ball.
• Crouch/Mad Eye extended scene added after 2nd task.
• Added Common Room scene after the death of Crouch Sr.
• Added the scene where Harry, Ron and Hermione are wondering what is on Snape’s arm and Harry’s scar hurting.

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:24:21

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Reversed the last 2 deleted scene additions to better match the facial wounds on Harry. 

v1.5 Change List

• All deleted scenes have been added except for Trelawny’s eating scene while Umbridge speaks during the Feast.
• Added scene of Neville sticking up for Harry, saying they had stopped taking the Daily Prophet.
• Added extended Common Room scene showing activity (modified music so the clip doesn’t sound so empty).
• Recut the Umbridge as High Inquisitor scene to remove the Trelawny clips. Music modified.
• Added in the full scene of Umbridge evaluating Trelawny in class.
• Added scene of Slytherin boys hazing another student as Umbridge/Filch watch.
• Added clip of Filch trying to blow out Umbridge’s hair after the Weasley fireworks in the Great Hall.
• Extended scene of Umbridge, Harry, and Hermione in the Forbidden Forest.
• Added scene of Ron trying to get Harry to go to the feast after the death of Sirius.
• Added scene of Harry going to Dumbledore’s office.

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:39:11

Note: Only the color-corrected version of this fanedit will now be available

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Dark color tinting removed.

v1.5 Change List

• All deleted scenes added back in.
• Added in extended Harry/Hermione scene in the hallway before walking up to Ron/Lavender.
• Added Harry/Hermione scene in the Common Room where Harry thinks Draco is leaving the castle after disappearing from the map
• Added Harry/Ron/Hermione scene discussing the vanishing cabinets before Harry meets Dumbledore.
• Added Harry/Dumbledore scene in the cave where Dumbledore mentions the 2 kids that Riddle brought to the cave.
• Added scene as Harry/Dumbledore leave the cave.
• Added choir scene leading up to the confrontation in the tower. Some clips were altered/reordered to make the scene flow better.
• Added scene of Harry in his bedroom, then coming downstairs to the Common Room after Dumbledore’s death.
• Added extended scene at the end of the movie with Harry/Ron/Hermione at the Astronomy Tower.

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: Part 1 Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:36:11

**Note: Only the color-corrected version of this fanedit will now be available

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Completed green screen work on the Dudley Redemption scene and added this back to the montage at the beginning of the film.
• Added effects to the rabbit chase scene (wand effects, scorch marks on tree).
• Adjusted volume levels on the Death Eater searching Hermionie’s house scene.
• Adjusted audio of the tent scene.
• Dark tint removed.

v1.5 Change List

• Added extended intro leading up to the title screen similar to ABC Family/Freeform version. Included added Harry/Petunia scene and Ron/Arthur radio scene. Added additional scene with Dudley and Harry shaking hands before the Dursleys leave
• Added scene of Death Eater searching Hermione’s house
• Added extended lift scene at the Ministry with Ron/Harry/Arthur
• Added scene in the woods after Ron is injured where the horcruxes are discussed and Ron indicates saying Voldemort’s name is taboo
• Added rabbit chase in the forest
• Added Ron/Hermione rock-throwing scene

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: Part 2 Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:14:48

Note: Only the color-corrected version of this fanedit will now be available
v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Added Neville/Seamus bridge scene with completed green screen work.
• Added music to the Shell Cottage scene.
• Adjusted brightness and coloring of beach scenes so they don’t look as blown out.
• Added audio effect to Voldemort’s voice in the 2 places where he speaks so everyone can hear. I wanted to make the audio more ominous, something that would warrant the reaction the people give.

v1.5 Change List:

• Added Shell Cottage scene where Bill tells the trio to live up to any bargain they have made with the goblin.
• Added Luna/Harry scene at Dobby’s grave.
• Added Harry/Ginny scene marching with the rest of the Gryffindors to see Snape.
• Added Lupin/Tonks scene at the start of the war.
• Added Slytherin dungeon scene.

Fanedit Name: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 4:37:20

Note: Only the color-corrected version of this fanedit will now be available

See DH Part 1 and 2 for changes for v2.1. For combined film:

• Moved scene of Snape looking over Hogwarts to earlier in the DH1 portion of the film. This establishes him as the new headmaster. It also goes along with the various other scenes around it (Death Eaters looking for Harry, a Ministry official searching the Grainger’s home).
• Moved where Voldemort gets the Elder Wand to between when the three are captured in the woods and when they are delivered to Malfoy Manor. The time of day/skylines seems to match better than leaving it after Dobby dies. It also allows for a straight story between Malfoy Manor, the death and burial of Dobby, and the scenes at Shell Cottage. This edit has been the most controversial of the ones I made. Some of the test viewers did not like Voldemort finding the wand so much earlier. I felt it was necessary to make the story less disjointed.
• Blending of the scenes where Dobby dies, is buried, and the story transitions to Shell Cottage. I felt this was the best way to complete the blending of movies 1 and 2 together.

Fanedit Name: Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:20:43

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Adjusted coloring on the scene as Newt/Jacob go to see the snakes.
• Adjusted audio in the added scene of Credence tearing up the city and Newt showing up at the police barricade.

v1.5 Change List:

• Added scene where Tina takes Newt to the MACUSA president and is turned away.
• Added scene where Jacob’s fiance gives back the engagement ring.
• Added scene where Newt and Jacob are in the case with the multi-headed snakes. Adjusted previous dialogue since some lines are also in this scene.
• Added extended jail scene.
• Added the street scene after the four escape the Ministry.
• Added extended scene in Macy’s.
• Added Ilvermorny school song scene.
• Added scene at the newspaper office prior to Credence turmoil.
• Added extended Queenie/Jacob scene on the rooftop.
• Added Newt/police scene.
• Added flying beast scene as Newt leaves on the ship back to the UK.

Fanedit Name: Fantastic Beasts: The Crimes of Grindelwald Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:25:41

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Updated intro sequence with “WW” shield instead of “HP” shield.
• Two audio tracks are now available in the video file, a 5.1 surround sound and a 2.0 stereo track.
• Adjusted audio volume on Tina ticket scene.
• Adjusted Credence/Nagini scenes for coloring and smoother transition to adjacent scenes.

v1.5 Change List:

• Created new opening scene with the deleted scenes of Credence appearing after the destruction in New York, a brief scene from a trailer with Credence looking at the circus poster, and the deleted scene of Credence getting a job with the circus to travel to Europe.
• Added Dumbledore/Newt fog scene.
• Added extended Newt/Jacob scene as they prepare to go to Paris.
• Added scene of Tina buying a ticket to see the Nagini show.
• Added ballroom party scene.
• Added Credence/Nagini scene on the building rooftop.
• Added Credence/Nagini scene sheltering during the rain.
• Added extended Newt/Jacob/Yusuf scene.
• Added Dumbledore/McGonagall scene.

Fanedit Name: Fantastic Beasts: The Secrets of Dumbledore Extended Edition v2.1
Fanedit Runtime: 2:30:15

v2.1 Change List:

• Warning screen added to the beginning of the film.
• Added intro sequence with “WW” shield
• Added scene at the Hogwart’s owlery where Dumbledore receives a message from an owl.
• Added scene at Newt’s house between Newt and Theseus.
• Changed music in the scene at Newt’s house to flow better into the scene of the brothers walking into Hogsmeade.
• Added scene of Dumbledore being followed by a follower of Grindelwald before being murdered by Credence.
• Added scene of Jacob and Lally getting their wands checked before entering the dinner party.
• Added scene of Grindelwald arriving and having a conversation with Anton Vogel before the vote ceremony.
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#1499498
Topic
DonKamillo's - The Batman: Year Two Miniseries
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DonKamillo’s 4 part mini series fanfix of the The Batman movie is exactly how it should be watched. 😎👌

The Graphic Novel Experience you have been waiting for…

About The Edit:

This fan edit splits up The Batman (2022) movie into a four episode miniseries, making the 3 hour epic more digestible and providing a Graphic Novel type experience. The narrative changes slightly with little cuts here and there, some rearranged and re-scored scenes, a deleted scene added back in and a new ending.
Intention:
Despite its flaws, I liked the movie quite a lot. However to me the structure of the movie didn’t feel like a traditional three act story but more akin to a graphic novel. Like a collection of multiple comic issues, each chapter tells a complete little story in of itself, while simultaneously adding more and more pieces to the bigger puzzle which makes up the overarching story. That’s why I felt splitting up the movie into four episodes would enhance The Batman Experience.

Other Sources:

  • The Batman (2022)
  • The Batman OST (by Michael Giacchino)
  • The Batman - Deleted Arkham Scene
  • Ambient Sounds and other SFX from the Batman Arkham City Video Game

Source: https://ifdb.fanedit.org/batman-year-two-miniseries-the/

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#1494369
Topic
Spence's Obi-Wan Kenobi (V3 Released)
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SpenceEdit said:

Hey! Thanks, there’s some really great feedback here.

Octorox said:

So I finally got a chance to sit down and watch V2. Overall I think it’s a big improvement, and as close to a perfect “movie length” rendition as you can get. That said, I do still have some quibbles. In particular, I think there are a few lines and scenes where either a setup or payoff is removed, so they don’t land as well as they should. I feel like 5-10 more minutes of breathing room, which would put the overall length in the ballpark of The Last Jedi, would really be the sweet spot.

The goal was always under 2 and a half hours, so I do have a bit of wiggle room.

Octorox said:
-When Leia tells her father that “she’s not a real Organa”, we no longer have the context of it being something Leia was told by her cousin that she internalized. In this new context, it seems like it was Leia’s original thought, which imo doesn’t quite add up. I personally don’t mind Leia’s precocious reading of her cousin because I interpreted it as an example of her latent Force ability. I wonder if there’s any way you could reinstate some of that scene, at least enough to get the original context of the line back.

In all honesty, I tried to get through it all as briefly as possible, as the only scene in that whole Leia intro that’s really essential is her conversation with Bail. I may have overcorrected. I’ll play with it.

Octorox said:
-when Reva stabs the Grand Inquisitor in the chest, she says “who’s in the gutter now?” Unfortunately the original line spoken to Reva by the Grand Inquisitor about “finding her in the gutter” has been cut, so this no longer makes much sense. It’s repeated by The Grand Inquisitor again at the end, and there it feels like it’s calling back to something that we no longer hear.

-In Fortress Inquisitorius, Tala says something to the effect of “what are they hiding down there” but we no longer have the payoff of the Jedi tomb scene. I would just trim this line out if possible.

Both of these things have already been corrected for the next version.

Octorox said:
-Tala’s death feels like it carries significantly less weight without her relaying her full history with the Empire in a heart to heart with Obi-Wan. Her character has a reduced presence overall, and while I think you were smart to cut a lot of the antics in the Fortress Inquisitorius, I feel like this scene should have stayed.

-When we see Leia dress up with her boots and holster at the end, it no longer mirrors her introductory scene. I was glad you reinstated her scene in the woods but I still missed this parallel, which showed the character’s growth in how she feels about her role as a representative of Alderaan.

Respectfully, I think these scenes feel like their missing only because you know they exist. If we weren’t aware they existed, it wouldn’t feel off to not include them. That’s my justification for it anyway.

Octorox said:
-In this cut, the fact that Reva is behind Leia’s kidnapping is now revealed when Obi-Wan learns it. I think this is a smart change, but I wonder if something about the score or the editing could be tweaked to really underline the fact that this is a reveal to the audience.

Maybe a more dramatic musical beat here? That could help.

Octorox said:
-At around 1 hours and 37 minutes in, Roken mouths a line but it can’t be heard. I assume this is just an editing mistake.

Not sure what happened on that one. I’ll look at it.

Octorox said:

-Obi-Wan digs up his and Anakin’s lightsabers: I would like to see if this scene could be incorporated without intercutting it with Reva. It’s a nice call forward to the saber’s final resting place in Rise of Skywalker
-Obi-Wan sees a Clone Wars vet begging on the street (this is so short that I can’t imagine it would significantly impact the runtime to reinstate it)

Yeah, I miss that scene too. I feel like it kind of needs to be there. Maybe just that bit with a new musical queue? Could be a good opportunity to throw some classic JW in there.

Octorox said:
-Haja’s whole “Fake Jedi” dog and pony show. I feel like his status as a huckster doesn’t quite land as clearly in this edit.

Personally, I think we got enough of him being silly and using the magnets to sell it. That portion of the movie needs to move at a higher pace, so I don’t see this going back in.

Octorox said:
-For whatever reason, I felt the absence of Obi-Wan packing up his stuff in his cave at the end. I really liked the symbolic aspect of him getting a fresh start by moving to a new home.

This is (partially) added back in for the next version.

Octorox said:

-In the scene where Reva explains that she put a tracker on Kenobi’s ship, I feel like you can cut after Vader says “it seems I have underestimated you”. Maybe end on a self-assured looking reaction shot of Reva if possible. The scene feels a little too drawn out right now, especially since you’ve cut most other bickering between the Inquisitors.

This is a great suggestion. I’ll see if I can make it work.

Octorox said:
Also I felt like there were a couple other instances where familiar JW themes could have been used:
-I wanted to hear the leitmotif from Battle of the Heroes somewhere. I feel like there are a couple callbacks to that fateful duel where it could have been slotted in. Not the full choir, just a few notes.
-it would have been nice to hear Qui-Gon’s theme when he finally appears.
-As for OT themes, I think you could have used The Rebel Fanfare when the T-47s come to the rescue, and Luke’s theme when Obi-Wan finally gets to meet him. For all of these themes, I would use just a hint and not the most forceful statement. There are quite a few bits of score in the saga films where they are used more subtly.

I actually tried a couple of those, the biggest issue is the muddy center channel. I’d have to rebuild a lot of sound effects to make these work. Though I do feel like we, at minimum, need another Williams track or two in there.

Thanks again for the detailed notes!

Quality edit overall Spence, Octorox summarized most of what I felt and I completely agree with your comments here, also adding a crawl was mentioned in a post here but feel title crawls are only needed for the main movies and not so much for the A Star Wars Story films.
My additions would be:

  • More John Williams score throughout
  • Adding back the stormtroopers on the truck at Mapuzo but with a wipe to show time has passed before they get off.
  • Cutting the wide shots at the trooper checkpoint to not show the massive gaps at the sides making the lazer gate redundant.
  • Adding Obi vs Anakin flashbacks and splitting it to dream sequence on Tatioone & in backer tanks.
  • Axing the fortress completely and making it seem Leia is in a more local rebal base on Mapuzo.

Have you looked at kai pattersons kenobi edit as he has some really good ideas you might want to consider using.

https://ew.com/tv/obi-wan-kenobi-fan-edit-turns-series-into-movie/

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#1494355
Topic
The Kenobi <s>Movie</s> Show (Spoilers)
Time

ADR14NAT1ON said:

exitzero said:

Not often main-stream media talks about a fan edit. IGN, ScreenRant, Variety, and others have all done an article on Kai Patterson’s Obi-Wan Fan Edit. He cut it down to a 2 & a half hour movie. He removed the goofy stuff with Leia being chased by bumbling grown men. Rearranges the Jedi scene on Tatooine so Obi-Wan meets the Jedi first, the Inquisitors kill him in the bar (he doesn’t escape), and then Obi-Wan sees him hanging in the city. he also gives Obi-Wan a good reason to let Vader live after their second duel. What I like the most is the John Williams Star Wars music added throughout.

I am also really excited to check it out - albeit not for any interest in the story, but rather just to see how he fixed some of the problems from an editing standpoint. I’ve seen amazing fan edits do wonders for the original material and the SW community always keeps them coming.

https://ew.com/tv/obi-wan-kenobi-fan-edit-turns-series-into-movie/

I’m keen to compare it to Spencers Kenobi movie edit.

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#1489544
Topic
The Book Of Boba Fett: Rewritten - A Fanfix
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Thanks again Darth Sadifous for your feedback I’ll see what I can do with what you’ve stated in your comments above and work it into v2 of the series which I’m now colour grading to remove the original dull tint so the day scenes come across warmer and the night scenes a little darker for all episodes (see comparison pics below).

V2 Colour Grading:

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#1489204
Topic
KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [RELEASED] [5.1 Surround]
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Sirius said:

… You can switch the scenes of Vect Nokru with Leia in Daiyu by the scene of Reva interrogating her in Nur. This way, we can assume that Leia and Reva were in a clandestine imperial base in Daiyu.

Thats exactly what I was thinking to do with my fanfix of Kenobi, no need for episode 4s imperial base antics in the story ark.

Before the dark times…

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#1489201
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [RELEASED] [5.1 Surround]
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headtaker18 said:

Axios said:

Anjohan said:

  • Reeva attempting to kill Vader will be the thing to interrupt him from grabbing the second ship, so there are no inconsistencies to his actions to leave Vader looking silly or with a drained stamina bar.

That is a great idea! the perfect fix. kinda stunned that I didnt think of that lol. Im really afraid that the end will be sequel bait, and im even more afraid that Reva will be getting her own show…

This is what I’m worried about. She doesn’t need her own show and Kenobi doesn’t need a season two. Not sure why people are so insistent on this happening, just let it be its own thing and be done.

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#1489175
Topic
The Book Of Boba Fett: Rewritten - A Fanfix
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Darth Sadifous said:

I watched the first three episode and enjoyed all of them mostly. I do think the cuts could be worked on slightly during the scene with Boba and the rodian prisoner at the camp before his attempted escape and the scene between Boba and the hired thugs in town. These were the only cuts that were noticable to me in the first episode. I definetly think this makes Boba look tougher and more calculating though. Good work overall; thanks for sharing!

The second episode was probably the strongest Fett centric episode of the series so minimal changes to this one were needed. It was a tight edit and enjoyable. The third episode was always going to be the biggest challenge as any way you slice it, those “mods” are fairly cringe and Boba looked weak mostly in the original episode. Some of the quicks cuts are slighly noticeable mainly due to audio issues. I think the “chase” scene could still be cut some more, but definetly an improvment overall. I will give you further feedback when I finish the rest!

Thanks Darth Sadifous I appreciate the feedback I’ll work on smoothing out some of the cuts you mentioned and post here when done. I agree the third episode is is a tricky one I felt that after cutting the chase seen and speeding it up it was maybe too short so surprised you think its still too long if most people feel its still to long I’ll give it a trim 😎. Thanks again for your thoughts hope to get the most out of this TV show edit before moving onto the ObiWan show fanfix 😉.

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#1487029
Topic
The Prequels as Mando style episodes; PM for Links
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Well done jrs81, watch Episode 1 - Phantom Menace: Invasion so far and have to say the prequals lend themselves well to the episodic TV show format alot better then its original movie viewing. Might be worth doing what Anjohan did with his edit of TPM here by dubbing and subbing Gunray and kin with an alien voice then can change up the poor dialogue in the film via subs.