Cinefy

Octorox said:

I wouldn’t want to lose Jakku. A.) because it’s Rey’s home planet and B.) because it’s where this trilogy started and C.) Because there’s sort of poetry to the destroyers of this war becoming relics on Jakku, just like the war before. I’d also very much prefer Naboo to Correlia because I think anyone who didn’t watch Solo (which is a lot of people judging by its box office performance) would be lost.

If I had to choose, it would be Naboo over Corellia. But theres still chance for all of them.

Bespin - Coruscant - Naboo - Corellia - Jakku

I’d put Coruscant last since It’s best one

I think we should remove Jakku and have Naboo and Corellia, that way we can have the all home worlds of the main characters in the Movie. Except Aladeraan 😦

Luke & Anakin - Tatooine (Homstead ending)

Han Solo - Corellia (Celebration addition) Solo Footage.

Padme - Naboo Theed City Shot (Celebration addition) Using Phantom Menace footage. https://imgur.com/RT7MX50

Would work perfectly.
Tatooine, Corellia, Naboo.

Scene would then obviously not have Jakku, but I definately think Bespin Cloud City should stay.

Hal 9000 said:

You’re always so cryptic and mysterious.

Naboo shot either from episode I or II theres a good one during the night.
Maybe Popsektti could edit a FO Tie Fighter crashing, and then in the distance/backround we could have a another cruiser going down.

https://imgur.com/RT7MX50

Hal 9000 said:

Seems worth at least tossing the idea out there of adding a fourth planet to the destroyer montage. There’s enough room for it in order to preserve the music.

Eehhhhhh???

You mean the end celebration? Because if so I’ve got a good idea for that.

I think using Palpatine’s line of “The day of the sith” is all thats worth using from broadcast, would work really well as a force/sith whisper or a line during a vision scene.

I’ll upload them now. -Palpatine Force Whispers

“Day Of The Sith” (First one works very well)

“The Work Of Generations Is Complete” (Not 100% confident about the second)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pnwKum3Kx2A&feature=youtu.be

Hal 9000 said:

I was disappointed in what the message turned out to be, as heard in the dumb video game tie-in. Sounds vague and useless.

What do you think about using some of them as whispers?

Since people have asked a couple timesn now, I have a couple ideas of where you could insert the Emperor’s cut lines from that ‘Fortnite’ speech in a very subtle way.

“The Day Of The Sith” (Concept)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsaCxXncYvw

Blind sounds fair

If anyone extends EP9 celebration scene - I think this shot should be repurposed for Theed/Naboo - doing something simular to Coruscant edit,

https://imgur.com/RT7MX50

Bare minimum should be shots of Naboo and Kashyyyk similar style to Bespin and the Coruscant edit.

dgraham414 said:
The audio is very janky and it almost seems for the unaltered audio that there are two channels on top of each other, but in iMovie I don’t really know how to deal with that.

Let me know what you think!

Changing Finn’s dialogue there feels very unnecessary to be honest.

I hope we can get in the Duel Of The Fates allusion during the Arena moment with the Sith cultists and the R2-D2 and C-3PO theme when restore 3PO’s memory.

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Just noticed a small continuity error. Rey’s new vision at the beginning shows a glimpse of her shooting lightning out of her hand on Pasanna, only it isn’t yellow in the vision.
EDIT: Looks like this workprint doesn’t have this change but just wanted to let you know anyways.

Visions are never supposed to be clear. Wouldn’t call it a continuity error.

Revenge Of The Sith - Palpatine’s Seduction Theme

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IrWxt-cK4ZM&feature=youtu.be

I had considered the night scene of Theed from the end of Episode 1. For Geonosis, the cliff scene overlooking the hive when Obi-Wan arrives. Takodana, take the clip in TFA of Maz’s castle with all the flags and Utapau can be from some of the trailers. Either the night scene of the Stormtroopers on the walkers or day scene before the battle begins could work for Kashyyyk. Idk if you would want any TCW planets.

I think Coruscant, Takodanna, Kashyyyk and Theed make the most sense, the population of Geonosis is extremely low after Death Star experiments theres nothing really left there at all.

R2-D2 and C-3PO Theme - Padme funeral at end needs to go.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9HeMe8M6bY&feature=youtu.be

My bad, maybe I should have put it in the general ideas section. Still, maybe we can work up a few of them even separately if anyone wants to have them

Not a problem just gotta be realistic with whats possible for what Hal is going for.

Hal 9000 said:

I agree with Cinefy on this one. Kijimi is the only other planet on my wish list.

Maybe I’m blanking but does Kajimi get destroyed in the workprint?

DarkSpecter5K said:

So I’ve talked to a few different people on here about an idea I had for the expansion of the end scene of the crashing Star Destroyers if anyone is interested in helping put it together.

I was thinking a penultimate farewell to the galaxy if this is the end of the main series. Naboo, Geonosis, etc. I thought just taking some clips from the past and editing the falling Star Destroyer in the background would be a better way to end it, try to rival ROTJ. Add in some cheers and the Throne Room Theme from ANH as the background music for all the clips.

I had considered the night scene of Theed from the end of Episode 1. For Geonosis, the cliff scene overlooking the hive when Obi-Wan arrives. Takodana, take the clip in TFA of Maz’s castle with all the flags and Utapau can be from some of the trailers. Either the night scene of the Stormtroopers on the walkers or day scene before the battle begins could work for Kashyyyk. Idk if you would want any TCW planets.

That’s a lot of ideas and time consuming possibilities, I think Hal wants this to look as realistic as possible. Honestly something like that would have been great for the theatrical film but something that big is just out of budget [not that there is one] also feels very out of place, especially when were trying to make this edit look as high quality as possible, It’s really important edits like these blend well and we don’t end up with fake looking battlefront renders. I definitely think it could work and I wanted that scene to last a lot longer than that it did but it doesn’t really fit this edit in my opinion.

Hal 9000 said:

Now I can place it, as the two meet in Anakin’s hut. Nice idea.

In this case its from when Bail wipes Threepio, but yeah its there little theme from throughout prequels.

ROTS Scene https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjkw9QaQXhk

Hal 9000 said:

What’s that from? I don’t even recognize it? I imagined the little dudda dudda duh-duh, dudda dudda duh-duh motif heard only in ESB.

Prequels. ROTS/TPM

It is kinda just the C3PO & R2D2 Theme imo

C3PO & R2D2 Theme - During memory restoration concept

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ymD9W2_XCtA

Exegol Duel Of Fates Test - Orchestral Remake playover

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETptWrDKT8k