Angel

No worries Tv's Frink :D

Btw does someone remember/know what line actually vader saying while he was gestured to tarkin? I think they cut it for some reason.

EDIT:

Testing some BG replacements. ANH Has bad and poor light dep.

This is a temp Background. Just testing and comparing the lights

-Angel

*cough*

I move on.

Using that concept as base and ideas.(right click to see it bigger)

Used under permission of Darth Venal. :)

-Angel

Lol... are you serious? Or you are from the side" Dont mess with classics because its classic?"Its the same story not PT story...

And mona lisa=Star wars

kid's kindergarten drawing=My mockups/ideas?

Hell yeah :D Mona liza was over the top for ages :P

lol

-Angel

The Cutter said:

I can provide clean plates if you want as Tobar said. ;) Use no limit as limitation!

OMG..where, when, what ? it would be really great !

Pm sent ;)

-Angel

DF Shadow said:

Are you guys officially working on an edit together?

Not in my knowledge ;)

As for the pale skin never seen Goth people ;)

-Angel

For the record, I did not say that.

I liked the way you put it there ;) In general lines it is the same at the end.

The only suggestion I have in this case is to fix it so that Vader doesn't gesture with his hand after the dialogue is through.

I have high hopes making vader a bit more like ESB one. Meaning cutting all the nervous/fast moves he is making and hoping for a total redubing make him deep and calm as he is ESB no more yells and awkward behavior.Thats more like it

-Angel

Why? :P XD

-Angel

TV's Frink said:

Make the OT more PT

Thats the idea ;)

-Angel

If adidas did it then everyone can do it.

I really dig that monitor/tv concept ;)

-Angel

TV's Frink said:

Why?

I support CG ;)

He has more whys than you mr Frink ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qnq7N6X4x84

-Angel

I like that tarkin is looking more CG than real.

-Angel

Thats the point Bingo ;)

Also added/enhanced Leia's cell so it has the red tint that had when it was interrogated by vader

And the General is gone ;)

-Angel

This is nice!

I liked you removed the reversed speed close up of vader when he sees Luke ;)

Tho even i like what you did in the dialogue i think you ve messed a bit the close up/medium shot timing. It changes way to fast :)

I like the cuts on the fleet shots. Still ackbar says on my mark, but lando seems to go to hyperspace from his own. I dont know if you want to add some kind of altered dialogue. maybe its just me..

Good work :)

-Angel

Next thing i want to mess is removing this @sshole general that reports to tarkin with a hologram of him.(Credit to Bingo)

I have an idea for one or two new shots, showing elevators going up and down (when han chewie and luke is inside it) going down revealing the vastness of the station's corridors.

Mr J. i really hope for a team of editors and artists combined for an attempt for an edit :D

-Angel

It could be ideal even subtle as death adding the iconic background sound that appears in the throne room in ROTJ (and somewhere else in ESB) to places like when palps gives the name to DV or to any senate rooms.

@The Cutter. I just notice that you crushed the levels in some of the frames when Palps hitting the lighting bolts. I really loved that! Keep these surprises coming. I also noted that you were add real lightning/storm sounds. I had to say that because i had this idea when i wanted to propose ideas for ROTJ. I like your way of approach ;)

I agree with Bingo that you should try redubing when is necessary. Especially to palps gimmicks.

Taking ideas from Brash_stryker's topic you can make clones sound more like OT. even adding the clicks when a sentence ends behind their helmet(as we see in ANH)

I can provide clean plates if you want as Tobar said. ;)

Use no limit as limitation!

-Angel

Huhu!!! Mr J you should start an edit :D thanks again :D

Also here what i meant. These are not a sequence frames but like i mention how many times the camera is placed on the same spot.

Altering the shots by adding something for variation is a thing ;)

See how lightning changes between shots and its not only smoke that affects it ;)

-Angel

Indeed! See it that way. The shadow part of the table does all the work. Make the already boring shot a bit more aesthetic.

-Angel

Awesome!!! :D

Thanks for that mr J. ;)

Fixed! Thanks for the idea! It feels more spacey now.

-Angel

timdiggerm said:

As much as those look cool, Angel, they're a long ways from footage, aren't they?

Also, way too colorless.

No idea who knows :P

Will work the color in later tests ;)

All you see are tests and ideas that can give ideas to other editors.

-Angel

I don't think there's any need of altering the sets

You have seen nothing yet. All the boring stuff will be gone. All i need is time

and the colors are obviously just desaturated to the verge of black and white and that makes it look...I don'tknow... unstarwarsy

ANH:R didnt hurt you much eh? ;) Credit to ady for inspiration

And Tarkin looks too much like a zombie

I know and i like that way ;)

But I guess I'm just too much of a purist to appreciate such changes :-)

Its a movie. I see it as a canvas.

-Angel

Hah! Make them floating chairs? I like it

-Angel

Some shots im testing...

Due the boring retro lighint setup of deathstar i thought to make some test renders of a more open and new BG that will match with the rest.

Plus Considering the camera stays in the same place all the time i can cheat pseudo altering the angle so no shot is the same with the previous.

You can notice the vignette effect that most of the top part of the shot/sets have. This need to be gone.

Also same set(ignore the extended bridge)

Also in the shootout sequence there are 7 same camera placed close shots and 3 long ones showing stormies .not to mention the hero ones.

i like the idea of the floor is more lighted and glowing like we see it when vader interrogates leia.

Now our heroes are further from the danger rather are only 10 meters from them.

Tried to make more uniform walls with less hard shadows.

Same..

The idea here was to move tarkin in the other side so he has "space" to look at his right.

Also moved for a more dramatic angle.

Brighten up the ship so now it looks a bit more realrather a bad lighted prop

Also note that this shot is the same when teh pod escapes. Only that the SD element is slight bigger.

here is a test of extending the shot/hangar so the camera can pan a bit. The idea is to simulate the awesome painting of mc quarrie and brake that cheap set piece of ANH

-Angel

rpvee said:

TV's Frink said:

 It's just that having Cutter pretty much say "Well look at this, the original film has bad cuts too, so mine are ok" is really annoying... it shouldn't be ok.  But whatever, I've stated my points.

I think his intension are make it better from the original not just "ok"

Like Bob's i think thecutter's edit/visualization/perspective are the most refreshed and radical so far.

The way that makes the changes and for me it works and they dont look like rough cuts of nonsense with no sound fades and missing frames then i think he succeeded ;)

-Angel

Is this topic became a sticky from accident?

-Angel

This will be interesting :D

-Angel