So here is the completed script with changes based on the votes:
http://www.4shared.com/office/B1Lt0Ddn/ROTJ_script_edited_updated.html
I admit I kept Anakin's Force ghost in spite of it getting shot down based on the above reasons, but that doesn't mean we're really keeping it, though I hope folks will reconsider. It feels like a better fit.
For those who only want to skim through what I changed, the comments on the right note every significant alteration in blue text and with the word, UPDATE in caps.
I don't know how thoroughly folks are reading it, but it is a lot of work, and I think when we get the right script, it should be used by the editing sub-team. Someone should edit the whole movie together in rough based on what we have already concluded. Then based on final decisions, as the editing team makes changes to shots and scenes, they can be inserted, and we slowly replace the rough cut with a final cut. Then we can do sound editing and add the new music.
WHO WILL EDIT THIS MOVIE AS IT NOW STANDS? WHO HAS THE COURAGE? WHO WILL BE STRONG AND STAND WITH ME? (cue Les Miserables music)
Okay, enough drama. Speaking of the sub-team, I still haven't provided an invitation to anyone in my new little forum because I wanted to provide everyone with a chance to oppose. However, tomorrow, if I hear no opposition, I'm going to send invitations. I THINK I WILL ALSO PROVIDE EVERYONE WITH THE URL. This way, everyone can constantly keep up on progress. However, ONLY THE SUB-TEAM WILL GET INVITATIONS, meaning only they will be able to post in that forum. I don't think this forum should be too secretive, and I feel everyone should be able to keep tabs on progress. The purpose of the parallel forum is simply to allow an area for technical discussion while we continue dreaming and shooting out ideas here. PLEASE, IF ANYONE DOES NOT LIKE MY CURRENT PLAN, LET ME KNOW.