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I’ve added some film grain that seems to match the quality of the other footage (but let me know if I should tweak it). Thanks to Burbin for the suggestion - I think it definitely helps to tie everything together! And as a bonus, the color banding doesn’t seem as bad anymore! There’s still a little bit of weird brightness to the right of Leia’s right hand, but that seems to be in the original footage too.
I’ve also gone and made it slightly more blue.
Unless there are any other suggestions, here’s V4, both in context of the scene to make sure it all matches, and as an isolated clip to make inserting it as simple as possible for Hal.
Scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zuDJLLg96FG7RyU7b56Fe0OVT6GLdqkf/view?usp=sharing
Clip: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DzaKiOT4X4DKFrPOTqiZpysUfoUDTsT7/view?usp=sharingYou may have to download the video to see the full quality. This is a screenshot of how it should look:
V3: https://i.imgur.com/4xIMw0w.png
V4: https://i.imgur.com/DynQOUH.png
Looks great, the bluer tone matches better too.
Hal, have you considered switching the placement of the medal shot to the first Leia shot? It was suggested earlier and I think it does fit much bettter since in the second shot it jumps from her sitting straight and holding the medal with her right hand to laying down and holidng it with her left hand hand.
EDIT: Oops I didn’t see this is in discussion, here’s a demo of what a simple placement switch from the second Leia shot to the first (using sherlockpotter’s latest version) would look like, just for consideration, though I like Mildly-yellow’s edit aswell:
https://vimeo.com/515515458