smpearce1981 said:
stevepaynter said:
Man, hard too keep up on the discussion, but I’m with Dominic on this on. It would be a damn shame to lose that musical score when Kylo is flying through the Nebula. I think it’s need to be established that Exogel is completely hidden planet early on and the Wayfinder needs to show the audience how Kylo found it.
Here’s an excerpt from a hypothetical piece of crawl to compensate:-
Meanwhile, Supreme Leader KYLO REN journeys to the hidden Sith homeworld, EXOGOL using an ancient artifact that once belonged to his grandfather DARTH VADER, as he searches for an emergent presence in the force that whispers of forging a dark alliance…
Doesn’t have to verbatim, but you get the jist?
If an edit was to use Mustafar, Hal’s (+ plus a few edits) latest crawl is perfect, it explains the where and the why pretty effectively I think.
Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER
Hope is reborn. To suffocate a growing uprising, the tyrannical First Order has silenced communication between neighboring systems.
While Rey, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training, General Leia Organa has dispatched her brave agents across the galaxy to unite the disparate worlds in the name of Resistance.
Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren has traveled to Mustafar, chasing whispers of a hidden power that would allow him to eliminate any threat to his rule…
If using Exogol, we would def have to trim that last passage down to fit the mid-70 range crawl average word count:
Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER
Hope is reborn. To suffocate a growing uprising, the tyrannical First Order has silenced communication between neighboring systems.
While Rey, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training, General Leia Organa has dispatched her brave agents across the galaxy to unite the disparate worlds in the name of Resistance.
Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren travels to a mysterious planet using a Sith relic, chasing whispers of a hidden power that would allow him to eliminate any threat to his rule…
Something like that would probably work. A minor edit to Hal’s great crawl