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Alternatively, if we’re going with the original movie intro, I used a deleted scene from TLJ to add a few more seconds to it. The shots line up perfectly, even the TIEs. I realize it’s not much, but perhaps we could put some sort of voiceover on it now since it’s a bit longer?
https://vimeo.com/398255683
PW: faneditThat looks great, yeah I think it needs an establishing shot of krennics ship (could be recoloured to black) descending to mustafar and flying by Vaders Castle to make transition to the battle less abrupt.
I would say that the transition to the battle was already abrupt. I was thinking that this would help alleviate that to a certain extent since the camera is already focusing on Kylo. Maybe some sound effects could help with the transition.
I think the difference is cutting from Kylo to Kylo, in the theatrical it’s more just like here’s the establishing shot of Mustafar, and now here’s what Kylo’s been doing there.
That being said, sound effects and music would 100% help. If you started slowly building the sounds of laser fire and his lightsaber during the star destroyer scenes, and put a riser in that built up to the cut point, I’d wager most people would say it works.