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lol

Yeah, you're right. I copied and pasted from earlier in the thread and just kind of touched it up. I hadn't really looked it over much. I wasn't even really paying attention to their grammar before. This should be a little better:

STAR
WARS

Episode III
Revenge of the Jedi

The rebellion is doomed. The
Galactic Empire is nearing
completion of a new armored
battle station, even more powerful
then the first dreaded DEATH
STAR.

While the scattered remnants
of the Alliance are regrouping,
Luke Skywalker has returned
to his home planet of Tatooine
to rescue his friend Han Solo
from the clutches of the vile
gangster Jabba the Hutt.

It is a perilous time for the
small band of rebels struggling
to restore peace and freedom
throughout the galaxy....

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Originally posted by: Marvolo
You are right they end with four dots not three.


Ah, but the interesting thing is, Jedi is the only film of all six to have three dots and not four.

And here's my stab:

STAR
WARS

Episode III

REVENGE OF THE JEDI

The rebellion is doomed.
The GALACTIC EMPIRE is
nearly completed with a
new armored space station,
even more powerful than
the first dreaded DEATH STAR.

While the scattered remnants
of the rebel fleet regroup,
Luke Skywalker returns to
to Tattooine in an attempt
to rescue Han Solo from
the clutches of the vile
gangster Jabba the Hutt.

As the evil Lord Darth Vader
arrives to personally oversee
the final stages of the Death
Star's construction, both
good and evil prepare for the
final battle that will decide
the fate of the galaxy. . . .
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Lol, I know that all opening crawls end with four dots, but I wanted to keep the three dots since ROTJ is the only movie with three dots in the crawl.
Btw. Could I ask everybody to stop posting new opening crawls? I'm using the one MagnoliaFan made last night now, but thanks for your ideas as well

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I finally found a way to remove the crappy green glow to Luke's blue saber I almost finished the Emperor clash sequence, that will be the first complete "blue Luke" scene. Now the only things left to find out is a good way for my blaster bolts and I can start working on the Battle of Endor

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This is a really good idea, actually (Luke's blue saber and no musical number in Jabba's palace). Good luck!

Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side

Emperor Jar-Jar
“Back when we made Star Wars, we just couldn’t make Palpatine as evil as we intended. Now, thanks to the miracles of technology, it is finally possible. Finally, I’ve created the movies that I originally imagined.” -George Lucas on the 2007 Extra Extra Special HD-DVD Edition

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I noticed this when darkning the Emperor arrives scene:
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8083/snapshot006vw5.png
Look at the left top of the picture. Those scout troopers that are actually matte paintings don't really look like scout troopers I can even see a face in that painting instead of a scout trooper
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Is there anything that can be done about the awful blue tint that most of the movie has? Unless it compromises picture quality in the process, seeing the Death Star gray instead of blue would be something I'd put on my list.

I like the idea of calling the OT by Episode I, II, and III. And the blue saber sounds promising, I can't wait to see this edit!

My stance on revising fan edits.

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I could, but then I would need to remove it frame to frame (I ain't very good with color correction tools) I ran into a major set back in the development of this project. This morning my entire Windows XP setup crashed, and I lost all information on my hard disc. I didn't lose much information because I made a back-up yesterday, but I lost 3 "blue Luke" shots (they where pretty long), a few BOE shots and everything I did in Womble

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MS I was wondering if you read my ideas on the top of the page?
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Sorry I didn't update for a while, I was in Austria (or whatever you call it in english ) for 3 days so I couldn't really work on 0.83 yet. I was about to check my mail a few minutes ago but for some reason WLM keeps getting the same annoying error message over and over again -.- So I can't give any updates on the opening crawl either (if their ARE updates)
Originally posted by: Darth Richard
MS I was wondering if you read my ideas on the top of the page?


Yes I did Good idea of making the Endor scenes a bit foggy, I'll look into that. I would want to give you credit either but when I give everybody that brings up ideas credit then I would need to extend the ending credits by 40-50 seconds

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Originally posted by: Master Skywalker
I was in Austria (or whatever you call it in english)


In English, we call it "Australia".

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Originally posted by: Karyudo
Originally posted by: Master Skywalker
I was in Austria (or whatever you call it in english)


In English, we call it "Australia".


no there is an Austria in Europe.
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Originally posted by: Darth Richard
Originally posted by: Karyudo
Originally posted by: Master Skywalker
I was in Austria (or whatever you call it in english)


In English, we call it "Australia".


no there is an Austria in Europe.


Lol, yep, I mean't Austria in europe in my previous message.

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Karyudo, ever seen Dumb and Dumber?

- That's a lovely accent you have. New Jersey?

- Austria.

- Austria! Well, then. G'day mate! Let's put another shrimp on the barbie!

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Wasn't there talk about the Starkiller ranch on this thread? Where did it go?
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Originally posted by: andy_k_250
Hey Master Skywalker,

I asked this earlier, but is there anything you can do to fix the emperor's eyes?

No I don't think so. They never really annoyed me, but I will do something about the head slugs.

MS

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What Austrians throw on the barbie?