Details to come.
Details to come.
I’d recommend the Blackened Mantle.
Solution: Make Tatooine a superweapon.
It’s so bad it just might work!
I could only picture Dana Carvey when I read that.
Darth Batman said:
Have you started editing SM2 and SM3 yet?
Actually, I’ve not touched anything Spider-Man since I finished this edit.
However, I’m considering making an improved version of this edit. If I do so, I would likely follow up with 2 and 3.
It’s done just message me for link & consider this my last & final take on BF just until the official Director’s Cut gets green lited & released then i’ll come back & re-do everything with the new footage.
I watched it and loved it! One of the best fan edits I’ve seen in general! But why is the audio so bad?
The isolation of dialogue is a process which can vary wildly in the quality of the outcome.
Darth Batman said:
Peter is no longer grenaded
If you remove Spidey getting a grenade to the face, then why would his mask be ripped during the fight?
He was thrown through a thick brick wall. I thought that was a sufficient explanation.
The concept is one that humans have always struggled with. The struggle to shake any thought that it exists. The struggle to forget our built-in idea that our lives and the many moments in them will last. As our lives draw ever closer and closer to the end, we begin to finally understand the truth.
Tired, groggy, sick, boiling. Those were the symptoms of Suspended Animation. Four years of her life would Ellen Lousie Ripley lose to this. Or rather, of her loved ones’ lives.
She had signed up to work on the United Americas Cargo Star Ship around five years ago. She was nineteen then, she was now twenty-one.
Waking, one eye sealed shut, the other just barely open, she looked around, slowly remembering her current situation. She looked down, her body clad in nought but the hair which grew from it. Pulling herself up, she wobbled and swayed till she sat up, holding her legs against her.
‘Ripley.’ mumbled Kane, from beside the pod.
Executive Officer Tamara Dylan Kane was born in Yorkshire, England, Great Britain, a part of The Three World Empire, one of the two great confederacies back home on Earth, the birthplace of the Human Species. Not the birthplace of Ripley.
Kane was a woman in her early thirties, with jet-black, curly hair that reached halfway down her back, and she stood at around five feet and four inches, one of the shortest members of the crew. She was considerate and charming, yet introverted and unimaginative, well-educated and skilled, yet absent creativity and innate talent.
Kane passed her a bathrobe, not for fear that Ripley could be bashful, but instead for the simple factor that the ship was – what felt to one whose body bordered on feverish temperatures – freezing.
The ships life support and air conditioning were built cheaply and made to reduce cost. The crew was expected to only be outside of their pods for days at a time. The climate of the ship would develop gradually from crisp, cold, and fresh to humid, hot, and stuffy.
‘Thanks, who’s up?’ spoke Ripley, her accent was queer, yet easily intelligible.
‘Dallas.’ Replied Kane. ‘Though, he’s not very lucid.’
Ripley stepped from the pod, the damp sole of her foot smacked against the frigid floor. She brought the other leg over the side of the pod. She donned her robe and stumbled over to a door, one of seven in a row. Pressing the button beside the portal, it opened, the door sliding into the wall quickly. She stepped inside and behold a bathroom. Stepping across the minuscule room, she reached the shower, she typed in the temperature she desired and turned it on.
She rubbed her neck with one hand and pulled the girdle of her robe with the other. She dropped her robe to the floor and viewed her naked reflection.
She sported dark, bushy, wavy-textured hair, that settled naturally into a mane. Her face was gorgeous, long and slim, with high cheekbones, a strong jaw, thin streamlined lips, and large round eyes. Her eyebrows were of a coveted, thin shape. Her body was lanky yet attractive, with small breasts, hips of a common width, and a rear that suited the rest of her. Her body and facial hair were untrimmed and she wore no make-up. She was genuine and natural, not interested in pleasing others, and content with herself.
Ripley was born in New Praetoria, Luna, on Olympia, a world colonised by The Three World Empire.
Very Early Stages
Based on the Universe and Characters created by Dan O’Bannon, Ridley Scott, H. R. Giger, Ronald Shusett James Cameron
About a month ago I re-watched the horror classic which I had fallen love with during my childhood. Now, 17, I think I’m just old enough to appreciate the films brilliant acting, direction, score, cinematography, effects, design, and themes.
I became absolutely enamored and, to tell the truth, a bit obsessed with the film. Moreover, I became obsessed with all the possibilities, and, what I would do were I to adapt the film into my own work.
Inspired by and named after Dan O’Bannon’s early concepts for “Memory,” I hope to expand upon the work that came before, retaining most of the themes and story of O’Bannon’s scripts, returning much of what was cut from the later scripts and film.
1 Kane is Female but remains mostly the same in regards to personality.
2 Ash is a human with ASPD.
3 The concept of promiscuity amongst crew members is returned.
4 The relationship between Dallas and Ripley is no longer ambiguous and is now a substantial sub plot.
5 Ripley is now obviously the main character from the beginning.
6 The LV-436 segment is closer to the script and novelization. Including the location of the eggs and appearance of the planet. The Space Jockey is closer to the original design as well.
7 Original Space Jockey backstory returned and expanded upon.
8 Egg Silo likely brought back.
9 Airlock sequence retained.
10 Fate of Captain Dallas included.
More Changes likely to come.
I’d like to hear your guys thoughts.
Understood. I assume your final cut’ll make it easy for me to ignore it.
As one of my friends has said, it would be quite a sight to have seen Harris in Goblet of Fire, i.e. the post naming of the champions scene.
At first I was unsure of the inclusion of Richard Harris, whom I’ve become unsure of due to my preference towards Michael Gambon and how much of a continuity issue the recast is, but, your editing abilities alongside Lily’s theme rid me of any doubt.
Good stuff, and I’m truly glad you’ve used the theme in your edits.
Oooo… Can’t wait, you Godsend!
I hate to be a square, but, can we not be content with the machete order or prequels after the OT?
This chronological order and retaining surprises seems like a lost cause.
But, alas, who am I to control the discussion?
Anakin Starkiller said:
Besides, it’s not like Luke would remember the place he was born at.
I know it’s cheap but, THE FORCE!
I assume such a force sensitive planet as Dagobah would leave a lasting impact on someone born there. Especially if the person themselves were connecting with the force, the long forgotten ‘aura’ of the planet would likely seem familiar.
That was the most hippie / nerdy bullshit I’ve ever said.
I feel like the choking scene is the best part of the fight, though. It would be incredibly easy to cut around, but I feel like that’s the only part of the actual fight where there’s pure, raw emotion.
It’s also one of the very few moments in any Star Wars duel where grappling happens, which, hisorically was a common part of swordfights.
Give me praise!
Though, seriously, anything I post here I would like anyone who might be interested to give me their feedback.
Alien Poster Variant 1:
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Visiting Old Man Watto:
Don’t get all the hate for Ivan. All Youtubers use Patreon. I understand why some might consider it an ethical issue,but its out of our control. Drop it and get over it. He’s gonna be remembered as one of the greatest fan editors because of what he’s doing to TLJ.
Why the f**k should we “drop it and get over it”? His actions could have serious repercussions for every Star Wars fan edits & fan editors. We have seen what happened when Axanar decided to personally profit from a brand they had no rights to. Disney could see what he is doing and decide to clamp down on fan edits. This could put an end to a whole section of the fan editing community through the actions of one person. Years worth of work, down the drain. And, no, not all youtubers use Patreon. NO fan genuine fan editors monetise their videos on youtube, for one, and certainly not set up a Patreon to pay themselves a wage.
Agreed, it’s also just plain scummy.
So that’s a lot of people around the world that might notice it.
Damn, that’s a definite lapse of judgement on my part.
I should have remembered the similarities between Romance languages.
And, unfortunately, even English speakers can understand when someone is saying: Mother, Mum, Council, Chancellor, Master, Senator, Republic and so on.
I’m feeling like a twonk now
Yeah, if the edit goes well I might have to consider making a track with the Japanese dub, then only those who speak both languages get are screwed!
It’s interesting how different languages butcher foreign / ancient names.
Avgvstvs in Latin, Augusto in Italian, Augustus in English. Strange
Yeah, I can assure you for italians this is odd, strange.
(PS: I don’t know other dubbing systems, but the italian one is considered one of the best in general)
Yeah, I thought you’d find it funny / insulting seeing a foreigner butcher your language like this, but, I suppose it’s the trade off for a foreign language edit, probably the reason why so few have been made.
I just thought I’d use the Italian dub to change it up a bit, which is a dub I quite like. It also gives the universe a Latin-like sound, fitting for the fall of the Roman Republic setting.
I thought the F bombs were a little bit much, but overall I loved the tone and atmosphere you set with those clips. Great work.
Thanks a bunch.
And, yeah, I definitely understand that course language could feel gratuitous or out of place.
Come the final edit I’ll likely have som of said course language but I’ll be more conservative with the use.
Hal 9000 said:
A little taste of what’s to come:
Interesting. Reminds me of MagnoliaFan’s “The Clone Wars,” which I really enjoyed back then.
Yeah, as soon as you mentioned it in your The Approaching Storm commentary I wanted to see / make an edit with a yellow saber.
A little taste of what’s to come:
A little taste of what I’m working on: