I’ll try to work on the puppet show, I have some ideas >:)
There aren’t four hours of deleted scenes though?
Excellent ideas!! I’ll start toying around with those :>
I feel like I don’t want to have the planet explode at the end, just the ‘First Order Base’ part of it? idk lol. Part of the victory at the end is that that base is no longer usable for the First Order
So! The movie is: The Resistance, fearing the rise of the First Order, seeks Luke Skywalker who they believe will save the day. The First Order manages to destroy the Senate of the New Republic, effectively cutting the head off of any outside help the Resistance could rely on. However, our heroes manage to locate Skywalker, leading to new hope, the end!
I want to start working on a crawl that could help hammer home that the Resistance has these two goals
Later, Hux gives his speech and then we see the fleet jump away into hyperspace.
Now, I really don’t know how to handle the Resistance briefing scene. All I’ve managed to do is change Poe’s line from “Lower the shield, destroy that oscillator, and blow up their big gun” to “…blow up their base”
I kind of don’t want a full shot of the Dreadnought and to save the ‘reveal’ for TLJ
Here’s kind of a proof of concept of the Dreadnaught destroying the Senate. I don’t know where in the movie this would fit, but i sure am making shots lol.
It looks cooler with the bit missing
The First Order havent fully revealed themselves to the galaxy, and its in the Resistance’s best interest to destroy them before they deploy. The oscillator is the power system for the base and destroying it would blow up the base, which would cripple the First Order. Maybe the mining of the planet could be used to imply that the planet’s the source of all the Star Destroyers also.
Perhaps the scene where the Hosnian system is destroyed could be recontectualized to be an attack from a First Order Dreadnaught.
I’ve been toying around with removing the superweapon aspect of Force Awakens altogether. Hopefully I can get something working : )
I’m proud of her
Chase Adams said:
im really tired of Star Wars and there’s a whole great big world outside that i would like to explore. i might return some day, but probably not unless i have some genuius scheme or plan when it comes to editing. i had lots of fun here over the last couple years but its time for me to move on 💕
i wish you all the best!
unless you’re some kind of vile homophobic, transphobic, or racist bigot, in which case you are exempt from my good wishes : ) 💕
Actually, there are n1’s flying away! but i rendered them at an accurate scale so they Barely show up 😦
also yeah i’ll play around with the shot some more
yeah the version in the workprint sucks ass lmao
here’s the improved version
I’ve updated the Naboo clip for the victory sequence:
I’ll adjust it based on feedback and send a final version over to Hal ASAP
My updated version of the Naboo shot should be ready today or tommorow, I’ll send you a high quality version then, Hal : )
i dont know what to do about the clouds moving in different directions considering the sky in my clip was literally just footage of a real sky lol
It might need some added color correction/grain to fit in better, but I think I’m ready to send this clip in!
you people are too horny!!! 😒
Work in progress shot!
I’m having a lot of trouble with the chroma key on the Star Destroyer (because the free program I use doesn’t have chroma key.) Does anyone have any suggestions for this?
I could render out my background plate (with moving waterfalls and clouds) and have someone else comp in the destroyer?
I can work on the Naboo destroyer shot
Note: unfinished audio
A take on the Love Pledge scene. I’ve had this idea in my head for the longest time that it could be interesting to portray Anakin as a character who doesn’t speak very much/isn’t incredibly sure of himself. Going along with this idea I have removed all of Anakin’s lines from this scene, which makes it much more watchable imo. I don’t think this particular edit of the clip is perfect but it’s a nice proof of concept.
computer time >:)
Wow! I love how this is coming along!