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- #1372799
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1372799/action/topic#1372799
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https://drive.google.com/file/d/13qxccXMr962BoO9jM1IU8uVzAha3vhCL/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/13qxccXMr962BoO9jM1IU8uVzAha3vhCL/view?usp=sharing
Could we possibly have Ben tilt his head somewhat or some other kind of subtle movement? Leia and Luke seem more fluid and move slightly, whereas Ben seems kind of wooden. I still love what you’ve done with the face, hair and robe though! 😃
he tried to do it but it is not realistic, I’m going to upload a v3 with hair movement and robes
V2
https://drive.google.com/file/d/18a2L-J2DoSwCi7gJBnv3kTJe0YgQJHPy/view?usp=sharing
Yes, I took the shot from the “Idkartist” video, I tried to find the original shot from “Marriage istory”, but I can’t find it … could someone help me find the original shot?
Hello!!! how are you?
I am looking forward to seeing the progress you have made !! 😃
sorry for taking so long to get back, it has been a summer full of work …
here I have the final shot of luke, leia and ben;)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ntpAvvC9J7W20Rftnnn0A-ttmcnRrSLO/view?usp=sharing
Hello!
Sorry for not having done anything these weeks, I have started the work and we are shooting during July and August, in September I will have more free time to finish the clips of Ben Solo Force Ghosts and Luke’s hair on the island. 😃
MTFBWY for everyone! 😃No excuses Jonh! Forget work, your focus should clearly be on a fan edit for a bunch of Star Wars fans. Get your priorities straight! 😉
😂😂 😂
Hello!
Sorry for not having done anything these weeks, I have started the work and we are shooting during July and August, in September I will have more free time to finish the clips of Ben Solo Force Ghosts and Luke’s hair on the island. 😃
MTFBWY for everyone! 😃
Here’s my mockup of it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mn5MoYBak8U&feature=youtu.beit would not be better to put it before the shot of the Falcon and the suns?
I thought about that, but I figured it would be too jarring to cut right from the shot of her walking away to a shot of her already in the cockpit.
i think it could work, even adding bb8 shot
Here’s my mockup of it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mn5MoYBak8U&feature=youtu.be
it would not be better to put it before the shot of the Falcon and the suns?
Hi! sorry i’ve been out a few days !! v1 was wonderful! I would like to see your new version hal!
Does anybody else find it odd that Luke’s hair blows in the wind? He is a ghost after all.
Don’t mention this to Jonh. He loses his shit every time Luke’s hair is mentioned. 🤣
Hahahahha! Like charles manson, gandalf or sean connery in the rock
PM please 😃
Official concept art of Rey and the force ghosts on Tatooine.
https://i.redd.it/pi5gekklb0551.jpg
this is great! like obi wan in hot, in the sky
Could someone with the blue ray send me this clip in maximum quality? 😃
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7GuD7m8UuOM&t=296s
Here’s that clip for you: https://vimeo.com/429010558
Nice job. Appreciate you sharing. I’ll do a side by side preview and see which one fits. I cut the line “voices of the Jedi before” to fit with my narrative.
@Jonh, I couldn’t see anything wrong with your last upload. Your perfectionism is worse than mine. 🤣
hahahha
I mean Luke’s hair in Ahch-To, I’m trying to fix the wig,🤣
No, I don’t believe he’s finished it yet. Jonh, if you’re out there, let us know!
not! not yet! hahahha
this week I finish it! 😃
No need to apologize; I’m grateful you have put such care into it. That makes the whole project worthwhile right there.
Just wondering, what’s the source of the new Obi-Wan closeup?
a new hope, when obi wan turns on the ligthsaber in the cantina
latest and final version! corrected yoda height, luke’s hair in the last shot improved, and two more details improved … this is the final! hahahha, thank you very much!
BLUE
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KZju5TYhqExWXN13T6Krqs-ZS9UL1cL9/view?usp=sharing
PURPLE
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tSe7mW6WXpG4uTlyqsND-k2CBh6M4_NI/view?usp=sharingthere will be no more changes! I’m sorry, friends! 😉
hahaha! Are you sure? 😉
Amazing work, mate! Thanks for putting so much time and detail into getting this right.
hahahhaha yes! sure!😃
latest and final version! corrected yoda height, luke’s hair in the last shot improved, and two more details improved … this is the final! hahahha, thank you very much!
BLUE
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KZju5TYhqExWXN13T6Krqs-ZS9UL1cL9/view?usp=sharing
PURPLE
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tSe7mW6WXpG4uTlyqsND-k2CBh6M4_NI/view?usp=sharing
there will be no more changes! I’m sorry, friends! 😉
latest and final version! corrected yoda height, luke’s hair in the last shot improved, and two more details improved … this is the final! hahahha, thank you very much!
BLUE
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KZju5TYhqExWXN13T6Krqs-ZS9UL1cL9/view?usp=sharing
PURPLE
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tSe7mW6WXpG4uTlyqsND-k2CBh6M4_NI/view?usp=sharing
there will be no more changes! I’m sorry, friends! 😉
So this video clip is a must for the final edit, Right?
FYI, Jonh has done a few updates to the scene done this upload. It looks even more awesome now.
A friend has told me that the proportion of yoda in the general shots is wrong, fucking shit, and now I can not stop seeing it too high, what annoyance, I will try to do an update in a few days 😓😓😓
It bothers me, because I have made you all download a thousand versions
Please don’t change the epic pan shot from Yoda to obi. Love that shot 💚. The only one the stood out for my was in the recent update where to do was an image from ESB?
Non of us are racing to a finishing line on this edit so don’t burn yourself out. You’re a valued team member so take your time. 😎
not! Only my friend told me that in the shots with Rey, he looks too high …
I’ll try to fix it
So this video clip is a must for the final edit, Right?
FYI, Jonh has done a few updates to the scene done this upload. It looks even more awesome now.
A friend has told me that the proportion of yoda in the general shots is wrong, fucking shit, and now I can not stop seeing it too high, what annoyance, I will try to do an update in a few days 😓😓😓
It bothers me, because I have made you all download a thousand versions
Good call on keeping the Lando scene. I understand wanting to cut all of the exposition, but some of it is necessary. It’s also our only actual introduction to him, and without it, his role feels even more forced.
However, I think cutting out the whole exchange between Lando and Rey about “sending Leia his love” would work. It’s never picked up on again, and Lando never interacts with Leia on-screen. Also, when Rey tells him “you can give it to her yourself”, Lando looks like he’s thinking about what Rey just said, and then we move to the next scene. It felt like Lando was dodging his responsibilities, which is also never brought up again. Anyway, I think it would work if Rey said her line about “needing pilots”, and we saw Lando’s reaction of considering what she just said, and then the next scene. There’s some emphasis now on him scrounging up enough ships to take down the First Order, even if it’s just one line.
Cutting the Landos intro scene would cause so many more edits that it’s just not worth it. I’m still trying to come up with ways to make it less coincidental with every scene after it but it;s tricky.
There is some extra footage of Lando looking really sad at the base so I was thinking if someone had the skill to have him over Leia’s bedside and just say one line that it would complete that circle. At least have him next to her at some point. @jonh would this be something for you to think about?
good idea! where can i see those images?
I have an idea I don’t know if it’s been added or not, but has Leia’s line of ‘Always’ been added to the Jedi speaking to Rey on Exegol ? If so, do you think she should appear next to Anakin and Luke like in jonh’s 2.0 edit?
This would be cool.
Also, John, I was wondering if you considered adding in Leia, among the ghosts? If not, was it because you liked the idea that mother and son become one with the Force at the same time?
Sorry for the weird question, I just finished watching this: www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8RBGydnTzE and thought ‘shit Leia being among the ghosts would’be been nice, yeah’. If you’re interested in the music from the clip, it’s Samuel Kim’s arrangement of The Force theme.
exact! I think it has more emotional weight, that after disappearing with Ben, appears in the final scene …
It also seemed to me that adding more ghosts would overload the scene.
(I have put this in another thread)
Shit! I have noticed that in part 2, an unwanted frame. i just fixed the vesion, shit shit shit, f_king ghosts. sorry friends I’m a disaster (artist) hahah
I don’t know what done! I upload them again
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Ev1ODAXgouAIuTH5c2neUsGzxdDsJRG5
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1OT3RpMKUx2RXdGWDK6Kwz5HFvKQDxbLF
on the other hand, I have made a different version of the most closed close-ups of the jedi, in part 1, obi wan is new … I upload it so that people choose the version that they like the most.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1QMCqY5AoESOLGeIAZXWdmSWi7q_ZQ8L_Sorry!!!
The update to part 2 is great especially now that you retimed it so the original audio can stay intact. Sweet!
you have on this page the last update