that top photo looks stupid the mouth and the eyes makes it look like it wants to cry
Star wars comic book style cover:
i will make covers for V and VI when i find their respective 1st issue covers
TheBoost said:
DF Shadow said:
I think the "your mother once thought as you do" change would be an appropriate edit. At that point in the saga everything is coming full circle and Luke brings up his mother anyway earlier with Leia.
The line is in reference to there still being good in Vader - which are Padme's dying words.
It just occured to me. How the hell would Vader know that Padme thought that?
As far as he knows, her last words are "You're breaking my heart" or something, then he choked her to death. He wasn't there,and probably never read the facebook update about Padme's actual last words.
well she does say some things like "come back while you still can" "your a good person dont do this" and other "normal" dialogue
he didnt die he survived he just observed it happened
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DyRTzfk-6DE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v4bNfwyHEc4
Darth Venal said:
Oh hell, I should have known that.
Ric, help. I'm having trouble with my script. Not sure where to put the opening. Any tips?
in the beginning after the crawl (if there is one) obviously!
Darth Venal said:
shanerjedi said:
Darth Venal said:
shanerjedi said:
Darth Venal said:
shanerjedi said:
Ghost said:
True 005. I'd still take him out of the SB battle, unless someone can make the battle unbelievable.
What makes something unbelievable is the difference from ordinary.
So these movies build towards bigger moments. That's why the climax is in the third act, not the first 30 mins.
I think that one's even above cardinal rules.
Yeah, I don't think Hollywood invented that. I think it was the Greeks. :)
Cardinal rules, not carnal rules!
(In that case it would be about 15 minutes.)
Haha! Ah geez. You know what I meant by Greeks. Storytelling! :p
Yeah I did, but I couldn't resist. :-)
You know, we sing the praises of of explorers and scientists and all the great minds in our history, but no-one ever mentions the guy who discovered that the conclusion of a story should go at the end. I mean, the guy deserves some recognition, no?
i remember that guy him and were great friends!.....riiiiight....
http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss209/fishmanlee_2009/BirthCertificate.png
i had to sharpen the image alot to see it well
i found xhonzi's birth certificate and he was indeed born on naboo!
post your suggestions for edits of the trilogy
to start:
1: do something to the shot/s where pippin is holding the palantir and is writhing in pain replace it with something else (perhaps what he is seeing inside?)
end of the debate http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6k-XSHlo3Y DISCLAIMER: this is a joke video
shanerjedi said:
TheBoost said:
shanerjedi said:
Darth Venal said:
doubleofive said:
Does anyone think that Vader's entrance in the Hoth battle is weak? He comes out of nowhere.
Why the hell should Vader need an "entrance" in that scene? He's already taking part in the sequence of events, it's not like he's a surprise appearance. Sheesh, who comes up with these ideas?
As for the "he needs a better entrance" idea, he already has an entrance and it's called the first of the movie. That's what an ENTRANCE is. And nothing will surpass his first appearance in ANH anyway. But his coming into the base on Hoth is actually bad ass with those snowtroopers and he stalks in like he's in a rush. It's cool as is.
No no no.
What Vader needs is a GOOD entrance. I reccomend that the camera shoots one of Hoth's ice-walls, which then explodes outward. As the dust settles, we see an extreme closeup of Vader's glove, which ignites his lightsaber, as the camera tracks backwards, several more explosions happen until finally we see a long shot of Vader, when suddenly two pillars of flame erupt out of the ground behind him before he starts walking forward. As he takes his first step, six previously unseen Imperial Officers flank him, and they all suddenly die from Force Choking, collapsing in front of him like a macabre red-carpet.
That would be a good entrance.
.....Star Wars-Lord of the Dance.....
well i tried using this but it seems too quiet (plus its PT): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Co9wuNtnr7Y
its "Anakin Is Free"
i mean put you in every episode, even one appearance would be better than none
someone should make a star wars saga ric olie cut edit
more prequel music in ROTJ: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93tK8UzW-vE
DuTwan said:
fishmanlee said:
something i did awhile back that was intended as a joke video but has boba escaping from the sail barge battle (if one were to go that direction): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUYIfUD-u04
OMG. I really dont mean that in a nice way either, that wasnt even a constructive scene, i totally dont mind seeing you reuse scenes to show what Boba can do, but in that scene one minute he is one side then flies over shots and luke, then wraps him up, hits the deck, then back up, then hits the deck, gets up, gets hit by Han, flies across the other side, hits the deck, stays there for like 3 minutes, gets up, goes to fire at look again. Then he flies off to his Slave 1 gets on it then sail barge explodes! Three questions i must ask you, what the hell is Boba fett playing at? Why would the slave 1 be randomly near by and how old are you?.
I dont mean to be offensive but its more like constuctive critisism, if you have an idea, how you demonstate that idea is just as important as the idea (not always but most). In other words, if you have an idea i would improve the way you present that idea because I could see what you was going for but I could not take it seriously. Again sorry if i sound like im putting you down.
do you know how old that video is? that was the fifth video i made, and my second edit i made before i knew what i know now, plus it was originally intended as a joke (alternate ending) video
Ithilgore said:
"This is TENSE!"
"Now this is podracing!"
???: anakin..you catch on pretty quick!
something i did awhile back that was intended as a joke video but has boba escaping from the sail barge battle (if one were to go that direction): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUYIfUD-u04
"Oops", "Wooo" "Meesa called jar jar binks!"
you know the "ITS A TRAP" guy?
ric olie do you think that you should replace admiral ackbar?
it should feel like the opposite of ANH i think
how about The Federation Strikes Back?
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